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 Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:03 pm
Gregar828 @White: Before anything, please know that you may be asked to change villages, so as to avoid having too many Konaga in one place (Yes, 2 in one village is too many). Please provide a description for your current Taijutsu stage. Alright, I understand and I've edited in the taijutsu description. Is there anything else?
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:30 pm
@Keishi: I realize that Nibi is a demon, therefore the abilities are techincally demon abilities. Bloodline Ability refers to the section it is labeled under, seeing as the section is called "Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan." Take away the question marks, and add in the N/A's to blank spots. You dont put "incomplete" next to a Shinobi Profession just because you havent started it yet. Sealing Masters who dont know any sealing jutsu dont put Incomplete next to their Shinobi Type. @White: 
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:57 pm
*eye twitches* Fine.... Fixed. stare *stills prefers her own logic but fixed it anyways*
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 5:09 pm
Sypher Jabbit ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Info
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Sypher Jabbit
Nicknames: Bunny, rabbit, fluffy
Title(s): N/A
Rank: Academy Student
Village: Leaf Background Info Physical Description Age: 17
Sex: Male
Hair Color: Black
Natural Eye Color: Green
Body Type: Skinny, more lazy structure
Distinguishing Features: Collar with a tag on it, he has no ears! ----------------------------------------------------------------
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Suigestu clan
Bloodline/Clan Stage: 1
Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan:
1. Ability to turn body into water
2. Can manipulate water on a small scale, but cannot control others' water techniques
3. Taijustu +1 Companion Info. Companion Type: N/A
Companion Name:N/A
Bug Evolutions: N/A
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4. Transplant Info Bloodline/Clan Transplant:N/A
Transplant Stage: N/A
Abilities of Transplant: N/A
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Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Medical Shinobi
Profession Base Benefit: Natural Healer
Learning Information: -1 for learning medical but +1 for any other techinque
Weakness: Fewer Weapon/Taijutsu Styles
Rank Benefits
Genin
Chuunin
Jounin
Shinobi Type(s) Tactical Ninja:
These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation.
(-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)
Support:
Support type ninja are people who use jutsu to help other ninja in attacking, defense and any other type of need a fellow ninja would have. This ninjas is usually well rounded in jutsu knowing a wide range of jutsu from long range, short range and so on. These ninja are faster at learning jutsu and faster at using them too.
(Jutsu -2 posts to learn jutsu, can perform jutsus that are below their without hand-seals, jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters, jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals.) ----------------------------------------------------------------
Chakra and Jutsu
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Point: 18
Chakra Control:+3|medium chakra -1 chakra point used|Suiton/bloodline
Elemental Affinities: Suiton Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal
• Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution)
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
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Suiton: Water
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First Element: (Name of Element)
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Summoning Information
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: N/A Summons Known: N/A ----------------------------------------------------------------
Taijutsu/Weapon Styles
---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style)
current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities ----------------------------------------------------------------
Equipment
---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon:
Name of Weapon: N/A
Base Range: N/A Shinobi Tools Kunai:10
Shuriken: 8
Makibishi: 0
light bomb: 3
smoke bomb: 5
steel wire: 3 Apparel Head-Band Style: Normal
Head-Band Location: Arm
Head-Band Color: green
Flak-Jacket style: N/A
Flak-Jacket color: N/Aminty qualified for second rpc! but she needs help with some stuff....please....
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 5:10 pm
Dont complain about it just because its not what you want. You follow the rules, or you dont get an RPC. Savvy?
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:05 pm
Is Cobra approved?
Shinji should be all set.
...as to Kye, I think you still need to approve her Bloodline application and see if there are any other fixes you see as needed.
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:21 pm
Edited, but I still need bloodline approved...
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:15 pm
@Gregar: Appropriate edits have been made~
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 11:01 pm
Gregar828 @Beatriz: Please include the description for chakra control that is in parentheses. You dont need to include the math behind how you got your chakra level, we should be able to determine that with the information already on your profile. Sry I forgot that part of the description, but anyway it is edited now. And I know I don't need to include it but it is just to prevent misunderstandings of how the chakra bonus works from happening again.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:53 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:22 am
Gregar828 @Kumo: List the abilities of the bloodline. Please provide the detailed descriptions for Base Benefit, Weakness, and rank benefits as shown on the page for weapon masters. I cannot approve you unless you pick a shinobi type. Seeing as they are not on the list of regular weapons provided with the profile skeletons, Senbon may only be acquired through RP. Kevlar vest? I hope you dont mean actual kevlar, I would have to deny that. Okay, I'll list the bloodline abilities, and I'll copy and paste the {If they are existing } descriptions of everything, and I think I'll select my shinobi type. Ok, I wasn't sure, could you give me an example of a reasonable number on those{Senbon} to recieve at a time? Yes, The Vest is not actual Kevlar, It just looks like it. I think I forgot to put the it looks like a on this profile.
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:35 am
@gregar: k i fixed it. added descriptions and chakra points
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Friendly Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:40 am
@ Gregar
Edits have been administered. ^.^
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:42 pm
@Greg: Edit:Im going to learn some taijutsu,but is my other one approved
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 5:17 pm
Alright everyone, repost the profiles when the edits have been made. I cant look through all the profiles for your specific one, especially when it isnt visible on the last fifteen posts that come up when making a new post.
@Mint: Choose a village.
I'm sure the Suigetsu clan has more abilities than one. Even drawbacks.
Please provide a description for Natural Healer and Fewer Weapon/Taijutsu styles.
You do not have the genin benefit, seeing as you are not yet a genin.
Add Suiton to the Genjutsu section.
Provide a measurement for steel wire (inches, feet, meters, etc.)
Were you accepted into Suigetsu?
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