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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:03 pm
#1-My struggle
I fought through the darkness And all my fears I struggled through my pain And all my tears
All just to get away From your firm grasp To get away before I collapse
Now I’m putting pieces Back together And getting my life back With you gone forever. ------------------------------------------------------------ #2-Fear of Loving You
Although you hurt me I cant leave I go back into your arms I try to believe, That everything will be ok That you wont do it again That you will love me Until the end.
But will it work out? I really hope so Im thinking yes But my heart says no. And guess what happens? My heart was right I got hurt again And lost the fight.
On my cheek Is a tear Not of joy But of fear. I never would have thought Never had a clue That some day I Would fear loving you. ------------------------------------------------------------ #3-You
You said you loved me You said you’d stay You said you’d never leave me But you never do what you say.
You left me to drown In all my tears With my broken heart And all my fears
You said to take you back You said it was a mistake You said it would be ok But you’re just a fake
You didn’t love me You didn’t care For all the memories That we shared
Why should I take you back After you took a knife And stabbed my heart Then took my life.
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 10:05 pm
wow i just loved the first one, somthing about the second seemed a little odd i think i dont know why its just me, the third one was okay it was pretty good, but the first would deffently be the best
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:33 am
These are all really good, and I will look for more poems of yours.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 4:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:46 pm
i really engoyed the first one! the other two (although good) were not my taste.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:58 pm
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