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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:03 pm
Cobra_X She is right in saying that the rhythm of the rain on the house could sustain her heartbeat though...right?
Though it comes to mind that in the RP sample, when she woke up, though the rain was pattering down, she wasn't listening to anything in her sleep?
Can we make it legal for Sindoue clan members to have indestructible iPods? (controlled by Chakra of course) But with ipods, we would have to have guns, tanks, and a bunch of s**t that doesn't even matter. They could carry a instrument with them, considering it both emits a beat and vibrations.
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:07 pm
What about when they sleep?
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:10 pm
Cobra_X What about when they sleep? >.> <.< sweatdrop They... Eat a metronome?
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:19 pm
I say we allow a Sindoue item only, which is essentially a small device they can use to control chakra embedded music within it.
Anime sometimes use an Anachronistic theme to help achieve some goals. (Anachronistic means "error of chronology")
Sindoue could employ this by allowing the concept of an iPod, and headphones, but having it be a chakra-based system, where they record beats that can be played back for them to keep them alive.
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:23 pm
Cobra_X I say we allow a Sindoue item only, which is essentially a small device they can use to control chakra embedded music within it.
Anime sometimes use an Anachronistic theme to help achieve some goals. (Anachronistic means "error of chronology")
Sindoue could employ this by allowing the concept of an iPod, and headphones, but having it be a chakra-based system, where they record beats that can be played back for them to keep them alive. True. I don't see anything wrong with that.
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:52 pm
Jaded_Propaganda
Cobra, you are absolutely correct. None of the clan jutsu have hand seals, but rather they work with beats. Each of the jutsu has some italic writing next to it, like fast/intricate for example. This means a beat has to be fast and complex for the jutsu to be active, it's a good way to get around hand seals and also keep the heart beating. Rewrite the sample and try again =) Alright, here's my rp response, take two.Misuki sat idlely in a cafe somewhere in the outskirts of the wind country while waiting for her weapon to be fixed. Tapping her feet in a steady rythmn to keep her heartbeat going, Misuki waited for the waiter to bring over her order. After waiting patiently for several minutes, Misuki started getting bored and eventually began to play around with a spoon by tapping it against her cup of jasmine tea. As she tapped against the cup, Misuki stared as ripples began to form on the surface of the tea and slowing an entertaining thought came to mind. ' Hm, its been awhile since I practised using that jutsu, I'm sure it wouldn't hurt anyone if I practice a little.' Still tapping her feet in a slow, steady pace, Misuki spoke out a few lines from a horror book she read and inserted the vibrations into the cup. Smiling, she eageredly awaited the arrival of the waiter/waiteress who'll be bringing her her food. When a waiter came over with her food, Misuki almost broke out into laughter right then and there but forced herself to remain calm. As the waiter turned to leave, Misuki stopped the waiter and told him to bring her a new cup of tea since something seemed off about her current cup. The waiter nodded and gave her a small apology before he took the cup and headed back into the kitchen. Misuki waited for the waiter to be inside the kitchen first before she began tapping her feet more quickly in a somewhat complex beat to activate her jutsu. As soon as she activated it, she could hear with her acute sense of hearing her voice resounding from the cup and the surprise gasp from everyone in the kitchen. ' Okay, three, two, one.' Several loud screams could be heard from the kitchen as the staff members began running out of the kitchen screaming something about ghosts. Holding in her laughter, Misuki quickly finished the rest of her meal and left some cash on the table before rushing out of the cafe. Once she reached a safe distance away from the cafe, Misuki finally allowed herself to laugh. {Hope this one's better.}
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:01 pm
rofl That's hilarious Lilly!
You are definitely approved for the bloodline.
(One thing, make sure you make mention of infusing chakra into your techniques, through the tapping)
I'm not sure if you read what Cory and I were discussing above, but we have come to a consensus that you, as a Sindoue clan member, are allowed to have a small device on your person. this is a special metal trinket given to all members of your clan. It allows for the playing of music by embedding the device with chakra embedded recordings of different music. It also comes with two pieces of thread woven into the device which end in a lump of wax.
Effectively, it's a chakra infused device which acts as an iPod w/headphones, which allows you to play music to yourself while you sleep (to avoid that annoying death thing)
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:07 pm
Yeah, I've read the above posts and glad that you guys came to somesort of resolve. Having that device will surely make things easier. Thanks.
