Username: Metal Trsu Desired Bloodline: Senju- Mokuton Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: First ever Senju user for the guild. ^_^ RPC Link: Kazurama Senju RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
Kazuki was amazed at the other ninja across the clearing from him, they were very good, though Kazuki had a couple of surprises in store for his opponent. Standing in the wooded area Kazuki quickly made a couple of hand signs, his chakra building; quickly his right arm pulled back and then pushed forward. ' Kosshi no Koudo [Bones of the Earth]' He thought to himself. The ground rumbled in front of him before breaking and shooting up in a large pillar in front of his opponent, they quickly jumped back avoiding the pillar, but were caught off guard by the second pillar of earth. Kazuki moved dashing forward he readied himself for the final strike but stopped as he felt the ground underneath him move and crack. "Doton: Magunityu-do [Earth Release: Magnitude]" His opponent stood in the clearing as the dust settled from Kazuki's last attack. His body felt the large tremor while trying to position himself for the incoming attack. The opponent jumped into the air, forming hand signs of her own and then let loose her second jutsu. "Ame no Ishi [Stone Rain]" Kazuki raised his hands and arms up, the rocks pummeling against his body each hitting him hard while he finally gathered his footing to jump out of the way of the second attack. Quickly Kazuki thought to himself, looking at the girl with the facial markings under her eyes, his mind raced, it wasn't long before he saw the rocks come flying towards his direction once more. 'Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall ' The ground shaped quickly five large wooden curved branches shot from the ground forming around the front of his body as the rocks crushed into the wood cracking some of the branches before the opponents jutsu subsided.
His opponent quickly came smashing through the wooden barrier, and as she did he jumped back once more. her body came running towards him, swinging her arms becoming more aggressive as the fight raged on and one. Kazuki wasn't well trained in taijutsu so the woman's advances were getting to him. Finally she connected and caught him with a powerful right hook, it was almost like there was something else behind that attack because Kazuki went flying backwards, smacking into the trunk of a tree. He now sat slumped down against the tree, his hands falling to his sides as he looked up barely, his vision was blurry while he saw the Sand ninja approach him. He tried to gather his thoughts, but they were still rocked from the last punch, she only continued to get closer and closer a smug smile across her face. The opponent now stood over him before reaching down for him. When she did Kazuki leaned forward, placing his hands on the ground before shouting. " Wood Release: Stocks " The tree behind him morphed outward and wrapped itself around the girl, locking her head and her two arms together, forming itself into a separate wall holding. Slowly pushing himself from the ground Kazuki rubbed the back of his head looking at the girl. "Sorry...but I got more important things to take care of." Staring at her she just hung her head now as he turned walking away, the stocks would disappear soon enough after his chakra had left the area and the tree he'd use. Though as he began walking away, he could hear a growling noise, something monstrous in sound; it was then he felt the high level of charka within the area. Cracking and popping noises instant shot off, jerking his body around he felt the ground rumble as he now stared looking at the towering Shukaku "....."
Techniques Uses: Kosshi no Koudo [Bones of the Earth] Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall Wood Release: Stocks
II Blow Meh II
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 2:46 pm
AaronQuan
Denied. It seems you are unable to obtain a Bloodline after being approved. I am sorry for the trouble this Bloodline has caused you.
