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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:02 am


@Shane: What doe he lose?
PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:12 am


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@Shane: What doe he lose?


How about the only nightmare skills I get are these?

Pressure
[Passive]
Nightmares naturally generate an aura of uneasiness to anyone near them, extending outwards 9 feet. If someone of lower rank is within range, the effects will escalate to paranoia. Along with the psychological effects, someone four ranks or lower will literally feel as if a great weight has been put on their body dropping their stats by 1.


Black Reservoir
[A Rank]
Because Nightmares tend to burn up a lot of their energy as they fight, they eventually developed a technique that would allow them to store ambient energy into their bodies. At the end of the fight, and if the Nightmare has the energy and is conscious, they can pull in 10% of the energy spent in that fight (including the enemy(ies). Black Reservoir caps at 400 energy, and can only be accessed for the duration of a fight after it's been filled.

Night Terror
[S Rank]
Night Terror allows a Nightmare to temporarily take on their true form, granting new abilities, and a physically superior body. Each individual true form must be approved before Night Terror can be used. Night Terror drains 150 energy per post. Night Terror has a 6 post cool down after it's been deactivated.

True Form grants:
- +3 stats divided as the user sees fit.
- One unique ability/skill that future custom skills can be based on (cannot be a passive skill).

The rest of the skills will all be Kiranu, lol. And I still keep the weakness of no summons, so it's pretty much breaking even to get those three skills and the +1 strength in exchange for a summon. sad

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:17 am


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SorceressJacklyn
@Shane: What doe he lose?


How about the only nightmare skills I get are these?

Pressure
[Passive]
Nightmares naturally generate an aura of uneasiness to anyone near them, extending outwards 9 feet. If someone of lower rank is within range, the effects will escalate to paranoia. Along with the psychological effects, someone four ranks or lower will literally feel as if a great weight has been put on their body dropping their stats by 1.


Black Reservoir
[A Rank]
Because Nightmares tend to burn up a lot of their energy as they fight, they eventually developed a technique that would allow them to store ambient energy into their bodies. At the end of the fight, and if the Nightmare has the energy and is conscious, they can pull in 10% of the energy spent in that fight (including the enemy(ies). Black Reservoir caps at 400 energy, and can only be accessed for the duration of a fight after it's been filled.

Night Terror
[S Rank]
Night Terror allows a Nightmare to temporarily take on their true form, granting new abilities, and a physically superior body. Each individual true form must be approved before Night Terror can be used. Night Terror drains 150 energy per post. Night Terror has a 6 post cool down after it's been deactivated.

True Form grants:
- +3 stats divided as the user sees fit.
- One unique ability/skill that future custom skills can be based on (cannot be a passive skill).

The rest of the skills will all be Kiranu, lol. And I still keep the weakness of no summons, so it's pretty much breaking even to get those three skills and the +1 strength in exchange for a summon. sad


Okay. Approved.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:19 am


SorceressJacklyn
Incubus Shane
SorceressJacklyn
@Shane: What doe he lose?


How about the only nightmare skills I get are these?

Pressure
[Passive]
Nightmares naturally generate an aura of uneasiness to anyone near them, extending outwards 9 feet. If someone of lower rank is within range, the effects will escalate to paranoia. Along with the psychological effects, someone four ranks or lower will literally feel as if a great weight has been put on their body dropping their stats by 1.


Black Reservoir
[A Rank]
Because Nightmares tend to burn up a lot of their energy as they fight, they eventually developed a technique that would allow them to store ambient energy into their bodies. At the end of the fight, and if the Nightmare has the energy and is conscious, they can pull in 10% of the energy spent in that fight (including the enemy(ies). Black Reservoir caps at 400 energy, and can only be accessed for the duration of a fight after it's been filled.

Night Terror
[S Rank]
Night Terror allows a Nightmare to temporarily take on their true form, granting new abilities, and a physically superior body. Each individual true form must be approved before Night Terror can be used. Night Terror drains 150 energy per post. Night Terror has a 6 post cool down after it's been deactivated.

True Form grants:
- +3 stats divided as the user sees fit.
- One unique ability/skill that future custom skills can be based on (cannot be a passive skill).

The rest of the skills will all be Kiranu, lol. And I still keep the weakness of no summons, so it's pretty much breaking even to get those three skills and the +1 strength in exchange for a summon. sad


Okay. Approved.


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:24 pm



RPC NAME: Lucien Holsey

RPC RANK: Student

COMBATIVE/NON-COMBATIVE: Combative

TALENT NAME: Natural Birthright

DESCRIPTION: The reason that Nightmares cannot have summons is due to the fact that they themselves were once summons. However, due to Lucien being conceived rather than being... created, and due to him being a hybrid thus not inheriting everything, he also did not inherit the weakness of being unable to summon. Furthermore, he may only have one summon at a time (if he wishes to change it he has to kill his old one) but on the same side, that summon is generally stronger than most summons of its rank. Normally this would not be called a talent but it is a talent for the fact that he managed to not only bypass what is usually a racial weakness, but even excel in individual summonings.

