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 Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 4:35 am
(I haven't asked for a village yet but I think of asking Amegakure ^^)
Rp sample:
Yori looked desperatly around for a way to escape. He was surrounded by a pack of wild grey wolves. Nothing else where to hear than the blood thirst of the murdering beasts. No light where shining. The high tree tops closed everything outside. Yori looked around as the wolves came closer.
"I see.. Better do it before it's too late" he said to himself.
Yori placed his hands together in a fast reaction.
"Bunshin no Jutsu!" he yelled.
A clone suddenly appeared beside of Yori. They looked at each other. Then the clone began to distract the wolves. The clone jumped over the pack and ran further into the woods. By succes the wolves followed and then Yori ran the direct opposite direction to get away safely.
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:30 pm
Reigning_Insane The sun was placed to show noon, and Ivana was tired of moving around on the rooftop. She simply fell onto her behind and placed both her feet criss-crossed on the red tiles of the roof. Hide and seek, find and destroy - it didn't matter what it was called; she didn't want to play anymore. I want to go home and eat, not look for a tall kid with brown hair that could be mistaken for a bamboo stick or something, Ivana tapped one of the roof tiles with her fingers. Then something caught her eye just before it turned a corner. On the left side of the street below her, she recognizes the black jacket with gray trimmings belonging to the friend of hers whose suppose to be in hiding. Moving from place to place now are you? Ivana leaned forward from her sitting spot so she could place her feet firmly on the foundation before getting off of it, landing on the barren streets with a thud. Dust and dirt unsettled and fluttered around her feet as she moved quickly towards the direction she saw her friend had gone. As she turned the corner, Ivana found an empty lot where there was only one building that was still in good condition to be used as a shelter.
Ivana sneaked up towards the closed door, the paint was peeling already from the old wood. She could hear movement on the inside and grinned. He's gonna pay for being a cheap hider, Ivana waited a moment before opening the door. It swung wide open to a very surprised friend. As Ivana ran forward and attempted to knock down her friend, he seemed to have dissapeared, replaced by smoke. Huh? Ivana wondered what just happened along with smacking head first into the wall of the building and landing with a mouthful of her black strands of hair all over her face. Without getting up, Ivana moved her right hand over her face to get the hair out of the way. The ceiling was racing in circles above her.
"Ivana, are you okay?" Ivana tilted her head slightly to the side towards the voice of her friend. A new shape a been added to her spinning vision. She squinted her mahoghany eyes as if she needed a closer look even though the voice was more than enough. She leaped up, grabbing the one who had just faked his appearance with a clone.
"What's wrong with you?!" Ivana shook his jacket color, flustered. Pass. Great length, and excellently descriptive. =3
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:30 pm
Homocidal Love (Yay...random post...) The rippling water reflected the sun back towards the sky, making it appear as if the water was covered in the sparkles that children use during their arts and crafts projects. This quiet tranquility, however, was quickly disrupted as three girls came running towards the water. Accompanied by joyous screaming and laughing there were violent splashes as the girls dove in. The water was warm and now rippled in small, but violent, waves. Coming up for breath it was evident that these tree were shinobi on their day off. The first was a vibrant red-head whose eyes danced and sparkled with the water. Her skin was a darkened tan and she was known as the village's flirt. To her left was her older sister, a woman with mouse brown hair; but her eyes sparkled and shone the same as her sister's. Finally, as she was pulling the two under the water with her legs, was a girl with pure black hair and an alabastor complection. As the three fought for who was allowed to breath above the water and who had to fight their way back up there was a sudden change in the water. Instead of its peaceful and serence, yet playful and joyous, self a large wave appeared over the three. Before they had time to react the wave came down with crushing force, pushing all three under the water. Pass. Good job.
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:32 pm
GorgeousC (( So.. I'm gonna make this a graduation from the Academy because I am going to start off as an Academy Student)) Rikku woke up in the morning. She rubbed her brown eyes and moved her hair out of her face. Her bangs kept poking her in the eyes. She then looked up at her clock to see that it was almost time for her to leave for graduation. 'I thought I'd wake up earlier,' she thought to herself and she quickly stood up on her bed. She then jumped off of her bed and landed with a loud thud.
She walked up to her closet almost tripping on all of her toys on her carpet. She opened her closet slowly and then looked at all of the clothes in there. She eventually found a pair of pink capris pants and a light purple shirt with a butterfly on it. She changed as fast as she could and then she ran downstaris nearly falling down the stairs because she was running so fast.
