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Well, I think that you need to make the healing factor a jutsu. I know it's pretty passive, but it needs to be specific to what extent it can heal. As far as I can tell, I can say use the wind sword jutsu on a genin and he'd be healed near instantly. It needs basically a post count for the rank of damage done/jutsu used for the healing factor to complete. Also, just to make it clear to people, you might want to make it known that they cannot simply regrow limbs or anything like that. That would just be a bit too far for a blood manipulation clan. Other than those minor things though, I like the idea.

EDIT: Also, I think there should be a rank limit to how much blood you can produce. I don't think a genin would be capable of producing infinite amounts of blood if he's just learning how to even use his clan abilities. Maybe 2x the amount of blood at genin, 4x at chuunin, 8x at jounin, and 16x (which is basically infinite is and of itself) at sannin/kage. I just want to make sure that a genin doesn't basically become near indestructible if someone deals a heavy blow to him you know?

And just as a heads up, you know that a few people have created a blood artistry bloodline right? It's not exactly the same, but they do relatively the same things in a broad sense.

Yeah, they use their blood in a similar fashion to what Sai does with his ink jutsu.

But yeah, so from the edit does it basically mean that each healing factor costs the same as the rank its under (unless otherwise stated that it doesn't cost chakra), or....? It's just that since this bloodline deals with blood, I don't see how it would be able to heal torn muscle which is actually tissue, and healing internal organs near instantly is a bit overpowered in my opinion. I would say that any type of healing factor of jounin rank and above would have to have a post count. Say jounin level healing happens in three posts, and kage level healing would have to happen in five unless the ninja doesn't move inorder to let teh healing occur faster. In which case, jounin level healing could happen in one post, and Kage/sannin level would happen in two (The first post would be sort of like the coagulation of fluids so that the organ doesn't internally bleed, and then the second post is when it heals.)

Also, I would make it a rule that these ninja are not allowed to have the medical shinobi profession. Otherwise they would be impossible to even face in battle.

Your Rank: Academy
Name of Jutsu: Tora ryū odori(tiger dragon dance)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Type Jutsu: Taijutsu
Range of Jutsu: 0-4ft
Jutsu's Element: none
Description:
Once your opponent try to attack you by useing hand to hand combat .
You'll block, trapping the arm, striking, moving, turning the Knee, striking, inverting the fist, blocking, turning, stepping, stepping, stepping, moving so that your not coming at the opponent with a straight line. You moving at your in angels, and all it wanting for you and your tiger strike on the outside or the inside of the centerline. Sometimes striking center, most of the time strikeing angels.
Video expample: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZC5Y2sPCXB4


Your Rank: Academy
Name of jutsu: Daburutaigākurō (Double Tiger Claw)
Rank: B
Type of jutsu: Taijutsu
Range of Jutsu: close range
Description:
You and your tiger do straight on attack to the opponent.
You come in first, hand strikeing the chest, or sometimes the back.
Then the tiger strikes to the opponents throat. (with aright amount of strenght can be bone-crushing.

Your Rank:chunnin
Name: Ko-rudo of the Araarashii (Call of the wild )
Rank: C
Animal Type: (pick one type of animal for your elemantal animal form)
Range of Jutsu: Long range
Element Jutsu: Any 1 you have.
Description:
This technique alows you to use 1 out of 3 elements that you have. One you have that Element.

To use youre element is by useing your element to create a form of animal you chosen. Which also called Elemental Animal.

When useing Elemental Animal. It charged at the opponent and cosing damage.
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Your Rank: Academy
Name fo Jutsu: Baitai dōbutsu wa sakkaku o shōkan(medium animal summon illusion)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: none
Jutsu's Element: none
Description:
Once the oppoent made eye contect with Tora Myoushu's eyes. Then user can use medium animal summon illusion. Allows the user to create a summoning Illusion of really medium best.


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Your Rank: chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Dōbutsu wa gensō o shōkan-dai(large animal summon illusion)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: close rang
Jutsu's Element: none
Description:
Once the oppoent made eye contect with Tora Myoushu's eyes. Then user can use Large animal summon illusion. Allows the user to create a summoning Illusion of really large best.

Ok there are a LOT of spelling issues, which you will need to fix, but as far as the clan abilities I only have a few issues really

1. Why is chakra control a strength? The speed and agility I can see, but chakra control? Also, and I'm just assuming this is what the word is supposed to be as it was spelled incorrectly, but it seems like strength would be a strength of the clan since tigers are some of the strongest animals there are.

