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cool_cait

PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:03 pm


#1-My struggle

I fought through the darkness
And all my fears
I struggled through my pain
And all my tears

All just to get away
From your firm grasp
To get away before
I collapse

Now I’m putting pieces
Back together
And getting my life back
With you gone forever.
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#2-Fear of Loving You

Although you hurt me
I cant leave
I go back into your arms
I try to believe,
That everything will be ok
That you wont do it again
That you will love me
Until the end.

But will it work out?
I really hope so
Im thinking yes
But my heart says no.
And guess what happens?
My heart was right
I got hurt again
And lost the fight.

On my cheek
Is a tear
Not of joy
But of fear.
I never would have thought
Never had a clue
That some day I
Would fear loving you.
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#3-You


You said you loved me
You said you’d stay
You said you’d never leave me
But you never do what you say.

You left me to drown
In all my tears
With my broken heart
And all my fears

You said to take you back
You said it was a mistake
You said it would be ok
But you’re just a fake

You didn’t love me
You didn’t care
For all the memories
That we shared

Why should I take you back
After you took a knife
And stabbed my heart
Then took my life.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 10:05 pm


wow i just loved the first one, somthing about the second seemed a little odd i think i dont know why its just me, the third one was okay it was pretty good, but the first would deffently be the best

jezhicka


lovely-problems

PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:33 am


These are all really good, and I will look for more poems of yours.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:25 pm


Thanks!

cool_cait


luna_luv_manga

PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:46 pm


i really engoyed the first one! the other two (although good) were not my taste.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:58 pm


Thanks!

cool_cait

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