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Metal-Strawberry99

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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:21 pm

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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 1:48 pm

UPDATE! (last pic)

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Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 6:21 pm

umm, youre pretty good... from what i've seen.. *cough*

1) the face is kinda.. um, the lips bother mehhh... the clothes are really pretty, but the wrinkles look kinda.. unnatural. well, it doenst REALLY matter, but it would be good if the pearls had the little reflected light instead of making it dark on the edge.. like this: User Image

2) urrr, you could use some practice on the hair.. and the clothing folds(again) XDD the leaves/feet kinda looks unnatural.. (only some) and the hands need practice..(i suck at hands too)

3) i like this one so far--i love the perspective!!(i suck at drawing those kinda perspective!! i tried.. trust meh.. -__-) its really the same thing i said before--hands/clothes/hair... but i really like the pattern on her shirt!

4) oooh, their clothes are really cute!! i say the body proportions are little weird.. kinda off.. and the legs are too straight--not natural..

5) the hair seemss... little weird.. and the face features are.. kinda distorted??

6) DD= they seem stiff.. same thing i said.. there face.. hand.. body.. but youre better at backgrounds then meh. DD= i SUCK at backgrounds...

7) FACE looks weird..! and the foot is too small.. i like the upper part, but not the lower part..

foo, that took a long time.. XDD do you use markers??

Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 7:10 pm

ogum536

umm, youre pretty good... from what i've seen.. *cough*

1) the face is kinda.. um, the lips bother mehhh... the clothes are really pretty, but the wrinkles look kinda.. unnatural. well, it doenst REALLY matter, but it would be good if the pearls had the little reflected light instead of making it dark on the edge.. like this: User Image

2) urrr, you could use some practice on the hair.. and the clothing folds(again) XDD the leaves/feet kinda looks unnatural.. (only some) and the hands need practice..(i suck at hands too)

3) i like this one so far--i love the perspective!!(i suck at drawing those kinda perspective!! i tried.. trust meh.. -__-) its really the same thing i said before--hands/clothes/hair... but i really like the pattern on her shirt!

4) oooh, their clothes are really cute!! i say the body proportions are little weird.. kinda off.. and the legs are too straight--not natural..

5) the hair seemss... little weird.. and the face features are.. kinda distorted??

6) DD= they seem stiff.. same thing i said.. there face.. hand.. body.. but youre better at backgrounds then meh. DD= i SUCK at backgrounds...

7) FACE looks weird..! and the foot is too small.. i like the upper part, but not the lower part..

foo, that took a long time.. XDD do you use markers??

WOW !!! thank you soooo much!!! i especially love the pearl example! i see how u mean... i see faces, hands, and clothing fold are my biggest weakness, as are guys lol. i would LOVE to see ur art sometime! and yes i use markers n.n

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PastInBlood

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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:51 am

She pretty much took the words out of my mouth. sweatdrop But yeah...You have very nice coloring and design techniques.

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 3:56 pm

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ogum536

umm, youre pretty good... from what i've seen.. *cough*

1) the face is kinda.. um, the lips bother mehhh... the clothes are really pretty, but the wrinkles look kinda.. unnatural. well, it doenst REALLY matter, but it would be good if the pearls had the little reflected light instead of making it dark on the edge.. like this: User Image

2) urrr, you could use some practice on the hair.. and the clothing folds(again) XDD the leaves/feet kinda looks unnatural.. (only some) and the hands need practice..(i suck at hands too)

3) i like this one so far--i love the perspective!!(i suck at drawing those kinda perspective!! i tried.. trust meh.. -__-) its really the same thing i said before--hands/clothes/hair... but i really like the pattern on her shirt!

4) oooh, their clothes are really cute!! i say the body proportions are little weird.. kinda off.. and the legs are too straight--not natural..

5) the hair seemss... little weird.. and the face features are.. kinda distorted??

6) DD= they seem stiff.. same thing i said.. there face.. hand.. body.. but youre better at backgrounds then meh. DD= i SUCK at backgrounds...

7) FACE looks weird..! and the foot is too small.. i like the upper part, but not the lower part..

foo, that took a long time.. XDD do you use markers??

WOW !!! thank you soooo much!!! i especially love the pearl example! i see how u mean... i see faces, hands, and clothing fold are my biggest weakness, as are guys lol. i would LOVE to see ur art sometime! and yes i use markers n.n

meh deviantart... youre very welcome!! 3nodding

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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:10 pm

Wow, I absolutly LOVE the style, the fashion and clothes. Love the detailing on the clothes, very creative.

and strawberries FTW!

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 6:19 pm

To me, they look kind of flat and the people kind of stiff. I think the shoulders are probably the largest problem. The drawings content are awesome though biggrin , the details in the clothing are astounding and very imaginative. verry impressive cool

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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:52 am

There's a lot of imagination put into these designs, but there are some qualities that are not so good... from what I'm seeing here, if you had a more complete understanding of anatomy (simply the way parts of the body fit together), you would be well on your way.

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:06 pm

:OO Woww. I just joined like today, and I was browsing all the forums and stuff...and then I saw this. ^__^ GODD! You are like heecka good, what do you use? Like, photoshop? This stuff is amazingg. x]

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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 5:02 pm

I really like how much details you put in the clothes. Keep on, please <3
edit: I love the first one

You will improve your hands for sure. Perhaps you shold ask somebody if you could draw his or her hand. Sometimes it's better to study the real model. When you get better it takes only fifteen minutes or less to draw a good hand. A good friend of mine gave me the advice.

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