2. The Sumiyaka Iwaku (speed past) techniqe is a no, perhaps you can appear as a blur, and perhaps to those significantly slower than yourself you can hardly be seen at all, but you cannot move so fast that you can't be seen, that's just ridiculous.

3. The Tora ryū odori(tiger dragon dance) technique needs a better description.

4. The Ko-rudo of the Araarashii (Call of the wild ) technique also needs to be described better.

Your Rank: Academy
Name of Jutsu: Tora ryū odori(tiger dragon dance)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Type Jutsu: Taijutsu
Range of Jutsu: 0-4ft
Jutsu's Element: none
Description:
Once your opponent try to attack you by using hand to hand combat .
You'll block, trapping the arm, striking, moving, turning the Knee, striking, inverting the fist, blocking, turning, stepping, stepping, stepping, moving so that your not coming at the opponent with a straight line. You moving at your in angels, and all it wanting for you and your tiger strike on the outside or the inside of the centerline. Sometimes striking center, most of the time striking angels.
Video expample: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZC5Y2sPCXB4
There are stages that you and your tiger needs to performe to make it stronger.

Stage 1
(Academy Student)

First and most is lean how to move your body Like a lizerd's footprints. So if you look at a lizard's footprints in the sand, they're all diagonal. But they would be going in a straight direction so that the image for whatever that lizard's prey is, is that he's going to the right , and the he's going to the left. And not straight. But before the prey figuers that out is to late.

Lized's footprints Movement
So in this case you'll be teaching your body to move around and dogde in your in angels.


Traping, blocking, Striking
Once your body leans to move around and doge in your in angels. Then now you need to teach your body traping, blocking and stricking and add them to your Lized's footprint movement.

Tiger leans to Strike
Now you need to teach your tiger to come in and strike at the right time, douring your Lized's footprints movements.
So your tiger need to lean to strick when your blocking and dodging. This also allows your tiger to take any ninja items off of your opponent.
And if you really wanted to for fun part. Is Getting your tiger to slach off opponents pants. It like pulling down someones pants.

(work on it later.


Stage 2

Increasing Speed and hit strongth.



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Your Rank: Academy
Name of jutsu: Daburutaigākurō (Double Tiger Claw)
Rank: B
Type of jutsu: Taijutsu
Range of Jutsu: close range
Description:
You and your tiger do straight on attack to the opponent.
You come in first, hand striking the chest, or sometimes the back.
Then the tiger strikes to the opponents throat. (with aright amount of strength can be bone-crushing.)

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Your Rank:chunnin
Name: Ko-rudo of the Araarashii (Call of the wild )
Rank: C
Animal Type: (pick one type of animal for your elemental animal form)
Range of Jutsu: Long range
Element Jutsu: Any 1 you have.
Description:
This technique allows you to use 1 out of 3 elements that you have. One you have that Element.

To use your element is by using your element to create a form of animal you chosen. Which also called Elemental Animal.

When using Elemental Animal. It charged at the opponent and casing damage.


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Your Rank: Academy
Name fo Jutsu: Baitai dōbutsu wa sakkaku o shōkan(medium animal summon illusion)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: none
Jutsu's Element: none
Description:
Once the opponent made eye contact with Tora Myoushu's eyes. Then user can use medium animal summon illusion. Allows the user to create a summoning Illusion of really medium best.


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Your Rank: chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Dōbutsu wa gensō o shōkan-dai(large animal summon illusion)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: close rang
Jutsu's Element: none
Description:
Once the opponent made eye contact with Tora Myoushu's eyes. Then user can use Large animal summon illusion. Allows the user to create a summoning Illusion of really large best.




OK i'LL Add few things

((Oh well, plan B? Also once again i'd like to reserve the head role for my character when he becomes strong enough))
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Name:Ninpo:Baien (Ninja art: dirty smoke)

Description: A clan that dates back to the start of the First great ninja war, The Baien Were a ruthless group of mercenaries who would sell their services to the Highest Bidder. The Baien were ninja who could Use the byproduct of water and fire, Smoke. These ninja were usually bought for the use of espionage, but it was not to say that they were not one for head to head combat. Boasting skills like the ability to blow burning hot steam in the face of an adversary, To Condensing smoke so tightly that it could be used as a weapon. These hit-men made their living through their unique affinity to smoke itself. By combining these two elements in an almost instinctual manner,(not to say that they can use either element seperately) the user could completely control it. They also found that by spreading their chakras into pre-existing smoke/steam, they could control it as well. The clan though, ran into trouble after the first ninja war, and was said to be all but dead, the bloodline lost to time. Or so it seemed.

