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KylianRetreana Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 4:48 pm
Okay, so maybe we're not all master poets and whatnot, but hey, who cares, right? I just thought that perhaps since this the creative section, someone might be interested...I have a couple poems of my own, which I will eventually get around to posting (along with that Inuyasha fanfic sweatdrop ), and many from my best friend, which I must first ask for permission to post...I don't think she'll mind, but it never hurts to show a little courtesy...
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 5:09 pm
KylianRetreana Okay, so maybe we're not all master poets and whatnot, but hey, who cares, right? I just thought that perhaps since this the creative section, someone might be interested...I have a couple poems of my own, which I will eventually get around to posting (along with that Inuyasha fanfic sweatdrop ), and many from my best friend, which I must first ask for permission to post...I don't think she'll mind, but it never hurts to show a little courtesy... lolz! yeah that would be cool! ^^ my friend is like a master at poems . .. me on the other hand . . . sweatdrop I just like to sing to what poems there are! XD 4laugh rofl
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BeautifullParanoiia Captain
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 5:58 pm
Well, allrighty then! Here's one of my shorter poems.
Sacrifices
Life from death,
Death from life.
Forever circling
In an endless dance.
People come, people go
Time passes all around me.
People always judge me by the way I look
They think I am just too young
To get it.
But I know.
I realize that life and death never really end
Ultimate knowledge is never gained
Happiness is always fleeting, never stays
And sacrifices must be made.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 5:38 pm
Umm i know i'm not in the guild...yet i hope but i really didn't want to wait for the reply and just headed in. *dont strangle me please>.>* I thought i would add one of my recent poems i did. This is my first non-romantic poem so don't think i'm depressed our anything.
A bunch of million faces
Hanging all up there
Crying tears and rivers
But no one seems to care
A bunch of million faces
Hanging all up there
Sending smiles, all the while
But no one seems to care
I’m crying tears of lakes and on
But I still don’t understand
The million faces hanging
They seem to never end
But in this day of Heavens Rains
Where showered crystals play
Beams of light escape the clouds
And brightens up my day.
So take in count, all the doubt,
The troubles that we’ve had
And weigh them with, the love we’ve missed
And soon you’ll understand.
A bunch of million faces
Hanging all up there
Crying tears and rivers
But no one seems to care
A bunch of million faces
Hanging all up there
The love we’ve missed
The tears we’ve kissed
But no one seems to care.
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BeautifullParanoiia Captain
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 5:43 pm
I love it--my poetry and song lyrics are actually quite similar.
Don’t
Don’t yell at me if you expect me not to cry.
Don’t assume that you are better than me.
Don’t cause my pain for your fun.
Don’t make fun of the way I look.
Don’t say things that hurt inside.
Don’t be so afraid of difference.
Don’t yell at me if you don’t want me to yell back.
Don’t hit me if you don’t want a fight.
Don’t turn your back on me, I wasn’t done.
Don’t imagine that I’m so weak.
Don’t be stupid enough to think I won’t fight back.
Don’t be so afraid to be my friend.
Don’t yell at me if I say the wrong thing.
Don’t lead me on the way you do.
Don’t lie to me, I can tell.
Don’t walk away, and leave me alone again.
Don’t leave me, I need you now.
Don’t be so afraid to love me.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 5:49 pm
OMG thats really good!! eek This ones not mine though this time, it's a poem from one of my favorite Inu fanfics.
I hear the drizzle on the road
Like a memory it falls
Soft and warm continuing
Tapping on my roof and walls
From the shelter of my mind
Through the window of my eyes
I gaze beyond the rain-drenched streets
To England where my heart lies
My thoughts are distracted and diffused
My thoughts are many miles away
They lie with you when you're asleep
And kiss you when you start your day
And the song I was writing is left undone
Don't know why I waste my time
Writing songs I can't believe
With words that tear and strain to rhyme
So you see I have come to doubt
All that I once held as true
I stand alone without beliefs
The only truth I know is you
And as I watch the drops of rain
Weave their weary paths and die
I know that I am like the rain
And there but for the grace of you go I...
And as I watch the drops of rain
Weave their weary paths and die-
I know that I am like the rain,
There but for the grace of you go I...
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BeautifullParanoiia Captain
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 5:53 pm
Aww, *kawaii*!
Here's another short one. It actually kind of reminds me of Bleach....
Fight
Fight to live, live to fight.
Fight to see the sunrise
One last time.
Fight for love,
Honor, integrity.
Fight to keep the evil away.
Fight to keep yourself
In tact.
Fight to slay your demons
Fight to help with mine.
If you must fight,
Let it be for the right things
Fighting to live another day.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 6:01 pm
Hey that does remind you of Bleach doesn't it. And it also reminds me of Punch! to. LOL so coooooooll!!! heart heart Huh? Great i gotta go but before i do i'll aslo add alittle quicky from the same fanfic. (it's a cut version though.)
Lovers forever..face to face
My city or mountain
Stay with me stay
I need you to love
I need you today
Give me your leather
Take form me...my lace.
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BeautifullParanoiia Captain
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 6:18 pm
Aaaaawwww; that must be an adorable fan-fic! So kawaii!
Questions and Answers
Staring at nothing, seeing everything.
The darkness engulfs me
The moon is obscured.
Night time holds all the questions
And answers.
If people could look deeper
They would see me.
And also everything I see
In the darkness so bright.
No one seems to look quite deep enough.
They try to ward off the darkness of night
With mechanical lights.
People are afraid
Of what they do not understand.
