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 Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 9:38 pm
xXHeartlessTimeXx I could change it if you want, but the fact stands in the real world, there are children in Africa running around in the wild, let alone kids that age as monks in training that have way more responsibility and stuff happening with them. As my child is 3 and goes to private school, which i have to pay 1,000 dollars and would accept any idea he would have as i consider him a genius. There for anything can happen at any age and can be taken seriously. Not all children need guidance from a parent, if you remember back in the old times, if ones parents died and the child was the only one left, they would either be killed, left as a beggar, or used as a slave. 1. The character you listed does not happen to be a child in Africa, nor is in a position where the luxuries have been removed from him and his only goal is to survive. He lives in a luxurious home, I'd assume, as you said he's from a noble family. Kids who have trained as monks, again don't come from that same lifestyle. Shaolin monk kids were trained by adults, constantly looked after and trusted by them. The majority of those African children you did mention end up dying for the most part, and in African cultures the turning point from a child to a man is considered twelve. 2. Historically a lot of things don't make sense. A child at the age of 5 has not psychologically developed entirely. From what you mentioned, the character is the only male child of the family. A Japanese father would absolutely would never let his only male heir- the representative of the family and the only one carrying the last name- venture out into the world where it is unsafe. Additionally, a father like that would likely want to have his child trained heavily within the walls of the palace where the safety could be supervised. They would have access to some of the best mentors and/or educators in the country. Your character would be modeled to represent the family as whole. That's not feasible if he's off traveling. Let's also take Genpuku into the situation. I quote directly from the article: "To mark the entry to adult life of boys between the ages of 11 and 17 (typically of about age 12), they were taken to the shrines of their patron kami. There they were presented with their first adult clothes, and their boys' hairstyles were changed to the adult style. They were also given new adult names or Courtesy Name. In Heian times, the ceremony was restricted to the sons of noble and samurai families." A more political move by the father would be to send out one of his daughters to have her married into another family or something along those lines. These are the facts that stand. 3. If you didn't want to alter the age, you can always just have a person take him- like a family friend that is trusted or an actual relative- and for political purposes. If not that, then I'm afraid I cannot change my mind on the matter.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 10:25 pm
All changes have been made
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 10:51 pm
xXHeartlessTimeXx Raine Shiba xXHeartlessTimeXx I could change it if you want, but the fact stands in the real world, there are children in Africa running around in the wild, let alone kids that age as monks in training that have way more responsibility and stuff happening with them. As my child is 3 and goes to private school, which i have to pay 1,000 dollars and would accept any idea he would have as i consider him a genius. There for anything can happen at any age and can be taken seriously. Not all children need guidance from a parent, if you remember back in the old times, if ones parents died and the child was the only one left, they would either be killed, left as a beggar, or used as a slave. 1. The character you listed does not happen to be a child in Africa, nor is in a position where the luxuries have been removed from him and his only goal is to survive. He lives in a luxurious home, I'd assume, as you said he's from a noble family. Kids who have trained as monks, again don't come from that same lifestyle. Shaolin monk kids were trained by adults, constantly looked after and trusted by them. The majority of those African children you did mention end up dying for the most part, and in African cultures the turning point from a child to a man is considered twelve. 2. Historically a lot of things don't make sense. A child at the age of 5 has not psychologically developed entirely. From what you mentioned, the character is the only male child of the family. A Japanese father would absolutely would never let his only male heir- the representative of the family and the only one carrying the last name- venture out into the world where it is unsafe. Additionally, a father like that would likely want to have his child trained heavily within the walls of the palace where the safety could be supervised. They would have access to some of the best mentors and/or educators in the country. Your character would be modeled to represent the family as whole. That's not feasible if he's off traveling. Let's also take Genpuku into the situation. I quote directly from the article: "To mark the entry to adult life of boys between the ages of 11 and 17 (typically of about age 12), they were taken to the shrines of their patron kami. There they were presented with their first adult clothes, and their boys' hairstyles were changed to the adult style. They were also given new adult names or Courtesy Name. In Heian times, the ceremony was restricted to the sons of noble and samurai families." A more political move by the father would be to send out one of his daughters to have her married into another family or something along those lines. These are the facts that stand. 3. If you didn't want to alter the age, you can always just have a person take him- like a family friend that is trusted or an actual relative- and for political purposes. If not that, then I'm afraid I cannot change my mind on the matter. You know what i am not even going to argue as i will not even win this either way. changing the age of my character will alter his education allot and that's a big deal that your not even looking at how could he go to college for 4 years taking courses as a chef in Europe or let alone the other courses that its takes, when they would have started at the age 4-5, and i would know i am Italian and that's the best time to get a child in to start. There are also children that go to Le Cordon Bleu, where i went to college, of the age of 5-6. To Change one little thing would mean to have to change allot more through out the entire history i just made. but w/e it wont even make sense, i will change it anyways just for you. Thank you for understanding my point and making the necessary changes- you have my approval. emotion_yatta
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 7:15 am
 ✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Kyousuke Riluka ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Oleander Azrael Kagemiya
Race: English
Gender: Male
Birth Date: May 11
Age: 678 but looks as if he is 19
Blood Type: O+
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Appearance:Oleander Kagemiya, the child of a Rukongai couple struggling for mouthfuls of water in the slums, was cursed from the moment of conception to lead an existence balanced on the tragic precipice of life and death. A premature birth by nearly seven weeks brought him into Soul Society both significantly underdeveloped and so pale that he appeared to be stillborn. The midwife who delivered him famously called him the "ghost-child". His quiet but enduring wails and chilling, milk-white tears--symbols of his painful future--fell upon the deaf ears and ashamed eyes of his parents; the sadness sunk into his unwashed cheeks as the struggle of poverty continued on. Still, he lived, much to the surprise of the fearful and shallow couple. The unwanted child was a mark of inconvenience on their own quest for basic survival. Concerns over clean water, keeping a patched roof, and hiding from the parasitic gangs that infested the area tainted their minds with stress and suspicion. A tragic, common practice had Oleander's father holding a cupped hand tightly over cracked lips, suffocating his own son to avoid detection from armed men looking for rent or carelessly owed money. Such was his fate, and the unfortunate, socially downtrodden, and ethically deformed lifestyle continued for many years.
Once he had aged a bit, Oleander's parents began the practice of leaving him alone in their sparsely lit, one-room home for days at a time. A cup or two of water and a stale chunk of bread--he had begun to exhibit insatiable hunger, a marker of great spiritual power--were the only things left to keep him company during the chilling, lonely nights; it was a sign of their bitter tolerance and his increasingly demanding presence in their lives. They would return days later, enraged at his cries of loneliness, or that his weakness had caused a glass to tip, allowing the hard-earned liquid to seep into the moldy floor. His labored breathing, which carried on from his infancy, was ignored. This harsh treatment continued until they could take no more of his frailty; they left him on the dangerous streets to fend for himself, which colored his life from that day forward.