SKILLS:

This talent only contains one ability due to that ability being a potentially powerful one.

CHIMERA -- This is the ability to fuse one's Night Terror form with the user's current summon. For example, Lucien's Night Terror form is a large, humanoid lion. If he had a bird summon, that lion could then fuse with it and gain wings. If he had a dragon summon, he could inherit the scales or the ability to breathe fire. All summons of his must have the chimera form listed in them. The chimera form cannot be used until master and costs 25 extra energy per post to maintain.

RP SAMPLE: Lucien summoned something. Derp.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:51 pm


@Shane: No.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:01 pm


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@Shane: No.


o_O

Btw, for anyone else who read me saying "I can't have summons" -- that's simply a BL weakness, not a talent weakness, so the talents aren't contradicting eachother -- this one simply voids that weakness.

Anyways. May, I know you made the weakness, but it's not up to you whether I can make a talent that bypasses a bloodline weakness (with actual facts, too). Similarly, if someone wanted to make a talent where their Seer could see, it wouldn't really be up to Jackie, but to me or Elizabeth. So, you can't say "no", it's not up to you. Please keep meaningless OOC out of the thread.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:40 pm


Rpc Name: Elisa "Lisa" Azio

Rpc Rank: Student

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non Combative

Talent Name: Technological Affinity

Description: Because Lisa originated as a machine, and thanks to her continued connection with machines, the implants, upgrades, and systems that she comes into contact with at least respond to her more positively than they would normally.
(+3 strength bonus to allied machines)

Skills: (If any)

Rp Sample:
Lisa started to tinker with the security system of the door. The hub had always been a secure location, especially for her and her allies. However, because the security had been going off with increasingly depressing results, she wished to change this.
She found the hardline and focused her attention onto it, feeling her heart shift slightly in order to mimic the pulse that the wire could translate. After a moment, the order was accepted and the security focused on the original and only intruder. This saved energy and resources, she admitted with a smile.
No doubt that the AIs of the immediate area would be able to recognize what little of a wireless signal she could still give off. If this worked.... then they were home free.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:24 pm


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Rpc Name: Elisa "Lisa" Azio

Rpc Rank: Student

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non Combative

Talent Name: Technological Affinity

Description: Because Lisa originated as a machine, and thanks to her continued connection with machines, the implants, upgrades, and systems that she comes into contact with at least respond to her more positively than they would normally.
(+3 strength bonus to allied machines)

Skills: (If any)

Rp Sample:
Lisa started to tinker with the security system of the door. The hub had always been a secure location, especially for her and her allies. However, because the security had been going off with increasingly depressing results, she wished to change this.
She found the hardline and focused her attention onto it, feeling her heart shift slightly in order to mimic the pulse that the wire could translate. After a moment, the order was accepted and the security focused on the original and only intruder. This saved energy and resources, she admitted with a smile.
No doubt that the AIs of the immediate area would be able to recognize what little of a wireless signal she could still give off. If this worked.... then they were home free.


Before I read this... is this the character that got denied?
PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:28 pm


Incubus Shane
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Rpc Name: Elisa "Lisa" Azio

Rpc Rank: Student

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non Combative

Talent Name: Technological Affinity

Description: Because Lisa originated as a machine, and thanks to her continued connection with machines, the implants, upgrades, and systems that she comes into contact with at least respond to her more positively than they would normally.
(+3 strength bonus to allied machines)

Skills: (If any)

Rp Sample:
Lisa started to tinker with the security system of the door. The hub had always been a secure location, especially for her and her allies. However, because the security had been going off with increasingly depressing results, she wished to change this.
She found the hardline and focused her attention onto it, feeling her heart shift slightly in order to mimic the pulse that the wire could translate. After a moment, the order was accepted and the security focused on the original and only intruder. This saved energy and resources, she admitted with a smile.
No doubt that the AIs of the immediate area would be able to recognize what little of a wireless signal she could still give off. If this worked.... then they were home free.


Before I read this... is this the character that got denied?

yeah

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:33 pm


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Rpc Name: Elisa "Lisa" Azio

Rpc Rank: Student

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non Combative

Talent Name: Technological Affinity

Description: Because Lisa originated as a machine, and thanks to her continued connection with machines, the implants, upgrades, and systems that she comes into contact with at least respond to her more positively than they would normally.
(+3 strength bonus to allied machines)

Skills: (If any)

Rp Sample:
Lisa started to tinker with the security system of the door. The hub had always been a secure location, especially for her and her allies. However, because the security had been going off with increasingly depressing results, she wished to change this.
She found the hardline and focused her attention onto it, feeling her heart shift slightly in order to mimic the pulse that the wire could translate. After a moment, the order was accepted and the security focused on the original and only intruder. This saved energy and resources, she admitted with a smile.
No doubt that the AIs of the immediate area would be able to recognize what little of a wireless signal she could still give off. If this worked.... then they were home free.


