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 Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:55 am
Martin Spiralwave Witch Hunter Robin 94 Martin Spiralwave Normally, a Genjutsu can make the victim believe they are stronger but for it to actually make them stronger would require great skill in Genjutsu. To be honest this is more of a B or A rank technique and the victim will have to suffer the stamina drain from the jutsu. Also only one person could be affected at any time and only for up to three posts. But this is an excellent concept, so don't let me discourage you from trying to get it approved smile Okay, those are fair trades that I am more than willing to agree to. I changed the rank to A and I made it that it only affects one person for three posts. However, I do have a request of my own if possible to satisfy the tweaking of the genjutsu. Would it be possible if the genjutsu was stackable with other attributes and types? If not, I completely understand and would edit once again Because the Genjutsu acts as a Active Boost, it is able to stack with attributes but not other Active Boosts [from other techniques and such]. Additionally, I am willing to allow you to drop the rank down to B-rank, I realized I may have been a little too strict with it at first. Again, this is an awseome concept Robin. I hope to see it in action sometime in the future. Finally, the crew is currently working on a Genjutsu system so it is likely that I will call you back to edit the technique a bit more to fit the system. Thank you kindly and I hope you do get to see it in action, of course that won't be until I am a chuunin. Feel free to call on me anytime since I do plan on putting in several more genjutsus for approval
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 7:51 am
Jutsu Type: Nin
Jutsu Name: Water Control
Jutsu Rank: B
Jutsu Description: Much like Water Manipulation, this powerful jutsu lets the user turn ponds into ice, and enables the user, for 1.5x the cost, to sublimate water from Ice directly to mist. It also enables a user to manipulate parts of large bodies of water, for instance, one could freeze the surface of a body of water, and not the whole thing.It basically, rather than simply allowing you to manipulate water, it allows you to actually control it. So you can do Water>Ice, Water>Mist, Ice>Water, Ice>Mist, Mist>Water, Mist>Ice, among other things, such as making an area of water smaller, but deeper, as well as being able to push and pull the water in a small area, creating small waves, allowing for a field advantage. The body of water able to be frozen or vaporized is that of a small pond or reservoir (roughly 75-100 feet of water, no more than 10 feet deep.)
Requires Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:42 pm
Jutsu Name:Transuuga
Jutsu Type: Inuzuka Technique, Private
Jutsu Rank:C
Jutsu Description: Much like a gatsuuga technique, this technique requires man beast clone and for both parties to do the gatsuuga. With perfect synchronization, they will spin together, creating a force double as strong as a single tsuuga, and at twice the speed.
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Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:20 am
SK Loda Jutsu Type: Nin Jutsu Name: Water ControlJutsu Rank: BJutsu Description: Much like Water Manipulation, this powerful jutsu lets the user turn ponds into ice, and enables the user, for 1.5x the cost, to sublimate water from Ice directly to mist. It also enables a user to manipulate parts of large bodies of water, for instance, one could freeze the surface of a body of water, and not the whole thing. Requires Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)I am assuming this is a Hyouon technique sice it involves freezing water. My only problem at this time is you don't have any boundaries for the technique. How much water can be frozen/unfrozen. Also not to be picky ut the title is somewhat misleading as the technique only allows you to change water into ice... Unless I am just reading it wrong? @Kay: This technique has no detail at all. How strong is a tsuuga and how fast does it move>
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Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:13 am
Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Jutsu Type: Nin Jutsu Name: Water ControlJutsu Rank: BJutsu Description: Much like Water Manipulation, this powerful jutsu lets the user turn ponds into ice, and enables the user, for 1.5x the cost, to sublimate water from Ice directly to mist. It also enables a user to manipulate parts of large bodies of water, for instance, one could freeze the surface of a body of water, and not the whole thing. Requires Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)I am assuming this is a Hyouon technique sice it involves freezing water. My only problem at this time is you don't have any boundaries for the technique. How much water can be frozen/unfrozen. Also not to be picky ut the title is somewhat misleading as the technique only allows you to change water into ice... Unless I am just reading it wrong? Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Water ControlJutsu Rank: BJutsu Description: Much like Water Manipulation, this powerful jutsu lets the user turn ponds into ice, and enables the user, for 1.5x the cost, to sublimate water from Ice directly to mist. It also enables a user to manipulate parts of large bodies of water, for instance, one could freeze the surface of a body of water, and not the whole thing.It basically, rather than simply allowing you to manipulate water, it allows you to actually control it. So you can do Water>Ice, Water>Mist, Ice>Water, Ice>Mist, Mist>Water, Mist>Ice, among other things, such as making an area of water smaller, but deeper, as well as being able to push and pull the water in a small area, creating small waves, allowing for a field advantage. The body of water able to be frozen or vaporized is that of a small pond or reservoir (roughly 75-100 feet of water, no more than 10 feet deep.) Requires Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:46 pm
Jutsu Name: Blind man's vines
Jutsu Type: It's a Bloodline jutsu for the Motarasu Hana.