Kansō, a ninja of the Hidden Rain, was relaxing in a tree on a beautiful sunny day. It was around midday and the birds were still singing, butterflies were flying around and the flowers were blooming. You could really tell what time of year it was. Kansō noticed a noise in the background that would spark his senses. He then looked around, but was very secretive about it. He did not want to let whoever was watching him know that he was on to them so Kansō continued to lay in the tree with his ears opened. He would hear the sound of a shuriken and looked above him. A swift Shuriken came flying in his direction. Kansō grabbed the branch and swung underneath it to dodge the Shuriken and then he swung back up onto that same branch. He would then count his enemies in his head and think, "3 of them? Tsk, a sneak attack? Pathetic fools." Then, a few shuriken swiftly flew at him, but Kansō just stepped back and dodged the barrage of Shuriken. Another one swiftly came at him and Kansō stuck out a bone from his palm and would parry the Shuriken with that bone. As Kansō blocked the weapon, the shuriken bounced back into a nearby tree. Another enemy charged at Kansō, thinking he could make a surprise attack. Kansō blocked the attack with his free hand. He spoke aloud and said, "Pathetic. You're making me angry just thinking about what you decided to do. Who the hell makes surprise attacks from the back in a 3 on 1 situation? Weaklings..." As the shinobi charged once again, Kansō stuck out another bone from his other Palm and swiftly jabbed him continuously with both bones. What was left was a dead ninja with holes all over his torso. Kansō threw the body down and the final two ninja charged. He thought to himself once more "These shinobi are not skilled at all." Seeing this, the other two ninja charged with their Katana and attempted to murder Kansō. Kansō would stab one of them just above the heart and forcibly take out the bone so that ninja could see his comrade die. Kansō dashed to the other ninja and his bones in his palms grew longer as he glided to the enemy. Once Kansō was one foot in front of his target, he performed the 'Raging Demon' on him. The only thing both the ninja could do was scream. Once completed, the ninja that was beaten to death was laying on a tree that had Kansō's Kanji mark in the target's blood. He looked at the ninja that he injured earlier and shot a single bone bullet that gashed through his skull. The ninja died. Kansō went by his business like nothing happened.
Username: Professor Swagger Desired Bloodline: Kaguya Clan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: It's an interesting Bloodline I never had a chance to RolePlay with. RPC Link: >Click< Techniques Used: Bone Sprout/Ten Finger Drilling Bullets/Ragging Demon
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 11:21 pm
Professor Swagger
Due to issues with grammar, and rapid/choppy transitions from future to past tense, we must decline the application in it's current state. Take your time writing it, and it should come out a lot nicer. Thank you for your cooperation. ^w^
Due to issues with grammar, and rapid/choppy transitions from future to past tense, we must decline the application in it's current state. Take your time writing it, and it should come out a lot nicer. Thank you for your cooperation. ^w^
...but you understood what it said, right? Then why decline it? I was in a rush.
Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2013 12:31 pm
Professor Swagger
Neko of Crystal Hearts
Professor Swagger
Due to issues with grammar, and rapid/choppy transitions from future to past tense, we must decline the application in it's current state. Take your time writing it, and it should come out a lot nicer. Thank you for your cooperation. ^w^
...but you understood what it said, right? Then why decline it? I was in a rush.
You may/can correct the errors, but in it's current form we cannot accept it. Take your time, and it will come out making more sense. Thank you for your cooperation
Due to issues with grammar, and rapid/choppy transitions from future to past tense, we must decline the application in it's current state. Take your time writing it, and it should come out a lot nicer. Thank you for your cooperation. ^w^
...but you understood what it said, right? Then why decline it? I was in a rush.
You may/can correct the errors, but in it's current form we cannot accept it. Take your time, and it will come out making more sense. Thank you for your cooperation
Edited it.
Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2013 5:58 pm
Professor Swagger
Alright. Here are the problems I'm seeing.
1. I feel there is a lot of fluffing. 2. Your use of past/present/future tense is jumbled, and it makes it more awkward to read. "He would then" is an example. You don't need to use "would". 3. There is no description of what "Raging Demon" is. You merely stated he used it, but didn't put it into play. 4. "What was left was a dead ninja with holes all over his torso." This. This right here needs to be changed. That's just too black and white and obviously what happened.
OK! That's the problems I'm seeing. I have to go back to work now, so I will see what's changed later!
Username: Rieyeciu Desired Bloodline: Sharingan - Uchiha Clan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: Mainly for the last name however if I do use the bloodline I most likely only have Three Tomoe nothing more. AS I doubt he would even use much of the clan jutsu since he a sword fighter and want to show skills of the Uchina clan more then the power of the eyes. RPC Link:Haru RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: It is another cold winter day in Sound village as the area is covered in winter snow. Haru yawns as he came out of a bar as the white mist flow out of his mouth. He one of the few under age young-ling that are allows in a bar these days. No, he does not drink his father does... more than he should. Haru went in the bar either brings his bum father home from a long night of drinking or to pay the outstanding. Which in this case it was a tab today. This is not always a unpleasant time for Haru as the owner of the bar and his family was always nice to him. Like every time he visit the bar he seem to be caught up in long dull story by the bar owner or having lunch with their family. They were more understanding of what going on in his life more than his father. However, today he just spent all the money he saved up from the last few missions he went on the debt of his father. With that he was now broke again and need to go on more missions to bring in some food tonight. He could go hunting but with this weather he is off just getting a mission done. He lightly shook his head as he rub his silver hair as he let out a long drawn out sigh as he pulled his coat closer to him.
