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 Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:37 pm
Jutsu Name: Teleportation Switch Jutsu (needs a snappier name)
Jutsu Type: Universal Ninjutsu-Signature to Laram
Jutsu Rank: I don't know, I need advice.
Jutsu Description: When Laram places his signature seal on an object, (It has to be an object, it can't be the ground or a wall, or anything like that.) he is able to switch places with said object, by concentrating his mind on it. If Laram is still and if the object is flying at thirty miles per hour, once Laram switches places with it, he is now flying through the air at thirty miles per hour and the object becomes still. Distance between Laram and the object does not effect how much chakra is used.
(I need help with the chakra/stamina costs for this technique.)
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:37 pm
Name of Jutsu: Surpassing your Threshold
Rank of Jutsu: B-Rank
Range of Jutsu: As far as the sound is carried
Jutsu's Element: Universal Genjutsu
Requirement Musical Instrument
Description: This skill is a genjutsu which affects only the people the user wishes to affect. A support genjutsu, the user will take out a musical instrument and begin to play a high paced song on it. Controlling the sound waves of the music with her chakra, she will cause the soundwaves to enter the ears of the person she wishes to affect. Upon hearing this genjutsu, the person affected will suddenly feel like they are unstopable. A support genjutsu that lasts for three posts, the genjutsu unlocks the barriers of the mind that keep chakra in control, unleashing adrenaline throughout the body and giving a boost of strength and speed to those affected by this. The strength and speed boost is one rank and does stack with other bonuses, however this jutsu can not be cast twice in the same battle on the same person because it would cause too much strain upon the mind.
Weakness:The user must continue playing the song throughout the three posts, otherwise the effects of the genjutsu is nullified. Not only that, if the genjutsu is stopped prematurely, those affected by it will feel drained and their strength and speed is reduced by one rank for three posts. Only one person may be affected by this genjutsu at a time. The person affected by this suffers from the stamina drain of the genjutsu.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:23 am
Sorry but I'll have to deny this technique. It's essentially a Substitution jutsu which we banned because it was so easy to misuse. Additionally, it is identical to the Flying Thunder God technique which I'm a hesitant to allow at all (even though it is an AWSEOME technique). Normally, a Genjutsu can make the victim believe they are stronger but for it to actually make them stronger would require great skill in Genjutsu. To be honest this is more of a B or A rank technique and the victim will have to suffer the stamina drain from the jutsu. Also only one person could be affected at any time and only for up to three posts. But this is an excellent concept, so don't let me discourage you from trying to get it approved smile
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:35 am
That's why you make the technique have massive chakra/stamina limitations. Don't give up on it just yet. Make it so the user can only use it five times or less before they completely exhaust themselves. It is, after all, a space-time manipulation technique. Please, try to work with me here.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:50 am
Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air through the mouth at an opponent. Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents movements of half a rank (full rank at C) If the user fires a blasts of frigid air, how is the jutsu a Suiton technique? Additionally, does this affect their speed or agility? Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air, snow, and ice through the mouth and nose at an opponent. (Composure of the blast differs between D to C. At D rank it is composed of mostly air, with some snow and shards of ice. At C rank it is composed of mostly snow and ice, propelled by a powerful wind, causing more damage, and hindering an opponent more than the D rank.) Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents agility of half a rank (full rank at C). Edited to be more descriptive and more clear.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:51 am
No matter what stamina and chakra limitations you put in, its still a very powerful jutsu and we'll have to deny it. Time-space techniques are clearly the most powerful, but in TUP they're unreachable. As you can see, we excluded the substitution technique and you're asking for a stronger version of it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:02 am
Curses, foiled again. Are there any alternatives I could use? I'm basically trying to give my character a way-out, if it looks like death is inevitable.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:06 am
That seems a little OP don't you think? A jutsu that can instantly get you out of somewhere? I feel as though that defeats the purpose of knowing any defensive techniques, or having any tactical aspect to combat at all....what would the point be if you could just teleport out instantly?
