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 Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:14 pm
╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Gray Wolf
Nicknames:
Age: 13
Birthdate: 8/25
Gender: Male
Village iwa
Race: Japanese
Rank: acadamy Student
Shinobi Profession: Fighter
Ninja Type: weapon specialist/close range
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon:none
Clan:none
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color:blue
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Element: wind
Battle Strength: wind jutsu/close combat
Battle Weakness: fire jutsu.long range
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. ex. +1 rank for jutsu power level, +1 extra post for learning jutsu,
2. -2 posts to learn weapon styles, can use one-handed seals at jounin
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4. 1.5 x chakra cost of base jutsu [rounded up] for all Offensive jutsu -2 posts to learn weapon styles,
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location:around his neck
Headband Style: Plain
Headband Color: blue
Flack Jacket Style: N/A
Flak Jacket Color: N/A
Weapon Class:huge broad sword
Name of Weapon:none
Weapon Range:6 feet
Special Abilities:
Weapon Location surprised n his back
Exploding Smoke Grenade= 5
Makibishi= 10
Shuriken= 20
Light Bombs= 8
Kunai Holster Location:arm
Kunai Holster Color: red
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left hip
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: black
Backpack Style: none
Backpack Color: none
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A
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╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: carefree and violent loves to battle and train his swordsmen ship
Nindo: battle to my bloody end
Height: 5 foot 6
Weight: 150 pounds
Original Eye Color: arctic blue
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╫Background Information╫
Gray was trained to be a swordsmen by his father he lost both his parents when he was 7 and became vicious to the point he attacked any and everyone that was around him or tried to help Gray continued his swordsmen training for 6 years and barely talked to anyone till he began attending the ninja academy where he3 was constantly punished for attacking other students Gray is often seen lying on the floor and watching the clouds or training to become one of the strongest swordsmen
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:27 pm
>.>' I guess I'll take these, since it's still a free for all...
@Gray:
For your Ninja types, I assume you meant Weapon Specialist and Close Range...?
For your Shinobi Skills, you can't have easy water manipulation unless something actually gave you that bonus. Instead, you should have bonuses from your Ninja Types, ex. +1 rank for jutsu power level, +1 extra post for learning jutsu, 1.5 x chakra cost of base jutsu [rounded up] for all Offensive jutsu or something like -2 posts to learn weapon styles, can use one-handed seals at jounin....those are the bonuses for your classes.
And your rank would be Academy Student, not student!
@Golden:
I'll check out your BL app.
Uhh, where you have your jutsu, you have a few copies, so take the extras out please! Ex. Two Hyouton Categories!
A little side note, isn't 180...lbs I assume, a bit heavy for a kid whose only 5 ft and looks that small in the pic?
@II_Muffin:
Your Shinobi skills from #4 and down are when you are tapping into your Bijuu powers...
Also, why do you have the Transformation as a special skill?
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:34 pm
i edited my profile and thank u for your advice i hope my profile is acceptable now
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:36 pm
Thank you! And sorry, one last thing! You have to pick somewhere other than Konoha, as it is currently closed, again sorry! You can head to Mist, Kumo, or Iwa...though I'd say Kumo since Mist is pretty full and Kumo just lost two people!
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:45 pm
idk sorry i though i had to put all the bijuu skills sweatdrop want me change it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:46 pm
lol ok then i will head to kumo and thank u for helping me
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:48 pm
xD Thanks lament. I forgot I made it before i got the pic xD
And my Two Hyoutons are ninjutsu and Genjutsu, but, I don't think there are hyouton Genjutsu...
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:25 pm
okay i changed lol idk what i was suppose to chage but i changed something
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:56 pm
@Muffin:
Oh there was really nothing for you to change....I was merely telling you >.<' Sorry for the mix up! *Circles Iwa on Akatsuki Board*
*Ahem...*
Approved!
@Gray: Thanks for changing everything! Approved!
Spider, uhh I didn't realize Hinote was looking over your BL, so I will let him finish that up. Once he approves it, and you supply a link for it, you're approved!
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:03 pm
Damn >.< Hinote hasn't been in that forum for two days, I think he gave up on me...
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:05 pm
xD thank you eek did you just circle me on the list o god
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:54 pm
Hold on a minute! We're in free for all, yes, but not here. I'm pretty sure profiles and summons are Gregar only still, except the ones he expressly mentioned.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:55 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Hold on a minute! We're in free for all, yes, but not here. I'm pretty sure profiles and summons are Gregar only still, except the ones he expressly mentioned. HIIIIIINOTE! * Glomps * T^T Pweeeeees look at the bloodline apps...
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:24 pm
So wait this means were not approved yet untill Gergar gets on ~.~
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Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:30 pm
-.-' Sorry guys...I thought a free for all meant a free for all...Though I'm pretty sure he said he wasn't going to look over them...
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