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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 3:33 am
hey hey, just to let you know i still havent got a computer sorted, this is the first time ive been able to get on in over a month...its driving me nuts... so thanks for letting me give the RP a go. xd hope it all goes well
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 5:56 pm
Riann i already told you it was full... so yeah.
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:00 pm
Ya know considering how fast the ooc thread moves and how very little time she must get if shes on once a month, she probably still hasn't found out and from the looks of things wont anytime soon, its kinda funny... in a sort of cruel way of coarse cool
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:01 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:13 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 9:27 am
Now that I look at it again do you think shes saying thanks for letting her have a go when she did?
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:32 pm
Okay, Ima bored, really bored and I FINNNALLY have the computer for more than 20 mins -_-
So as I get the impression we dont always read each others posts, I will do a "stroy so far" for teh good team (and the others if I get the time).
Wish me luck, much reading is ahead lol.
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:10 pm
About 45 mins on and I am about half way through the goodies, hopefully I will have this thing sumarised in about an hours time...
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 2:18 pm
Okay, second night of working on this and I have finished the good guy summary, gonna set to work on the baddies and possibly consider doing neutrals sometime soon.
*Puts on superman voice*
"The story for far!" (the goodies):
Puts on superman voice
The story for far (the goodies):
The story of the good team began scattered across the four corners of the world.
Our first hero [[hehe couldn’t resist calling the goodies the heroes]] that we encounter is the bereaved Bane Reyson, who’s girlfriend was brutally murdered by an Enersafe assassin who’s intended target had been Bane. After a group of Enersafe soldiers (En-forcers) found Bane meditating on a rock in the middle of the savages of one of the continents, Bane had to pull some nifty moves and jump off a cliff to escape.
Following this, we encounter Wilfredo "Jhay-R" Aspuria Jr. (or as his name is shortened to "Jhay-R"). He is inside a martial arts training school, or more, the ruins of the school, lamenting the loss of his close friend and “class-mates”.
Our attention is then shifted back to Bane, who has in is bid to flee the en-forcers arrived at Costa Del Sol, the holiday resort of the land.
Our story going back to Jhay, he is itching for a fight, at tournament, some chance to fight, he is also suffering strange symptoms since getting some strange tattoos on his body. After throwing back his head and pleading to his deity, for a sign, any sign, some sort of fortune, he discovers information of a tournament is Costa Del Sol [where Bane is currently located], he sets off for Cota Del Sol, realising the prize money would be enough to keep his martial art school afloat for quite some time.
Bane is drunk, very dunk, he is “tasting” the pleasures the alcohols the clubs of Costa Del Sol’s clubs have to offer, his attention is perked by mutters of a tournament begging soon in the area.
Jhay returns home, full of excitement for the tournament he simply MUST got to and we encounter for the fist time Jhay’s two mother’s Lilith and Lee Qua, both after a bit of convincing on Jhay’s part are more than happy to escort him to the tournament at the prospect of Jahy winning and the possibility of going to The Costa’s renowned golden sandy beaches.
We meet our third member of the good team, Rajossi Noire, in Corel. We rapidly learn he was no relocation whatsoever of the last 2-3 weeks of his life or how he ended up in Corel. Following this, Rajossi begins to debate, seemingly with himself. This rapidly develops into the sinister revelation that Rajossi shares in some odd symbiotic relation, with a highly volatile, short fused entity (who calls its-self Kormea). Rajossi seems to come close to hyperventilation as he realises he has NEVER lost control to his body to Kormea for more than 24 hours before now and there may be a possibility he is losing control of his body. Rajossi final shock before he leaves Corel for Costa Del Sol is he finds a sleek and beautifully designed metal gauntlet on his right hand, he flicks back the hand a mincing blades materialise out of no where. Rajossi leaves Corel for Costa Del Sol, confused and deep in thought over what to do.
