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 Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 5:23 pm
puppylove713 When I try to write those, they always turn out like crap... No kidding. Can't tell you how many times I had to rewrite mine. But even so, it never comes close to what I want it to be. I mean I capture the visual fact, but not the sensation as if the reader is actually there.
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:36 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 When I try to write those, they always turn out like crap... No kidding. Can't tell you how many times I had to rewrite mine. But even so, it never comes close to what I want it to be. I mean I capture the visual fact, but not the sensation as if the reader is actually there.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:26 am
puppylove713 Zero the Crimson puppylove713 Why do I not remember that? I have seen all of the original Naruto episodes, but I am severely behind on Shippuden... Well, it was a filler episode... It might..
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:27 am
puppylove713 I have been thinking about that too. I mean I may be able to pull it because I think I may know a way to get the that's what she said part, but the rest I don't know... I don't know if the idea would work, but since it was just an idea it doesn't matter... True, it is just an idea. So it's fine to just play with it or drop it depending on how you feel about it.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:40 am
ChaosKnights Zero the Crimson Hmm.....I approve. Sign them up and send them out...oh, but if we're assembling a fleet to conquer the female species, shouldn't we have a female along you know, that...swings...that way? That however I'm stumped on as I don't know anyone in sci fi that is like that. Mexiah from Tenchi Muyo War on Geminar is suggested to be bi and is popular with the ladies.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:45 am
puppylove713 I have that issue too... It sucks because I can't seem to get it just right... Well that's what we all aspire too. I feel you're closer to that goal then me.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 9:46 am
Zero the Crimson Mexiah from Tenchi Muyo War on Geminar is suggested to be bi and is popular with the ladies. I really need to watch all the Tenchi Muyo series. A few of them I've either put off or ignored due to a less then interesting plot as it really doesn't focus on Tenchi and his group.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 1:54 pm
Zero the Crimson puppylove713 Zero the Crimson puppylove713 Why do I not remember that? I have seen all of the original Naruto episodes, but I am severely behind on Shippuden... Well, it was a filler episode... It might..
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:24 pm
Zero the Crimson puppylove713 I have been thinking about that too. I mean I may be able to pull it because I think I may know a way to get the that's what she said part, but the rest I don't know... I don't know if the idea would work, but since it was just an idea it doesn't matter... True, it is just an idea. So it's fine to just play with it or drop it depending on how you feel about it.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 2:48 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 I have that issue too... It sucks because I can't seem to get it just right... Well that's what we all aspire too. I feel you're closer to that goal then me.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:32 pm
puppylove713 Really? What makes you say that? I am not too sure I agree with you... I really don't get that feeling from my stories at all, but then again, it is said that people critique their own work harder than other do... Simply by the way your story flows as it melds emotion and sensation as one. But yes, we are our own greatest critic.
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Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:50 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 Really? What makes you say that? I am not too sure I agree with you... I really don't get that feeling from my stories at all, but then again, it is said that people critique their own work harder than other do... Simply by the way your story flows as it melds emotion and sensation as one. But yes, we are our own greatest critic.
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 9:42 am
puppylove713 Hmm, I never noticed that in my own work... Well different perspectives right?
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:52 am
ChaosKnights puppylove713 Hmm, I never noticed that in my own work... Well different perspectives right?
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 2:27 pm
ChaosKnights Zero the Crimson Mexiah from Tenchi Muyo War on Geminar is suggested to be bi and is popular with the ladies. I really need to watch all the Tenchi Muyo series. A few of them I've either put off or ignored due to a less then interesting plot as it really doesn't focus on Tenchi and his group. Like War on Geminar and GXP which follow different members from around Tenchi. War on Geminar follows Kenchi, Tenchi's half brother. And GXP follows one of Tenchi's neighbors.
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