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 3:52 am
Bloodline: Konaga Why do you want it: Its a very unused bloodline that I think is well, awesome. (DON'T SHOOT ME!) I think it would bring a new aspect to an RP containing a Konaga Clan Member What will you do with it: I'll combine it with my Assassin Ninja Class to have a well rounded RPC What you know about it: Its a clan of wanderers. They have an affinity to each other meaning they can sense when another member is nearby. The are always in pain thanks to there crazy large amount of chakra RP Sample: Kuro crawled on his stomach slowly and steadily. This was his biggest target yet, Komino, one of the biggest crime lords in the world, and He of all assassin's gets to kill him. Kuro giddy with eagerness to get the kill has to stop crawling for a second to stop the spasms of pain that were beginning. Kuro shakes his head and continues along the ground completely concealed by the shadows of the forest. Kuro reaches the campsite of his target noticing 5 guards posted outside of Komino's tent. He lets out a small sigh of relief, "good, for a second i was afraid this wouldn't be challenging. Kuro crawls his way around to the other side of the tent where there were three of the guards. Kuro silently climbs a tree and uses Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt Technique) and hits the ground right in front of the guards the three guards instantly sprint into the woods without a word to the other two with the hope of finding the attacker and getting a bonus from the Crime Lord. Kuro jumps from tree to tree until away from the other now searching guards. Kuro pulls out two sinbon, pulls back his arm, and lets them fly. The first one nails one guard directly in his coritied artery, but the other misses slightly and only hits him in the neck not getting anything vital but still being extremely vital. The first guard collapses without a word but the other screams in agony and Kuro dives in from his tree, landing on the Guard and puncturing his heart with his hidden blade. Kuro retrieves his sinbons and jumps back into a tree. He gets in the tree just before the Crime Lord comes out of his tent and The other Guards come to the source of the sound. The group jumps into position with the Crime Lord frightened like a kitten and the guards blaming each other for leaving there posts. Kuro uses Rensa Raikou no Jutsu (Chain Lightning Technique) and watches as the entire group is zapped and stunned. Kuro swoops in like a raven and stabs the Crime Lord in the heart. He stares into the eyes of him before letting go and uses Raiton: Raikou Shunshin (Lightning Release: Lightning Instantaneous) to leave before the guards can even see him. Kuro releases the jutsu and triumphantly walks back to the HQ feeling the pains dim he gives himself the liberty of one chuckle, "This isn't that bad of an existence."
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 7:38 am
Kuro : Denied, but redeemable.Sure, you made mention of the pain a Konaga Clan member feels, mentioning the spasms and what not that I would imagine a younger Clan member would feel... however that's all you mentioned. No part of that post had you using any other aspect of the Konaga Clan's abilities, or really to the fact that he has so much chakra, that the lightning bolt technique was nothing to him, when a normal Genin might have felt a small drain in their chakra reserves. (at your level, you have the equivalent chakra abilities of a Jounin.)
Now don't get me wrong, the RP sample was GREAT in terms of the RP content itself, but there was very little within it that would allow me to assess how you would use the bloodline's abilities. Try re-doing the post, focusing more on using the clan's chakra augmentation abilities (and remember excessive use of it will render a limb immobile). You may even want to use the Chakra Blade technique (I know, its a Chuunin level skill, but I'll allow it for the purposes of this sample)
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:44 pm
Bloodline: Sharingan Why do you want it: So that I will be able to more easily dodge incoming attacks, so that I can get in close to kill my targets quickly What will you do with it: Enhance my ability to carry out assassinations What you know about it: It allows the user to more or less see moves before they are made, giving them a much better chance to dodge attacks. It also allows the user to copy jutsus that it sees, though jutsus copied require more chakra to use and i believe that if the jutsu is not one of your own elements it is weaker than it would be normally. Higher levels of the sharingan can detect chakra, though not to the same degree as the byakugan. RP Sample:
Kai’s breathing came in labored breaths as a wave of fear washed over him. I don’t want to die, I don’t want to die, the thought kept running through his head like a broken record, his fear wasn’t letting him think straight, the images of his slain comrade’s faces kept flashing before his eyes, I don’t want to die. He had lost track of how long he had been running, but he knew that if he stopped he would share the same fate as his friends. “How did that monster find us?!”, he cried out, they had been so careful, they had hidden their tracks so well, but somehow that, that demon had found them anyway. He had descended upon them like a lightning bolt, leaving only death in his wake.
As Kai continued to run he finally came to a clearing in the forest, and to his horror there stood the demon that had been chasing him, that sadistic smile still stamped across his cold face, his sword dripping with the blood of Kai’s comrades. As Kai tried to back away he tripped up falling to the ground as all of the running began to take its toll. He just stared up at the sky, the light of the full moon reflected in his eye, so this is it, this is how Kaizen Uchiha dies, Kai thought to himself as the world around him seemed to slow down. He watched in wonder as a lightning bug flew above him, seeming to fly almost in slow motion, each beat of its wings seeming to move no faster than the ticking of a clock.