Jutsu Rank: C-S depending on range and sensitivity. A c-rank version of it can extent a radius of 5-6 feet that can only feel when someone directly steps on them. S-rank is when they can have a radius up to twenty feet and can feel tremors of the person's footsteps 2 inches underneath the ground
Jutsu Description: This is a passive jutsu that requires the right seeds. Any vine based plants can use this and you need the Motarasu Hana's odd chakra to create them and extend them to their plant form. The plants can be set above and be camouflaged by turf (manmade or natural) or they can burrow underneath and be hidden to sense tremors.
The way its used it when the user puts chakra in the seeds and drop them in the ground. Depending on how much chakra was put inside, the plants can either slither on the ground or shove themselves in the earth. Then the user must be still in one spot and close his eyes to feel the movements and all that. Also, the user can open their eyes while using the jutsu but closing them would give him an edge on sensing more of the movement. If you want to use the jutsu with your eyes closed though, you must already know your team's movements quite well to be able to tell it from your enemies.
The drawback to the ability is that you can't move when you use this jutsu. When the jutsu is used, unless the connection is severed and the risk of overlooking an enemy, the user isn't able to attack. He can still make handsigns but can't move out of his place. This is why the jutu is mostly used when the user is with a team or a partner to protect him.
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 5:25 pm
ill add some detail in martin... but the tsuuga is an inuzuka technique.
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:02 pm
SK Loda Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Jutsu Type: Nin Jutsu Name: Water ControlJutsu Rank: BJutsu Description: Much like Water Manipulation, this powerful jutsu lets the user turn ponds into ice, and enables the user, for 1.5x the cost, to sublimate water from Ice directly to mist. It also enables a user to manipulate parts of large bodies of water, for instance, one could freeze the surface of a body of water, and not the whole thing. Requires Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)I am assuming this is a Hyouon technique sice it involves freezing water. My only problem at this time is you don't have any boundaries for the technique. How much water can be frozen/unfrozen. Also not to be picky ut the title is somewhat misleading as the technique only allows you to change water into ice... Unless I am just reading it wrong? Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Water ControlJutsu Rank: BJutsu Description: Much like Water Manipulation, this powerful jutsu lets the user turn ponds into ice, and enables the user, for 1.5x the cost, to sublimate water from Ice directly to mist. It also enables a user to manipulate parts of large bodies of water, for instance, one could freeze the surface of a body of water, and not the whole thing.It basically, rather than simply allowing you to manipulate water, it allows you to actually control it. So you can do Water>Ice, Water>Mist, Ice>Water, Ice>Mist, Mist>Water, Mist>Ice, among other things, such as making an area of water smaller, but deeper, as well as being able to push and pull the water in a small area, creating small waves, allowing for a field advantage. The body of water able to be frozen or vaporized is that of a small pond or reservoir (roughly 75-100 feet of water, no more than 10 feet deep.) Requires Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)Approved. Grapejuice: So this technique is used to sense the movements of enemies? What is the range of the B and A rank versions range? Additionally, is the user fully aware of his personal surroundings when using this technique?