She noticed that she planned to leave five minutes from now and she dind't brush her hair or her teeth and also, she still needed to eat breakfast. She ran into the bathroom accross the hall from the kitchen and she slipped on some water in the bathroom. She then stood up in wet clothes but she didn't really care how wet they were. She opened the tooth paste tube and squeezed it as the tooth paste came out. She put some on her tooth brush and started swishing water around in her mouth. She then brushed her teeth. She looked at the clock hanging in the kitchen and she realised she had to leave now! She didn't brush her hair because she didn't have time. She ran into the kitchen and grabbed a banana off of the counter. She then ran to leave the house and she shut the door behind her.
When she got to the graduation, she saw many of the other Academy Students there as well. She grinned as she found a chair to sit in and she watched silently as the teacher asked for everyone's attention. When the teacher called the graduates to come up one by one, she nearly bounced off of her chair when she heard her name. As she was walking to the teacher, she got even more nervous for finding out who was in her team. She then shook the teacher's hand with her sweaty palm and went back to her chair to sit down.Well done. Pass.
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:33 pm
iMrArrow As nightfall drew closer, the village was silent they waited to strike the unsuspecting civilians. When night struck, shadows appeared from the wood and surrounded the village. One of the hadows drew closer and signaled the others to advance and slaughter them all. They pounced into the streets and stealthly wandered the streets going into each house and slaughtering the families. one by one the village fell the village barracks was soon overrun. Even the strongest of the villages shinobi were uncapable of defeating them. they were no match for the mysterious Shinobi.As the people who had survived returned to thier village they were sickened by the smell of death. Countless people killed in one attack, "Tragic..." some say. But in the end the mysterious shinobi were never identified. Hopefully i pass with this... Pass.
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:34 pm
iWalking Disaster (I haven't asked for a village yet but I think of asking Amegakure ^^) Rp sample: Yori looked desperatly around for a way to escape. He was surrounded by a pack of wild grey wolves. Nothing else where to hear than the blood thirst of the murdering beasts. No light where shining. The high tree tops closed everything outside. Yori looked around as the wolves came closer.
"I see.. Better do it before it's too late" he said to himself.
Yori placed his hands together in a fast reaction.
"Bunshin no Jutsu!" he yelled.
A clone suddenly appeared beside of Yori. They looked at each other. Then the clone began to distract the wolves. The clone jumped over the pack and ran further into the woods. By succes the wolves followed and then Yori ran the direct opposite direction to get away safely.
Pass.
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Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 7:26 pm
Sorain hung upside down from a random tree right behind the academy. He was never the type for learning through books and all that jazz. He was more of a go out there and try it, fall, get back up, do it again type of person. Sure it was irrational and arguably just stupid. But he did not care, to him the world was only what he knew it to be. A strange concept for a young child but even still for what little he did understand of the world he was wise for his age, often times he would say things to his fellow class mates that would go right over there heads which sometimes forced him to shy away from the fellow students. He was not arrogant in anyway, but just tired of having to play the frivolous ninja games. He had a dream and a goal and he intended on reaching it no matter what. Sorain sighed and looked up towards the ground, he had not realized that he was upside down untill then. Kicking off he flipped in the air and landed on one knee and one foot on the ground. The semi hard rocks and dirt on the ground cut alittle but nothing that was actually gonna cause any real discomfort. Sorain reached down to dust himself off before proceeding inwards to the graduation ceremony. He would not be surprised if he was late, he really needed to stop the random trances of thought that he got sometimes, it was becoming a real inconvenience. Randomly he would have a flash back, or a sudden moment of inspiration that would send him off on some mental journey leaving him standing there and looking to space, the world wondering what the hell he was doing. Or maybe he just had an over active imagination, of course Sorain would never admit to it if that was the case he was open to the idea that it could be a possibility. "Wait... Im doing it again! Damit" he thought to himself, realizing that he was going off on another path of thought in his head that had nothing to do with the situatuon at hand. He would need to work on that for sure, he walked inside the doors and awaited his graduation.
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 1:35 pm
RP SAMPLE:
Akaski, a younge ninja fresh out of the acedamy, stood silently under a small cherry blossom tree. It was the only tree in sight. It and she stood in the middle of a long stretch of grass fields. The tall flowing grass reached Akaski's knees. The wind blew though her sholder leanght lightly chocolate brown hair, and the tall grass too. Her deap blue kimono that had a golden dragon stitched into it by her mother ,only four months before, also swished in the wind. Her dark green eyes lay staring at three gravestones on the top of the one, and only, hill on this long stretch of land. Those three stones she was staring at belong to the only three people to ever truly understand her. Her older brother, father, and mother. She thought back too the day she had been told they where no more.
