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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 2:28 am
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 2:36 am
Sorry for the wait guys. Anyway, your characters are approved
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Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 1:31 pm
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 5:56 pm
I don't know how to say this nicely but Time Lords are a complete and total godmod in RP land. But changing any of her abilities will make her not a Time Lord (in the sense of Doctor Who canon) so you are going to need to make the choice of making her a dysfunctional Time Lord, make her a different kind of Time Lord than the Doctor/Doctor Who canon, or making her not a Time Lord. But she cannot stay as is for this RP because unlimited time travel, telepathy, near immortality, extremely advanced technologies with a vast array of unique and often quite powerful abilities...is just too much. 1. Unlimited time traveling--including the ability to travel to and change the past is kind of obviously overpowered and godmoddy. Time travel abilities honestly, will need to be substantially limited to keep from the possibility of being abused. 2. Unlimited telepathy would be extremely godmoddy since your character would be able to read internal dialogue (something that is kind of a big no in RP land) of other characters, which is incredibly frustrating for people. So you need to explain the limitations of her telepathy to avoid any possible issues. 3. Sonic screwdrivers can do.......nearly anything. I'd really like to see you either get rid of this or somehow find a way to limit it. In Doctor Who cannon, it's a convenient plot device used to solve all kinds of problems that would otherwise leave the characters in dire circumstances; for that reason, it has an incredibly wide range of uses that would really make it godmoddish in a group RP. They can be used as anything from weapons to medical scanners, to keys, to pretty much anything else. So...yeah. This is an issue. 4. The TARDIS. I shouldn't have to say that having a ship that can disguise itself as anything, has unlimited ability to materialize in pretty much any point in time or space, and a host of other abilities that make it much more than just a time machine or space ship is kind of....well......much like the rest of the character, is way overpowered. The thing is that a Time Lord character would be perfectly reasonable in a Doctor Who based setting where all the characters could stand on even footing in some way, or in a TV show where clever writers balance out these exceptional abilities with very real weaknesses. But I find it really difficult to imagine this character working in this type of group RP without being frustrating for other RPers. Unfortunately, not all fan characters are going to work as-is, in settings outside the one they're based on. 8( (And in all fairness, we had another time-themed character that was forced to put extreme limitations on her powers so I can't, in good conscience, not apply the same sort of standard to you). Please quote me when this character is edited, or you've posted a new one. Thank you. =)
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 8:57 pm
≧∀≦ Rosalie Criielre ≧∀≦ "Wishes can come true, but not if you just wait for miracles. Miracles are things we make for ourselves, here and now." Student I am known as Rosalie. I have sixteen candles on my birthday cake. I am obviously female. I am very much attracted to anyone, regardless of sex or gender, that is why my sexual preference is pensexual. I'm a Black Mage, and I stand around 5'1" feet and weigh around 42 kilograms(or pounds). Expect me to be a bit reserved, shy, and possibly even apathetic upon our meeting. I assure you, though, all it takes it a little warming up and getting used to!It's safe to say I'm socially awkward. I might even come off as a little weird if you're not an oddball yourself. And this is my story... My father was a warlock from a largely populated city and my mother considered a savage from a tribe deep in the mountains. Their meeting could be called nothing other than fate, and while I wish I knew the story of their meeting, I never will. They tell me they like to keep an air of mystery. They are still happily living together in some forest some ways away, but who cares.
I was raised in the lands of my mother's people... Think cold, barren, snow covered wasteland with tents and beasts. That was home; my father hated it. When I turned thirteen he had finally convinced my mother to move to the city with him. It was a half year journey that would never be made because they found their current address: The Middle of Nowhere. I refused to live in another secluded hell and so my parents sent me off to learn and live in the academy.