What Oleander's parents could not have known was that a remarkably rare, incurable genetic disease called Azrael's Breath was nestled amidst the roots of his issues, not a pallid personality or his premature birth. The two parents had unwittingly cursed their son with a perfectly imperfect pairing of genes, producing the savage and painful ailment whose side-effects caused them so much grief. The illness tricks his own flesh and blood into injuring his lungs by replacing naturally lost tissue--wear and tear that would usually cause no problems--with inherently hostile cells. These cells then degenerate more tissue, which starts the process again, turning this major organ into a self-destructive machine that gets worse the more it repairs itself unless a rehabiliter is worn. His ghostly, pale skin and fair complexion stem not only from his early birth but as well as later on in life, which severely impacted the development of his features during his formative years.
It was only after joining the ranks of the Gotei 13 and excelling in Kaido far beyond his peers--to the surprise of everyone, considering that his condition was only getting worse--that Oleander met the now-exiled Captain of the 4th Division, Osnaba Kiname. {Who took Captainship after Unohana's Death} It was he who finally diagnosed the young Shinigami with Azrael's Breath. But even the extensive knowledge of the Seireitei could not cure such a deeply ingrained disorder. With the help of the former 12th Division Captain, a man who passed away two decades ago, Osnaba developed the now famous ventilator or M.A.S.K.I.N.G. that keeps Oleander from succumbing to the fatal condition. This development occurred forty-three years ago, and it gve Oleander the stability to make full use of his staggering spiritual power and rapidly climb to the rank of Captain, all within a few short months.
The device itself is such a staple of Oleander's appearance that only a select few have seen his face since its creation. Shrouded in mystery, only rumors remain of what he must look like after so many years of hiding beneath the metal ventilator. He was once considered quite attractive, although his pale skin and troubled demeanor made him difficult to approach, even then. Although two models have been made, they both cover the lower half of his face--from the bridge of his nose to beneath his chin--and continue around his cheeks and the back of his neck. The outer rim and features of the devices are always a deep purple, with a midnight black being chosen for the depressed, flat areas, neck-guards, and filters in order to contrast with the rest of the design. This color scheme was picked with aesthetics in mind.
The rest of Oleander's facial appearance matches almost perfectly with the ventilator--the function of its coloring. His royal purple eyes poke out beneath tufts of black hair like a man possessed by intent. These irises are colored so vividly and abnormally that many consider his stare not only the most intimidating in Soul Society, but the most memorable, as well; this impact is helped by the special black eyeliner, Gādo no Me, that he applies daily. The root of this feature is his powerful purple Reiatsu, which also seems to splice hues of the color into his medium length hair, although the midnight strands often hide it in darker lighting. His current cut lays it all down rather flat, with somewhat messy bangs and enough on the sides and back to reach down to the middle of his neck. Although his ears can only be seen if his hair is tucked behind them, some might notice that they are each pierced with three silver rings--one in the lobe and two just a bit higher--and that a matching studs rest in the middle of the scapha.
Although he stands at an average height of five feet and six inches, Oleander's physical presence and sleek body make him seem quite a bit taller than he actually is. His muscle structure, while toned and well-defined visually, is tightly wound around his hairless form like a wall of sun-bleached marble; there is no fat to be found anywhere, partially because of his intense, self-destructive training, and otherwise due to his sickness and over-clocked immune system. Although none dare think it now, many used to assume that this sickly yet chiseled figure could not produce as much power as bigger, healthier Shinigami. It took no time at all for Oleander to prove that his strength was not to be judged by his condition, and that his will to fight was stronger than his size could ever hope to contain.
Height: 5'6
Weight: 135 lbs
Eye Color: His eyes have a shade of deep violet. They say his eyes remind people of Oleander petals. It was said that his eye color was why he was named 'Oleander'.
Hair Color: His hair has the shade of dark raven feathers.
Tattoos or Scars: Oleander has a couple of scars on his top portion of his chest due to the fact of countless surgeries due to his condition.
Anything Unusual: Oleander has been diagnosed with a rare condition of Azrael's Breath. It was only after joining the ranks of the Gotei 13 and excelling in Kaido far beyond his peers--to the surprise of everyone, considering that his condition was only getting worse--that Oleander met the now-exiled Captain of the 4th Division, Osnaba Kiname. {Who took Captainship after Unohana's Death} It was he who finally diagnosed the young Shinigami with Azrael's Breath. But even the extensive knowledge of the Seireitei could not cure such a deeply ingrained disorder. With the help of the former 12th Division Captain, a man who passed away two decades ago, Osnaba developed the now famous ventilator or M.A.S.K.I.N.G. that keeps Oleander from succumbing to the fatal condition. This development occurred forty-three years ago, and it gve Oleander the stability to make full use of his staggering spiritual power and rapidly climb to the rank of Captain, all within a few short months.
The device itself is such a staple of Oleander's appearance that only a select few have seen his face since its creation. Shrouded in mystery, only rumors remain of what he must look like after so many years of hiding beneath the metal ventilator. He was once considered quite attractive, although his pale skin and troubled demeanor made him difficult to approach, even then. Although two models have been made, they both cover the lower half of his face--from the bridge of his nose to beneath his chin--and continue around his cheeks and the back of his neck. The outer rim and features of the devices are always a deep purple, with a midnight black being chosen for the depressed, flat areas, neck-guards, and filters in order to contrast with the rest of the design. This color scheme was picked with aesthetics in mind
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Kido:
Bakudō Known |
1. Sai (塞, Restrain)
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
8. Seki (斥, Repulse)
9. Geki (撃, Strike)
9. Hōrin (崩輪, Disintegrating Circle)
14. Amekaze (雨風, Driving Rain)
21. Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape)
26. Kyokko (曲光, Bent Light)
27. Noren Mekuri (暖簾捲り, Curtain Stripping)
30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam)
37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan)
44. Hakufuku (白伏, White Crawl)
52. Tōyochi (凍輿地, Frozen World)
58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows)
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light)
62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence)
63. Sajō Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes)
68. Flowering Whirlwind, Barrier of Wind
73. Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)
75. Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars)
77. Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air)