So this is what it feels like when you’re faced with your death, he thought to himself wistfully, a calmness coming over him that he wouldn’t have expected, it’s not so bad as I would have thought. A few moments later the man that had killed all of his friends was standing over him, how strange that I once thought of this man as a demon, he is not so different from me, not so different from any man; the thought came to Kai in that moment as he saw the man standing there above him, his blade poised for the kill, and in that moment Kai no longer feared the demon, no, he no longer feared the man. The man raised the blade above his head, slowly, agonizingly slow, it seemed so simple for Kai to draw his own weapon and catch the man’s sword on his own.
The man’s eyes grew wide as he looked down at the crossed blades, and as they moved to take in the sight of Kai’s face they grew wider still. “They told me that the boy had not activated the power of his blood!”, the man hissed as he jumped away, still seeming to move in slow motion. Kai rolled back slightly, tucking his knees into his chest and then kicking forward, lifting himself back up onto the balls of his feet. But in that moment that Kai had taken his eyes off of his opponent, the gap between them had shrunk until the man was almost upon him, but once Kai could see him again it was simple to let himself fall to the side moving under the blade as it swept over him. He caught himself with his right hand and then pushed off the ground flipping around to face his opponent once more.
Kai smiled as he watched his opponent recover for a moment, seeing the world as he was now was so incredible, he almost couldn’t help staring in wonder as he examined every individual muscle of the man as it contracted or contorted, allowing the body to move in such complex ways, in a way it was beautiful to watch. But the thought of his slain comrades brought Kai back to reality with a jolt, and his wonder was replaced only with a red haze. Kai launched himself forward, weaving himself around the man’s blade as he positioned his own to stab through the man’s throat.
It was over in just a few seconds, the man dropped his sword as he reached up to try and grab at the blade that was now protruding from his throat, but there was nothing he could do. The man looked into Kai’s eyes, that earlier look of shock still clear in his eyes, but now it was mixed with pain, and perhaps… fear? With the man’s last breath he managed to say, “they said… you hadn’t…”, and it was over. Kai drew his sword from the man’s throat, blood spraying out to cover Kai in a fine red mist. Kai just stared at the man’s lifeless body for a moment before he bent down to wipe his blade clean on the man’s shirt. As the blade was wiped cleaned of the vile man’s blood Kai could see his face reflected in the cold steel, and he understood what had happened. Reflected in the blade were two crimson eyes, with a black tomoe next to the pupil, but even this revelation did not long keep the memory of his fallen comrades from clawing its way back into his mind. As he sheathed his blade he looked back up to the moon, and the world seemed to return to its regular pace as teardrops mixed with blood began to fall at Kai’s feet.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:02 pm
Very Nice, you are approved for Sharingan!
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:05 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:10 am
Kuro : Approved!After talking with Kuro in a few PMs and after reading the extra RP post he made in the custom weapons thread, I believe he understands the bloodline's abilities and I approve his use of the Konaga Bloodline.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:47 am
Bloodline:Renmare Kekkai Henkai Stage 2 Why do you want it: I want to help me train more efficiently and to become a better ninja What will you do with it: This will help me to analyze better, and to be more aware of my surroundings What you know about it: I know that this bloodline, can paralyze ninjas with the side affect of hurting the user afterwards, i know that it can sense chakras a long distance away, and i know that it can analyze and sense small changes in chakra levels RP Sample: Kumiko was at her sensei's house training, when she heard a rustling of leaves, so just to make sure nothing was amiss she activated her kekkai, when her eyes were fully dark red she looked around her red eyes piercing through the bodies she looked at looking specifically at their chakra levels, thats when she noticed something strange, so she stopped her training and went straight for them, she saw a few sand ninjas' trying to kidnap a jounin, so she activated Akumu Bun'ya(Mightmare Realm) even though it was late in morning, but still bright to them it got pitch black, they couldn't see a thing, then all of a sudden they heard crows approaching, then they started to peck at them, when their worst fears were brought to life and started to torture them,after using that she had sensed some more sand ninjas coming from the west but due to using that technique she couldn't use Hitorenu Shitai Ki (Hidden Body skill) , because the first technique was draining of her chakra,so she stealthily sneak near them and activated Genwaku Me(blinding Eye),but before they could react they were covered in a white light that slowly started to to paralyze their chakra points making it impossible for them to move. so she laid on a tree, regaining the chakra she had lost using those techniques.
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