I'm not really sure what I signed myself up for. While I study often and my magic is pretty spectacular, nothing I have ever gone through can prepare me for the obstacles life will surely throw my way. Maybe I can spread vegetarianism and interesting food facts to people, or even tips on how to exercise properly. If I can convert people to living a harmonious and violence free lifestyle, then surely when I return to my elders in the snow they will dote upon me with pride. I'm gifted with the abilities of: ◕ ‿◕ Elemental Magic (I'm thinking Final Fantasy magic, here) ◕ ‿◕ Speaking to animals ◕ ‿◕ Knowledge (it is power, afterall!) Likes: ☁ I love cooking and baking! ☁ School and books ☁ Sewing ☁ Shopping, super addicted to all things cute ☁ Vegetarianism ☁ Everything that is one with natureDislikes: ※ Those who bully others ※ Disrespect to books and belongings ※ Disrespect to nature and her creatures ※ Politics and Religion ※ Murder, no matter the being ※ Large bodies of waterOther facts you should know about me are: I have never killed anything with a face and I have no intentions to. My favorite song is: Radioactive [Cover] by Alex G ft Katy Z or Radioactive [Cover] by Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonics The one beyond the fourth wall is the Winter Nocturne
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 9:02 pm
Hey! I've never played FF so can you explain what the magic is like in that game? Also...with knowledge....does this just mean she's really smart or does she have some kind of ability that gives her knowledge about stuff? Just for clarification. ^_^
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 9:08 pm
Knowledge for smarts. She just likes to study a lot and get perfect scores on assignments. Not a super power or anything.
FF black magic is mostly elemental magic and various other things thrown in there. If you would like to check out this link, it shows a list of linkable magic skills.
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 10:16 pm
the Winter Nocturne Knowledge for smarts. She just likes to study a lot and get perfect scores on assignments. Not a super power or anything.
FF black magic is mostly elemental magic and various other things thrown in there. If you would like to check out this link, it shows a list of linkable magic skills. Okay, I did some researched and asked some friends about the magic system and how powerful it is. I'm going approve her as is but just make sure you remember that if she uses spells--no autohits or autokills. People have to be able to dodge/block. =) As long as you keep her within reasonable levels, she's approved and you can create a character thread. C=
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Posted: Thu May 30, 2013 10:22 pm
Sweet. No worries, she won't attack unless attacked. I'm not huge on battle RPs.
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Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2013 2:49 am
Caspar Devlin MacKenzie "Come on, man, it'll be fun!" Student - Science Teacher's Assistant I am known as Cas, Mack, anything anyone can randomly make up, really. I have 16 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviously all male, cutie . I am very much attracted to beautiful women of all shapes and sizes . That is why my sexual preference is heterosexual .I'm a 1/2 neko, 1/2 witch , and I stand around 6'5" feet(or inches) and weigh around 187 pounds. Expect me to be a wild child! Everything about me, baby, screams fun! I'm a daredevil, so I do whatever I want, when I want, and no one can control me. Life is a wild ride, and I am so prepared to go out laughing! Ya know, my friend Kyle did this totally WICKED throttle on his... Okay, let me finish this for Caspar, since he's gone off on a little rabbit trail. Caspar is a very, very lively young man. Ever since he was young, he was encouraged to speak his mind, and has happily done so for years. He's not the smartest kid in the world, but he seems to make up for it with charisma. Underneath it all, though, he's very insecure. Despite everything he says, Caspar really doesn't know his sexuality, and is fairly unsure if he really does only like women. Because of this, if you get him alone, sit him down, and make him talk, he'd probably calm down and finally explain his real feelings, and not the ones he displays to the world. At one point, he started cutting himself to get past the anger of his sexual frustration, but he's forced himself out of it.And this is my story... My parents, my father a neko and my mother a witch, have always been world travellers, so when they found out they were pregnant with me, they didn't let it slow them down. I was born with my ears and a tail in a tiny village in Thailand, and when my mother was almost killed by the labor, my father demanded we settle down back in the States until she was better. Unfortunately, after my mother recovered, my parents fell in love with the historic town of Salem, Massachusetts and made us stay there. When I was ten, my powers finally came in, and my mother began teaching me white magic. However, I was way too bored with the idea of learning that I never really learned anything, and just would stay outside, playing and doing things to impress the ladies. At one point, I broke my arm for jumping off the roof just to get a girl's number! Course it didn't work... Anyway! When I was fifteen, my parents finally had enough and decided to send me off to a boarding school, maybe get someone who knows how to teach professionally to teach me magic. I wasted over six months looking for boarding schools, and finally settled on this one. So now, I'm stuck here, with no friends, and endless possibilities. And hey! Maybe I can get a girlfriend! Or a boyfriend. What was that? Nothing~I'm gifted with the abilities of: ✓Kitty Agility ✓Spellcasting (Note: make the abilities reasonable.Not too overpowerful) Likes: ✓Girls and all they have to offer~ ✓Science, it's the only subject I'm really good at ✓Playing guitar (that I only learned to impress girls) ✓Admittedly, reading, but only if it's outside ✓Meeting new people Dislikes: ✗Being stuck inside all day ✗Being made fun of for stupid things ✗Being forced to play instruments by my mother who's trying to "bring culture" to my life ✗Dancing, I'm not good at it ✗Having my things taken from me Other facts you should know about me are my motorbike, Esmeralda, is my baby, and if you touch her without my permission, I'll kill you. My favorite song is: Out There by Alan Menken and Stephen Schwartz The one beyond the fourth wall is Mayah Playah
