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 Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:14 am
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:10 am
im loking for the kage of rain i hope i can find him/her
RP sample: As Nazo was moving swiftly from tree to tree in the dence forest in the Fire Country he noticed a cry for help in the echoes coming form the East. He changed course and headed to where the sound was coming form, he found a women under attack by five bandits. He stood up on a branch and used Hidden Mist no jutsu. The area filled with dark fog, all you could see where shadows in the air. Nazo activated his Masamune so his eyes could see exactly where the enemies were. He formed more seals and launched a Pheonix flower Jutsu at one of the enemies. He threw four needles, two each hitting one more bandit each in the heart. There was one left, obviously the one left was the leader as he had the great sword. Nazo lept over his head and snapped his neck. The maiden was save, he asked her why were the after her. She said, "I'm indebt to their leader, I have a severe gambeling problem." "It's no problem." He replied, "but keep a steadier grasp on your money next time." As he said while jumping into the darkness. The lady was saved, adn Nazo did a deed, he thought to himself Maybe living the life of a hero isn't so bad...
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:29 am
Scooter Xero im loking for the kage of rain i hope i can find him/her RP sample: As Nazo was moving swiftly from tree to tree in the dence forest in the Fire Country he noticed a cry for help in the echoes coming form the East. He changed course and headed to where the sound was coming form, he found a women under attack by five bandits. He stood up on a branch and used Hidden Mist no jutsu. The area filled with dark fog, all you could see where shadows in the air. Nazo activated his Masamune so his eyes could see exactly where the enemies were. He formed more seals and launched a Pheonix flower Jutsu at one of the enemies. He threw four needles, two each hitting one more bandit each in the heart. There was one left, obviously the one left was the leader as he had the great sword. Nazo lept over his head and snapped his neck. The maiden was save, he asked her why were the after her. She said, "I'm indebt to their leader, I have a severe gambeling problem." "It's no problem." He replied, "but keep a steadier grasp on your money next time." As he said while jumping into the darkness. The lady was saved, adn Nazo did a deed, he thought to himself Maybe living the life of a hero isn't so bad...
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:37 am
oooh yaay thank you. i guess thats what i get for taking IB world literature.. in 9th grade lol, but i have a better idea can i join your village?
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:44 am
Sure thing. Pm me your profile when its all ready. You have to start out as an Acadmey Student.
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 2:17 pm
sweatdrop I already pm kage whoops but any ways. crap no first person.... sweatdrop
RP sample: A tall man standing six foot eight inches tall, with a very muscular build, walks inside the bulding and look around to see if others are there. Gig gets a rather lagre alligator tear as he does this as he'll be applying to become a acdemy student despite begin 22 years of age.
Gig scratches head not knowing where to go or what exactl to do, but since he had minimal places to rp naruto style he bites his lip and let go of pride to willingly attepmt to be a stundent, no matter the dismay or bad effect it may cause, then with a deep and dark voice. "I cant belive im actualy doing this..."
After some time of waiting Gig walks back outside, upon ariving there gig reachs in to vest and remove a cig from its pack as well as a zippo lighter from inside vest pocket. Gig then with cig in right hand places it in lips and holds hand infront of lighter and cig to keep wind away from it. Gig then strikes the lighter and and the flint sparks fire i inhale air threw the cig drawing in the fire and lighting the cig.
He then puts the zippo back in pocket and casulaly smokes the cig, outside the entrance to the bulding.
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:32 pm
OK here goes nothing, Rp-ing example:
Keroku dived from a high oak branch into the river. The first thing he felt was a cool rush as he touched the water. He surfaced and took a deep breath, happy to be able to get some alone time. After that he submerged and went with the current to get maximum mometum. He was in a rush! Going extremely fast, quick as ever. But suddently to his utter amazement he saw a gigantic, rainbow colored fish swim by. It was huge! It was about 40 long and had a very scary mouth. Keroku immediatly set after it thinking " this is incredible, utterly impossible!!" The fish saw him and set of at an amazing rate. Keroku had to resurface for air after such a strain to his body and lungs. When he went back under it had simply dissapeared. "Wow I have much to learn about nature." he thought and silently surfaced, gently pondering about the fish.