Strengths:The user can utterly control smoke/steam

Weaknesses: As most of the techniques require breathing, The user can become tired quickly. If the techniques are used too many in succession, the user can receive throat damage, and begin to spit up blood

Ability:Smoke Control/ability to feel chakra through the smoke

Bloodline/Clan Jutsus:
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Name of Jutsu:Ninpo: Yoen [ninja art:lingering smoke]
Rank of Jutsu:D
Range of Jutsu:Mid
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description: The user spews out a smokescreen around himself and his opponents (3 post length)

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Moeru Kiri[ninja art:Burning fog]
Rank of Jutsu:D
Range of Jutsu:long
Jutsu's Element:Steam
Description:The User expels burning Steam/smoke onto their opponent, Scalding all it touches.

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:kemutageru[ninja art:sensitivity smoke]
Rank of Jutsu:D
Range of Jutsu:mid-range
Jutsu's Element:smoke
Description:The user blows a smokescreen around him and the opponent, which causes anyone caught in it's fog to begin coughing, and water at the eyes (2 post length)

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Hatsuen [ninja art:emitting smoke
Rank of Jutsu:C
Range of Jutsu:mid
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:By blowing a special steam, after a baien user inhales cigarette smoke, any person who breathes the smoke appears to have smoke rising from them momentarily after, the technique itself burns someone elses chakra away through the smoke that is seen rising

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo: Shouen[ninja art:gunpowder smoke]
Rank of Jutsu:C
Range of Jutsu:Variable
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:Using smoke control, The user can leave wherever he wants, a condensed smoke ball that will Explode when the user wills it. Can only place 3 at a time, if the user moves too far away, it will dissapear [a mile in distance or more]

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Ichimatsu[ninja art:wreath of smoke]
Rank of Jutsu:C
Range of Jutsu:mid
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:the user creates a condensed ring of smoke that traps the opponent where they stand. Oftened followed up by Ninpo:enshi. (lasts 3 posts)

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Kemuri Yari[ninja art:smoke spear]
Rank of Jutsu:C
Range of Jutsu:long
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:The user blows out a length of smoke, Which condenses into a large, almost transparent spear, that he launches at his opponent.

Name of Jutsu:ninpo:enshi[ninja art:death by smoke suffocation]
Rank of Jutsu:B
Range of Jutsu:Close
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:the user grabs his opponent, and seemingly kisses him/her. In actuality though, what the user is doing is filling up their adversaries lungs with smoke,

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:endoku[ninja art:smoke pollution]
Rank of Jutsu:B
Range of Jutsu:Mid
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:The user blows smoke after smoking a cigarette, that when it touches something it begins to melt whatever it touches

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Hakuen[ninja art: white smoke]
Rank of Jutsu:B
Range of Jutsu:Close
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:The User blows a pure white ring of smoke, that eats any non wind jutsu that connects with it.

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Suchi-muhanma[ninja art:Steam hammer]
Rank of Jutsu:A
Range of Jutsu:Mid
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description: The user Emits condensed smoke balls from it's fists/feet that he uses to Hammer into his opponent( 4 turn length)

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:suchi-mubasu[ninja art:steam bath]
Rank of Jutsu:A
Range of Jutsu:long
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:The user concentrates a boiling hot stream of steam that virtually cooks anything it connects with

Name of Jutsu:Ninpo:Sumoggu no gaidoku[ninja art:smog virus]
Rank of Jutsu:S
Range of Jutsu:Mid
Jutsu's Element:Smoke
Description:The User blows out a smoke, after inhaling from a cigarette, that is so concentrated with all sorts of chemicals and toxins, that those who breathe it in, slowly begin to start having nerve damage.

That's what I was gonna say, 'Cause his smoke style is more a way to amplify his Taijutsu, And mine's really a variation of boil release, with the fact that everyone in the clan smokes cigarettes. But if you'd rather, I'll alter it to just being Boil release.