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Shariea

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 7:37 pm


~~ This character is underconstruction, critiques are welcome ~~

Questor Information
Username: Shariea
Mule SN's: None yet
IoDM Newbie? (Y/N): Newbie
Serum:Serum 54: meerkat
CODE for your quest banner(s):None yet ^^





Funds: 500k/???
PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:02 pm


Character Info: User Image

Name: Nicole Gray

Age 22

Weight 230

Hair color Dark chocolate brown

Hair length and style Her hair is worn long, never up unless on very rare occasions as she thinks it makes her face look fat..Its lightly wavy with a little bit of body and bounce.

Eye color Green

Ethnicity Caucasian

Status:single

Language English

EducationHighschool

Serum Serum #54-meerkat

Occupation: Making a living doesnt always mean doing a job you like, Nicole works in the local IGA grocery store making minium wage.

Family: The eldist of three children Nicole was expected to go out into the world and do great things. Her father, Alexander was a computer tecnition and her mother, Elisa, a homemarker. Her Sister Kelly is still in highschool and the youngest of her simblings, her brother Jason, is working his way through elementary.

Favorite Color: Blue

Phobias:Spiders, damn creepy things

Goals One of her long term goals is to lose weight, though mostly for apperance over health issues, its always been a dream of hers. To see if things really would be better for her if she was thin, if perhaps she could get a boyfriend without finding out it was all the butt of some cruel joke.

Another goal of hers was to become a graphic artists. Having self traied herself to draw for fun she was inspired to make a career out of it. It would be something she would love to do. Working at the store hardly gives her the funds to go onto collage, which is one of the reasons she signed up to be a basic lab rat at the labs. Being a test subject for minor pharasuicals was paying well, and with a few more tests she might have been able to pay her first semester at the local comunity collage.

Likes: The arts, steaming all the way from poerty and actings to drawings and sculptures. She as an avvid animal lover, likes the out doors and to go on nature walks.

Dislikes. Rude people, Large woman who wear clothing sizes too small for them. Being treated like she isnt good enough, Spiders, needles, Drama.

Fav Food: Cheesecake. <3

Character Appearance:

Nicole is tall for her gender standing at a proud 5'10". She is however also heavy set, though over all she isnt fat. She is a large woman, domanering dispite her meager additue towards life. Her face is rather round, though her eyes are her most interesting feature. Large, almost almond shaped green eyes framed in black lashes. Her lips are plain, but for the simple shine of chapstick. Over all not homely, but not a stand out knock out apperance either.

Normally Nicole can be seen wearing casual clothing, baggy if she can help it. Her breasts are moderatly sized and she does have a mild hour glass shape, although most of the time its hidden. Wide child bearing hips and 'thunder' thighs. Had she been a bit thinner she would be the typical impression of an Amazon woman.

Character Personality:
Strong willed, and meak dont normally go hand in hand, but this would be the chase when talking about Nicole. She has a deep set goal in mind, she'll go after it with a vengace. However her general additude when talking with others is meak. She doesnt normally speak unless spoken too, or unless she is hyper. Not very much a people person she tries to make herself seem invisable and to sink into the background, that way...people might not taunt her so much. Or she wont get attached to someone and find her heart broken, or her pride wounded.

How does your Character get to/why was your character chosen for the Island?

Nicole had been trying desperately to lose some weight, and she could use the extra money. Hearing of the lab by a quiet converstation between two people in the store she had gone down and signed herself up for some testing. Finding that it wasnt too bad to begin with and the pay was good, she signed herself up for a long term commitment to be in a sence a lab rat. Little did she know exactly what that would mean...

Items she will have with her:
A sketch book and pencils.

Shariea


Shariea

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:08 pm


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The meerkat is a small diurnal herpestid (mongoose) whose weight averages approximately 731 grams (1.61 pounds) for males and 720 grams (1.58 pounds) for females. Its long and slender body and limbs give it a body length of 25 to 35 cm (10 to 14 inches) and an added tail length of 17 to 25 cm (7 to 10 inches). Its tail is not bushy like all other mongoose species, but is rather long and thin and tapers to a black or reddish coloured pointed tip. The meerkat uses its tail to balance when standing vertical. Its face also tapers, coming to a point at the nose, which is brown. The eyes always have black patches surrounding them which help deflect the sun's glare. The meerkat has small, black, crescent-shaped ears that have the ability to close when digging to prevent sand entering.

Meerkats have strong, 2 cm (.8 inches) long, curved claws used for digging for prey and altering their underground burrows. They have four toes on each foot and long, slender limbs. The coat is usually fawn-coloured peppered with gray, tan, or brown with a silver tint. They have short, parallel stripes across their backs, extending from the base of the tail to the shoulders. The patterns of stripes are unique to each animal. The underside of the meerkat has no markings but the belly has a patch which is only sparsely covered with hair and shows the black skin underneath. The meerkat uses this area to absorb heat standing on its rear legs, usually early in the morning after cold desert nights.