*hope its OK* biggrin
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:04 pm
Waterwolf OK here goes nothing, Rp-ing example: Keroku dived from a high oak branch into the river. The first thing he felt was a cool rush as he touched the water. He surfaced and took a deep breath, happy to be able to get some alone time. After that he submerged and went with the current to get maximum mometum. He was in a rush! Going extremely fast, quick as ever. But suddently to his utter amazement he saw a gigantic, rainbow colored fish swim by. It was huge! It was about 40 long and had a very scary mouth. Keroku immediatly set after it thinking " this is incredible, utterly impossible!!" The fish saw him and set of at an amazing rate. Keroku had to resurface for air after such a strain to his body and lungs. When he went back under it had simply dissapeared. "Wow I have much to learn about nature." he thought and silently surfaced, gently pondering about the fish. *hope its OK* biggrin
Good job. Pass.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:06 pm
giglamesh sweatdrop I already pm kage whoops but any ways. crap no first person.... sweatdrop RP sample: A tall man standing six foot eight inches tall, with a very muscular build, walks inside the bulding and look around to see if others are there. Gig gets a rather lagre alligator tear as he does this as he'll be applying to become a acdemy student despite begin 22 years of age. Gig scratches head not knowing where to go or what exactl to do, but since he had minimal places to rp naruto style he bites his lip and let go of pride to willingly attepmt to be a stundent, no matter the dismay or bad effect it may cause, then with a deep and dark voice. "I cant belive im actualy doing this..."After some time of waiting Gig walks back outside, upon ariving there gig reachs in to vest and remove a cig from its pack as well as a zippo lighter from inside vest pocket. Gig then with cig in right hand places it in lips and holds hand infront of lighter and cig to keep wind away from it. Gig then strikes the lighter and and the flint sparks fire i inhale air threw the cig drawing in the fire and lighting the cig. He then puts the zippo back in pocket and casulaly smokes the cig, outside the entrance to the bulding.
Waaaaaay to wordy my friend. You add so many unnecessary words that its hard to understand.
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 7:11 pm
My Character's name is Ikazuchi Misa, and I am still in the process of finding which village should suit her.
RP Sample:
Misa stopped, panting heavily.
She couldn't do this, it was impossible. She wasn't built for being a Shinobi.
Her sensei had been wrong. Drastically so.
"Misa! What are you doing! You have twenty more laps to go!" He jogged up to her side, and continued to do so in place.
"I.." She inhaled deeply, "can't... I'm too weak sensei..." She stated in exasperation.
"S'at so?" He asked shaking his head. "You can still talk, can't you? Then you can jog." He grabbed her arm, and pulled her behind him. She followed obediently, stumbling over her feet as she did so.
She wanted to stop. Her mother had been right. She wasn't cut out for this.
Misa stopped thinking 'can't do it', for a moment.
Her mother HAD said she couldn't do it.
"I can... Hell yes, I can!" She snarled viscously, ripping her arm away from his and beginning to jog again beside her sensei.
She wouldn't let her mother be right this time. Not about this.
Even if her heart stopped beating and her lungs stopped working…
She would prove her mother wrong.
“Now we’re getting some where!” Her Sensei cried happily, patting her on the back as they jogged together.
Yes. Yes they were getting somewhere now.
I hope it's to your standards
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 7:42 pm
Pirate Soul My Character's name is Ikazuchi Misa, and I am still in the process of finding which village should suit her.
RP Sample:
Misa stopped, panting heavily.
She couldn't do this, it was impossible. She wasn't built for being a Shinobi.
Her sensei had been wrong. Drastically so.
"Misa! What are you doing! You have twenty more laps to go!" He jogged up to her side, and continued to do so in place.
"I.." She inhaled deeply, "can't... I'm too weak sensei..." She stated in exasperation.
"S'at so?" He asked shaking his head. "You can still talk, can't you? Then you can jog." He grabbed her arm, and pulled her behind him. She followed obediently, stumbling over her feet as she did so.
She wanted to stop. Her mother had been right. She wasn't cut out for this.
Misa stopped thinking 'can't do it', for a moment.
Her mother HAD said she couldn't do it.
"I can... Hell yes, I can!" She snarled viscously, ripping her arm away from his and beginning to jog again beside her sensei.
She wouldn't let her mother be right this time. Not about this.
Even if her heart stopped beating and her lungs stopped working…
She would prove her mother wrong.
“Now we’re getting some where!” Her Sensei cried happily, patting her on the back as they jogged together.
Yes. Yes they were getting somewhere now.
