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GtHb

PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:23 pm


What do you think?
It's my first REAL style of anime. It has the curves in its head and I got detailed with a few things.
I'm not done with the and whip so yea.
What do you think?
Any improvements that need to be added?!
I'm serious, I want some constructive critizism.
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Just drew that, I did what you all told me, well some of it.
Yes the eyes are ugly! I can never make them right I need to practice and I did not draw the hand yet.

So ya, more CC needed please.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:53 pm


It needs a face, that's the only improvement I can think of right now... but it's 2 AM so yeah...

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:56 pm


Dukes
It needs a face, that's the only improvement I can think of right now... but it's 2 AM so yeah...
C. Brothers...




I just added the eyes and their different then usual.
I'll scan it right now.


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:02 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:13 pm


That looks awesome =D

If you want some constructive criticism I'd try playing with the shoulders and neck a bit, they seem a little... Squashed.

I LOVE the hair and the shoes, though!
And the bottom of the skirt is really natural and... Flow-y.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:13 pm


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And a nose and a mouth, cool! biggrin

I'll give better feedback tomorrow... now someone please tell padme to let me sleep!

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:27 pm



///+ Buzz Bro... +///


the way the shirt...ummm... wrinkles? (I can't think of a better word right now >.<)... yeah, it makes her look, like she should eat something.



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 4:15 am


Constructive critisism? Here we are.

The hands are too small; work on your hands.

The face it too long and the ears are too high. If you want long faces though(if it's part of your 'style') work on placing your ears a bit lower.

She's a girl, so she needs hips. Actually, just give everyone hips. It makes them look less like a stick. Girls just need more hips, like more of an hour-glass kind of shape.
Like. Uh... This is a good example:
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This drawing, you maybe wouldn't otherwise be able to tell it was a girl, but the hips give it away. Girls have slimmer shoulders and bigger hips, like I said, hourglass-y shape.
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And this would be a boy, because of the lack of a definition of hips, and broader shoulders.

See what I'm saying? Cool.

Other than that, I'm officially amazed at how well you can do legs and shoes. For some awkward reason I could never quite get shoes to look nice.

edit: sorry for the large animated-ness, I didn't have any of my other s**t on-hand.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 7:28 am


Every artist has trouble drawing hands; even after practicing for a long time, it's still pretty hard to get them to look right. Just keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it.

Q's right about the hips, though; they should be well-defined and noticeable on females. Try moving the belt a little bit higher (around her elbow level) and have it pinch the fabric of the dress. Give it a shot. I tend to draw belts or sashes on girls with loose or baggy clothing. I find that it helps define the waist and hips much better and keeps the overall outfit from looking awkward.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 7:35 am


You've improved a lot. But like everyone's saying, you need to work on the torso. The hips and waist need to be more defined and you need to work on how the clothes fold.

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GtHb

PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:22 am


C. Brothers...



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:50 am


>.< I don't like the pants. And the shoes need more detail. Other than that, I like it. :3

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:54 am


Padme Potter of Hobbiton
>.< I don't like the pants. And the shoes need more detail. Other than that, I like it. :3
C. Brothers...




I know I hate them too but I didn't want it just to be a dress and I lack imagination with clothes. >.> <.< The shoes arn't done.


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:03 pm


This one's better. Only thing I really have to say about it is that one leg (the one with the band on it) looks like it's twisted in. >< ...Maybe re-doing the direction of the shoe would fix that.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:07 pm


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That is so much better than I could do.

as for what I think needs to be worked on,I think the shoulders still looked a little to hunched and I find something wrong with the feet point in towards each other like that,it looks very unnatural and like one of the legs are broken.
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