He reaches in his pocket and pulled out a long thin pipe as he light it up. The smell of calming incense came out of the pipe as he looked like he was smoking; as he did he saw a flash of red go by him. His only eye blinked slowly as he turned his head to where the flash went. Oh, he saw who it was as his eye turned red with Two Tomoe appearing inside his red eye. He was not slow at watching people speed off for some odd reason. It was Akane an one eye jounin with Ann red hair hot headed genin he dislike very much piggy backing racing off threw snowy streets. It would be a normal nice red bur for most folks but with his only eye being Two Tomoe. With that he saw Ann was hurt for some reason for that small moment. As he looked where they went he seen people around looks around asking about a red blur or if something came by. More smoke came out of his pipe as he shook his head lightly as he went walking heading to the mission board ignoring what he just saw. Like Hell, he was going to bug the Red Demon Gals as he truly did not want to be their friends. He felt out number with so many hot headed girls on the in the village even more with Ann. That girl was no good at being a ninja even now. It was just luck she passed her chunnin test in the first place. Just dumb luck as there no true skill in her fighting just random thing she figured would work. Heck he respected Akane more not just because she has one eye too. That has nothing to do with missing eyes. No, he respected her because of her Koton jutus as he wish he can pull some of those off without having to copy them.
As he walked down the street he blinked as he saw a help wanted sign. Unfortunately, as he turned to the shop he tripped over a bucket of apples setting outside. He fell face first in to the ground in to a patch of snow. He lay there for a bit as people around seem to pause looking at him before walking on. He sat up as snow fell from his face to the ground. He seem un-stun of what happen just a little upset as he sighed as he pick up his now broken pipe. "Great... I'm so going to be stressing today" He said getting up as he knocked the snow off of him. Now he needed a new incense pipe to help him calm and stress free however that takes money. He needed job, mission, and bet or even a game with money before he has to go. He went in to the shop and asked about the job wanted sign in the window.
"Oh I see.... item was just taken" He said as he bows his head to the shop owner as they took down the sign. He rubbed his head as he let out a long sigh as he looked at his breath make a white cloud. "Soo... “He said as he looked to where the dumb girls went then looked the opposite way. He can bet trouble was in that way which might be more of a clue to where the thief went. If he had any good luck today it might be the thief he was looking for. He put his hands in his coat as he on his way heading to where the girls came from leading outside the village. The tracks in the snow made it easier for him to see where they went. However, the tracks lead in to a forest up ahead. He drew out his swords placing in this one elbow joint then the other. This odd stance was known as the Two-Sword Stance [D-Rank]. Few could do it because they lack the skill but to prove Uchiha had skill he learned it. Well he copied it from a ninja when on a mission. Having the Two Tomoe was handy thought he would not say it out loud. As he still wanted to prove he can do things without relying on his eye. He readied his self as he knew danger was up ahead and that’s not the fact he only see half of the forest.
Techniques Uses: Two Tomoe Two-Sword Stance [D-Rank]
II Blow Meh II
Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 11:32 pm
Rieyeciu
"Denied for now. From what I've seen in your RP sample, you are not yet ready for an Uchiha Character with your current level of literacy and grammar. I'd advise you to sharpen up your overall roleplaying skill before applying again."
Username: Desired Bloodline: Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: The Rinnegan has a level of power typically thought of as "OP." While strong i don't think OP is the correct word. Simply because of it's high end power level, however, I want it so that I can be a driving force of story in the guild between character and environment. RPC Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=24056667#358883375 RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: Soon the world we only know will be ready... a man veiled by dark tattered robes commented from atop the walls. He was flanked on either side by other figures of varying builds and genders. The night was dark and cloudy, with only a bright full moon shining light into the large, sleeping city. The village patrols were tired, sleepy men who weren't in the mood for a fight at all, and on top of it all the main forces were out at war, leaving a skeleton crew to run the village. The stage had been set. KUCHIYOSE! rang out across the village. Out of the blue, a large centipede seemed to extended from the wall itself. It barreled forth with a large man and a small woman riding on it's back. An alarm soon followed as the centipede began simply razing the village by running through every single structure. At the same time as that, another pair, two average height males, fell from the walls, purple eyes alight with deviant glee, and made a silent approach towards the barracks.
