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squinty1989

PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:00 pm


what do you think is better?!
writing poems or normal writings?!

and if anyone has any poem or writing would they kindly post it here?!
IF you want to i'm not forcing anyone!

i'll try and write somethings here...
but it might be about love or pain.. sadness.. things like that.. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:13 am


if i write something it would be about love or pain also. or happy endings.mostly love stories

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squinty1989

PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:41 am


green_sparkles44
if i write something it would be about love or pain also. or happy endings.mostly love stories

anything will be fine! 3nodding
PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:28 am


Topic: Can't Live Without You
By: Squinty

Everytime i look at you,
i get this weird feeling inside me.
When i want to express it i get scared !!
I'm afraid what i'll say may ruin our friendship or DESTROY it!! =S

I love everything about you and i will always continue loving you until i die.
I tell you everything because your one of my best friends and i trust you with my life!! =)

I know i might've hurt you or annoyed you.
But plz forgive me, in the end, we're all humans.
And humans make mistakes.

I wish if i knew what i rly want.
Sometimes i want you as my BEST FRIEND and sometimes i want MORE!!

Hope we stay best friends till we die. . .
I never met a person like you !! =D

I just CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU!!




P.S: my writings are.. short..
sweatdrop

squinty1989


A_Anime

PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:33 pm


i like poems better..they're usually shorter.. but hard to understand sometimes.. i have a few poems that i can post up later.. from my other computer
PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:50 pm


My poems:

Allpoetry.com/Aeoess

Oh, and poems are way better. xp

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green_sparkles44
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 5:37 am


It's just something I wrote to put in my profile about the way I feel towards my boy friend.
You probably read it already, but if you haven't here it is:


Life is beautiful when you are in love. You are blessed with the greatest things, of having that person you truly love at your side. Knowing that whenever you need comfort and care, you can turn to that person you love.

I have learnt with time, that true love never comes easy.

Sacrificies are made along the way, each and every single day. Just so that you know, that he would always be at your side.

I can truthfully say that:
I have found my soul mate, my lover, my best friend, my supporter, my doctor, my teacher, my husband, my hobby and most importantly, My Companion For Life.

Whenever i look into his eyes, i see love, understanding,passion, joy, and a loving future together with him. Its the greatest feeling ever. To look into his eyes and get lost.

I see a future with him together. But i have learnt to let everything unfold on its own.

The bonds that we share together is outrageously strong. Bonds, that no other than me and him can understand and feel.

I pray to God, that i don't have to lose him in this lifetime.
For i want to spend this lifetime with him and the lifetime in the hereafter.

PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 12:11 am


..............
you really love him! 3nodding
good writting.. better then mine i think! sweatdrop

squinty1989


green_sparkles44
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 4:18 am


squinty1989
..............
you really love him! 3nodding
good writting.. better then mine i think! sweatdrop

no your writing was great. i loved it. jus put all of your heart into it and you'd be surprise.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:21 am


green_sparkles44
squinty1989
..............
you really love him! 3nodding
good writting.. better then mine i think! sweatdrop

no your writing was great. i loved it. jus put all of your heart into it and you'd be surprise.


i'll try that!
actually i did! 3nodding
but i might not show it off here! sweatdrop

squinty1989


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 7:32 pm


Here's one I think you guys would like:

"The Spiked Punch of Love"

I see a forest full of life
When I stare into your eyes
Like there is no place that I'd rather be
Away from the madness around me
In some paradise with you
So that I forget to care

Let's not waste this moment
Stay close to me
So if I died tomorrow morning
You would have a nice memory
Colorful flowers
The ones I hand to you
Could be the ones I hold
As I lay in my casket
Smiling

The sun makes you glow
as though you are my bright light
I may see in my end
You bring me peace
That I've never really known
So let's never say goodbye
For when I'm in Heaven
I'll be the first to say "Hello"

Soar through the skies with me
In our world of illusion and passion
As though there is nothing to stand in our way
Touch the clouds with me
And race me to the end

Then we part again
Go off to our duties
Passing by cliche couples
Holding hands
Only hoping to find my "happy place"
Until I see you again
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 2:12 am


Aeoess
Here's one I think you guys would like:

"The Spiked Punch of Love"

I see a forest full of life
When I stare into your eyes
Like there is no place that I'd rather be
Away from the madness around me
In some paradise with you
So that I forget to care

Let's not waste this moment
Stay close to me
So if I died tomorrow morning
You would have a nice memory
Colorful flowers
The ones I hand to you
Could be the ones I hold
As I lay in my casket
Smiling

The sun makes you glow
as though you are my bright light
I may see in my end
You bring me peace
That I've never really known
So let's never say goodbye
For when I'm in Heaven
I'll be the first to say "Hello"

Soar through the skies with me
In our world of illusion and passion
As though there is nothing to stand in our way
Touch the clouds with me
And race me to the end

Then we part again
Go off to our duties
Passing by cliche couples
Holding hands
Only hoping to find my "happy place"
Until I see you again


it has alot of meaning!
really great! 3nodding

squinty1989


Ren Mezuki

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 7:54 am


i wrote something...its now as goo as everyone elses stuff but i like it at least

I put on this fake smile and count my days
Waiting until this pain finally disappears
Want to feel whole; to feel human
I feel less than human
Less than worth it…
WORTHLESS!
That’s the word
I bleed in vain
I cut myself till I fall asleep
Cutting through looking fro a reason …
Looking for a purpose
My blood drips down in place of tears
I’m still wearing this fake smile
Pouring crimson regret
No one realizes this pain that stabs at me
The ghost that haunt me
The feeling of alone that’s inclosing my heart
I CUT myself more and more
Bleeding without cause
It’s just more pain for me to numb away
Why am I doing this?
What is wrong with me?
It’s to late now
My emotions have dried up dark red everywhere
With my pain spreading around me …
I am truly dead…
PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:42 am


Ren Mezuki
i wrote something...its now as goo as everyone elses stuff but i like it at least

I put on this fake smile and count my days
Waiting until this pain finally disappears
Want to feel whole; to feel human
I feel less than human
Less than worth it…
WORTHLESS!
That’s the word
I bleed in vain
I cut myself till I fall asleep
Cutting through looking fro a reason …
Looking for a purpose
My blood drips down in place of tears
I’m still wearing this fake smile
Pouring crimson regret
No one realizes this pain that stabs at me
The ghost that haunt me
The feeling of alone that’s inclosing my heart
I CUT myself more and more
Bleeding without cause
It’s just more pain for me to numb away
Why am I doing this?
What is wrong with me?
It’s to late now
My emotions have dried up dark red everywhere
With my pain spreading around me …
I am truly dead…


ok... yours was good..
but it's.. about cutting yourself to death? sweatdrop

squinty1989


Ren Mezuki

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:49 am


yeah i cut ...i have alot of issuses i have to resolve...
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