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Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:30 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 6:38 pm
 ==Oliver Kase== "Let's commit the perfect crime. I steal your heart and you steal mine." Student I am known as Olly, Crook, Ollypop if you want to get punched in the face, or just Oliver. I have 18 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviouslya male.... I am very much attracted to both, guys or gals. Maybe i'm just selfish? that is why my sexual preference is bisexual -likes males a bit more- I'm a human, and I stand around 5,6 feet(or inches) and weigh around 130 kilograms(or pounds). Expect me to be sneaky and clever, I used to be a thief after all. I'm used to putting on a fake smile and that sweet "good boy" act. I don't trust others easily and friend ship is kind of a waste of time to me, unless i'm getting something out of it. Don't let that get in the way of talking to me though, i'm a social little butterfly and once I start it can be a little difficult to shut my trap. A trick I need to master considering how sometimes I can blurt out cold and hurtful things without thinking. Then again, I do say a lot of things bluntly anyways. I get bored easily i'm told and will often stare into space. Specially if you just happen to be a really boring person, I have the attention span of a goldfish for goodness sake so don't expect me to stick around long. If you're on my good side, you won't have a problem. I can be the coolest guy you know or the guy you avoid when walking through the halls, your choice. And this is my story...Being born and raised in an orphanage isn't as bad as people think, at all. I actually enjoyed it..sometimes. I'm not to sure why my parents had to give me away, but if they couldn't afford me i'm glad to know I wasn't kept around as a burden. While I grew up I felt uncomfortable with the idea of getting close to others so I kept my distance and would usually be found pretending to be a spy or a what I am today, a thief. I don't know why, but the idea of getting away with whatever I wanted sounded nice. I was a good liar to. Take it I was always getting in trouble for making up stories, but I managed to make a profession out of it. When I was eight years old a couple of boys formed a club sort of thing at the orphanage. They were basically the ones that never got adopted. I joined the club for some reason, not remembering why. Maybe a little social interaction would be good. Just think of the lost boys from the movie Peter Pan. That's how we were. Causing trouble whenever we could and enjoying pestering people. Rough housing, pulling and putting gum in girls hair, jeez I thought I was so cool. Have any idea of how I became a thief now? No? Well okay, you're obviously not paying attention then. I was 14 when I held my first gun. One of the boys in the club had stashed it away under his bed and at lunch he would bring it out, waving it around like an idiot. When I got my turn with it, it was like nothing I could ever imagine. BAM. One shot and anyone I wanted dead, could be. Now think about this, a club of stupid boys with a gun who have the nerve to get what ever they want. That was us. We all went out on our own and lived together on the streets, stealing, fighting, and doing whatever we could to survive. Now how did I ever end up at this school you may ask? Well..I got kicked out of the group. End of story. I'm gifted with the abilities of: ✓ Amazing Sarcasm ✓ Being very clever and witty, also having knowledge of mechanics. ✓ I'm also a skilled shooter (even though I can't be seen with my gun around school..), and I seem to have a good knowledge about bombs. ✓ Lying can be counted as an ability, correct? (Note: make the abilities reasonable.Not too overpowerful) Likes: ✓ My mask..don't touch it. ✓ Candy, even bitter people can love sweets. ✓ The color pink. It can be a manly color! ✓ The idea of love ✓ Speaking his mind Dislikes: ✗Oatmeal ✗ People crying..specially babies ✗ T.v ✗ Love itself ✗ Getting caught Other facts you should know about me are that I do not enjoy taking my mask off and no I won't do it, even if your pretty little face begs. My favorite song is: Build God Then We'll Talk- Panic At The Disco or There's a Good Reason These Tables Are Numbered Honey - Panic At The Disco The one beyond the fourth wall is l3onna
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Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:33 pm
Alright, alright, sounds like a pretty cool guy. I only see a few grammatical errors - lack of capitalization on 'I', misspelled words, etc. - but I'm sure it's nothing you can't fix. As for abilities, I'm sure you meant that as a joke, right? Does he not really have a special ability? Like, does he have he ability to create illusions or be more persuasive with his words (not forcing anyone to do anything, but definitely giving them a push in your mind's direction) This is just to clarify, he doesn't need an ability, I just want to know before I can accept him.