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:10 am
j3susfr3ak1991 Curses, foiled again. Are there any alternatives I could use? I'm basically trying to give my character a way-out, if it looks like death is inevitable. That's the problem with that kind of technique, it allows you to cheat death and go to a safe point just because you weren't good enough to win in a battle. Honestly, Space/Time jutsu are one of my favorite types of jutsu but the 'Get Away Free Card' portion really ruins the point of roleplaying. You'd have to REALLY REALLY Blow me away with a well-thought, balanced system to get a Flying Thunder God-esque technique approved.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:15 am
SK Loda Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air through the mouth at an opponent. Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents movements of half a rank (full rank at C) If the user fires a blasts of frigid air, how is the jutsu a Suiton technique? Additionally, does this affect their speed or agility? Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air, snow, and ice through the mouth and nose at an opponent. (Composure of the blast differs between D to C. At D rank it is composed of mostly air, with some snow and shards of ice. At C rank it is composed of mostly snow and ice, propelled by a powerful wind, causing more damage, and hindering an opponent more than the D rank.) Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents agility of half a rank (full rank at C). Edited to be more descriptive and more clear. Excellent. The hindrance to Agility will only last for one post (two for C-rank). Hyouton is one of the few element/techniques that I would allow to lower speed/agility at these low ranks but I'm forced to balance that out by limiting the duration.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:46 am
Martin Spiralwave Normally, a Genjutsu can make the victim believe they are stronger but for it to actually make them stronger would require great skill in Genjutsu. To be honest this is more of a B or A rank technique and the victim will have to suffer the stamina drain from the jutsu. Also only one person could be affected at any time and only for up to three posts. But this is an excellent concept, so don't let me discourage you from trying to get it approved smile Okay, those are fair trades that I am more than willing to agree to. I changed the rank to A and I made it that it only affects one person for three posts. However, I do have a request of my own if possible to satisfy the tweaking of the genjutsu. Would it be possible if the genjutsu was stackable with other attributes and types? If not, I completely understand and would edit once again
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:55 am
Witch Hunter Robin 94 Martin Spiralwave Normally, a Genjutsu can make the victim believe they are stronger but for it to actually make them stronger would require great skill in Genjutsu. To be honest this is more of a B or A rank technique and the victim will have to suffer the stamina drain from the jutsu. Also only one person could be affected at any time and only for up to three posts. But this is an excellent concept, so don't let me discourage you from trying to get it approved smile Okay, those are fair trades that I am more than willing to agree to. I changed the rank to A and I made it that it only affects one person for three posts. However, I do have a request of my own if possible to satisfy the tweaking of the genjutsu. Would it be possible if the genjutsu was stackable with other attributes and types? If not, I completely understand and would edit once again Because the Genjutsu acts as a Active Boost, it is able to stack with attributes but not other Active Boosts [from other techniques and such]. Additionally, I am willing to allow you to drop the rank down to B-rank, I realized I may have been a little too strict with it at first. Again, this is an awseome concept Robin. I hope to see it in action sometime in the future. Finally, the crew is currently working on a Genjutsu system so it is likely that I will call you back to edit the technique a bit more to fit the system.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:02 am
Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air through the mouth at an opponent. Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents movements of half a rank (full rank at C) If the user fires a blasts of frigid air, how is the jutsu a Suiton technique? Additionally, does this affect their speed or agility? Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air, snow, and ice through the mouth and nose at an opponent. (Composure of the blast differs between D to C. At D rank it is composed of mostly air, with some snow and shards of ice. At C rank it is composed of mostly snow and ice, propelled by a powerful wind, causing more damage, and hindering an opponent more than the D rank.) Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents agility of half a rank (full rank at C). Edited to be more descriptive and more clear. Excellent. The hindrance to Agility will only last for one post (two for C-rank). Hyouton is one of the few element/techniques that I would allow to lower speed/agility at these low ranks but I'm forced to balance that out by limiting the duration. Sounds like a reasonable balance. Does that mean it's approved?
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:05 am
SK Loda Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Martin Spiralwave SK Loda Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air through the mouth at an opponent. Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents movements of half a rank (full rank at C) If the user fires a blasts of frigid air, how is the jutsu a Suiton technique? Additionally, does this affect their speed or agility? Jutsu Type: NinJutsu Name: Howling BlastJutsu Rank: D-C Jutsu Description: The water counterpart to the Tiger seal, fire breath jutsu, but instead, the user shoots a blast of frigid air, snow, and ice through the mouth and nose at an opponent. (Composure of the blast differs between D to C. At D rank it is composed of mostly air, with some snow and shards of ice. At C rank it is composed of mostly snow and ice, propelled by a powerful wind, causing more damage, and hindering an opponent more than the D rank.) Travels about 20 feet (30 feet at C rank) before dissipating into a wider area, greatly reducing the effect. This breath has a greater effect in areas where it is cold enough to snow. The cold of the breath also causes a slight hindrance to opponents agility of half a rank (full rank at C). Edited to be more descriptive and more clear. Excellent. The hindrance to Agility will only last for one post (two for C-rank). Hyouton is one of the few element/techniques that I would allow to lower speed/agility at these low ranks but I'm forced to balance that out by limiting the duration. Sounds like a reasonable balance. Does that mean it's approved? Yup, your good to go!
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:50 am
Cool cool. Thanks a bunch! ^_^
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