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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:02 pm
Yeata Zi Zhivago. Former Von Helson Henchman. Vampire. Mercenary for the Kuro Gang. He is their assassin. Since the fall of the Von Helson empire, Zhivago has served the Kuros, all be it begrudgingly. Money is money. He took out Johnny K. Gambino, and Melli while on the Kuro payroll. Probably countless others. Zhivago and the Don don't see eye to eye. In fact, Zhivago doesn't seem to get along with anybody. Except Cordell. She is the only person he bothered to warn. The only person with whom he has shared his past. Or his plans. He will finish the Don's orders to kill Gino. Then, he plans to Kill Edmund, the man responsible for his scar. Meh. I dunno if that's good enough. :/ Mention the glove. After killing Johnny K. Gambino, He had learned that he was no longer just employed, but enslaved. He tried to take the weapon he used to kill Johnny off, but he was not successful in a very painful manner.
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:33 pm
Qyp Yeata Zi Zhivago. Former Von Helson Henchman. Vampire. Mercenary for the Kuro Gang. He is their assassin. Since the fall of the Von Helson empire, Zhivago has served the Kuros, all be it begrudgingly. Money is money. He wears a magical glove, probably a weapon given to him by his employer, that gave him the ability to finally bring an end to Johnny K. Gambino. It has a crescent moon. Upon completing his task of assassinating Gambino, he tried to remove the glove but could not. The results were quite painful. He was no longer just employed by the Kuros, but enslaved. Next, he took out Meili while on the Kuro payroll. Probably countless others. Zhivago and the Don don't see eye to eye. In fact, Zhivago doesn't seem to get along with anybody. Except Cordell. She is the only person he bothered to warn. The only person with whom he has shared his past. Or his plans. He will finish the Don's orders to kill Gino. Then, he plans to Kill Edmund, the man responsible for his scar. Perhaps then the glove will be satisfied. Meh. I dunno if that's good enough. :/ Mention the glove. After killing Johnny K. Gambino, He had learned that he was no longer just employed, but enslaved. He tried to take the weapon he used to kill Johnny off, but he was not successful in a very painful manner. Good thinking. Did you notice it has a crescent moon on it too D: I edited it. What do you think?>
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:37 pm
Ohhhhh gaaaaaaaawwwwwwd. If we could just finish Crescendo and Nicolae.
WE COULD POST THIS BIOTCH!
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:56 pm
Well, we have something written for everything, but we still need to talk about discussion topics and to look over what we have and decide if it's gooooood.
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:56 pm
Yeata Zi Qyp Yeata Zi Zhivago. Former Von Helson Henchman. Vampire. Mercenary for the Kuro Gang. He is their assassin. Since the fall of the Von Helson empire, Zhivago has served the Kuros, all be it begrudgingly. Money is money. He wears a magical glove, probably a weapon given to him by his employer, that gave him the ability to finally bring an end to Johnny K. Gambino. It has a crescent moon. Upon completing his task of assassinating Gambino, he tried to remove the glove but could not. The results were quite painful. He was no longer just employed by the Kuros, but enslaved. Next, he took out Meili while on the Kuro payroll. Probably countless others. Zhivago and the Don don't see eye to eye. In fact, Zhivago doesn't seem to get along with anybody. Except Cordell. She is the only person he bothered to warn. The only person with whom he has shared his past. Or his plans. He will finish the Don's orders to kill Gino. Then, he plans to Kill Edmund, the man responsible for his scar. Perhaps then the glove will be satisfied. Meh. I dunno if that's good enough. :/ Mention the glove. After killing Johnny K. Gambino, He had learned that he was no longer just employed, but enslaved. He tried to take the weapon he used to kill Johnny off, but he was not successful in a very painful manner. Good thinking. Did you notice it has a crescent moon on it too D: I edited it. What do you think?> Yeah, it does XD and I kinda did forget.
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:57 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:30 am
you guys have been busy overnight.
anything I should look over? or is it posted already?
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 8:23 am
Chieftain Twilight you guys have been busy overnight. anything I should look over? or is it posted already? not posted yet. It needs looked over.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:36 am
Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight you guys have been busy overnight. anything I should look over? or is it posted already? not posted yet. It needs looked over. I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread?
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:55 am
Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight you guys have been busy overnight. anything I should look over? or is it posted already? not posted yet. It needs looked over. I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread? Yeah. Everything is up in the test thread.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:11 am
Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight you guys have been busy overnight. anything I should look over? or is it posted already? not posted yet. It needs looked over. I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread? Yeah. Everything is up in the test thread. I wonder if you should mention Zhivago's role in the separation of Louie and Ian, and how he got his scars from Edmund?
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:47 am
Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight you guys have been busy overnight. anything I should look over? or is it posted already? not posted yet. It needs looked over. I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread? Yeah. Everything is up in the test thread. I wonder if you should mention Zhivago's role in the separation of Louie and Ian, and how he got his scars from Edmund? That isn't in relation to the Kuro Gang. I think we should save that for when we talk about the Von Helson Family.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:57 am
Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight you guys have been busy overnight. anything I should look over? or is it posted already? not posted yet. It needs looked over. I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread? Yeah. Everything is up in the test thread. I wonder if you should mention Zhivago's role in the separation of Louie and Ian, and how he got his scars from Edmund? That isn't in relation to the Kuro Gang. I think we should save that for when we talk about the Von Helson Family. I just feel that information on any character should be complete. but that is also why I mentioned that the Kuros, Gambinos, and Von Helsons were intrinsically tied together.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:37 pm
Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread? Yeah. Everything is up in the test thread. I wonder if you should mention Zhivago's role in the separation of Louie and Ian, and how he got his scars from Edmund? That isn't in relation to the Kuro Gang. I think we should save that for when we talk about the Von Helson Family. I just feel that information on any character should be complete. but that is also why I mentioned that the Kuros, Gambinos, and Von Helsons were intrinsically tied together. they are, and I think I want to have something new for those.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:39 pm
Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight Yeata Zi Chieftain Twilight I noticed you seemed unsatisfied with your Zhivago post. I can try to add to it. maybe format it. I need to see the other ones. I haven't read them yet. they in the Test Thread? Yeah. Everything is up in the test thread. I wonder if you should mention Zhivago's role in the separation of Louie and Ian, and how he got his scars from Edmund? That isn't in relation to the Kuro Gang. I think we should save that for when we talk about the Von Helson Family. I just feel that information on any character should be complete. but that is also why I mentioned that the Kuros, Gambinos, and Von Helsons were intrinsically tied together. they are, and I think I want to have something new for those. ok then. and, do forgive me if I sudden;y seem off... going through a difficult .... thing... and it's getting to me emotionally.
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