79. Kuyō Shibari (九曜縛, Nine Sunlight Traps)
81. Dankū (斷空, Splitting Void)
87. Sanchūshin (三柱神, Three Pillar Gods)
98. Jibōrensa (自暴連鎖, Despairing Chains)
99. Part 1. Kin (禁, Seal)
99. Part 2. Bankin (卍禁, Great Seal).
Hadō Known |
1. Shō (衝, Clash)
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)
12. Fushibi (伏火, Lain Fire)
15. Gō Ken (鋼拳, Hard Fist
23. Gurenbachi (紅蓮蜂, Crimson Bees)
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)
32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Firefall)
37. Kongōbaku (金剛爆, Adamantine Blast)
54. Haien (廃炎, Nullific Flames)
58. Tenran (闐嵐, Swelling Storm)
63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear)
68. Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang)
73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin-Wake Blue Firefall)
88. Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō (飛竜撃賊震天雷炮, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon)
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin)
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear)
94. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm)
96. Ittō Kasō (一刀火葬, Single Blade Cremation)
Kaidō Known | {Healing Kido}
1. Inemuri (威眠, Forced Slumber)
4. Tanma Otoshi (タンマ落とし, Time-Out Drop)
5. Kai Kizu (解傷, Release Cut)
7. Kogoeru (凍える, Chilling)
12. Kakusei (覚醒, Awakening)
13. Nuku Doku (抜く毒, Draw Out Poison)
15. Shibireyubi (しびれ指, Numbing Finger)
16. Nesshōi (熱傷医, Burn Healing)
25. Shōsen (掌仙, Mystical Palm)
37. Josaidōki (除細動器, Defibrillator)
54. Shimoku (紫木, Purple Tree)
60. Reitōhozon (冷凍保存, Cryopreservation)
62. Shukketsu Kokoro (出血心, Bleeding Spirit)
73. Hanos Void ex
76. Chūshutsu (剔出, Extraction)
79. Buraindo Kyuusaisha (ブラインド救済者, Blind Savior)
81. Ikasu (生かす, To Revive)
Shunpo Level: Master
Hakuda: None
Zanpakuto Name: [Yudoku-Shin]{Poisonous Heart}
Zanpakuto Appearance: Explained in other profile.
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Shikai Incantation: Corrupt, Yudoku-Shin
Shikai Appearance: The blade pulsates until the blade fades black. The blade also grows three ribbon tails all extending from the hilt by one meter. One in which is a lavender shade. Another of a deep purple. While the last one is a faded indigo
Shikai Abilities:
Since Oleander does not have a Bankai. I thought it would be approvable to have more Shikai Abilities. If this is not approvable please let me know.
Shikai Abilities
Shintaihason {Bodily Corruption} (身体の破損)
The weapon itself is covered in a waxy like substance. This poison acts like the venom of a spider bite; when an opponent is stabbed by Yudoku-Shin, it severs the brain signals controlling the neural impulses for movement in the limbs of the victim. However, unlike regular paralysis, the pain receptors and nerve endings are unaffected by the weapon, so the victim can still feel pain, even in a paralyzed limb. This move also implants a dormant or "sleeping virus" into a host body. If the virus is not awakened within five post, the virus will dissipate and become nullified. This virus will only awaken when certain stipulations are met. However, if those stipulations are not met then the virus is harmless. ~This takes a total of 2 post to circulate and take effect. Once in effect it is frozen for three whole post then it recovers in a single post.
Atsuryokuhason {Pressure Corruption} (圧力の破損)
This poison is based off of Yudoku-Shin's spiritual pressure. This poison eats away at the rashi and spiritual energy of all of those who enter Yudoku-Shin's spiritual pressure besides Oleander. However this pressure only reaches 10 ft. around Yudoku-Shin's holder. Those who are effected will feel an uneasy or queasy feeling. ~If one enters this pressure the poison eats gradually away at the spiritual energy per post. However when on exits the pressure they regain a half life of what is taken, so after the first exit one would only regain half of it. However what makes this ability tricky the percentage is doubled every time per-re entry. Meaning if someone enters the pressure again they will loose double what they originally lost but regain double what they had originally gained back and this process continues until the end of Shikai. However if one manages to be to be in the swords length, striking distance, or grabs or is pierced by the sword the poison is not in effect. Also if one manages to grab the sword itself, the energy slowly restores itself. If one manages to have a grip on the sword for two post, all energy that was eaten away will be restored.
Chihason {Blood Corruption} (血の破損)
This ability allows Yudoku-Shin to produce microscopic mist from the handle that is absorbed by Oleander's skin through his pores and infiltrates his blood stream that contaminates his whole body within three post after activation of his Shikai. However the poison does not hurt Oleander because Oleander is aware of all Yudoku-Shin's poisons and has filled his body with vaccines that allows him to host the poisons but not be effected by them. If Oleander manages to infect another target with his blood the poison will start to take effect. ~Once the poison flows into the blood stream, it will take 1 post to circulate throughout the body and then it begins to take effect. This poison cuts off the Nero-Sensors themselves and cuts off the sense of sight temporarily. After a 2 post from circulation one would loose the ability to see for two post with a one post recovery rate. However, if one manages to hold the blade of Yudoku-Shin, the ability will cancel itself out.
Chakurahason {Chakra Corruption} (チャクラの破損)
This allows Yudoku-Shin to infuse her rachi based poison with Oleander's energy or rachi based attacks. The only two known attacks are the Shield and the actual Crescent Wave attack. These moves eat away at rachi based attacks they come into contact with. Meaning they will completely eat away weak attacks and only minimize the damage from strong or massive attacks
Seruhason {Cell Corruption} (セルの破損)
This move is in fact the second move, to Bodily Corruption. This ability is in fact the ability of the dormant virus. There are in fact two ways to activate it. However, depending on the way it is activated, the virus when awakened can either save a life or claim a life. The first way to activate this virus is through Oleander's hands. If Oleander concentrates on his rashi and focus it into his hands and place his hands on a being who has already been cut and or pricked by Yudoku-Shin, the virus will awaken in a form that is known as Tengokuhason. {Heavenly Corruption}. If the virus is mixed with Oleander's rashi and awakens in this form the virus will re-attach itself to the hosts body cells and begin to replicate the actual cells of the host body at an immense speed. Meaning if this occurs all physical wounds would heal at a very fast rate. Small wounds would be healed in a single post. Deep wounds in Two Post. Deadly Wounds can not be fully healed but they can be reverted to a state where the host would not be in any immediate danger. Meaning it reverts Deadly wounds back to deep wounds or small wounds. Depending on the type of wound. This process takes three post. However, this ability only works with physical wounds. It can not heal wounds that are illusion or 'paranormal' based. However, if the actual blade of Yudoku-Shin is within a being that has already been implanted with a virus and Oleander channels his rashi into the blade that is plunged through another being then the virus awakens and has a total and new effect. When the Oleander's rashi is channeled into the blade, Yudoku-Shin mixes her own spiritual energy within Oleander's that makes the virus take a new form. Once the virus is awaken in this form, in which it bears the name of Jigokuhason {Hell's Corruption}, instead of replicating the host's cells, it brakes down the cells. This process is extremely painful and utterly unbearable. The host's cells brake down and dissolve at a cellular level. At a slow and painful ratio. It takes a total of six post to eat through the organ around the stab wound. However, if one manages to touch the blade of Yudoku-Shin the virus will be shocked and become nullified. It is because of the nature of this ability and how it works on the cellular level that it bears the name of Seruhason {Cell Corruption}
✣ ══════════════════════[ Bankai {Optional} ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Bankai Name: N/A
Bankai Appearance: N/A
Bankai Abilities: N/A
Oleander has been ordered by the Head Captain that he can not have use his Bankai at any given point and time for its prowess is way to deadly of an aspect. Therefore not many know about Oleander's Bankai.
✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Personality:
Previous {Before the "Rebirth"}
In the past, Oleander was nothing like he is currently. In the past he was known to be a violent fighter, Oleander lived for battle, and enjoyed a good fight more than anything. He even held back in an effort to make any fight last longer. He used to claim that injury and death are nothing but the price one pays for a good fight. Despite his tendency to be brutal, Oleander was known to usually stop a fight if his opponent is too injured to fight back, claiming he is not interested in fighting "weaklings who can't fight anymore", and he did not feel obligated to deal a death blow to anyone who could not stand up to his level. However, he will unhesitatingly kill his opponent if they refuse to end their fight, "The Venomous Flower".
On multiple occasions, Oleander was shown to greatly respect those who can defeat him in a fight and those who can push him to his limit. Ever since the current Captain Commander handed him his first known loss, Oleander has considered her a great idle and still respects him to this day. It was said that Oleander also contradicted his own logic in fighting. On the one hand, Oleander wished to increase his own personal power. On the other hand, he had concealed his strength to enjoy a fight for as long as possible. Oleander used to strongly believe fun comes before working. In every battle, he tries to get as much enjoyment out of it as possible
Currently {After the "Rebirth"}
Today Oleander is considered to be a childlike individual who happens to have a smile on his face almost all the time. Though, in battle or when on a mission, he happens to be quite ruthless and dangerous. He is extremely deadly and sadistic in battle. How his battle tactics work. Oleander would offer them a gamble so to speak. A full scale battle in which if they loose, Oleander will kill them. However if they win, Oleander will not kill them and leave them be or Oleander himself will die. It is said that during this process, if one has managed to push Oleander to the "Deathly Gamble" that Oleander 'reverts' back to his old sadistic and Morbid Nature. It has been noted that out of his gambles, Oleander has never lost and his target has always been killed. However this is the form he takes only when he is in a fight.
However, despite the fact that Oleander is the best healer the Seireitei has to offer and he is generally friendly to those who approach him even though he would not care about them. He does this so he can get people to talk to him, he has no true care for them. This only occurs though if he is not in battle. However it is revealed that he is also a bit of a loner up until he met the current Captain Commander, It can be assumed that he considers him to be his only real 'friend', if not the only person in Seireitei he genuinely cares about. This is known as the "Acting Oleander" or the "Mirror Oleander". This is the part where he seems like a saint. It is said this side of Oleander is seen the most especially within his job affiliations. This side of Oleander everyone seems to love and respect. Even children because people reverse this side of Oleander , the one who pushes himself so far without a care in a world about himself, as a saint.
However,In actuality, those close to Oleander see the true Oleander. The real Oleander is truly known as a dark, morbid, misunderstood type of person. Oleander when he is not acting is very quiet and stand offish. He refuses to talk to anyone until they have proven their "worth" so to speak. How Oleander judges this is how the person treats him. If they look down upon him, they will only see his demonic and cruel side. Although, when someone is nice to him, even though he is still portrayed as dark and morbid but he will actually interact with said person with more of his sadistic child personality {detailed above}. Although he despises them, Oleander is also very good with children during; no matter what village he had gone to, the children were always fond of him.
He has developed a new-found hatred and "knowledge". Oleander is a very wise being for his age, and quite deceptive. Oleander has devised cunning plans to destroy enemies, although he went about it in strange ways. He never gets intimidated by any one and he is always bold whenever he faces them. Refusing to die alone is an aspect, which causes a portion of his sadistic and weird behavior, that is suppressed in the dark corner of his heart. These emotions still scare him and fuel his fears but Oleander never lets anyone see them. Oleander is always calm and collected. He is very tricky to understand about his methods or actions that he does perform.
In general this means. Oleander acts like a sadistic young child when in confrontation. Although at times he is much of a saint. It is hard to tell. However, in actuality he is lonely, isolated, and full of deep sorrow. It is because of his true sorrow and isolation that developed this morbid personality. It is also because of this sorrow that he gained the idea that has been stated, "I am nothing but the shadows that consume the light. I am nothing but the clouds that block the sun. I consume hope and leave sorrow. I am the rain that falls and flood the world of pain. This is why exist. This is my reason for living. I am nothing but an amassing clouds that will soon block all rays of reality."
If one where to see both sides of his personality, there would seem to be no mixture or true philosophical end. However there are certain qualities that never change about Oleander. No matter how he truly is or how he "acts". Oleander, since acting like that of a child, is really found of games. His two favorite games are that of chess and the game known as "Shinda". A game of his own invention. To get through life, Oleander down to his core believes life is a game. A giant game of chess on a more massive scale. However, the rules fairly explain that there is always a bigger or more complicated game going on. Meaning in the rules of "Shinda", you could be a Queen in one "round" , then a "pawn" in the next, or even perhaps so insignificant that you weren't a piece at all. This is morbid yet cruel aspect or ideal is the exactly on how he views the "nature". A game that he is always meant to loose.
The second quality that will never change is his look of the dead. He believes deep down inside that no one has no right to speak of the ill. Even though it is said when he acts like his real self he shows no care for anyone who is alive, which is true besides the exception for the Captain Commander, it is said that he becomes a entirely different person when a being has died. It is said when a soul or demon dies no matter the life or game in this case that they chose to play, Oleander will always feel sympathy and love for those who have died. This is the only time when Oleander will show anyone true compassion. Thus earning his current alias as "The Guardian of the Dead."
Personal Likes: Listed in other Profile
Personal Dislikes: Listed in Other Profile
History: Listed in full profile but it is the same as before.
Family Line: Kagemiya
Friends/Acquaintances: N/A
Rivals/Enemies: N/A
Love Interest: None {Homosexual, Uke}
Affiliation: Soul Society, Seireitei, 13 Court Guard Squads, Squadron Four, and the Medical Center
Squad: Squadron Four
Rank: Captain
Other Information: This profile has already been approved, I had just revamped a tad. Also, most of the minor things are located in his true profile. Which is located here in this guild.
