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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2013 2:12 am
Username: Battle Ram Desired Bloodline: Neko no kawa - Reyne Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: Because I wanted to make a unique character that was a furry~ RPC Link:http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=23984163 RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: Pink tipped ears flicked, swiveling to point straight upward before rotating to the side, then moving to lay flat against the mess of blond and pink hair that they jutted from. They were late... But that was okay! She didn't need them here anyway! She could always use a practice dummy... It was probably safer that way anyway. The female stood 5'2'' tall, with a slender, lean build, no shoes, a pair of loose leg warmers that covered her... feet? Or were they back paws? Claws extended and retracted as she flexed her feet, large looking paws that she stood on. Her body was covered in a layer of soft white fur, tinging a slight pink as it got closer to her head. Along her body she sported spots, though rather than being grey or black, they were a darker purple and softer, almost lavender color. Her slender tail was the same colors as her hair, strawberry blond and pink, and lightly flicked back and forth behind her. Her hands were more human like than her feet, but still retained the claws of her species, and were currently covered in a set of fingerless dark grey gloves. Her outfit seemed to be built to cover as little as possible, as she only wore a small bottom and almost even smaller top, just enough material to cover what needed, as well as a belt to accessorize.
Now she focused on the task before her. She brought her hands up, quickly shaping her fingers into the needed hand signs and focusing her chakra, "Kezutta tsume!" She brought her hands out, inch long claws extending from the tips of her fingers. She darted forward at the nearest training dummy, a growl rumbling in her throat as she leaped forward, spinning in the air as she brought her left hand out, claws leading. She felt them slice through the dummy easily, leaving deep gouges in the solid wooden structure. She didn't stop though, as she landed, she crouched, spinning low as sweeping out with her back right foot, claws out. These were larger and longer than the claws on her hands, easily a good 2 inches in length and thicker. Her claws slid through the wooden pole that held the dummy up, slicing through it with the same ease as before. She rotated on her hands, following the momentum of her kick as she brought that foot to the ground, twisting her body as she brought her other leg around, higher this time, the claws connecting with the chest area of the training dummy. Her foot came to touch the ground, the feline now with her back arched off of the ground, and holding herself up with her feet and hands. She pushed off with her feet, curling up and over herself to do a brief handstand before pushing from the ground with her hands, her body again curling as she brought her feet around to land lightly on her toes. Her hands immediately came up again, doing a different set of hand signs, "Kōgeki o kamu!" She leaped forward suddenly, a Leopard like roar coming from her throat as she tackled the dummy, the already weakened bottom snapping and breaking. As it tipped, she sunk her teeth into the neck of the training dummy, growling as she landed on top of it.
Her tail flicked about, ears flat against her skull and fur along her back raised as she held the dummy between her jaws, much like a wild cat holding its prey. She bit harder, hearing the wood crack under the pressure of her jaws. It wasn't until she started to taste wood chips and splinters that she let go, sitting back on her haunches in an oddly animalistic manner, spitting and wiping at her tongue to get the loose wood pieces off of it. "Yuck. Yuck." she shook her head, frowning before looking at the dummy under her. She giggled, her tail now swaying about happily as her ears perked up. She closed her aqua blue eyes in a gleeful grin, clapping her hands together before bounding up and away.
Username: Azra Reyne Desired Bloodline: Neko no kawa: Reyne Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: I created this bloodline and I want a character based on my fursona. RPC Link: Eileen Reyne RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: With eyes colored a golden yellow, Eileen stared at the local citizens in the Village Hidden in the Rocks, Iwagakure. Colors of white, a darkened grey, and a much lighter grey patterned her body in the appearance of a slightly long haired snow leopard. Underneath the strands of her fur, there was a slight pink and pale appearance to her bare skin; however, this was an aspect of her appearance that many were not able to see. The hair on her head fluctuated between purple and black much like the feathers of a raven. She measured up to being five feet and just six inches, while her tail took up the length of her legs which measure out to being a meter long. “Shiyoku o koeta kokei” Eileen whispered and felt her eyes becoming stronger so that she could stare through the streets nearby, keeping track of the assigned target. The rays from the sunlight soon burned her eyes, so she tried to look more down towards the street below her position.