She had been out too get lunch, ramen, with three other academy students. All the doors were locked and they didnt have many windows in the place. Witch is why when she walked into the house she was so serprised too see those two men, her fathers "friends" from ANBU. They all just stood there for a moment before Akaski was able to let out in a small wisper," What has happened?"
She was never told the whole truth, she knew. SHe had not been told who killed them, or how they died. All she was told was that they were dead, and where there gravestones layed. Everyday since she sat in class at te acedamy in silence, she had nothing but what was left in the house and the little money they had had. She was able to stay in the house, but only since the village helped pay for it. If there was a shortage of money, she would have too leave, she knew.
She took one last second too look at there gravestones then turned around. She started to walk away just as a huge burst of wind blew across the fields, and cherry blossoms were blown all around her as she disappears out of sight of the three, lonly, gravestones.
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:11 pm
Ele360 Sorain hung upside down from a random tree right behind the academy. He was never the type for learning through books and all that jazz. He was more of a go out there and try it, fall, get back up, do it again type of person. Sure it was irrational and arguably just stupid. But he did not care, to him the world was only what he knew it to be. A strange concept for a young child but even still for what little he did understand of the world he was wise for his age, often times he would say things to his fellow class mates that would go right over there heads which sometimes forced him to shy away from the fellow students. He was not arrogant in anyway, but just tired of having to play the frivolous ninja games. He had a dream and a goal and he intended on reaching it no matter what. Sorain sighed and looked up towards the ground, he had not realized that he was upside down untill then. Kicking off he flipped in the air and landed on one knee and one foot on the ground. The semi hard rocks and dirt on the ground cut alittle but nothing that was actually gonna cause any real discomfort. Sorain reached down to dust himself off before proceeding inwards to the graduation ceremony. He would not be surprised if he was late, he really needed to stop the random trances of thought that he got sometimes, it was becoming a real inconvenience. Randomly he would have a flash back, or a sudden moment of inspiration that would send him off on some mental journey leaving him standing there and looking to space, the world wondering what the hell he was doing. Or maybe he just had an over active imagination, of course Sorain would never admit to it if that was the case he was open to the idea that it could be a possibility. "Wait... Im doing it again! Damit" he thought to himself, realizing that he was going off on another path of thought in his head that had nothing to do with the situatuon at hand. He would need to work on that for sure, he walked inside the doors and awaited his graduation. Pass. Good job.
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Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:14 pm
AlexTheGuardain RP SAMPLE: Akaski, a younge ninja fresh out of the acedamy, stood silently under a small cherry blossom tree. It was the only tree in sight. It and she stood in the middle of a long stretch of grass fields. The tall flowing grass reached Akaski's knees. The wind blew though her sholder leanght lightly chocolate brown hair, and the tall grass too. Her deap blue kimono that had a golden dragon stitched into it by her mother ,only four months before, also swished in the wind. Her dark green eyes lay staring at three gravestones on the top of the one, and only, hill on this long stretch of land. Those three stones she was staring at belong to the only three people to ever truly understand her. Her older brother, father, and mother. She thought back too the day she had been told they where no more. She had been out too get lunch, ramen, with three other academy students. All the doors were locked and they didnt have many windows in the place. Witch is why when she walked into the house she was so serprised too see those two men, her fathers "friends" from ANBU. They all just stood there for a moment before Akaski was able to let out in a small wisper," What has happened?" She was never told the whole truth, she knew. SHe had not been told who killed them, or how they died. All she was told was that they were dead, and where there gravestones layed. Everyday since she sat in class at te acedamy in silence, she had nothing but what was left in the house and the little money they had had. She was able to stay in the house, but only since the village helped pay for it. If there was a shortage of money, she would have too leave, she knew. She took one last second too look at there gravestones then turned around. She started to walk away just as a huge burst of wind blew across the fields, and cherry blossoms were blown all around her as she disappears out of sight of the three, lonly, gravestones. Nice length. Pass.
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Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:21 pm
What the hell?
Jack pushed open the lid of his box and peered about the dark, dusty gloom. Where am I? Toy's he hadn't seen for years lay sacattered about like discarded rags. A cold terror seized him. Holy crap! I'm in the Underbed!
Suddenly he recalled, with chilling clarity, Thomas calling him a little kid's toy.
Sure, the boy's ten years old now, Jack reasoned, a swell of panic tightening his chest. I know that he might be outgrowing some of his toys. But not... Me? I'm still fun. Loads of fun.