Other Profile Oleander Azrael Kagemiya
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 9:53 am
Aaaallright perfect~. You just need Hime's reassessment and you'll be good to go~. Oleander yer next! -cracks knuckles and buckles down to read-
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:57 pm
(Judgement from the Desk of Kilk Nagara and Siras Cortage)
Where do we start... In bulleted format!
Powers
-Bodily Corruption: We are alright with the paralysis idea, and the nerve endings still working, but the amount of time in which this takes place is too long for the amount of powers that you have to go with it. There needs to be a way to defeat the paralysis without waiting, I would assume kido can cure it, or maybe even pushing enough spirit energy into the area to break through it (Because Zanpakutos are spirit energy, kido naturally should find a way around it) The dormant virus should wear out after an amount of posts, so they must be re infected.
-Pressure Corruption: The fact that you are a shunpo master makes this already difficult to handle. Remove the numbers, because that makes rp fighting too difficult, and just say that it has a small scaling effect. There must be a way to completely regain the pressure, such as grabbing the blade or moving out of range. There should also be a way to break it, eg. "When two spiritual pressures collide, the weaker is ultimately forced down." -Kenpachi Zaraki.
-Blood Corruption: Here's a biggie. Poison not hurting him is fine. Shutting down all five senses completely with no way out is already overpowered on its own. The amount of time this spans over is far too long, making you able to instantly kill them. You lose the first sense for 20 posts, longer than any fight I've ever had. Perhaps make it for one random sense for less time. (Based on die roll.) Could work since the character likes to gamble. There also must be a way to break out of it. This is a shikai ability, should be (relatively) simple to break out of. This is almost akin to Tosen's bankai, as a single shikai ability. Even Tosen's had a way out. (Touching the sword)
-Chakra Corruption: You're golden.
-Cell Corruption: No problems with healing, but fatal wounds healed by a shikai? There should be a limit to how many wounds can be healed over a period of time. Maybe the virus can only be active in one person. This should be taking an insane amount of spirit energy, and seems on level with an bankai ability.
Hell's Corruption works as an instant kill move. Automatic nope. There is no way to break the virus on your own, and no way to take the virus away, (Spirit energy, kido) In the beginning of a fight, you can win it just by managing a minor stab wound. This too, should take an insane amount of energy.
Long story short, Cell Corruption should be a bankai move. With no instant killing aspect and have some way around it. (Rule of Thumb)
With these powers, until further notice, you are denied.
As a side note.
Your character makes no sense in his division placement. He is a combatant first and foremost, and for a long time was a psychotic murderer with a powerful poison combat shikai. The idea of him being sorted into the fourth division in any way makes zero sense. They would have put him into a combat squad since he liked killing, even if he was passable at healing kido.
Finally, give him a bankai. The idea of him having a banned bankai seems like he can take the head captain with no issue. Even if your story says you lost to him. Move some of the powers over or something. It may seem epic and angsty, but it just makes your character seem more overpowered.
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:59 pm
Hmmm let's start with history/personality. 1) I read the full history in the profile. This can be a minor detail but considering the problem with his genes it might also not be. Those killed in the World of the Living arrive in the Soul Society at the age they died. They're not born again, that only happens once they die in the Soul Society. 2) There's a lot of power-playing potential in his history. I understand being very difficult to beat but to only recently lose against the Captain Commander is a bit much. Furthermore, you pointed out that prior to receiving the M.A.S.K.I.N.G. he was much weaker, only truly achieving Captain level power afterwards. And Captains in canon are described as being extremely powerful even in comparison to their Lieutenants, their right hand men. 3) I see a couple of contradictions in his personality. Mainly how he's able to be good with children when he doesn't really enjoy their company. Is it just that he's a good actor? And, for that matter, how did he become that good of an actor? I can understand that he had a very trouble life as a child, but what lead him to put on that new persona instead of just remaining as he was? 4) I understand that he doesn't really have a connection to people, likely because of his Rukongai parents. But aside from needing to manage his condition I don't quite see why he would remain in the 4th Division if he doesn't really care about others. On that note, want to know why he so respects the dead when he himself managed to survive. Did he lose someone? Why is it so very important to him? 4) I expect the above will affect his personality though the how and why of it is really up to you.
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 1:12 pm
I will adjust abilities to your liking. However, I would like to remind you. This RPC had already been accepted for the Squadron Four Captain with all of the same abilities without a single word being changed. So I would prefer you to refrain from making comments like "Your character makes no sense in his division placement". He is placed in what we deemed back then as an appropriate place. It is because he motto is "to know how to heal you must know how to kill. To know life, you must know death." Also I do not plan on giving him a Bankai. If this is a personal problem I am sorry. I am not going to change a character that has already been approved to entirely new level. All I did to the profile was add one ability and got more detailed with the masking and physical descriptions. I would also like to point out, Unohana was the first Kenpachi far superior than my dear Oleander within combative ranks. I will edit the abilities within a days time. As explained in his personality, he is an actor! He hates showing for his real emotions for he is really down and depressed due to his personality therefore he puts on this 'act'. He hast been acting for his entire life so its a great skill he has learned on his own. His sickness also prevented his power from expanding or using it to its full potential to explain your second questions. As for the third, he is good with children because of his acting. As for four, he is sympathetic towards the dead because they have lost life. They do not have any more chances. He doesn't care for the living because they have chances to change or to get healed. However when they are dead. There is no chance to bring them back. Does this explain it efficiently?
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 1:41 pm
In regards to you saying that the character was once accepted before, that may be true, but now the systems of this Guild are much more professional. We have been participating in a learning process over time, and thus certain aspects will change. Character Judgement has become much more critical thanks to the mistakes we made with allowing characters such as Kenny the God Child and Zaraki Fong to get past us. (If you want to look in the old judgement thread, feel free to do so and you will understand) We plan to try to keep the systems more balanced now as to make Rping more fun for the Guild as a whole. As for the Bankai comment, that is just fine. If you wish to not include a Bankai, then that is your move, but your phrasing is very bad. Having already had a Bankai but having it banned sounds more than overpowered on its own. I would imagine that this Bankai would be leagues ahead of Retsu. Siras was merely making a suggestion about how you could keep the powers you put time into. Finally, the Squad aspect was merely a suggestion, as a Squad Four Captain won't see nearly as much combat as any of the other rank, (except for maybe Squad 12). Your character seems like he would prefer to be in battle, so this was a suggestion to make a bit more sense in the universe we are in, and to better appeal to the tastes of your character. However, that is your call. Thank you for your time, and please don't be discouraged. The path to victory is paved in small defeats. A rejection only means that you now can better filter the character for tis specific Roleplay, and will merit the appreciation of the crew in your willingness to aid us in make this a better role-play for everyone. Thank you once again. (:
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 1:45 pm
What Siras and Kilk were pointing out was that you indicated, not that he had no Bankai but that it was banned. That was what they took issue with and nothing further. It's fine if you don't want to give him one. I understand the second point and that his sickness hindered him. But I stand by the fact that he would have lost other battles prior to a battle with the Captain Commander. It might seem like a moot point, but play wise it makes your character seem incapable of being beaten which is all well and good for a storyline in an actual manga, but in a guild with other players it really just makes him seem OP. And I understand the actor bit it's just that I want to know how/why he learned it. What would drive him to 'act'? It just doesn't seem that he had an actual reason to learn how. Sorry if it seems like I'm nitpicking at small details, but character is very important and it's just a very striking contrast to who he was previously where his reasons were explained throughout the history. Here we only have a very light history covering human life and Rukongai without really touching on life in the Seireitei, who he might have met and people who might have affected him in such a way that he would make the choice to really change himself- at least on the surface.