And they are angry
At what they are afraid of.
So they shun me, claim I am not one of them
Because I see it all
In the darkness of night.
What is night, after all?
The opposite of day?
Nay, it is simply dark light.
The light that leads us on
After the darkest of days
Saying it will all be ok.
Just wait till tomorrow, and if not then
Then the next day
And I will always be here to comfort you
In the darkness so bright.
OPh my; that's my last one besides lyrics O.O'! Better get to work on some new poems, girly!! (is talking to self)
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:25 pm
That one seems to draw me in and suck me right up, i cant seem to stop reading it over and over again. I find it...hmm i cant say the right word but i obviously like it. Anyways i just singing to myself this particular poem/song to myself so i'll post it.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I like to sneeze
All over you!!
Yeah i know i'm a weenie. mrgreen
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BeautifullParanoiia Captain
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:28 pm
........................interesting.
I just wrote this one the other night.
Watching Clouds
A cloud just blocked out the sun
It’s also passed over my grave.
Looking up, I see not bunnies and rainbows
But the horrible destruction
You’ve put me through.
A cloud has cast its shadow on me
It mirrors the darkness in my heart.
The world has been a cruel place to me
As well as you have been cruel.
Too cruel to imagine, such is the pain you’ve put me through.
A rain cloud hovers above me waiting to shed its tears
But like myself, it can not bring them to fall.
Why do you not cry, little cloud?
Someone has hurt you so much that you are incapable
Of ridding yourself of those painful drops lingering in your lashes.
I’ve come here hoping to find peace of mind and heart
But instead it’s furthered my sadness.
The clouds each resemble this pain
The pain that you’ve so generously given.
How can I repay you for this?
How shall I make you feel
All the pain, and the tears that I will never cry.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 2:44 pm
Your such of good poet you should be proud. I haven't posted much becuase most of mine are from elementary and sound gay. My most resent one is freakin 3 pages long front to back and i'm afraid to post it hear so i'll just post another poem that's not mine. (it's another short version though)
I love you more than all that's on the planet
Moving walking talking breathing
You know it's true
Oh babe it's so funny
You almost don't believe it
As every voice is hanging from the silence
Lamps are hanging from the ceiling
Like a lady tied to her manners
I'm tied up to this feeling
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BeautifullParanoiia Captain
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 4:17 pm
Lol. Thankyou whee
This is actually a song; but it was originally a poem.
The world is full of darkness,
The world is full of despair.
People do not realize
That their lives have come to nothing.
Walking past you, looking busy,
They just don’t understand
That none of it really matters,
Why can’t they understand?
The world is full of hatred,
The world is full of rage.
Everyone hates eachother,
And they still don’t understand
That if the hatred doesn’t stop,
This twisted, crazy, mixed-up world
Will come to an early end.
Why does everyone s**t
On other people’s emotions?
They just don’t ever see
That other people need their help.
Everyone is lonely,
In this crazy world.
They never understand it,
The emotions racing through their minds.
Why can’t they all just get along,
So the world it will survive?
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 2:20 pm
Heh...I don't write much poetry, but the two I'm happy with I have been told are good...so here's my most recent--and, admittedly, much shorter--poem...
Forgotten Angel
I am an angel, but I have Fallen.
I have no place to call my own.
I know not where I belong,
For I have been forgotten.
The Devil thinks I am too good,
But Heaven will never accept me.
Where, then, can I go?
A place among humans?
Or shall I wander, alone?
I wish I only knew;
If I tried, could I be like you?
If I tried, maybe I might,
But I must come through my own plight.
Two of you? That isn't right.
I must find myself on my own.
I'm not just another clone.
I want to be me,
But who am I?
A has-been angel, who cannot fly?
What does it all mean? I don't understand.
Chaos, disorder--the plight of man.
I am not the Devil, I am not evil.
I am not God, I am not perfect.
But nor am I human; they don't understand
What I could be, what I could do, all that I am.
But if I'm not these things, then what am I?
If only I knew, maybe I wouldn't try
So hard not to be one thing or another.
I could be happy, I could be free
To just be content with just being me.
Just to be me, what would it be like
Not to be lost, not to be searching,
To just live my life?
Maybe I don't belong anywhere;
But when I am whole,
Wherever I choose to be, I will finally be home.
Dedicated to everyone who has ever felt lost, alone, like they didn't belong, or like they just didn't know who they were anymore. We've all had our moments, we've all been afraid--but we're not the only ones.
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KylianRetreana Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 5:03 pm
That is so true, and i've definetly felt that. I love yours and Paranoia's poems that's as much as i can say. Here is a poem of mine that i did today. It was sort of a last minute thing, i forgot i had a poem assignment due today and i hadn't done one. So here it is
All becuase of you.
Why cant you see? It’s all just to much
I’m losing a battle only I can see
So untie my chains, let loose the lace
Let my wings furl out, let me fly, let me free
You told me you loved me, you told me to stay
You told me you cared, gave hope in my days
Caught in your arms, held in your tight embrace
Caught by your lips, mine, forever and a day
The rain drops fly by, untouchable, even to me
Escaping my grasp, unwilling to set me free,
To wash away the pain, that you inflicted in me
And lighting my heart, the one broken inside me
I told you I loved you, told you to stay
Told you I cared, gave hope in your days
Caught you in my arms, held you in a tight embrace
Caught your lips with mine, gave sweet kiss away
Now the light shines through, awakening a new day
But here I am still, my wishes blown away
I’m dieing inside, I’m losing a battle only I can see
And all because of you, you had to die on me
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