Very soon after this introduction, we encounter our final hero, Musa. Musa a 19 year old boy, stares on to a burning village, with his father, that has been completely ransacked by strange, strong men with powerful materia. Caught is a whirlwind of sadness and anger, Musa leaves with no indication of direction.
Our tale shifts back to Rajossi, who is stressed, chain smoking and trying to set up camp for the night, all whilst having an argument with the strange soul seemingly resolutely lodged inside him. Discarding rustling sounds as small animals, the rusting suddenly lets out o a blood curdling roar and Rajossi is thrown into a combat to the death with a large beast. After a pure fluke and strategical foresight, Rajossi wins only once he uses his summon materia to invoke Deux, a immense and ferocious eagle, which distracted the beats long enough for Rajossi to slay it. However, once Deux disappears, something strange happens, the entire world around his seems to flicker, shimmer, almost rapture as is something is teeming behind it just for a moment. Traumatised by the blood on his hands, Rajossi cleans himself and walks to Costa Del Sol, he orders a cheap room in a inn and dozes off, a cigarette still shouldering in his lip.
We continue to follow Rajossi the as he awakes and spends the entire remainder of his day in the library at Costa Del Sol, frustrated when he finds no information on the mining blast in Cosmo Canyon that killed his family or on impossible partial symbiotic possession. He gives up and decides to go clubbing (maybe to pick up a hot guy or something), he bumps into Bane Reyson in the club, and is imdeditly annoyed by him being in his way, after Bane leaves, Rajossi hears whispers of a tournament upcoming soon, a slight nagging in his head making him think he should go in for it, he returns to the inn, drunk and passes out, a strange numbness in his arms, as though they are not his own.
Our story flicks to Bane, passing out himself from alcohol around the same time as Rajossi, haunted by the death of his girlfriend as a wave of alcoholic darkness engulfs him.
Rajossi awakes in the middle of the night, only, it’s not Rajossi. It is Kormea, the arrogant, violent, greedy, semi-sadistic, suicidally careless soul “sharing” Rajossi’s body. Still exhausted from 3 weeks of controlling the body, we learn Kormea does this be feeding of Rajossi’s exceptionally high magic (this due to his ether energy classment). Kormea hunts through Bane’s room in vain; in search of summon materia to expand Rajossi’s magical strength so Kormea may possess the body longer as the magic level arguments. He returns to the room, slightly disheartened, but satisfied tat next time he gets control of the body it will be for much longer than this.
Bane awakes, noting Kormea has been through his room, through suspicious, mostly clueless as to WHO had been in his room, he takes note also that his materia has been stumbled on by the intruder but not taken, he then proceeds to pass out again, the alcohol still at war with his tired head.
Rajossi awakes with a spectacular hangover, and decides to treat himself and go down and soak up the rays for the day, on the golden sandy beaches with the perfect surfers bustling about their daily business there. Rajossi overhears rumours being exchanged between two particularly well chiselled surfers that there could materia up for grabs for winning the contest. Kormea first takes a crude snipe at Rajossi’s orientation, severely pissing Rajossi off and then forces him to leave the beach to find out more information about the upcoming tournament for them. Rajossi reluctantly agrees, severely moody at the prospect of spending the rest of the day inside away from surfers stuck with nothing but a homophobe in his head for company.
Rajossi carries on his quest for information on the tournament and goes in the local weapon store, feeling very out of place with his comprisably diminutive build to all the warriors in there. This feeling non too aided by Kormea forcing him to trip over himself for starting to check out one of the less jagged and scarred warriors in the place. Rajossi carries on and finds out from the blacksmith there that the tounament is in a few days time, over in Ivory Del Sol, due to the huge volume of warriors attending this year. He also informs Rajossi the origins of his katar (gauntlet) are the village of Dalton.
We catch up with Musa departing for “the next continent” to escape the ruined village, he offers for the boat man to be paid in his father’s wine and they depart. Musa is the attacked by some odd fish fiend on his travels over the sea, fortunately not having to fight the creature and not wounded by it, though still a little shocked. He and the boatman carry on.