Before I read this... is this the character that got denied?

yeah


Then I guess, for now, I don't have anything to do gonk
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:52 am


Incubus Shane


Before I read this... is this the character that got denied?


The very same. Please disregard this post. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:04 pm


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RPC NAME: Lucien Holsey

RPC RANK: Student

COMBATIVE/NON-COMBATIVE: Combative

TALENT NAME: Natural Birthright

DESCRIPTION: The reason that Nightmares cannot have summons is due to the fact that they themselves were once summons. However, due to Lucien being conceived rather than being... created, and due to him being a hybrid thus not inheriting everything, he also did not inherit the weakness of being unable to summon. Furthermore, he may only have one summon at a time (if he wishes to change it he has to kill his old one) but on the same side, that summon is generally stronger than most summons of its rank. Normally this would not be called a talent but it is a talent for the fact that he managed to not only bypass what is usually a racial weakness, but even excel in individual summonings.

SKILLS:

This talent only contains one ability due to that ability being a potentially powerful one.

CHIMERA -- This is the ability to fuse one's Night Terror form with the user's current summon. For example, Lucien's Night Terror form is a large, humanoid lion. If he had a bird summon, that lion could then fuse with it and gain wings. If he had a dragon summon, he could inherit the scales or the ability to breathe fire. All summons of his must have the chimera form listed in them. The chimera form cannot be used until master and costs 25 extra energy per post to maintain.

RP SAMPLE: Lucien summoned something. Derp.
please provide me with the following
- the facts you mentioned in your post to May that rationalizes dismissing the bl weakness. I am looking for reasons beyond "he is a hybrid"
- all of your characters current weaknesses
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:19 pm


Stated by Neko herself in the summoning rules:

"Only one summon out at a time unless class, bloodline, or possibly talent alter this. "

This implies that your maximum number of summons CAN be altered by talents. That's just food for thought. Talents, in general, are to make you able to do something that no one else can. In this case, it's being able to summon, despite it being a BL weakness.
Furthermore, the Nightmare BL says that they can't have summons because they themselves were once summons. But Lucien was genetically birthed, obviously proving that he IS not a summon, WAS not a summon, and never WILL be a summon. And although you told me not to bring up the fact that he's a hybrid -- his talent gives evidence that he received LESS of the Nightmare bloodline than the Kiranu bloodline, shown by the fact that he can only learn less than half of the nightmare skills. Thus, the resistance to being able to summon would be much weaker, and I believe that resistance could be broken with a talent.

As for my character's current weaknesses, there aren't many, for I haven't made many custom abilities for Lucien at all...

In fact, I've only made two customs for him... one, a talent you've already seen (most likely), and two, his custom berserk form, which has pretty legit weaknesses for the fact that it isn't strong, lol. But generally, berserk forms are supposed to be special/strong (like the Night Terror form) because they have huge drawbacks, and can only be used at a high rank.

His current weaknesses are... (I'll include everything I can think of)



  • Cannot use weapons/armor in his berserk state (and generally can't use them very well, normally, since berserkers are fist-fighters)

  • His berserk form is the hardest to control of all berserk forms -- for the fact that he feels no remorse for hurting anything, even his tamer, which berserkers usually adore and would never hurt

  • His berserker form body is easy to cut, bruse and impale, especially since it can't wear armor

  • A few other, minor weaknesses for his form, that don't really matter much

  • His strength is lower than nearly all other berserkers due to his faction, which also gives him a weakness to loud noises, along with other small weaknesses

  • Most of his good bloodline abilities, such as the Night Terror form cannot be used until he is of the Master-rank, which makes his prior talent nearly useless until then

  • A generic weakness would include that he is always vulnerable, at any range, due to the fact that he uses his fists (which aren't exactly made out of diamond) in all forms of combat... so, someone could easily just cut his hand off and he'd be vulnerable and easy to destroy

  • More stuff that I can't think of at the moment...


One thing I have to include though, is that you really can't ask for all of everyone's weaknesses every time you want to consider approving/denying someone's stuff... that's just too much. :S Customs are supposed to be fun to make... not a brutal process of posting 90000823490482390482309482 paragraphs about the entire history of your character's life...

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:31 pm


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Stated by Neko herself in the summoning rules:

"Only one summon out at a time unless class, bloodline, or possibly talent alter this. "


Not that it matters but I wrote all the rules.
Also, i feel allowing him a summons isn't that big a deal, it's part of why we have summons.
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