In fact, decked out in his zany striped suit, his wild red hair poking from beneath his pointy cap, he could be unsnapped from his box to bounce and flip, spin and cartwheel, to fill the room with the jingle-jangle of his oversized bells.
Jack flicked a bell on the end of his cap. The jingle sounded hollow in the gloom. So why has Thomas stuck me under the bed?
Jack shivered. The toys sharing the shadows looked faded, not just their colors, but their very spirit. Humpty dumpty lay on his side, mouth opening and closing, making a small popping noise. Teddy Bear rocked ruefully as he stared with blank unblinking eye into the gloom. the other toys hardly moved at all. they looked dead. Jack shuddered. This has to be the worst place a toy could ever end up. Of course this was before he found out there were indeed worse places for toys to end up, far worse places.
Jack jumped as Thomas came bursting into the room. The boy wore a cowboy shirt and had an empty gun holster strapped around a pair of dirty trousers. His pale skin was deeply freckled from the South Carolina sun. The boy knelt down in front of a chest and began to dig through his toys.
Out there, Jack realized, all was bright and colorful. Out there, all the toys wore big smiles. Out there, all was full of life. Jack wanted back out there, wanted that more than anything.
There's been a mistake, Jack thought and took advantage of Thomas's turned back to hop from his box and push it to the hem of the blanket, just far enough so that the boy would be able to see him. Jack draped himself comically over the edge of the box, put on his perkiest smile and waited for the boy to turn around.
((Yeah, this was a Toy Story Rp sample >.>))
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Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:03 pm
The Genetic Opra What the hell?
Jack pushed open the lid of his box and peered about the dark, dusty gloom. Where am I? Toy's he hadn't seen for years lay sacattered about like discarded rags. A cold terror seized him. Holy crap! I'm in the Underbed!
Suddenly he recalled, with chilling clarity, Thomas calling him a little kid's toy.
Sure, the boy's ten years old now, Jack reasoned, a swell of panic tightening his chest. I know that he might be outgrowing some of his toys. But not... Me? I'm still fun. Loads of fun.
In fact, decked out in his zany striped suit, his wild red hair poking from beneath his pointy cap, he could be unsnapped from his box to bounce and flip, spin and cartwheel, to fill the room with the jingle-jangle of his oversized bells.
Jack flicked a bell on the end of his cap. The jingle sounded hollow in the gloom. So why has Thomas stuck me under the bed?
Jack shivered. The toys sharing the shadows looked faded, not just their colors, but their very spirit. Humpty dumpty lay on his side, mouth opening and closing, making a small popping noise. Teddy Bear rocked ruefully as he stared with blank unblinking eye into the gloom. the other toys hardly moved at all. they looked dead. Jack shuddered. This has to be the worst place a toy could ever end up. Of course this was before he found out there were indeed worse places for toys to end up, far worse places.
Jack jumped as Thomas came bursting into the room. The boy wore a cowboy shirt and had an empty gun holster strapped around a pair of dirty trousers. His pale skin was deeply freckled from the South Carolina sun. The boy knelt down in front of a chest and began to dig through his toys.
Out there, Jack realized, all was bright and colorful. Out there, all the toys wore big smiles. Out there, all was full of life. Jack wanted back out there, wanted that more than anything.
There's been a mistake, Jack thought and took advantage of Thomas's turned back to hop from his box and push it to the hem of the blanket, just far enough so that the boy would be able to see him. Jack draped himself comically over the edge of the box, put on his perkiest smile and waited for the boy to turn around.
((Yeah, this was a Toy Story Rp sample >.>)) Good job. Pass. ^0^
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Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:59 pm
Rp Sample: Miyako finished her cup of tea, and put down the cup. In her other hand, she was holding her father's kunai, with the black handle, and "Y" etched into it. It stood for Yasuo; her father who had recently died in a war. All she had of his was his kunai, and the white hoodie with panda ears stitched onto it, that she was wearing. Her father had stitched the ears of one of her favorite childhood stuffed animals onto it, when the toy got ripped.
She clenched the kunai in her fist. After taking a deep breath, she put the kunai back in the weapon holder on her shorts, and closed it. She put a hand to one of the ears on her hoodie. A few tears escaped from her eyes, but she wiped them away. She lowered the hood from the top of her head. Before she decided to look around the town for the academy, she wanted to practice using her father's kunai. From what he had told her, he had never missed a target in his life. She looked around for some trees.