Once the two of them made it there, the male to the left, his long hair unconstrained by the hood, pointed an open hand towards the building quite a ways down the street. The arm of the man began unwinding and splitting down the middle, reconfiguring itself into the shape of a small cannon. His purple eyes locked on target and a small flame collected at the mouth of the cannon. A second later, as the door opened and shinobi began to pour out, the cannon let loose a huge, white hot flame that took out the front line of the enemy nearly instantaneously. As the flame stopped spewing the two men launched themselves at the remaining force. The still groggy ninja weren't ready for the living puppet's massive arsenal. His other arm opened into a kunai launcher about the same size as the flame thrower. Their staggeringly offensive approach caught the enemy ninja off guard for sure; black kunai akin to camouflaged birds dropped soldiers like flies while bursts of flame also caused quite a bit of destruction. For whatever reason, the village ninja were combat ineffective against the two men. No matter what they sent at them, the men weren't harmed. The man running beside the Shuradoo had been using his Gekidoo abilities to absorb the chakra in the attacks. It was unfortunate though, that they were being homed in on by more ninja. Networked intelligence through the Rinnegan alerted them of this, and the two men split down side streets, leading the approaching forces on separate chases and thinning them out.
Elsewhere in the night, as the centipede wreaked havoc in the background and the Gekidoo and Shuradoo fought the main response team, a woman with the same glowing eyes of the others had managed to disable a man by sneaking up on him and grabbing his head with her hands. She asked him a simple question: What are your counter invasion methods? He went to resist her, but was suddenly overcome by immense pain. She smirked as his head was filled with battle plans and reaction methods. This was how the men knew to split them up and deal with them separately. Suddenly, from where the Gekidoo had ran, a well of gravity seemed to push back most of the shinobi in that area. The Nigendoo had done her job, and looked back to the spot on the gates where the original path stood. He nodded to her and in a flash of motion was gone. With a flick of her arms, the woman broke the poor officer's neck and disappeared into the night as well.
Aboard the centipede, the Chikushoodoo had been leading around the Jigokudo on a path of destruction. At some point along the line they had picked up pursuers in the form of huge snakes. The centipede continued it's crawl as the Chikushoodoo bit into his thumbs again and leaped from the centipede, landing on the side of a tower that was tumbling and slapping down his hands. Out of a puff of smoke came a huge ram, running backwards towards the three snakes. It's horns impaled two of the snakes outright, but the third managed to escape being skewered and prepared to give chase to it. As it reared back it's fangs however, it's head went flying off as the centipede rocketed past it with it's sharp legs.
All of the paths heard the call to arms as the Tendoo reached the center point of the village. All of the paths made their way to him and stood in a protective circle around him as he channeled a massive amount of chakra through his body. The rinnegan in each other path suddenly went dark and they each collapsed around them as if succumbing to battle wounds they hadn't noticed before. Every remaining ninja closed in on them but they were beyond too late. He threw open his arms and let out a loud moan before exclaiming the name of the attack he was using. Shinra Tensei! From above it looked as though the already broken village was being shoved out in all directions like a shovel. The centipede and ram were each thrown miles out by the attack and turned to puffs of smoke in the coutnryside. The Tendoo himself fell to the floor next and a man clad in a black mask and robes walked through the rubble straight to the sight of the paths. The true reason behind the attack had shown himself, and came to collect his tools of war. With heavy breath and a shakey exterior, he clapped his hands and the king of Hell himself appeared, gathering the six minions with his long tongue and yanking them with him to the "underworld" to be healed.
Techniques Uses: Shinra tensei was used twice, and the special abilities of each path were used as well. Other than that, nothing.
Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 11:10 pm
The Prophet Wei
This application will still be under review, but you will need to complete a character profile first to give us a better idea of what you are trying to work with.
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Posted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 8:16 am
Janet23
The Prophet Wei
This application will still be under review, but you will need to complete a character profile first to give us a better idea of what you are trying to work with.
Okay profile complete, as well as the application.
Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 11:24 pm
The Prophet Wei
Approved. However, keep in mind that you will be monitored as a character and as a character using the rinnegan. Any form of abuse seen by mods will result in the power being stripped from your character. So yes his eyes will be removed in roleplay.