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TwiDawnLight Vice Captain
High-functioning Bibliophile
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 2:38 pm
Sasori00923 ✣✚╚═════════════════════════════════════════╝ ✚✣ Gaia Username: Sasori00923 ╔═════════════════════════════════════════╗ ✣ ══════════════════════[ Personal Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Name: Yagari Shizuka
Race: Shinigami
Gender: Male
Birth Date: August 12
Age: ??? Appears in his mid 20's
Blood Type: ???
✣ ══════════════════════[ Appearance ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Appearance:He is very tall and muscularly lean and he is seen smoking a cigarette most of the time. Yagari's clothing is like that of a Bartender in the World of the Living and consists of a white shirt with a black vest, black pants, black dress shoes, and a black bow.
Height: 6'3
Weight: 220
Eye Color: Light Golden, Light Amber
Hair Color: Blonde
Tattoos or Scars: None
Anything Unusual: Outfit
Equipment:*Metallic Leather Gloves - As a gift from an acquaintance in the 12th Division the gloves Yagari wears are crafted to be extremely durable and with a special layer of metal which encompasses the entirety of his wrist and from his knuckles to almost the tip of his fingers. This metallic alloy is of the same consistency of a zanpakuto but with the mobility of leather and as such allows Yagari to block direct blows from a zanpakuto with his hands to better suit his style of combat and it also increases the power of his punches. (Just Imagine these completely black)*Metallic Leather Shoes - These boots are made by the same person who made Yagari's gloves and hold the same properties, the distinct difference between the shoes and gloves is that the shoes house hidden knives on ther tip. The knives are about 6 inches long and serve to add a deadly element to Yagari's kicks. *Throwing Knives - For some reason after a mission in the World of the living many years ago Yagari became obsessed with throwing knives, after testing them some time he added them to his arsenal and now carries at least 20 of these, they are all held in a holster which wraps around his whole waist like a belt. His proficiency with them is as good as any champ and he can use them to fight when he finds that the opponent is to weak for him to draw his own zapakuto. [CLICK HERE] ✣ ══════════════════════[ Spiritual Connections ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Kido: Yagari Isn't exactly the most resourceful conveyor of Kido, what little spells he does use he can use masterfully. He can preform up to 30 in Hado and Bakudo.
Shunpo Level: Yagari is an extremely capable user of flash steps and the techniques associated with it. He has been noted to be one of the fastest shinigami in recent years, his speed is enough to outmaneuver most regular Captain class opponents with ease. He is skilled enough to use Senka and Utsusemi almost flawlessly.
Hakuda: He has been cited as one of the unrequited masters of hand to hand combat. Yagari spent numerous years training to achieve a mastery level in the art of hand to hand fighting by creating his own unique style. His style combines lightning fast hand strikes and kicks, grappling moves and deadly strikes with bladed and pointed weapons as an extension of his own body which make his style very unpredictable. Aside from this he has also mastered techniques such as;
Ikkotsu (一 骨, "Single Bone")
Tesshō (鉄 掌, "Iron Palm")
Sōkotsu (双 骨, "Double Bone")
Kazaguruma (風 車, "Windmill")
Sandobaggu Bīto (サンドバッグ・ビート, "Sandbag Beat")
Tsukiyubi (撞 指, Thrust Fingers)
Zanjutsu: His Zanjutsu is as expected from a former Captain of the 11th Division. During his time as a Captain he was hailed as one of the best within the Gotei. Yagari constantly forced himself to fight with his unreleased zanpakuto and learn as much blade schools as possible and as such he is a very formidable opponent who uses dual weaponry.
Zanpakuto Name: Tsukigami 月 神 (Moon God)
Zanpakuto Appearance: Tsukigami's sealed state takes the form of two Ninjato blades which are sheathed together in opposite directions and worn upright on his back.[CLICK HERE]
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Shikai Incantation: Otoroe 衰 え (Wane)
Shikai Appearance: As opposed to growing in size like in most releases Yagari's blades shrink down. In it's shikai state Tsukigami takes the form of 2 Knuckle Knives, the handle on them is a burning skull and the blade itself is a large slotted blade with flame designs. In this state Yagari utilizes a mixture of hand to hand with his zanpakuto which can deflect direct attacks or strip away blades with it's hooked notch.[CLICK HERE]
Shikai Abilities:
*Tsukigami no seishin 月 神 の 精 神 (Moon God's Spirit) [Passive Ability] - As soon as the shikai is entered Yagari receives a 20% boost in all physical attributes in exchange for his ability to perform kido of any kind.
*Mikadzuki 三 日 月 (Crescent Moon) - This attack fires a crescent shaped wave of silver energy from the blade, the attack can cause moderate to severe bodily and burn damage. The power of this technique is comparable to an Adjuchas level Hollow's Cero. This attack being a wave of explosive energy rather than slicing makes it ideal for use in close quarters and Yagari's style of fighting and zapkuto are the best way of utilizing it to the fullest extent by mixing it in with his hakuda moves, by utilizing it this way a hit is almost insured. Yagari takes damage from the explosion equaling roughly 1/4 of it's power when used this way, if not it's fired as a regular mid to long range attack..
*Tsuki no hansha 月 の 反 射 (Reflection of the Moon) - By focusing reiatsu into his blades they emits a bright silver color, when a spiritual based attack or a kido spell is fired towards Yagari he may 'punch' said attack to deflect it in the direction he hits it. Yagari may only deflect an attack weaker than his own output of reaitsu meaning than while in shikai he may only deflect up level 50 spells and energy based attacks of comparable strength.