Her furry feline ears twitched at the sounds of the people's steps on the cobbled streets, the sound of the birds flapping their wings as they passed by, and the sounds of busy merchants imploring the residents to purchase their goods. Closing her eyes, she gave way to the other sense she possessed, which were heightened compared to her human like village mates.
The sounds that fluttered in her ear became fine-tuned as she picked apart of the pitches, figuring out who was where and of these villagers, which one was her target. Picking through the sounds, she finally decided that her target had made his way through the errands he had so cautiously put together in case of what was just about to happen. His scent picked up into the easy breeze that swirled up to her nares, and she took in a deep breath to take in the scent. “Kogeki o Kamu”, she whispered as she let go of the metal bar that surround the ten foot water container perched on the rooftop above the unexpecting village members. As she fell through the air, feeling the air through her fur, she felt the jutsu she just active become active and opened her eyes to see her target just below her. Digging her teeth into his neck, the target responded in a delayed fashion and soon fainted due to the shock and the increasing loss of blood from his carotid artery.
Techniques Uses: Kogeki o Kamu, Shiyoku o koeta kokei
Sunaomi
Janet23
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Posted: Fri Aug 16, 2013 11:38 pm
Username: AaronQuan. Desired Bloodline: Chakra Manipulation - Kuryuu clan. Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: It fits my characters determination. And I like the bloodline limit. As it adds a effect to the battle when used. RPC Link:Albroit Kiwat. RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: Blood. A liquid that keeps the human body alive. It is a primary need of the body. Being so important that it is a part of the body. But when it is spilled on the ground, then this liquid creates fear. The fear of facing the death itself. And that fear was currently going on in this battle. As Albroit looked around him he saw his comrades, fallen and wounded. The blood dripping from their wounds. Screams of fear, screams of anger. It didn’t matter what they were. Because they all sounded the same. And the difference in screams didn’t matter for somebody that was traumatized.
A group of rogues had attacked the team Albroit was in. The parties were evenly matched, until the rogues got reinforcements. Albroit was now laying on the ground, beat up with wounds all over his body. But despite this condition he sadly was the least wounded. Most of his comrades were on the verge of death. Or they even passed that verge. He heard laughter. The laughter of a rogue. They had won the match, and it was now for them to decide what to do with his life and the life of his comrades. ‘I don’t have any cool clan powers, just my fists!’. The words echoed through his head, what if he had been stronger? ‘I remember reading about some kind of special eye. It can predict movements!’. What if he was blessed with the powers of a clan? What if he could actually protect his comrades from harm? Would their blood not be spilled if he had it? Would it make a difference? He had clamped his fists together as he had fallen down. He was laying on his stomach. He heard the voice of a man that was hanging near him, the only man that was able to stand on the side of their enemies. He understood that he was described as one that was still alive. This was the end? Would he be destroyed by a man that was reporting to himself? Could he have peace in heaven if it ended like this? No, that was impossible. He clamped his fists, pumping the last raw chakra into this attack. He couldn’t perform hand signs anymore. He could only take a last gamble on his talent of molding raw chakra. He took as much chakra he could still mold into his beaten up hands. Only leaving a tiny portion in his damaged body. ‘I don’t have any cool clan powers, just my fists. And I will use them!’. He screamed as the last chakra surrounded his hand palms. He jumped up from his lying position, focusing his last stamina into this attack. A mallet made out of yellow chakra shot out of his hands. “I will not let it all end here!”. He slammed the mallet towards his opponent as he shouted the line. The line and the slam were combined with a third element. A gigantic smile on the face of a young shinobi. 505/300 words used. *Written at Chuunin rank abilities, since my character does not have enough Bloodline points for the ability as a Genin.