Bane departs in a hurry for Ivory Del Sol, crashing into Kormea (now in complete body control) knocking him to the ground, he offers him a hand, Kormea takes it, comes back up and pushes Bane to the floor, HARD, guilt panging at him form Rajossi’s subconscious and he helps Bane up, they then both go separate ways to the tournament ground. Kormea’s senses in slight overload euphoria at the amount of materia seeming to radiate from all around him with the amount of warriors on te path to the tournament.
Musa descends to boat back onto dry land; he heads for the nearest village (Kirin).
We re-join Jhay and his two mothers in Costa Del Sol, Jhay starring in almost childish wonder at the beauty of the place. We learn that there was some sort of incident with “the teacher he once idolised” some time ago, and his mothers desperately hoped he would not end up this way.
Kormea is next met as he is cornered and attacked by a huge bandit for his materia. Kormea remains calm and only punches the man once. That is. Until he is punched back, blood forms in his mouth ad he is sent into an impossibly violent frenzy, beating the bandit to within and inch of his life an then viciously and goreishly stabbing the bandit in the chest with his Katar leaving to bandit bleeping and choking to die. From his Vantage point in the trees, Bane witnesses this whole scene and is utterly repulsed and traumatised. He vows to face Kormea in combat in the tournament and win as a sort of way of avenging to Bandit. Bane also notes how different a man Kormea seems since he saw him (actuary Rajossi) drunk in the club only a few nights prior to this and is at a total loss as to how this is so.
Our attention shifts back to Musa as he is attacked by weak and starving red hounds, preparing for an attack Musa stands his ground.
We are shot back to Kormea as he lies down to sleep for the night before the big contest day ahead. As he doses off, he is thrown into a nightmarish flashback of his own death, he remembers everything he felt and all he swore as he died at the hands of some mysterious murderer, the last thing he remembered (before being bound to Rajossi) was floating around as part of the life stream and the beautiful freedom that entailed. He awoke cold and sweating, terrified, however he rapidly dosed off discarding this as a nightmare, nothing more.
Meanwhile, Musa is trying to avoid the Red hounds, until, he succeeds in bringing down a few of them and leaves, hoping that the remaining will eat their dead brothers rather than him.
Wandering around Costa Del Sol with his parents, and severely confused as to where the tournament is located, Jhay becomes extremely impatient and swearing loudly succeeds in drawing the attention of the whole square to himself whilst demanding (VERY loudly) where the tournament is located. Taking sympathy on him, a kind stranger informs him the actual contest is being held slightly OUTSIDE Costa Del Sol. Ecstatic, Jhay and his mothers depart for the tournament, Jhay buzzing with internal excitement at the prospect of an upcoming battle as a kid running around pumped full of sugar with a new toy.
The following morning (at some early point) Bane awakes and begins training for the tournament, trying it would appear, to knock over a tree with punches and kicks, he spots Jhay in the corner with his parents, but thinks little of it, discarding Jhay as immature, yet still noting the lad’s power as a possible threat however, it being on a level similar to “the murderous young man” (Kormea) he had encountered in Costa Del Sol.
Little did any of them realize across the waters of the oceans, En-ersafe was planning it’s raid on Merzion which would lead to a chain of key events all around them……
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:28 pm
Nice work my man at least we know someone is keeping track biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:41 pm
*cracks nuckles*
Okay goodies done, badies are currently under sonstruction but have far more text to be gone through than the goodies (though not as much as the nutrals).
So hopefully I will get the chance to work on that sometime if I dont die of homework shock again this week.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 11:25 am
*clap clap clap* very good L_d_o_f you make me proud to be in the same guild as you
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 3:54 pm
Mai, Lock,
You two are my buddies. But please post for gods sake. XD
I am ready to start blowing up Kalm so the story can move on.
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 11:50 pm
Yes I think we could all do with a little bit more posting, I intend to post something soon I'm just too lazy right now, bleh story of my life xd
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:43 pm
i'd rather not double post...where is everyone?
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