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Bankai Name: Tsukigami no shinpan 月 神 の 審 判 (Judgement of the Moon God)
Bankai Incantation: Kurayami ni mawasu 暗 闇 に 回 す (Turn to Darkness)
Bankai Appearance: When Yagari activates his bankai he releases the entirety of his reiatsu without care for those in the near vicinity. Given the sheer amount of energy he possesses the sheer brunt of releasing his reiatsu is enough to completely paralyze, or even kill lesser beings while rendering considerably weaker spiritually aware beings into a state of extreme duress and uneasiness. His appearance itself does not change his blade however takes a drastic change. The blades turn into a pair of gauntlets that run up to his shoulder, they are fully black with silver accents and rugged edges. The gloves of said gauntlets are clawed and have short spikes on the knuckles while containing the actual blade on the elbows. The gauntlets are flexible like leather but since they are in effect his zanpakuto he can block strikes with them or any part of them.[Fore-arm to shoulder portion][Gloves] (Now imagine a fusion of the latter 2 with the specifications I pointed out.)
Bankai Abilities:
*Tsukigami no shoji 月 神 の 所 持 (Possession of the Moon God) [Passive Ability] - As soon as his Bankai is entered Yagari receives a 50% increase in all physical attributes as opposed to the 20% gained in Shikai in exchange for the ability to use any kind of kido.
*Mangetsu 満 月 (Full Moon) - An outline of reiatsu forms in the hand until a solid clump of energy is seen on the hands then by 'punching' the air or a person the energy is fired forward. The attack explodes at contact rather than slicing and has power comparable to an unreleased Espada's Cero. Yagari tends to use this technique in quick succession by throwing the first punch as an uppercut and when the opponent is sent upwards Yagari uses flash step to appear in the air and punch him downwards in a devastating 1-2 punch combo. This technique has a 3 post cool down.
*Mangetsu no han'ei 満 月 の 反 映 (Reflection of the Full Moon) - Like it's Shikai counterpart this technique works by focusing reiatsu into his blades, when this is done they emit a bright silver color, when a spiritual based attack or a kido spell is fired towards Yagari he may 'punch' said attack to deflect it in the direction he hits it. While in Bankai Yagari may deflect attacks comparable to strength to a spell in the 90's range, this is done by absorbing half of the attack's damage and using it to re-fire it towards an opponent. Half is absorbed, the other half is either deflected elsewhere or sent back at the opponent to effectively send their own attack back at them. This attack has a 2 post cool down.
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Intelligence: Yagari isn't so much intelligent as he is cunning, he isn't what you would recall as the brightest light bulb in the store when it comes to most subjects. His brain seems to function in accordance to his interests only which lay in fighting. Along Yagari's intellectual shortcomings is also his lack of memory for things outside of his immediate interests. He has been shown, known and proven to have an absolutely horrible memory for most things but when it comes to battle strategy and battles he is able to recall them to near exact details with particular ease. Yagarii has never been one to be in tune with the emotions of others and is often viewed as an extremely apathetic person. In reality he is just a clueless fool, his cluelessness borders on the remarkably stupid side most of the time causing some general comical relief to others and serving as a trigger to his horrible temper.
Athletic Skill: Yagari is an extremely athletic person, his training and way of life made him a rather well versed person in combat and his own style of fighting has helped attribute to his skills.
Strength: A true monster when it comes to raw physical strength Yagari draws his power from his natural fortitude and extensive training. The raw power he possess has the ability to level large buildings with ease or send people flying back a good distance with particular ease. When using Hakuda techniques, he can deliver potentially life threatening attacks to his opponent and with a blade adding to his strength, he is highly unpredictable and lethal in his own right. His large size and muscle tone can be misleading to his strength and is often a point of focus between opponents and sparring partners and is enhanced even further in shikai and bankai.
Reiatsu: Yagari holds an extremely large amount of reiatsu, so much so that this rather than pure skill was the main reason he was admitted into the Shin'ō Academy rather than any other attribute he possessed. The sheer brunt of releasing his reiatsu is enough to completely paralyze, or even kill lesser beings while rendering considerably weaker spiritually aware beings into a state of extreme duress and uneasiness; His reiatsu is said to be almost twice the regular Captain class although he keeps it suppressed most of the time unless in a dire fight to the level of a Lieutenant.
Speed: Yagari is an extremely fast person, be it with flash steps or with the actual body speed; I.E. striking, dodging, etc. His style of fighting depends on speed and by training numerous years he has achieved the optimal amount for his style.
Agility: Look to speed
Stamina: Since Yagari has such a large amount of Reiatsu in his body his spiritual stamina has always been in excellent condition. His physical stamina on the other hand is the result of training and combat experience for years and it has made him extremely durable in terms of energy. Thanks to this Yagari can fight for large periods of time on end without having to worry about conserving energy, he holds enough power now to be able to dispose of much of his opponents without having to exert himself to the limit and as such he hasn't seen true fatigue in quite some time.
Durability: Yagari can certainty take a beating, and then some. He has been seen taking heavy damage while still being able to launch an attack of his own and go on to win a fight. Like most monsters with unusually high Reiatsu Yagari's body is coated by a layer of energy that stops considerably weak attacks. As a result of this Yagari's fighting style leaves little room for concern regarding his well being. Although he shrugs off most injuries and continues to fight with reckless abandon he is sensible enough to know when to avoid or block an attack. He isn't exactly the hospital type and so he tends to avoid going to the 4th Squad Barracks whenever he gets into a scuffle, he instead opts for the ole' sleep and eat method which seems to work well for him but if the situation calls for it he swallows his pride and goes get treated.
Endurance: When it comes to physical endurance Yagari is at the higher end of the charts, his reiatsu, training and bloody lifestyle have conditioned him with the passing of years to the point where his body no longer registers pain on a regular level and allows him to keep fighting despite most injuries.
Flexibility: Look to athletic skills.✣ ══════════════════════[ Background Information ]═══════════════════════ ✣
Personality: Yagari has a very short temper and can get angry very easily. Whenever someone is near him and says or does something that irritates him, he would throw something at them or simply hit them and knock them out. Yagari will strike down any who dare stand in his path with sheer power, he is a rather vindictive and cruel man with harsh methods when it comes to his enemies and will not hesitate to utterly destroy anyone who would dare threaten him, however, Yagari never beat up women and whenever he is annoyed by their constant talking, he just calmly walks away. He is a sarcastic, ill mannered, tactless a**; Nevertheless, Yagari loves his younger sister Yukumi and was even concerned about her well being when she insisted on joining the 13 Court Guard Squads and when it comes to Yukumi he tends to be overprotective and a bit overbearing.
Personal Likes: Drinking, Smoking, Fighting, general vices.
Personal Dislikes: Prudes, Kill-joys, formal 'work'.