Username: Metal Trsu Desired Bloodline: Kikaichu Ishoku Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: No one else had it. And it actually seems kool. RPC Link: Not Yet RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
Hotaru made his way towards the small clearing, his mission was almost complete he just had to report on the small rogue encampment that was to say poorly hidden. His body appeared in one of the tree branches over looking the small encampment, his hand came up resting against the trunk of the tree while he waited. His small female bug came flying back to him, her trail and his male bugs had lead him here to their camp and now he began to report. His arm's folded down and out allowing several bugs to escape and fly out and around the camp, gathering vibrations from their movements and from their chakra that allowed to leak from their bodies. This allowed Hotaru to 'see' his surroundings, he always had a few bugs out around him at all times to gather his own surroundings. As the bugs came back to him he began to take out his pad, quickly writing down what the bugs and he had gathered. It was then a quick rushing noise was heard, his right arm came up holding it in front of his face as three shuriken pierce his clothing and stuck into his skin. Thinking quick Hotaru made the gestures and slammed his hands down to the tree branch. A large wall of bugs formed and flowed from his body shooting upward in the form of a wall. 'Bug Protection Wall' He then jumped out from the tree branch, turning his body one hundred and eighty degrees. His right hand had slipped into the bag on his leg, tossing out one of his many smoke bombs; while the smoke began to spread around the area, Hotaru was seemingly floating in mid air, a small black cloud formed under his feet as his body began to zip through the trees, disappearing finally due to the speed of his bugs.
Techniques Uses: D Rank | Kikaichu Tracking B Rank | Bug Protection Wall B Rank | Bug Traveling Platform
Sunaomi
Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2013 11:23 am
Metal Trsu
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Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:52 pm
Username: ken-faita Desired Bloodline: Aburame Clan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: I was going to be the only one, but Metal stole my thunder... My main reason is it would go perfectly with the style of my rpc, it would definitely compliment his abilities the best out of any of the kekkei genkais. RPC Link: Here
RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
Ken slowly began to walk away from the living area in the village hidden in the rain. He had been stuck inside all day, and it was finally time for him to get to the training fields and actually practice using some of his techniques. After several moments of silence a small smile crossed his eyes as he made it to the area he had been approaching for sometime. Ken finally reached the flooded streets, the infamous training grounds of Amegakure. Looking around he made his way to a broken pipe, with a diameter of 8 feet it was more than large enough for him to make his way inside it. He calmly looked about as he awaited the usually unseen entrance of his training partner. The soft steps behind him confirmed whom it was, seeing Aiko Boken, the well known blind instructor of the hidden rain village Ken gave a small bow.
" I take it you are ready to begin then..." Aiko said as she slowly shifted her position. Ken nodded and stepped back himself, removing his bow from his back he held it in his left hand and awaited. Aiko moved forward quickly and rotated, bringing her leg in a high arc she swiftly brought it down towards Ken. Quickly he ducked down and lifted his left arm. In an instant Aiko's leg was met by a veritable shield of insects. Sensing her attack unsuccessful she jumped backwards as Ken raised both his arms and a stream of similar looking insects cascaded outwards, chasing after her. Quickly she darted away and disappeared among the many pipes. Remaining still Ken let his arms slowly fall to their side as a small stream of bugs flowed from his sleeves. Watching their movements slowly, Ken noted them moving around behind one of the near pipes. It was rather ingenious of Ken to place several female kikaichu bugs inside the shield he had generated earlier. Aiko had not noticed one of the small females having clung to her, its pheromone trail was now leading his male bugs right to her, giving up her position. Nocking an arrow back Ken slowly focused chakra into before loosing it and watching as it curved around the pipe his bugs had indicated. Ken listened and heard nothing, a moment later his instructor appeared from behind the pipe holding the arrow. She smiled and spoke " Very good, you have definitely improved since our last spar." she said, tossing the arrow back to him signaling that their training session was over for now.
Techniques Uses: D Rank | Kikaichu Tracking D Rank | Bug Buckler E-SS Rank | Straight Line Bug Projection
Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:11 pm
Janet23
sorry for the double post, forgot I supposed to quote someone.
