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Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 9:43 pm
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Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 5:26 pm
I'm really digging this story, Prairie.
A couple of typos, like "rubber" instead of "rubbed" and "latter" (I would assume a mistake) instead of "later," but these are clearly menial and do nothing to dim the radiance of your narrative skill.
I look forward to an update. wink
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