History: Yagari had been born in the North Rukon and was abandoned shortly afterwards. He grew up alone and locked in a constant struggle for survival like most souls in the Northern Districts, Yagari carved a path of blood through everywhere he passed until reaching the districts closest to the Seiretei; Here he was found and taken in by a kind man, a tailor. While in his care Yagari was complacent, they're shop was frequented by shinigami and as such business was good, after some time however thieves and other low lifes started targeting the shop for it's constant income. One night after many failed requests to the shinigami to protect the store Yagari armed himself with a simple Katana and as a thief came to rob the store at night he went after him, having lost his temper Yagari lashed out and killed the thief. Passing nearby were some shinigami who as soon as they felt his reiatsu flocked to the area, they saw as Yagari decimated him and proceeded to encourage him in coming to the Academy. Thinking about the first fatherly figure he had he agreed to go, once there he was quickly taken note of. His abnormally high reiatsu and strength got him the notice of several high ranking officials. He finished the academy in only 4 years and went on to join the expeditionary unit to Hueco Mundo, during his time here he gained invaluable experience and strength.
Upon coming back to Soul Society he was placed in Squad 2 for some time, here his reputation preceded him among it's members. His temper was something he couldn't exactly control, it gave him many problems, drinking was also a huge problem for him. In his years in Soul Society he was put in jail numerous times only to be latter released, his gravest offense was killing a fellow shinigami; The latter was under the influence of a hollow and although he only defended himself he was sent to the Nest of Maggots, in here he honed his skills even further with the fact that he had to fight other inmates, he served a sentence for the better part of a Century before being released once more. Once out he paid a visit to his 'father', since his departure he had taken in other children and had one of his own, a young girl named Yukumi. She was a precious child and was one of the the things that kept him on the positive side of things for years, after some time he was called back on by the Gotei. He spent years as a Lt. for the 11th Squad, after some time spent in the squad he began having friction with the Captain Blableblibloblu (Yes It's a hypothetical Name, I just don't have any particular name in mind); Yagari didn't like his methods, he was a power hungry bully and when he gave the chance to Yagari, he challenged him. Yagari had confidence in his abilities and as he began fighting it seemed even, after a short while the whole squad had flocked to see the fight between the Captain and Yagari the Lieutenant of the Division. This is when Yagari stopped his ruse; Releasing his blade's Bankai Yagari simply proceeded to pummel the Captain into submission, as the fight wined down the Captain urged Yagari to reconsider, he argued that he had much to give still. Yagari refused and as the Captain launched a last ditch attack Yagari spun to the side and using the unique angle of his elbow blade succeeded in decapitating him. The other squad members were in awe at the sight, Yagari simply sealed his zanpakuto and sat on the stairs of the barracks, his victory in front of the other members of the squad meant he had at least 200 witnesses and by law this made Yagari the new Kenpachi. In his new position he spent many years, he gained a reputation for being a cold blooded killer; Many were disgusted by such a man while the ones who got to know him better admired a man with such tenacity. After a few centuries of being the Kenpachi Yagari fed up with the rigors of being a Captain decided to leave. Since this was considered treason and desertion he was sent to jail once more, here he spent a minor amount of time since a major conflict broke out and his abilities were needed; After helping to resolve the situation he was released and allowed to lead his life as he saw fit. Now Yagari is without a squad, waiting to see what they will do with him now.
Family Line: Yukumi Shizuka (Sister)
Friends/Acquaintances: Just ask
Rivals/Enemies: Just ask
Love Interest: None for now
Affiliation: Gotei 13?
Squad: Up for suggestion
Rank: Unknown as of yet
~✣✚✣~ TwiDawnLight Ok so still pending aproval. Let me know if anything needs to be changed.
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Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2014 9:31 am
In his full profile that I had stimulated, his true fear is dying alone. It is also listed under his fear that it was because of his fear that he slowly learned on how to wear a mask upon his face. As for changing his personality, I did not tweak it that much. I just went into more detail. Back then Oleander loved his job but still hated the people he treated. It's his outlook on life. He hates being in this world that have the chance to live or change and it because of the beings insecurities that cause the madness and that plaques the nations with war and hatred. This is why he hates all living things because every time a being has been presented to them and he has offered them a second chance at life they have failed to take the correct path. Like that of his parents. However, it is because when a being dies, they have no chance left to change for the good. Therefore that is when he truly feels sympathy. As for his past. He was monstrous being because when he was close to death it was the only time he could feel any emotion due to the stress and horrible things his parents put him through. However, he became more isolated which upraised his fears which caused him to learn on how to lie and or 'act'. *cracks knuckles* Alrighty then!! Well here are some few modification's. I will post them down below and see if you approve. Shintaihason {Bodily Corruption} (身体の破損) - If the virus is not awakened within five post, the virus will dissipate and become nullified - This takes a total of 2 post to circulate and take effect. Once in effect it is frozen for three whole post then it recovers in a single post. {Weakened the time frame} Atsuryokuhason {Pressure Corruption} (圧力の破損) - Removed Numbers - However if one manages to be to be in the swords length, striking distance, or grabs or is pierced by the sword the poison is not in effect. Also if one manages to grab the sword itself, the energy slowly restores itself. If one manages to have a grip on the sword for two post, all energy that was eaten away will be restored. Chihason {Blood Corruption} (血の破損) - Weakened significantly. - Once the poison flows into the blood stream, it will take 1 post to circulate throughout the body and then it begins to take effect. This poison cuts off the Nero-Sensors themselves and cuts off the sense of sight temporarily. {Only cuts off the sight of seeing} - After a 2 post from circulation one would loose the ability to see for two post with a one post recovery rate. - However, if one manages to hold the blade of Yudoku-Shin, the ability will cancel itself out. Seruhason {Cell Corruption} (セルの破損) -Tengokuhason *Small wounds would be healed in a single post. Deep wounds in Two Post. Deadly Wounds can not be fully healed but they can be reverted to a state where the host would not be in any immediate danger. Meaning it reverts Deadly wounds back to deep wounds or small wounds. Depending on the type of wound. This process takes three post. -Jigokuhason *Instead of eating through the entire body of cells, it eats through the main organ near the second stab wound. {Arms Will get lungs, Chest will get heart, Face will get brain, and legs get arteries.} * It takes six post to eat through said organ * However, if one manages to touch the blade of Yudoku-Shin the virus will be shocked and become nullified. In general as long as you hold the blade of Yudoku-Shin all poisons and effects will be neutralized. Which will explain why, Oleander does not get effected. Which in turn will nullify any poison that one has come into contact with Oleander. On a side note. I am sorry for causing trouble. I also do not plan to use Oleander in combative measures at all. His most used technique will be that of Tengokuhason. However, if it comes to a time where it is his last resort. Then he will fight. His whole purpose was a demon rebirthed into a more mild form of a demon. Like an angel of death per say lol. It was based on a poetic and metaphorical structure. I am sorry if I did not get my point across. .
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