Denied. The sample is supposed to show us how you intend to use the bloodline in question. This has failed to do so.
Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2013 10:48 pm
Azra Reyne
Username: Azra Reyne Desired Bloodline: Neko no kawa: Reyne Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: I created this bloodline and I want a character based on my fursona. RPC Link: Eileen Reyne RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: With eyes colored a golden yellow, Eileen stared at the local citizens in the Village Hidden in the Rocks, Iwagakure. Colors of white, a darkened grey, and a much lighter grey patterned her body in the appearance of a slightly long haired snow leopard. Underneath the strands of her fur, there was a slight pink and pale appearance to her bare skin; however, this was an aspect of her appearance that many were not able to see. The hair on her head fluctuated between purple and black much like the feathers of a raven. She measured up to being five feet and just six inches, while her tail took up the length of her legs which measure out to being a meter long. “Shiyoku o koeta kokei” Eileen whispered and felt her eyes becoming stronger so that she could stare through the streets nearby, keeping track of the assigned target. The rays from the sunlight soon burned her eyes, so she tried to look more down towards the street below her position.
Her furry feline ears twitched at the sounds of the people's steps on the cobbled streets, the sound of the birds flapping their wings as they passed by, and the sounds of busy merchants imploring the residents to purchase their goods. Closing her eyes, she gave way to the other sense she possessed, which were heightened compared to her human like village mates.
The sounds that fluttered in her ear became fine-tuned as she picked apart of the pitches, figuring out who was where and of these villagers, which one was her target. Picking through the sounds, she finally decided that her target had made his way through the errands he had so cautiously put together in case of what was just about to happen. His scent picked up into the easy breeze that swirled up to her nares, and she took in a deep breath to take in the scent. “Kogeki o Kamu”, she whispered as she let go of the metal bar that surround the ten foot water container perched on the rooftop above the unexpecting village members. As she fell through the air, feeling the air through her fur, she felt the jutsu she just active become active and opened her eyes to see her target just below her. Digging her teeth into his neck, the target responded in a delayed fashion and soon fainted due to the shock and the increasing loss of blood from his carotid artery.
Techniques Uses: Kogeki o Kamu, Shiyoku o koeta kokei
Username: Battle Ram Desired Bloodline: Neko no kawa - Reyne Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: Because I wanted to make a unique character that was a furry~ RPC Link:http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=23984163 RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: Pink tipped ears flicked, swiveling to point straight upward before rotating to the side, then moving to lay flat against the mess of blond and pink hair that they jutted from. They were late... But that was okay! She didn't need them here anyway! She could always use a practice dummy... It was probably safer that way anyway. The female stood 5'2'' tall, with a slender, lean build, no shoes, a pair of loose leg warmers that covered her... feet? Or were they back paws? Claws extended and retracted as she flexed her feet, large looking paws that she stood on. Her body was covered in a layer of soft white fur, tinging a slight pink as it got closer to her head. Along her body she sported spots, though rather than being grey or black, they were a darker purple and softer, almost lavender color. Her slender tail was the same colors as her hair, strawberry blond and pink, and lightly flicked back and forth behind her. Her hands were more human like than her feet, but still retained the claws of her species, and were currently covered in a set of fingerless dark grey gloves. Her outfit seemed to be built to cover as little as possible, as she only wore a small bottom and almost even smaller top, just enough material to cover what needed, as well as a belt to accessorize.