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:39 pm
I would appreciate it if either one of you could evaluate these jutsu. In the case of Blossoming Dragon I would like to know if it still falls in the realm of a B-rank technique, considering its strength. If not, any advice on how I can weaken it without altering its properties would be much appreciated. Name: Katon: Hibashiri [Fire Release: Racing Flames] Rank: D Range: Close to Mid Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Description: After performing several hand-signs the user of this technique will create at their feet or hands a small flame that will rapidly expands and shoots forth according to how the user molds their chakra, since guiding this flames along the ground not only consumes chakra but also requires the user to . This fire will travel in rapidly moving jets which will race towards the target and surround them in a ring of intense flames. While this technique is usually perform on the ground so as to limit the movement of the target, it can also be done in a mid-air spin, forming the fire from the user's limb into a ring that can be shot towards the target. So long as the user maintains the final hand-sign of this technique they will be able to direct this fire anywhere within the range limits[10 meters] of the technique, even splitting the traveling flame into multiple branches form the original source of fire. These fires can easily rise above the height of a normal person [9 ft] even from being created with a very small initial flame, and The flames should be hot enough to inflict first degree burns on contact with flesh and heat up a metal weapon to a point where the victim is forced to release it. The most notable feature of this particular jutsu is the large amount of light released from the flames, capable of blinding or at least impairing the vision of onlookers. Name: Katon: Blossoming Dragon Rank: B-ranked Range: 15 meters Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Description: After performing several hand-signs the user will inhale deeply and fill their lungs with a large mass of condensed fire elemental chakra. Upon release, a projectile of fire shaped like a large football (the size of a Television) will be launched outwards and traveling at very high speeds(the same rank as the users speed). Upon contact this projectile impacts heavily against the obstruction then leaves a wide scar of flames along the surface. These flames are hot enough to evaporate Suiton techniques D-rank or lower and easily blast through C-rank water constructs. In its projectile form is acts as a solid, heavily condensed rocket that leave ssecond degree burns on contact. The impact of this projectile is powerful enough to severly damage barriers of equal strength, launching fiery debri outwards from the point of impact as a visible shockwave flattens local fluora and blasts enemies away. A long scar of intense white flames mark the point of impact, burning brightly as serpentine shapes twist and dance within. What makes this technique unique is that as the user becomes stronger and ranks up, the technique becomes deadlier. By the rank of Sp, Jounin, the scar of fire left on the enemy will then erupt into an explosion that rivals four explosive tags. A Jounin can launch multiple projectiles, up to three. Finally an S-ranked shinobi will be able to launch up to five, enlarged projectiles of fire capable of delivering second and third degree burns. Using this technique alongside a wind technique can alter the projectile for fire until it takes on the form of the wind technique. For example if caught in a tornado, these projectiles would be launched from the tornado in the form of high-speed, miniature twisters capable of carving through solid stone and leaving wide swaths of fire in their wake.
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:03 am
Martin Spiralwave Name: Katon: Hibashiri [Fire Release: Racing Flames] Rank: D Range: Close to Mid Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Description: After performing several hand-signs the user of this technique will create at their feet or hands a small flame that will rapidly expands and shoots forth according to how the user molds their chakra, since guiding this flames along the ground not only consumes chakra but also requires the user to . This fire will travel in rapidly moving jets which will race towards the target and surround them in a ring of intense flames. While this technique is usually perform on the ground so as to limit the movement of the target, it can also be done in a mid-air spin, forming the fire from the user's limb into a ring that can be shot towards the target. So long as the user maintains the final hand-sign of this technique they will be able to direct this fire anywhere within the range limits[10 meters] of the technique, even splitting the traveling flame into multiple branches form the original source of fire. These fires can easily rise above the height of a normal person [9 ft] even from being created with a very small initial flame, and The flames should be hot enough to inflict first degree burns on contact with flesh and heat up a metal weapon to a point where the victim is forced to release it. The most notable feature of this particular jutsu is the large amount of light released from the flames, capable of blinding or at least impairing the vision of onlookers.
- Can be extended through the air or on the ground for 10 m, 30 feet.
- It can last as long as you hold the seal with no extra cost noted.
- It can split to form multiple paths.
- It can blind you, burn you, and heat the metal your holding so you can't touch it.
Maybe limit it to the original 2 lines of flame, removing the blinding part, and add an upkeep cost for holding the technique. Also, for heating metal... does this involve if the flames surround metal, or if it's just in proximity... and for how long does this super-heating last?Martin Spiralwave Name: Katon: Blossoming Dragon Rank: B-ranked Range: 15 meters Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Description: After performing several hand-signs the user will inhale deeply and fill their lungs with a large mass of condensed fire elemental chakra. Upon release, a projectile of fire shaped like a large football (the size of a Television) will be launched outwards and traveling at very high speeds(the same rank as the users speed). Upon contact this projectile impacts heavily against the obstruction then leaves a wide scar of flames along the surface. These flames are hot enough to evaporate Suiton techniques D-rank or lower and easily blast through C-rank water constructs. In its projectile form is acts as a solid, heavily condensed rocket that leave second degree burns on contact. The impact of this projectile is powerful enough to severely damage barriers of equal strength, launching fiery debri outwards from the point of impact as a visible shockwave flattens local fluora and blasts enemies away. A long scar of intense white flames mark the point of impact, burning brightly as serpentine shapes twist and dance within. What makes this technique unique is that as the user becomes stronger and ranks up, the technique becomes deadlier. By the rank of Sp, Jounin, the scar of fire left on the enemy will then erupt into an explosion that rivals four explosive tags. A Jounin can launch multiple projectiles, up to three. Finally an S-ranked shinobi will be able to launch up to five, enlarged projectiles of fire capable of delivering second and third degree burns. Using this technique alongside a wind technique can alter the projectile for fire until it takes on the form of the wind technique. For example if caught in a tornado, these projectiles would be launched from the tornado in the form of high-speed, miniature twisters capable of carving through solid stone and leaving wide swaths of fire in their wake.
