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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:55 pm

Samurai. He gets two custom weapons.

Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:57 pm

Elgar the Regicide

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Name of weapon: Niiro Raikou (Red Lightning)
Who owns the weapon: Mugen
Where it was found/Who made it: Given to Mugen by his dead father.
The Range of the weapon: Close Range
Weapon Ability: Mugen can channel his Raiton Elemental Chakra into the gauntlets and greaves, and electrically charge the metal, for stronger attacks. Mugen can also charge his greaves blades making them spin for more damage.
Weakness: Short Range
Description: Niiro Raikou is a set of gauntlets, greaves and a mask that emits a strange red glow. Every edge on the gauntlets and greaves is razor sharp and can cut through most things like wood and small walls of earth with ease. The Greaves themselves have a round, saw-like blade on the ankles that, with Raiton elemental chakra, can spin adding to its lethalness. (D-rank Chakra)
Rp Sample: Mugen walked through the dark, lonely streets of the Hidden Sound Village drinking some of his sake from the jug at his side. He had noticed a group of three people following him, but he paid them little mind. As Mugen walked he began to walk faster and faster as he headed for a pitch black alleyway to confront his stalkers. When they chased him into the alley they stopped, seeing a strange red glow in the blackness of the alley. Mugen walked out of the shadows, the gauntlets and greaves glowing and pulsing red. One of the Shinobi charged at Mugen pulling out a Kunai from his pocket and aiming for Mugen’s heart. Mugen quickly ducked from the attack and channeled his chakra into his left gauntlet and landing a powerful uppercut into the shinobi’s chest, crushing several ribs as they pierced through his heart; killing him. Mugen smiled as the Shinobi dropped dead and charged toward the other Shinobi charging his gauntlets again with chakra as he jumped into the air and landed both his fists onto the top of one of the shinobi’s head, shattering most of his skull. The last Shinobi tried to escape but to no avail, as Mugen charged at him, channeling his chakra into the greaves as the blades spun wildly, as Mugen drop kicked the Shinobi in the shoulder. The Shinobi yelled in pain as the saw-like blade spun through his shoulder and severing his arm. Mugen did a quick move kicking him in the neck and slicing of his head. Blood sprayed everywhere in the alley covering Mugen in the crimson liquor as he left for his apartment to wash up, leaving the dead corpses to feed the crows.

I'm getting tired of every weapon being able to cut through everything. It seems like nobody has a sword or something made out of regular metal anymore, thay always want a Lightsaber. Please specify what it can cut through.

Sorry.

Approved, after you switch the "ankles" thing to "Shoulders" XD

confused Why may I ask? I thought it was a cool I idea?

never mind, it's approved

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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:13 pm

Deil. So what's up? Accepted? Yes? No?

Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:21 pm

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Name of weapon:Solid chakra steal
Who owns the weapon: Edge Kura
Where it was found/Who made it:Was one of his fathers swords which were passed down to Edge after his father died
The Range of the weapon: six feet
Weakness: This blade is made from a solid piece of metal, which means when it is stuck against another weapon equal or grater sticking power it hurts the users hand from the vibrations. The amount of chakra can change depending on how much chakra is put into the weapon.
Description: This sword is made from a solid piece of chakra absorbing metal
which means this sword is great for a Wind user, Once the user can sharpen his or her chakra it will triple the cutting power of the weapon however with out the chakra it is just a normal blade. Another plus for this weapon is that due to the fact is made of a solid piece of metal sound ninja will be able to channel their chakra into the blade making it vibrate, if the sword vibrates while cutting skin it will cut cleaner and due more damage, this will also make the pain from the wound much worseFor ex if the user puts forth D rank amount of chakra that is how much chakra is used however the weapon will amplify it into a C rank move. When the user adds wind chakra to the blade he can force a gail from the sword that is just as sharp as the blade. This will cost the same rank as a wind jutsu he or she would use. Ex= If the user added enough for a C rank wind jutsu it would cost a C rank wind jutsu.

Rp Sample:

As Edge walked into his training grounds he meet his usual sparring partner Zoro, but instead of pulling out Hayate's blade he pulled out a sword made of a solid piece of metal that had 6 feet of reach on it. As he and Zoro squared off Edge dashed forward charging his blade with chakra once the sword connected he vibrations from the blow stung Edge's hand but he ignored it for it was worth it. Their was a thin crack threw Zoro's sword once they started exchanging blows the stinging was almost to much to bear so Edge dashed back pooring his chakra into the blad and sharping it as well he could. Once the swords connected Edge's cut clean threw Zoro's blade leaving it use less however Edge drained alot of his for his chakra malipulaton wasn't what it should be so the match was a draw but Edge knew once he mastered his chakra this sword would be a great tool to protect his village with.

