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Daddy Kwick v2.0

PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:40 pm


To all the people on this site anymore...I been on another site and tearin' it up..SO i will challenge all the people on here...Shin...anybody that thinks they are good...where ya'll at?
PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:00 pm


If I can find time to get on here again I'll battle you. It's been so long. My last battle was with Fujin in September 06', but I never got to post my verse since I didn't get internet access again til 3 months later. I wrote out 40 ******** lines but never got to post them. So I'm not promising anything, just leave this open for me in case I manage to make it back. And don't come soft. I haven't fallen off a millimeter. If anything, I've gotten better. ninja

Terrence Urameshi


Daddy Kwick v2.0

PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:43 am


Word. same here. I will always keep this open for my protege. mrgreen
PostPosted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:18 pm


like I said, I have no idea when I'll be back, so don't post a verse before me. I'm telling you now, I'm just going to go with however many bars I feel like doing. I'm gonna give this forum something it hasn't had in a long time...

Terrence Urameshi


Daddy Kwick v2.0

PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 10:00 am


word, same here. It's going to be epic! cool
PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 1:12 pm


i hope i'll be around to see this battle.

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Terrence Urameshi

PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:32 pm


I've owned this b***h wit some of my worst lines
can't see why you're a veteran textee
stopped ya heart wit my first rhyme,
so I already got Daddy dead-beat!
slice ya appendix; cuz since C4 every verse you write is a gimmick
calls me protege; but he's the only master you'll see bite his apprentice!
cuz if you count how many dicks he rode, how thongs he done been in,
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you'll see why he better off doin songs for the women!
now watch disaster leak, cuz I'm Kwick to Kas defeat!
I bet his raps just cease after another match wit me
as for his blows?
I'm denyin this p***y's like a Catholic Priest!
no hope for this frail lame,
call it impaired judgement when I slam the gavel on ya ailed brain
so I'm chiseling ya flesh and letting the girth chafe
cuz we see more fault in ya lines than settings for earthquakes!
scared of complex lyrics; it's like every battle this b***h is in peril
I'll put the scope to ya Kwick! and I aint talkin physician's apparel!
ya rap s**t is dull, I'll smash in ya skull,
and have ya brains comin through ya nose like they did to the Pharoah!
find just 1 vet who think this b*****d's tight
cuz in battle, Kwick's <******** himself over more than hermaphrodites!
another Kwick catastrophe, sad to see 50+ battles aint improvin ya vision
I slice at ya frame and expose more of ya skin than swimsuit editions!
when it comes to bein skilled, I'll sprout wings 'fore this dude is mentioned
cuz its quicker than REM cases the way ya s**t losin attention!
just a f*****t who licks nuts...
we all know when rappin, ya s**t sucks
so I'll destroy ya Kwick,
and put ya back to floor more than what happens in sit-ups!!
I'll leave ya shattered, broken, battered, and bruised
when I crack Kwick open and spatter his fluids
got a fetish for handlin Jews!
only victory you see from this cat is when battlin n00bs!
causin havoc with moves when I let my tactics engage
bit me and yourself against Raskit!
no wonder people say ya rap's a disgrace
let me cut back to the chase, I'm sick of this biter's rhymes!
so I'll bury this minor's lines like collapsin of caves!
b*****d! pwn me? you can't harm me, fake!
you wouldn't have hostile in-tent if you was a terrorist in a army base!
shook from this exceptional mc, just what I'd expect from this loser
cuz my diss-connects to ya more than defective computers!
went from RD to bein another fake vet
nowadays, you'll find Kwick on more dicks than latex
so go back to p***s rap and battle in stealth
cuz literally, ya verses nothin (vs. nothin) like you rap to ya self
punches leavin Daddy chest torn instantly
I'ma show this b***h aint sick without tests for histamines!
time to put ya fate in lyric-induced comas,
so as for the outcome, lets just say the rest is history!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:39 pm


lol, I forgot the noob to vet ratio here is like 20 to 1. XD Alright C4 is a nickname for another mc named Da Realest, who kwick beat 7 or 8 times. the "kwick to Kas defeat" line was a reference to a sub-crew Kwick used to be in, called Kwickly Kas Death. It was him and another mc named Greenmeenee Kas. And REM is an expression for Rapid Eye Movement. Losin attention, get it? And finally RD is a crew that Kwick disjoined from, called the Renegade Disciples. I think that'll do.