Now she focused on the task before her. She brought her hands up, quickly shaping her fingers into the needed hand signs and focusing her chakra, "Kezutta tsume!" She brought her hands out, inch long claws extending from the tips of her fingers. She darted forward at the nearest training dummy, a growl rumbling in her throat as she leaped forward, spinning in the air as she brought her left hand out, claws leading. She felt them slice through the dummy easily, leaving deep gouges in the solid wooden structure. She didn't stop though, as she landed, she crouched, spinning low as sweeping out with her back right foot, claws out. These were larger and longer than the claws on her hands, easily a good 2 inches in length and thicker. Her claws slid through the wooden pole that held the dummy up, slicing through it with the same ease as before. She rotated on her hands, following the momentum of her kick as she brought that foot to the ground, twisting her body as she brought her other leg around, higher this time, the claws connecting with the chest area of the training dummy. Her foot came to touch the ground, the feline now with her back arched off of the ground, and holding herself up with her feet and hands. She pushed off with her feet, curling up and over herself to do a brief handstand before pushing from the ground with her hands, her body again curling as she brought her feet around to land lightly on her toes. Her hands immediately came up again, doing a different set of hand signs, "Kōgeki o kamu!" She leaped forward suddenly, a Leopard like roar coming from her throat as she tackled the dummy, the already weakened bottom snapping and breaking. As it tipped, she sunk her teeth into the neck of the training dummy, growling as she landed on top of it.
Her tail flicked about, ears flat against her skull and fur along her back raised as she held the dummy between her jaws, much like a wild cat holding its prey. She bit harder, hearing the wood crack under the pressure of her jaws. It wasn't until she started to taste wood chips and splinters that she let go, sitting back on her haunches in an oddly animalistic manner, spitting and wiping at her tongue to get the loose wood pieces off of it. "Yuck. Yuck." she shook her head, frowning before looking at the dummy under her. She giggled, her tail now swaying about happily as her ears perked up. She closed her aqua blue eyes in a gleeful grin, clapping her hands together before bounding up and away.
Techniques Uses:Kōgeki o kamu // Kezutta tsume
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Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:43 am
II Blow Meh II
AaronQuan
Denied. The sample is supposed to show us how you intend to use the bloodline in question. This has failed to do so.
Username: AaronQuan. Desired Bloodline: Chakra Manipulation - Kuryuu clan. Second attempt. Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: It fits my characters determination. And I like the bloodline limit. As it adds a effect to the battle when used. RPC Link:Albroit Kiwat. RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: The young boy stood in front of one of the opponents that had challenged his team. Was he scared? No, that would not be the right description. He was tensed, ready for battle. He walked forward towards his opponent, showing his creepy smile towards the enemy, this smile was accompanied by the obnoxious sound of clapping shoes. Shoes that filled the deadly silence of this battlefield. He looked into the eyes of his opponent. “It’s over, young cloud shinobi”, those were the words his enemy yelled before engaging into an attack. The enemy male engaged into an attack. Quickly leaping forward to strike the young boy. But Albroit was not afraid of his enemy. He was still excited to battle somebody that was being so cocky before the battle even started. He noticed the enemy weaving a few hand signs. This resulted in the enemy launching a large fire projectile towards him. A attack that was probably around Chuunin level. The only thing that the boy could do, was smile. As he raised his hand with the palm facing his opponent, before the attack crashed into him. His chakra pushed away the large projectile. Launching it into a nearby hill. The counterattack required a lot of chakra. As it was one of the unique techniques which only required chakra molding. Sucking away the chakra a normal B rank technique would use.
His opponent looked at him with big eyes. “H-how did you?”. Albroit walked up to his direction before the man could finish his speech. His crimson eyes staring towards the male. His big smile accompanied his big crimson eyes. The sound of his shoes finished the image of the rather odd individual he was. He looked at the terrified male. “This? It is all for my team mates. I couldn’t fight you without a purpose”. His hands being slammed together as he spit out the line. He started running towards the opponent. A mallet shot out of his hands, being made out of raw chakra. He jumped into the air before slamming the mallet down. The mallet was roughly stronger than his usual strength, yet this difference in strength could decide the outcome of this battle. He slammed the mallet on the opponents shoulder. “As long as I have my goals, I will not lose!”. The swinging of the mallet caused a dust cloud to emerge. Closing off the outcome of the attack to a spectator.
407/300 words used. *Written at Chuunin rank abilities, since my character does not have enough Bloodline points for the ability as a Genin.
Techniques Uses: Chakra Molding: Mallet - C Rank. Chakra Molding: Chakra Push - B Rank.
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