(Sorry for the lack of punctuation)

Also add how much it costs to add the increased wind cutting power.

Well how is this I think I edited every thing I needed to.

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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:54 pm

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Samurai. He gets two custom weapons.

Just a few problems:
1st sword: It is 7 feet long and you say it is lightweight. If this is the case, you need to tell why. Is it hollow, it it the way it is forged, the material, what?

Also, how do you plan of carrying a blade that is bigger than you are?

2nd sword: You need to define the dimensions of the beam, and also if the beam needs constant contact in order to have all of those effects.

Last, I need a definite rank of how much chakra these things use, not just the general "Chunin" thing [like a letter]

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:57 pm

havikthecold

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Name of weapon:Solid chakra steal
Who owns the weapon: Edge Kura
Where it was found/Who made it:Was one of his fathers swords which were passed down to Edge after his father died
The Range of the weapon: six feet
Weakness: This blade is made from a solid piece of metal, which means when it is stuck against another weapon equal or grater sticking power it hurts the users hand from the vibrations. The amount of chakra can change depending on how much chakra is put into the weapon.
Description: This sword is made from a solid piece of chakra absorbing metal
which means this sword is great for a Wind user, Once the user can sharpen his or her chakra it will triple the cutting power of the weapon however with out the chakra it is just a normal blade. Another plus for this weapon is that due to the fact is made of a solid piece of metal sound ninja will be able to channel their chakra into the blade making it vibrate, if the sword vibrates while cutting skin it will cut cleaner and due more damage, this will also make the pain from the wound much worseFor ex if the user puts forth D rank amount of chakra that is how much chakra is used however the weapon will amplify it into a C rank move. When the user adds wind chakra to the blade he can force a gail from the sword that is just as sharp as the blade. This will cost the same rank as a wind jutsu he or she would use. Ex= If the user added enough for a C rank wind jutsu it would cost a C rank wind jutsu.

Rp Sample:

As Edge walked into his training grounds he meet his usual sparring partner Zoro, but instead of pulling out Hayate's blade he pulled out a sword made of a solid piece of metal that had 6 feet of reach on it. As he and Zoro squared off Edge dashed forward charging his blade with chakra once the sword connected he vibrations from the blow stung Edge's hand but he ignored it for it was worth it. Their was a thin crack threw Zoro's sword once they started exchanging blows the stinging was almost to much to bear so Edge dashed back pooring his chakra into the blad and sharping it as well he could. Once the swords connected Edge's cut clean threw Zoro's blade leaving it use less however Edge drained alot of his for his chakra malipulaton wasn't what it should be so the match was a draw but Edge knew once he mastered his chakra this sword would be a great tool to protect his village with.

(Sorry for the lack of punctuation)

Also add how much it costs to add the increased wind cutting power.

Well how is this I think I edited every thing I needed to.

What class is your ninja?
And, the last problem or suggestion is that your cutting technique needs a range and/or a cooloff

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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 2:06 pm

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Name of weapon:Solid chakra steal
Who owns the weapon: Edge Kura
Where it was found/Who made it:Was one of his fathers swords which were passed down to Edge after his father died
The Range of the weapon: six feet
Weakness: This blade is made from a solid piece of metal, which means when it is stuck against another weapon equal or grater sticking power it hurts the users hand from the vibrations. The amount of chakra can change depending on how much chakra is put into the weapon.
Description: This sword is made from a solid piece of chakra absorbing metal
which means this sword is great for a Wind user, Once the user can sharpen his or her chakra it will triple the cutting power of the weapon however with out the chakra it is just a normal blade. Another plus for this weapon is that due to the fact is made of a solid piece of metal sound ninja will be able to channel their chakra into the blade making it vibrate, if the sword vibrates while cutting skin it will cut cleaner and due more damage, this will also make the pain from the wound much worseFor ex if the user puts forth D rank amount of chakra that is how much chakra is used however the weapon will amplify it into a C rank move. When the user adds wind chakra to the blade he can force a gail from the sword that is just as sharp as the blade. This will cost the same rank as a wind jutsu he or she would use. Ex= If the user added enough for a C rank wind jutsu it would cost a C rank wind jutsu. However this can only be done every 3 posts. it has bout 30 feet distance to it

Rp Sample:

As Edge walked into his training grounds he meet his usual sparring partner Zoro, but instead of pulling out Hayate's blade he pulled out a sword made of a solid piece of metal that had 6 feet of reach on it. As he and Zoro squared off Edge dashed forward charging his blade with chakra once the sword connected he vibrations from the blow stung Edge's hand but he ignored it for it was worth it. Their was a thin crack threw Zoro's sword once they started exchanging blows the stinging was almost to much to bear so Edge dashed back pooring his chakra into the blad and sharping it as well he could. Once the swords connected Edge's cut clean threw Zoro's blade leaving it use less however Edge drained alot of his for his chakra malipulaton wasn't what it should be so the match was a draw but Edge knew once he mastered his chakra this sword would be a great tool to protect his village with.