Terrence Urameshi


Daddy Kwick v2.0

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:35 pm


lol, aight. Give me a few...imma have one up soon...
PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 1:12 pm


YO, terrance, sit back relax and shut the ******** up son...
double takin' it now, your the one lookin up to me when you begun...
now you wanna talk s**t, man, i thought you quit...
prolly cause you mad kwick was stealin ya ********' hypocrit, it's insane the s**t you flippin...
like ya walking on banana's the way ya s**t's slippin'
I know I can beat you son, but TU I'm hopin for a concussion...
you havin heart's debatable, so I'll leave ya chest open for discussion...
clashin with kwick's a no-no, check the flames I flowin' hoe...
n' I'd swear that you're gay, but cussin about it won't change u homo...
you try actin it, but I'm harder, I'm comin bolder with a sadistic grin...
n' pay the cost, n' when I charge you.. it'll be my shoulder to ya chin...
postin' pics of me in my underware, stop dickridin' and get original...
n' the way you postin' this bullshit...might as well paste in the urinal...
get off this s**t...you a MOD, HA don't make me laugh i'm gettin mad...
n' seems like makin' newbs MODs has become the new fad...
punches crush ya chest, whether or not you like, I get respect...
n' if you're a cut above the rest, it's cuz my knife is in ya neck...
playoff dreams is shattered, I know you fear it when it's u i'm dumpin....
b***h I leave you so rattled... people can hear it when your comin...
check it.. even though everytime I clocked you, you fell...
Imma gain weight on purpose, just to use the new notch on my belt...
I try to be niceto you, cuz s**t gets serious, when ya mad at me..
I always catch a kick from you... then twist ya leg n' snap ya knee!
I have no choice but to own you... n' hoe at the most you're my clone...
tired of you callin me soft... b***h harden up ya voice on the phone...
you borderlinee wack... on my d**k so bad, in fact ya dissin's all an act
in beef, you rush to my defense so kwick you'd sack my quarterback...
back when you were young nad new, you could never hold me down
n' you should've known better then, but hey at least you know me now
molded you, taught you how to be hard, so you could bomb for me...
didn't teach you all the tricks, but dog we'll get to ya mom shortly...
Bringin' up C4, it's something you could never accomplish, thats a fact...
you beat him like twice...i'm 4x better than you...and you callin' me whack
you still don't get it, I'll hit you so hard ya mug'll split...
cuz simply, you're the best, it's complexity you struggle with...
stupid ********, I'm the king at this s**t, you shoulda knew to duck...
I could never kneel before you, nobody's quicker than you to suck...
n' we know you can't handle juvy son, so just keep on runnin...
you're always lookin out for #1... hopin you don't see me comin!
I'm done, I'm out. but if you act cocky, get ya s**t kicked...
next time you run ya mouth, you better take the rest of ya body with it!

Over and out!

Daddy Kwick v2.0


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:10 am


Now truthfully i don't think i'm an adequete candidate to vote on this battle based on the fact that when it comes to a battle i'm a suker for punchlines
but meh u dont have to count me if u dont want to

the flows: meh, i could read it and understand how the verses flowed in your mind but to that extent, some lines made the verse choppy as it messed up the pattern of how the verse was mainly structured.

but of the two the more proper verse was: Terrance

Punchlines: Terrance, boy you got some punchlines in you, i thought kwick was done when i got 50% through kwick's verse, but that last 1/2 not only had a good number of punchlines, but a plethora of them were above average and mad me smirk at my comp, he had a weak start but a strong finish.

and if you guys really did talk on the phone, then i'd have to say this line was the hardest:

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tired of you callin me soft... b***h harden up ya voice on the phone...