Meerkats are primarily insectivores, but also eat lizards, snakes, spiders, plants, eggs and small mammals. Like all mongoose species, they are immune to many venoms, and eat scorpions (including the stinger) and some snakes, without fear of illness, poison or death. They have no excess body fat stores, so foraging for food is a daily need.


Meerkats are burrowing animals, living in large underground networks with multiple entrances which they leave only during the day. They are very social, living in colonies of up to about 40. Animals in the same group often groom each other to strengthen social bonds. The alpha pair often scent-mark subordinates of the group to express their authority, and this is usually followed by the subordinates grooming the alphas and licking their faces. This behavior is also usually practiced when group members are reunited after a short period apart. Most meerkats in a group are all siblings and offspring of the alpha pair.


Meerkat Suricata suricatta in Bristol ZooMeerkats demonstrate altruistic behaviour within their colonies; one or more meerkats stand sentry (lookout) while others are foraging or playing, to warn them of approaching dangers. When a predator is spotted, the meerkat performing as sentry gives a warning bark, and other members of the gang will run and hide in one of the many bolt holes they have spread across their territory. The sentry meerkat is the first to reappear from the burrow and search for predators, constantly barking to keep the others underground. If there is no threat, the sentry meerkat stops barking and the others feel safe to emerge.

Meerkats also babysit the young in the group. Females that have never produced offspring of their own often lactate to feed the alpha pair's young, while the alpha female is away with the rest of the group. They also protect the young from threats, often endangering their own lives. On warning of danger, the babysitter takes the young underground to safety and is prepared to defend them if the danger follows. If retreating underground is not possible, she collects all young together and lies on top of them.

Meerkats are the first non-human mammal species seen actively teaching their young. Children of most species learn solely by observing adults. Meerkat adults educate children how to eat a venomous scorpion. They will remove the stinger and help the pup learn how to handle the creature. [1]

Despite this altruistic behaviour, meerkats sometimes kill young members of their group. Subordinate meerkats have been seen killing the offspring of more senior members in order to advance their own offsprings' positions. [2]

Meerkats have been known to engage in social activities, including what appear to be wrestling matches and foot races.


Taken from wikipedia-Here
PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:09 pm


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Shariea


Shariea

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 9:04 pm


extra
PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 10:24 pm


I think you've got some good groundwork going for the character thus far. I like that she's on the plain n somewhat overweight side. I'm curious though, what are her interests? Hobbies? Dreams and goals (sure, they'll be smashed once she gets on the island, but it's good to know)?

Sylan


Shariea

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 11:02 pm


Sylan
I think you've got some good groundwork going for the character thus far. I like that she's on the plain n somewhat overweight side. I'm curious though, what are her interests? Hobbies? Dreams and goals (sure, they'll be smashed once she gets on the island, but it's good to know)?


These are things I was going to take the night to mull over, try to get a real feel for her, as thats a bit more of her personal side. Something people wouldnt know unless they knew her. You have to have dreams before they can be smashed on the island anyway right? *chuckles darkly* <.<

One of her most obvious goals would be to lose weight, more for apperance than for health. I think she's always wondered what It would be like to be thin...if she would see the world differntly then, or if she truely would be treated differntly as well.

As for long term goals in life, I dont know which of the many roads to take her down. Her parents had big dreams for her and she has fallen far short of the mark. So...was she a pre-teen modle when she was little? Her mother trying to live through her until she got fat? Or was she good at the arts? Still mulling all that over, I think she is going to be alot of fun once I work out all her kinks.

Thank you for the suggestion to add that stuff in. ^^ I hadnt really considered it off the top of my head, Yeah I needed to figure it out for myself, but posting it to where I and others can get more of a feel for her is a good idea.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 11:18 am


Added in some more info. ^^

Shariea


Shariea

PostPosted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 8:44 pm


*doodles some art*
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:18 pm


Wacky doodle time!

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Shariea


Bilious

Sparkly Wolf

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:23 pm


horray for some variety in body types on the island! biggrin everyone thus far I've seen has been around average or thin XD From a character design standpoint, this makes me happy X3
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 7:42 pm


I noticed that too *chuckles* I have noticed a few that have gotten heavy via their transformations but not many come to the island this way.

Shariea


Syrynx

Shameless Lunatic

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:30 pm


Let there be looove for the chubbiness. <3
PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:18 pm


*clings to Syr* Your little diagram you drew me helped muchly. ^^

Shariea


Syrynx

Shameless Lunatic

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:34 pm


^^ Glad I could help dear <3<3<3
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