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 Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:17 pm
I thought chapter was coming out on monday?
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:19 pm
I am really behind schedule, I have had dr. appointments and I have been sleeping to contend with the humble sloth, I hate being sick... oh and another loyal reader biggrin
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:15 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:35 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:36 pm
O:
First story I'm actually Lifeless.
Awesome story.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:40 pm
Interesting story.
You have a good storytelling style, but it rambles and sometimes it's little hard to understand what's going on. Other than that, it's still well-written. And thanks for including me! I can't wait to see some real action in the upcoming chapters. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:53 pm
Thanks guys glad you like it
@ LF-You are the lifeless fox, I guess I had to put you like that, The story for you makes more sense in time
@ Altae-Glad you like the story, once again sorry about the pacing abnormalities, but it is meant to be slightly manic. The action will come shortly, and by that I mean soon... really soon and as for you Altae, you are not a mere human... you have a special ability.
@ Fangs- thanks... or was that just a proclamation?
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:54 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:55 pm
Sauvie @ Altae-Glad you like the story, once again sorry about the pacing abnormalities, but it is meant to be slightly manic. The action will come shortly, and by that I mean soon... really soon and as for you Altae, you are not a mere human... you have a special ability. Manic paced? ah, so it's more of a stream-of-conciousness sort of thing. 3nodding Special ability? OMG. You'd better hurry up with that next chapter now. I'll eagerly be looking forward to it. surprised
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:56 pm
Altae Sauvie @ Altae-Glad you like the story, once again sorry about the pacing abnormalities, but it is meant to be slightly manic. The action will come shortly, and by that I mean soon... really soon and as for you Altae, you are not a mere human... you have a special ability. Manic paced? ah, so it's more of a stream-of-conciousness sort of thing. 3nodding Special ability? OMG. You'd better hurry up with that next chapter now. I'll eagerly be looking forward to it. surprised it is already been started
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:02 pm
Sauvie Thanks guys glad you like it @ LF-You are the lifeless fox, I guess I had to put you like that, The story for you makes more sense in time @ Altae-Glad you like the story, once again sorry about the pacing abnormalities, but it is meant to be slightly manic. The action will come shortly, and by that I mean soon... really soon and as for you Altae, you are not a mere human... you have a special ability. @ Fangs- thanks... or was that just a proclamation?
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:23 am
I enjoyed the chapters, though at times you ramble but we all do that. Looking forward to the next chapter xd
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:31 am
rofl did Draken get a little anxious to say hi there? xd
awesome chapter. biggrin I liked how you introduced each of the characters. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:39 am
Glad you two liked it, I am soory about the rambling though sweatdrop
and Koosei, you will be in it soon enough
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