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Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2013 2:51 pm
Einar Grímsson "Ah, what a lovely day to tend to flowers!" Student - Environmental Sciences Teacher's Assistant I am known as Grim, since rarely anyone can pronounce my name, for some reason. It's not like it's hard. I have 16 candles on my birthday cake. I am obviously a shy boy . I am very much attracted to sweet women and strong men . That is why my sexual preference is bisexual .I'm a necromancer , and I stand around 6'7" feet(or inches) and weigh around 195 pounds. Expect me to be: Grim hates anything and everything about the color orange, first and foremost. Other than that, he's a generally nice guy who doesn't like talking to people. It's not that he's shy. He's only a little socially awkward. Since most of his childhood was hiding his powers from the world, he never had many friends, and is still rather lonely. Nowadays, everything is about his work and honing his powers. He's never had a girlfriend, so he's very shy around girls, and since he found out he likes men as well, he hasn't been able to date them either. Really, Grim is one big nervous mess. And this is my story... He was born to a pair of really nice people in Reykjavik, Iceland. Growing up in the suburbs, he was really just a normal kid until he turned seven. On his seventh birthday, the appropriately named Grim looked up at a tree to see a young woman, hanging from a rope. She spoke to him, her sweet voice and gentle words bringing a smile to his face. His mother, seeing this, instantly took him inside and asked him who he was talking to. Grim smiled and told her that he was speaking to the nice woman hanging from the tree. Frightened, his mother called his father in, telling him what the boy had said. He only shook his head and told his wife the story behind his family, the necromancers. Years later, Grim had been separated from the other children almost his entire life. His one solace from his loneliness was his beloved garden, that he planted himself behind the house. No one was allowed into his special place, and he was more than happy to remain alone, surrounded by his flowers. Hearing of a school for gifted children like himself, the boy threw aside his desire to stay with his garden and begged his parents to let him go. Seeing how the shy boy needed to be exposed to others like him, they consented and allowed him to go. Upon arriving, Grim was shocked to find that there was no one like him. There was a class, yes, but no one was a natural necromancer like he was. They were learning it as a trick of the trade, not a lifestyle. Grim reluctantly joined the class, finding comfort in only the fact that the teacher is at least a seasoned necromancer. I'm gifted with the abilities of: ✓Necromancy - Can raise the dead long enough to speak to them. Drawback: cannot raise the dead permanently without assistance ✓Snap-shift - With a snap of his fingers, he can shift any part of his person or of an inanimate object, such as clean a room Likes: ✓Not being touched ✓Women and men ✓Playing the piano all by himself in an empty auditorium ✓Baking ✓Gardening and flowers Dislikes: ✗Taking his gloves off ✗Things that aren't clean or organized ✗People touching his flowers ✗Seeing others abuse plants ✗Rude people stomping into his private garden Other facts you should know about me are: The more he uses his powers, the more his fingers turn a charred black. It takes Healing Water to return them to their normal color, but he rarely finds someone who can help with that. My favorite song is: San Fransisco (Be Sure to Wear Flowers in Your Hair) by Scott McKenzie The one beyond the fourth wall is Mayah Playah
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