(Sorry for the lack of punctuation)

Also add how much it costs to add the increased wind cutting power.

Well how is this I think I edited every thing I needed to.

What class is your ninja?
And, the last problem or suggestion is that your cutting technique needs a range and/or a cooloff

I am a weapon master

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 3:45 pm

havikthecold

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Also add how much it costs to add the increased wind cutting power.

Well how is this I think I edited every thing I needed to.

What class is your ninja?
And, the last problem or suggestion is that your cutting technique needs a range and/or a cooloff

I am a weapon master

Ok then. After all of that, approved. Good work! smile

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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 3:47 pm

Lol Thank you thanks for not letting things slip it sucked haveing to wait but I m glad its all done now.

Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:51 pm

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Appearance: Devastator
Name of weapon: The Devastator
Who owns the weapon: Aeldevera Mistalune
Where it was found/Who made it: Aeldevera found it on an old battlefield in Kumo.
The Range of the weapon: Melee
Weakness: The blade is made of metal, so high heat. The staff connected to the blade is made of hollow wood.
Description: A two-handed halberd that can dig into armor and carve flesh like a knife and butter. It's about seven and a quarter foot long, with a blade that's two and half inches thick. It is extremely light and can be carried in one hand. It has an attached set of flexible cloth that allows the halberd to be shot forward with an addition seven and a quarter foot of reach, this being because the cloth covers the entire halberd. The cloth can also be infused with chakra to act as a chakra rope and immobilize an opponent, costing genin chakra, due to it not being an average chakra rope ability. It is not very conductive due to the unique metal it was made from.
Rp Sample: An opponent rushed towards Aeldevera, jumping into the air gung-ho and bent on killing. Aeldevera held out his halberd in both hands, aiming the halberd towards the man. Once the man was within 15 feet of Aeldevera, Aeldevera began to build chakra into the halberd and using the chakra he shot it like a javelin, holding the ending of the cloth. It impaled the man as he descended. Aeldevera then used chakra once more and retracted the halberd, tossing it back to him, catching it in a single hand. Another opponent appeared from behind. He tried to grab Aeldevera. Using the chakra rope functionality, Aeldevera seemed to wrap the cloth at his legs at first, as it rapidly covered him up to his torso in cloth. He was unable to move, but neither could Aeldevera, due to the cloth connection to the halberd. This battle was over.

Appearance: Fulgora

Name of weapon: Fulgora, The Goddess of Lightning
Who owns the weapon: Aeldevera Mistalune
Where it was found/Who made it: Passed down through family.
The Range of the weapon: Melee
Weakness: Wind
Description: A long two-handed longsword, that is five and a half foot long. The blade itself is actually four and three quarters inches wide and three inches thick. It is made of a very powerful and enduring metal from the ancient blacksmith linage within Kumo allowing it to withstand other blades and such. It is extremely conductible, with the exception of its handle. It is also super heavy, though Aeldevera has trained himself to the point of swinging this with much ease.

Lightning Rod - By inducing the longsword with chakra, the sword will negate and absorb any lightning elemental attack that is of the same rank or lower than the user. May only occur every three of the user's posts. This absorbs ALL lightning techniques, even and if willed, the user's own. (Chakra cost equal to that of technique absorbed, can not absorb techniques that are above the user's rank).

Electric Beam - Usable only after the sword is supercharged by the lightning rod ability. Similar to Dragon Fire Technique, the user will use lightning chakra making use of the sword's conductibility. The user will perform one-handed handseals, five in total. At the very tip of the blade a beam of electric energy is shot out which is maintained for up to five posts. It must have constant contact. The first post causes momentary paralysis of the area affected, the second can paralyze an entire area of functionality, based on where the beam is. Third the entire body is paralyzed and slight stinging pain is felt. Fourth severe pain is felt throughout the body, organs begin to fail. Fifth heart stops. This is considered a death. Each post that maintains the beam costs Chuunin or rank C chakra cost. On top of the paralysis, moderate burns are caused from the electric beam.

Rp Sample: An opponent stood on a tree. He performed a couple handseals. Aeldevera ran up the tree focusing chakra at his feet using the tree-climbing technique. The opponent charged a bolt of lightning at shot it at Aeldevera. He used his swords lightning rod ability, and it pulled the attack to it. He then sliced and diced. The opponent fell off the tree. Aeldevera sat down. Another opponent appeared, but Aeldevera aimed his sword at the opponent and used the lightning thrower unleashing an electric beam to the opponent. It first began as momentary paralysis due to all nerve endings being shocked, and then the opponent's heart stopped.