Also, on the white fire scar after impact... does that occur with humans too? Do they take extra damage from it?
Your progression is strange. it says at the rank of Special Jounin... but it's already a B-rank attack. I would argue actually that it shouldn't be learnable by Chuunin at all.
"By the rank of Sp, Jounin, the scar of fire left on the enemy will then erupt into an explosion that rivals four explosive tags."
...that is massively broke. Boufuu Bakuhatsu Bunshin no Jutsu (An A-ranked clone made to explode) deals 3 tags worth of damage. A Sannin ranked Ki-strike is 3 explosion tags... the same goes for a Konaga Augmentation at Jounin. I think my point is clear. I would say 2 explosion tags would be fair.
Jounin should be able to produce 2... Sannin 3... and I don't mind the wind combinations.
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 2:04 am
Jutsu Name: Hensei no Jutsu (Metamorphosis Technique)
Jutsu Type: Konaga Ninjutsu (Bloodline, Signature)
Jutsu Rank: SS
Jutsu Description: Zenko had always been the one to strive for physical perfection, preferring that her every detail was just right to maximize her sexiness. It wasn't until her later years that she learned that she could use her innate ability of infatuation for espionage and assassination missions. However, there was only problem with actively doing many of them. Each consecutive mission would provide a much larger chance for someone catching wind of her appearance, and she sought to solve that. Understanding the pain and power of her Konaga chakra, she bent its destructive force into something she could use for herself. Using this technique the user can form their body into any shape and form any details they wish, from changing into a small cat or switching genders. Effects of this jutsu are permanent until it is used again, allowing for another change.
Additional Details:
- Use of this technique amplifies the pain of the Konaga to new heights, increasing their pain-stress level by one to three depending on the complexity of the change. One would be changing form as the same gender, with no limits. Two is switching genders', and three is changing into the shape of an animal. The Pain-Stress effect lasts for 7 posts where is fades by 1 each three posts until it is at the correct level. (Basically, it REALLY hurts.)
- Can only be used twice each meditation session.
- Cannot be used once the Konaga passes the 1/3 stamina threshold.
- Only physical characteristics are changed. Sensors would still be able to see/track the chakra regularly. (Although the changed shape will probably cause some confusion.)
Stamina Cost: 25
Additional Effects: If another attempt is forced some type of permanent scar will be formed on the user's figure, usually in the appearance of the 'burn.'
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:06 am
Cobra_X Martin Spiralwave Name: Katon: Hibashiri [Fire Release: Racing Flames] Rank: D Range: Close to Mid Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Description: After performing several hand-signs the user of this technique will create at their feet or hands a small flame that will rapidly expands and shoots forth according to how the user molds their chakra, since guiding this flames along the ground not only consumes chakra but also requires the user to . This fire will travel in rapidly moving jets which will race towards the target and surround them in a ring of intense flames. While this technique is usually perform on the ground so as to limit the movement of the target, it can also be done in a mid-air spin, forming the fire from the user's limb into a ring that can be shot towards the target. So long as the user maintains the final hand-sign of this technique they will be able to direct this fire anywhere within the range limits[10 meters] of the technique, even splitting the traveling flame into multiple branches form the original source of fire. These fires can easily rise above the height of a normal person [9 ft] even from being created with a very small initial flame, and The flames should be hot enough to inflict first degree burns on contact with flesh and heat up a metal weapon to a point where the victim is forced to release it. The most notable feature of this particular jutsu is the large amount of light released from the flames, capable of blinding or at least impairing the vision of onlookers.
- Can be extended through the air or on the ground for 10 m, 30 feet.
- It can last as long as you hold the seal with no extra cost noted.
- It can split to form multiple paths.
- It can blind you, burn you, and heat the metal your holding so you can't touch it.