Okay dad, She thought, Lets see if im as good as you.
She got back out the kunai, and pulled her arm back. She took in a deep breath, and moved it forward. The kunai did not move. Oops, forgot to let go. This time, she pulled back, forward, and watched the kunai fly towards a tree. It plunged through the air, as if it was going to crash. She bit her lip until a spot on it was red, and after what seemed like forever, she heard a "thump." She looked over, and saw the kunai hit smack in the middle of the tree. I guess its in the blood, dad. She said, giggling at the sky and into the daylight...
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Miyako walked amongst the rooftops. No matter how much she wanted to, she was afraid to go to the academy. The moon began to show through the sky, as the sun disappeared. As the sun waltzed across the sky, the moon began to glisten, and the shimmering stars arrived to accompany it. Her kunai, clenched in her left hand, shined with the celestial beings. She moved it around, to shine it in different directions. No matter how she moved it, it always seemed to hit the spot she landed on like a bullseye. She wondered if what she thought earlier was true; if it really was in the blood. She grinned at the thought of being like her father. Okay dad, She said to the stars, Tomorrow, i head for the academy!
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Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 8:11 pm
homicidal muffinz Rp Sample: Miyako finished her cup of tea, and put down the cup. In her other hand, she was holding her father's kunai, with the black handle, and "Y" etched into it. It stood for Yasuo; her father who had recently died in a war. All she had of his was his kunai, and the white hoodie with panda ears stitched onto it, that she was wearing. Her father had stitched the ears of one of her favorite childhood stuffed animals onto it, when the toy got ripped.
She clenched the kunai in her fist. After taking a deep breath, she put the kunai back in the weapon holder on her shorts, and closed it. She put a hand to one of the ears on her hoodie. A few tears escaped from her eyes, but she wiped them away. She lowered the hood from the top of her head. Before she decided to look around the town for the academy, she wanted to practice using her father's kunai. From what he had told her, he had never missed a target in his life. She looked around for some trees.
Okay dad, She thought, Lets see if im as good as you.
She got back out the kunai, and pulled her arm back. She took in a deep breath, and moved it forward. The kunai did not move. Oops, forgot to let go. This time, she pulled back, forward, and watched the kunai fly towards a tree. It plunged through the air, as if it was going to crash. She bit her lip until a spot on it was red, and after what seemed like forever, she heard a "thump." She looked over, and saw the kunai hit smack in the middle of the tree. I guess its in the blood, dad. She said, giggling at the sky and into the daylight...
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Miyako walked amongst the rooftops. No matter how much she wanted to, she was afraid to go to the academy. The moon began to show through the sky, as the sun disappeared. As the sun waltzed across the sky, the moon began to glisten, and the shimmering stars arrived to accompany it. Her kunai, clenched in her left hand, shined with the celestial beings. She moved it around, to shine it in different directions. No matter how she moved it, it always seemed to hit the spot she landed on like a bullseye. She wondered if what she thought earlier was true; if it really was in the blood. She grinned at the thought of being like her father. Okay dad, She said to the stars, Tomorrow, i head for the academy!*thumbs up* Pass!
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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:54 am
I am undecided on my village, a clan, and my name.
RP Example:
Max rolls over in bed to look at his alarm clock and to silence the noise by turning it off. He notices that it is 4:30 in the morning, after turning off his alarm clock, he leaps out bed and walks over to his closet. Max takes a glance out the window to see what the weather is like today, it is dark blue and clear. He takes a few minutes locating his sweat suit and his weight jacket, to go on his morning run and training excercises. After he finishes putting on his sweat suit and securing his weight jacket, Max goes down stairs to see what tsunai made for his daily breakfast.Tsunai is like a sister to Max. She serves him a bowl of tofu and egg whites. Max attempts to quickly finish his meal.
Tsunai says to him, "Don't stuff your mouth Max your going to choke and be nice to your self today you still have the training from the academy to deal with. Don't think I am going to rub you down with liquid heat again because I wont do it." I look up at her from my bowl and grin. She doesnt know my pain or the reason i fight. I live to learn and I live to fight, but most of all I live to avenge my parents.
After breakfast Max waves to Tsunai and heads out the door. The morning is cool and sweet, not a cloud in the sky. Max takes a deep breath and begins stretching his tired muscles. Max takes a few minutes to stretch. He readys his stance down the road he aways takes around the village, and thinks to him self, "today i will run seven times around the village and train ten times harder. I wil avenge my parents and i will become strong." Max darts forward at speeds rivaling a charging shark and disappears into the distance.
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