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 Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:55 am
yayness... that was bothering me, but 'tis all cleared up now.
*goes to start looking through rp descriptions for one she would like to join*
**edit** Must come up with some character ideas for the Strange Days rpg...
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 10:06 am
Please dooo!!!!! *Needs more players in that one. Patricularly if the fledgling plot is to grow up*
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:00 pm
You're too good for me to mentor you *laugh*. I'm saying that you're about my level actually, so it wouldn't really do you any good and it would make me look incredibly stupid *chuckle*. Anyways, the grammatical errors were elipses where you could've used other punctuation (ie. periods, comma's...) An example would be: Quote: A punch could work... however, it could easily backfire on her if he turned out to be some martial arts prodigy. Instead of that, how about: Quote: A punch could work , however, it could easily backfire on her if he turned out to be some martial arts prodigy. Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't there two spaces after a period? Maybe it's just me...
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:21 pm
domokun Many computer failings occuring here. Here's what I can remember from the post I had a few minutes ago...
I think the two-spaces-after-a-period thing is more of a style choice than any official grammar point. I've always done one, because my Microsoft Word is set to correct two.
I do use alot of ellipses; I try to keep it to when I want to imply a longer pause or more definite break than a comma can show (they occur most often when I'm writing thought). I know a person who uses ellipses almost every single line... It makes her posts a bit annoying to read whee
I think I will probably play a policeman/woman in the Strange Days rpg-- my only hesitation is that I'm not really familiar with the day-to-day workings of a police station, nor any details about a policeman/woman's typical day. Must go see if I can find out more about that... It'll probably help me form my character further too xd .
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:29 pm
*laugh* Playing people you don't know is always fun. Check out Yolanda from 'The Underland.' I don't know where she came from, just popped into my head *laugh*.
Eh well, *yawn* I'm kinda sleepy...
Zzzzzzzzzz...
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:47 pm
*dances* Play anyway. Make it up. Extrapolate from the data you already have.
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 8:57 pm
*dances* The RP I'm slowly but surely creating now has official names for its four original races! The Inazuma, Ra'qihra, Akkinwar and Ssammhaen will soon live...
*grins* I had to share that xd
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 9:16 pm
She's so excited and eager! Blue is glad she said, "I approve!" 4laugh Waii!!! So cyoot!
*pet pets their new member*
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 6:03 am
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 9:26 am
*shakes her head* My my....Sometimes I feel so old and jaded compared to the new young excited members..
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 10:10 am
eh, I'm generally always on the excited side when I'm creating characters and/or RPGs. It's so much fun...
*hopes that the Strange Days RP will keep moving*. I think we need Indy to post, no?
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 1:43 pm
Merlinic Matrices - You joing strange days?? YAY!! I will go post now.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 2:03 pm
Ooh, a new and fresh Rp? I can't wait! blaugh
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 2:10 pm
Tara_Nepion *shakes her head* My my....Sometimes I feel so old and jaded compared to the new young excited members.. Don't! Some of us are not all that excitable (me)! ;P
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 2:26 pm
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