Edited the sword, and clarified the halberd... It's 7 foot long halberd which is made of hollow wood? It's naturally light... the only thing that would be like 5 pounds is like the metal blade at the top which is like half a foot of the total length of the halberd... The halberd would be carried across my back, having like 2 feet over the shoulder that is apparent and will hinder my ability with stealth and movement into buildings and under things... It's not a big deal really.

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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:31 pm

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Appearance: Devastator
Name of weapon: The Devastator
Who owns the weapon: Aeldevera Mistalune
Where it was found/Who made it: Aeldevera found it on an old battlefield in Kumo.
The Range of the weapon: Melee
Weakness: The blade is made of metal, so high heat. The staff connected to the blade is made of hollow wood.
Description: A two-handed halberd that can dig into armor and carve flesh like a knife and butter. It's about seven and a quarter foot long, with a blade that's two and half inches thick. It is extremely light and can be carried in one hand. It has an attached set of flexible cloth that allows the halberd to be shot forward with an addition seven and a quarter foot of reach, this being because the cloth covers the entire halberd. The cloth can also be infused with chakra to act as a chakra rope and immobilize an opponent, costing genin chakra, due to it not being an average chakra rope ability. It is not very conductive due to the unique metal it was made from.
Rp Sample: An opponent rushed towards Aeldevera, jumping into the air gung-ho and bent on killing. Aeldevera held out his halberd in both hands, aiming the halberd towards the man. Once the man was within 15 feet of Aeldevera, Aeldevera began to build chakra into the halberd and using the chakra he shot it like a javelin, holding the ending of the cloth. It impaled the man as he descended. Aeldevera then used chakra once more and retracted the halberd, tossing it back to him, catching it in a single hand. Another opponent appeared from behind. He tried to grab Aeldevera. Using the chakra rope functionality, Aeldevera seemed to wrap the cloth at his legs at first, as it rapidly covered him up to his torso in cloth. He was unable to move, but neither could Aeldevera, due to the cloth connection to the halberd. This battle was over.

Appearance: Fulgora

Name of weapon: Fulgora, The Goddess of Lightning
Who owns the weapon: Aeldevera Mistalune
Where it was found/Who made it: Passed down through family.
The Range of the weapon: Melee
Weakness: Wind
Description: A long two-handed longsword, that is five and a half foot long. The blade itself is actually four and three quarters inches wide and three inches thick. It is made of a very powerful and enduring metal from the ancient blacksmith linage within Kumo allowing it to withstand other blades and such. It is extremely conductible, with the exception of its handle. It is also super heavy, though Aeldevera has trained himself to the point of swinging this with much ease.

Lightning Rod - By inducing the longsword with chakra, the sword will negate and absorb any lightning elemental attack that is of the same rank or lower than the user. May only occur every three of the user's posts. This absorbs ALL lightning techniques, even and if willed, the user's own. (Chakra cost equal to that of technique absorbed, can not absorb techniques that are above the user's rank).

Electric Beam - Usable only after the sword is supercharged by the lightning rod ability. Similar to Dragon Fire Technique, the user will use lightning chakra making use of the sword's conductibility. The user will perform one-handed handseals, five in total. At the very tip of the blade a beam of electric energy is shot out which is maintained for up to five posts. It must have constant contact. The first post causes momentary paralysis of the area affected, the second can paralyze an entire area of functionality, based on where the beam is. Third the entire body is paralyzed and slight stinging pain is felt. Fourth severe pain is felt throughout the body, organs begin to fail. Fifth heart stops. This is considered a death. Each post that maintains the beam costs Chuunin or rank C chakra cost. On top of the paralysis, moderate burns are caused from the electric beam.

Rp Sample: An opponent stood on a tree. He performed a couple handseals. Aeldevera ran up the tree focusing chakra at his feet using the tree-climbing technique. The opponent charged a bolt of lightning at shot it at Aeldevera. He used his swords lightning rod ability, and it pulled the attack to it. He then sliced and diced. The opponent fell off the tree. Aeldevera sat down. Another opponent appeared, but Aeldevera aimed his sword at the opponent and used the lightning thrower unleashing an electric beam to the opponent. It first began as momentary paralysis due to all nerve endings being shocked, and then the opponent's heart stopped.

Edited the sword, and clarified the halberd... It's 7 foot long halberd which is made of hollow wood? It's naturally light... the only thing that would be like 5 pounds is like the metal blade at the top which is like half a foot of the total length of the halberd... The halberd would be carried across my back, having like 2 feet over the shoulder that is apparent and will hinder my ability with stealth and movement into buildings and under things... It's not a big deal really.

Approved after those revisions. It looks good.