I hope it's to your standards
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 7:51 pm
ivory_vamp Pirate Soul My Character's name is Ikazuchi Misa, and I am still in the process of finding which village should suit her.
RP Sample:
Misa stopped, panting heavily.
She couldn't do this, it was impossible. She wasn't built for being a Shinobi.
Her sensei had been wrong. Drastically so.
"Misa! What are you doing! You have twenty more laps to go!" He jogged up to her side, and continued to do so in place.
"I.." She inhaled deeply, "can't... I'm too weak sensei..." She stated in exasperation.
"S'at so?" He asked shaking his head. "You can still talk, can't you? Then you can jog." He grabbed her arm, and pulled her behind him. She followed obediently, stumbling over her feet as she did so.
She wanted to stop. Her mother had been right. She wasn't cut out for this.
Misa stopped thinking 'can't do it', for a moment.
Her mother HAD said she couldn't do it.
"I can... Hell yes, I can!" She snarled viscously, ripping her arm away from his and beginning to jog again beside her sensei.
She wouldn't let her mother be right this time. Not about this.
Even if her heart stopped beating and her lungs stopped working…
She would prove her mother wrong.
“Now we’re getting some where!” Her Sensei cried happily, patting her on the back as they jogged together.
Yes. Yes they were getting somewhere now.
I hope it's to your standards
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Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 7:28 pm
"5.. more... kicks..." Aki groaned as she kicked the tree the last 5 times. Sigh... this is for the training... She thought as she fell down while she slowly made her hand to her slightly damaged ankle.
Aki pondered upon the midnight sky, hoping to see a moon.
..."How could there be no moon?" She asked herself, narrowing her eyes and getting up slowly. Finally, she heaved a big sigh then limped back to her house which was perched up on a hill. Someone had grasped her by the arm, Aki paused. Then she turned around very slowly, to see it was her father that had grabbed her.
"Father... what are you--"
"Why are you here so late at night?" He inturrupted with a worried face. Aki shook her head, then smiled a small smile.
"Let's go back to the house then, shall we?" Aki suggested firmly as she limped slowly to her what is called, home. Unsure of what brings tomorrow.
I hope this is good enough! I'm kind of new at this...
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:25 am
Pirate Soul ivory_vamp Pirate Soul My Character's name is Ikazuchi Misa, and I am still in the process of finding which village should suit her.
RP Sample:
Misa stopped, panting heavily.
She couldn't do this, it was impossible. She wasn't built for being a Shinobi.
Her sensei had been wrong. Drastically so.
"Misa! What are you doing! You have twenty more laps to go!" He jogged up to her side, and continued to do so in place.
"I.." She inhaled deeply, "can't... I'm too weak sensei..." She stated in exasperation.
"S'at so?" He asked shaking his head. "You can still talk, can't you? Then you can jog." He grabbed her arm, and pulled her behind him. She followed obediently, stumbling over her feet as she did so.
She wanted to stop. Her mother had been right. She wasn't cut out for this.
Misa stopped thinking 'can't do it', for a moment.
Her mother HAD said she couldn't do it.
"I can... Hell yes, I can!" She snarled viscously, ripping her arm away from his and beginning to jog again beside her sensei.
She wouldn't let her mother be right this time. Not about this.
Even if her heart stopped beating and her lungs stopped working…
She would prove her mother wrong.
“Now we’re getting some where!” Her Sensei cried happily, patting her on the back as they jogged together.
Yes. Yes they were getting somewhere now.
I hope it's to your standards
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 3:26 am
Sweet Riceball "5.. more... kicks..." Aki groaned as her ankle hit the tree 100 times. Sigh... this is for the training... She thought as she fell down while she slowly made her hand to her slightly damaged ankle. Aki pondered upon the midnight sky, hoping to see a moon. ..."How could there be no moon?" She asked herself, narrowing her eyes and getting up slowly. Finally, she heaved a big sigh then limped back to her house with was perched up on a hill. Someone had grasped her by the arm, Aki paused. Then she turned around very slowly, to see it was her father that had grabbed her. "Father... what are you--" "Why are you here so late at night?" He inturrupted with a worried face. Aki shook her head, then smiled a small smile. "Let's go back to the house then, shall we?" Aki suggested firmly as she limped slowly to her what is called, home. Unsure of what brings tomorrow. I hope this is good enough! I'm kind of new at this... It's nice ^^ But her ankle hit the tree 100 times? Didn't quite get that bit... you might want to edit that ^^
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