If not, then it were these 2:

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Bringin' up C4, it's something you could never accomplish, thats a fact...
you beat him like twice...i'm 4x better than you...and you callin' me whack


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I could never kneel before you, nobody's quicker than you to suck...


terrance's best, from my view, was this:

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scared of complex lyrics; it's like every battle this b***h is in peril
I'll put the scope to ya Kwick! and I aint talkin physician's apparel!



The winner of this portion goes to: Kwick


BATTLE OVERALL:
o.k o.k, like i said, i'm a punchline man and since i couldnt go off much more on this battle in it's whole entireness, i'd have to say:

MY VOTE: DADDY KWICK

still great from both sides, you guys still got it.....but i never asked and i'm not planning to ask where in the hell that christmas picture of daddy kwick in his draws came from, that's BETWEEN YA'LL i want nothing to do with it, not playin yall i jus don't wanna know so i'm discarding the fact i ever saw it eek
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:37 am


Word. Tu, your going down son!

Daddy Kwick v2.0


Mr. Fascist

PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:54 pm


I vote for Daddy Kwick too. I understood the flow a lot easier and found myself laughing/smiling/understanding his portion better than TUs. TU definitly had good punchlines but the constant hits about sex got kind of boring to me after awhile. Kwick had more say/flow in my opinion.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 6:26 pm


I'm not even gonna bother to touch on the fact that Kwick was clearly fed off a few of my bars, but whatever. It isn't like there was a rule made against it. surprised I"m surprised to see that someone even came and voted. At least this wasn't a one-sided battle like our last two. cool Oh, and Fascist, the only bar where I mentioned "sex" was when I said "count how many dicks he rode", and "on more dicks than latex". Otherwise I never mentioned Kwick having sex with anyone. I have no idea when the next time I log on will be, so until then, ~1~.

Terrence Urameshi


Kinetic-Kidd

PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:25 pm


This battle had me laughing and "oohing" at the same time. I'll do the classic vote.

Punches: TU
Kwick already lost this one in my eyes when he fed off of TU's C4 line, him posting a picture. But even if he didn't this was close. When Kwick's "cut above the rest/knife in ya neck" bar was one of his best, and "i could never kneel before you/ no one's quicker to suck" were your illest bars. Good s**t man. As for TU, "denyin this p***y/Catholic Priest", "fault in ya lines/settings for earthquakes", "******** himself over/hermaphrodites" were your best. TU stayed more consistent with his punchlines, and that's why he took this. Kwick was somewhat consistent, but he had to rely on profanity and the dickridin punches way too much.

Personals:TU
I like how you both mentioned each others names, clearly showing that the punches were meant for each other and no one else. However, the "bite his apprentice" line from TU was what decided it. If you clicked the link, you saw that Kwick previously recylced some lines, and bit TU in an earlier battle. TU used nameplay, and personals that were on point the whole verse. He takes this one as well.

Multis: TU
Terrence hands down. Need I explain? Multis show finesse in an mc, and TU found a way to incorporate them and still make his punches ill. A lot of cats tend to try to hard and overdo it, but it all seemed to balance.

Flow: Tie
Good to see you cats can flow. TU had way more vocab in his flow, but I think that doesn't make too much of a difference.

Altogether Terrence had similes, wordplay and metaphors that Kwick lacked. His verse was just more impressive to me. Sometimes, just good punchlines aren't enough to cut it, and that's why more in-depth parts of the punches like personals are important.

My overall vote goes to TERRENCE URAMESHI.

But don't get it twisted, this battle was a lot closer than my breakdown made it look. Good job to both of you, and I hope we see some more mc's like you show up in the future. Otherwise, this dome is going to crash and burn. burning_eyes
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