Maybe limit it to the original 2 lines of flame, removing the blinding part, and add an upkeep cost for holding the technique. Also, for heating metal... does this involve if the flames surround metal, or if it's just in proximity... and for how long does this super-heating last?I'd like to lower the speed to twenty feet and for an upkeep how does one chakra point every two posts sound? Or should it be two chakra points per post? As for heating metal, the flames would have to come in contact with the object. Should the object be withdrawn from the flames, anyone could wield it again after one post. Martin Spiralwave Name: Katon: Blossoming Dragon Rank: B-ranked Range: 15 meters Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Katon - Fire Description: After performing several hand-signs the user will inhale deeply and fill their lungs with a large mass of condensed fire elemental chakra. Upon release, a projectile of fire shaped like a large football (the size of a Television) will be launched outwards and traveling at very high speeds(the same rank as the users speed). Upon contact this projectile impacts heavily against the obstruction then leaves a wide scar of flames along the surface. These flames are hot enough to evaporate Suiton techniques D-rank or lower and easily blast through C-rank water constructs. In its projectile form is acts as a solid, heavily condensed rocket that leave second degree burns on contact. The impact of this projectile is powerful enough to severely damage barriers of equal strength, launching fiery debri outwards from the point of impact as a visible shockwave flattens local fluora and blasts enemies away. A long scar of intense white flames mark the point of impact, burning brightly as serpentine shapes twist and dance within. What makes this technique unique is that as the user becomes stronger and ranks up, the technique becomes deadlier. By the rank of Sp, Jounin, the scar of fire left on the enemy will then erupt into an explosion that rivals four explosive tags. A Jounin can launch multiple projectiles, up to three. Finally an S-ranked shinobi will be able to launch up to five, enlarged projectiles of fire capable of delivering second and third degree burns. Using this technique alongside a wind technique can alter the projectile for fire until it takes on the form of the wind technique. For example if caught in a tornado, these projectiles would be launched from the tornado in the form of high-speed, miniature twisters capable of carving through solid stone and leaving wide swaths of fire in their wake.
Also, on the white fire scar after impact... does that occur with humans too? Do they take extra damage from it?
Your progression is strange. it says at the rank of Special Jounin... but it's already a B-rank attack. I would argue actually that it shouldn't be learnable by Chuunin at all.
"By the rank of Sp, Jounin, the scar of fire left on the enemy will then erupt into an explosion that rivals four explosive tags."
...that is massively broke. Boufuu Bakuhatsu Bunshin no Jutsu (An A-ranked clone made to explode) deals 3 tags worth of damage. A Sannin ranked Ki-strike is 3 explosion tags... the same goes for a Konaga Augmentation at Jounin. I think my point is clear. I would say 2 explosion tags would be fair.
Jounin should be able to produce 2... Sannin 3... and I don't mind the wind combinations.A C-rank water construct is pretty much any water technique that isn't of great volume or drawing water from a source of water such as a lake, ocean, or river. At least, that is how I would define it in this case. The white scar also affects humans but they receive no extra damage as they are already most likely on fire. I can comply with the Special Jounin rank restriction and limit the strength of the blast to two explosive tags. Also will granting the Sp. Jounin Progression to Jounin rank be fair [ on top of the limitation of two shots?] I'm no expert on the Konaga Bloodline, but altering the destructive, body augumenting property of their chakra into a force than can actually alter the body would require masterful chakra control. Will changing your species affect any mental abilities or Attributes/Specialties? Also, are you limited to actual living species or can Zenko morph into literally any shape? And concerning changing species, how will she know the exact anatomical/genetic 'structure' of the new species she will shift into? The last question is more out of curiosity but the first may determine whether I can approve this technique or not.
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:43 am
Konaga Bloodline 6. Chakra Control Mastery: In the process of simply surviving, a Konaga comes complete master the concepts of chakra formation, augmentation, and control. As such, Konaga members are masters of such skills and are able to use chakra beyond the normal capabilities of others, bending it almost effortlessly around their body without the need for hand seals. This enables them to easily master skills such as Tree/Wall Walking, Water Walking, and Wire Walking early on and without any difficulty. This enables the Konaga to access Chakra Control Abilities such as those mentioned earlier as if they were one rank lower then normal, and allows them to learn the techniques in half the number of posts normally required (rounded down). Well, I actually never thought about that. The first thing that came to mind would be that Zenko would be unable to talk for obvious reasons. She won't be able to perform any hand seals and would be limited to only her bloodline abilities if she changed to a species without hands. Also, I think it would be fair to limit her to the natural abilities of any species she decides to change into, so basically all of her specialties and attributes would be useless to her. (Also: Species like elephants or cheetahs would be silly. If she turns into an animal, it would most likely be a common feline or a mouse. Any others would arouse suspicion as they are not native to the area, no?) Of course, I can limit her physical abilities to her normal ones as human. All species that she could morph into would have to be biotic, or living. I'm not sure how she'll know actually. Maybe I could come up with another technique which forces her chakra into a member of the species, and 'downloads' the information onto a scroll, which she would need to use to shift into anything other than human. (So if she 'downloaded' a cat, she could now be any type of common house cat there was.) Any of this is subject to change how you see fit.
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