█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Regular clothes / Hunter clothes █ACCESSORIES ▬ -- █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean █TATTOOS ▬ His master's tattoo █SCARS ▬ burn scars from his first time using his Semblance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ --
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ He is notorious for his famous pick pocketing skills. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ He can run at a speed faster than most kids his age █Other Talents ▬ A smooth talker who can hit on women easily / Is a natural guitar player as taught by his foster mother. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Is trained in Kung Fu. █Weakest Skill ▬ He can't take much hits, as it makes him more or less a glass cannon. █Other Skills ▬ good memory / pickup artist / ambidextrous
█LIKES █ ▬ Playing guitar █ ▬ talking to girls █ ▬ Alcohol █ ▬ Going on dates █ ▬ Exploring the countries █DISLIKES █ ▬ Getting slapped by girls across the cheek... which happens a lot. █ ▬ The Tribe █ ▬ Grimm █ ▬ Being accused as a coward █ ▬ The fear of losing his family for good. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Inari's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a hunter in hopes of picking up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. However, after his experience with his trainer, Inari seems to have forgone that dream in order to become more like a hero. Although, he does get embarrassed when others find out about his desire to be a hero, as most kids grew out of that dream by his age. He's also seen as somewhat of a strange child for holding no fear when approaching women older than him, virtually being the same age as his mother. █Vernacular ▬ American accent █Positive Traits ▬ Is loyal to any and every friend he meets. █Negative Traits ▬ Y'all better hide your women. He doesn't care if there's a wedding ring or they don't prefer men, he's gonna flirt with them one way or another...
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ If you were expecting a story of Inari being in this big family of prestigious hunters, you'd be wrong. The only thing that is true was that Inari did unknowingly belong to a lineage of hunters that were well known for their innovative combative abilities. The Kazama family were notoriously known as a dangerous mercenary group who were famous in the criminal underworld network of Remnant before the rise of The Tribe. If a job from high value target assassination, or outright revolt was what you wanted, the Kazama group was the go to, and that's the family Inari was born from. In reality, Inari Kazama was just your average ordinary guy in his village. He grew up with his adopted mother, father, and annoying older sister, without ever knowing he had any ties to being a hunter or even having a Semblance to speak of. When it did manifest, Inari would only use it for something petty like small magic tricks to impress girls, pull off stunts when playing pranks with his burning aura, and just for menial tasks here and there. If anything, Inari wanted nothing to do with his own abilities sometimes. He really just wanted to be an average kid who went to school, played sports, and hit on girls. It changed when Inari honestly had nowhere to go after most of the kingdoms fell, since he was separated from his family during the evacuation. Fast forward to a couple days later, Inari would be coming back to his family where he found their homes were destroyed by the Grimm invasion, while his family were nowhere to be found within the entire town. All he had to go on, was that their names weren't on the deceased victims reports. Inari decided that it was time he took it upon himself to become a hunter and train to fight. He would learn how to fight from a retired hunter in the village who helped with the evacuation, and the training was HELL ON EARTH! Each and every lesson felt like something no human could do if it were to get them killed. Inari would slowly and slowly do each and every one. After three years, his last lesson was to defeat his master. It took a whole year, but Inari managed to finally defeat his teacher. His graduation from this form of training, was to be given the master's tattoo that was on his back. A symbol from the very same group of hunters that his master was the leader of before the disbanding several years ago. Inari was now ready for Beacon Academy, where his lessons can get better from there on.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Oathkeeper Eclipse █ ▬ A short sword pistol which transforms and uses dust bullets as well as normal bullets █Melee Form ▬ Blade form - Switches to a single edged short sword. █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol form - Switches to a 12-round semi-auto, double action P226 SIG pistol that fires both dust bullets, and normal bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Can use .45 ACP bullets, and even Dust bullets. █ ▬ Because the weapons Inari has were scavenged from Atlas soldiers, they have a tendency to jam (1 on 6-sided dice roll) mid-transformation, and has heavy recoil when shooting the dust bullets.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a swiss army knife █ ▬ a taser █ ▬ ... █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Lightning dust bullets █ ▬ Rope
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █*AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes sharp claws that extends on the user's arms, giving them a beast like feature. The claws have the density of solid steel, able to withstand hard hits, being taken out by dust or even stronger aura. █*LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, that are sharp enough to cut through solid steel and resembles that of a Beowolf claw, having a duration of 2 posts before suffering a broken hand, as well as a cool down of 4 posts. (0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ the user's aura thickens and coats the user's left or right arm in the razor-sharp aura, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from heavy strains on his forearms, leaving him with bad bruising, and even fractured bones. The duration is up to 3 posts, before suffering damages, and must wait for 6 posts before using again. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2 Beast Limit ▬ The user can transfer the razor-sharp aura to both arms, generating the aura on his arms to resemble that of a Beowolf Alpha. During that time, the user can slice through metals stronger than steel, and auras and weaker aura. The user has two beast arms with razor sharp claws. The user's claws have a duration of 4 posts, before the user will suffer both fractured and badly bruised arms. The user must wait 8 posts before using it again. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3Grim Reaper ▬ The user deeply submerges himself into the aura, covering him into the full shape of the Beowolf Alpha. The user's aura begins to surge at maximum output, granting them power a hundred times greater than they are usually capable of as the sheer force of his claw strikes are hard enough to slash clean through solid objects, especially heavily reinforced steel and powerful aura users. The grim reaper causes the body to continually heat up until it's been severely burned from the inside-out, after a 5 post of duration. The user will take 2 weeks healing as well as a cool down period to even use his aura for 10 posts after the two week recovery period. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a finger to arm numbing sensation equal to that of having your hands or even arm tear muscle fibers. The higher the level, the more numbing the pains are, causing the user to feel the sensations of torn muscles and broken bones. A well-trained user can control the sensation and overcome the numbing sensation but, it takes years of patience and focus to achieve. The higher the level of the semblance surrounds the body, the more painful and taxing it is on the user.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Apathetic Writer
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█*NAME ▬ Inari Kazama █*AGE ▬ 16 █*FACTION ▬ Independant █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ The little rookie / Pervert / Manwhore █OCCUPATION ▬ Student hunter
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft, 5 in █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lbs
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Regular clothes / Hunter clothes █ACCESSORIES ▬ -- █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean █TATTOOS ▬ Mysterious Tattoo █SCARS ▬ burn scars from his first time using his Semblance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ --
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Pickpocketing █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ slightly abnormal speed █Other Talents ▬ A smooth talker who can hit on women easily. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Martial arts █Weakest Skill ▬ Low endurance █Other Skills ▬ musician / pickup artist / ambidextrous
█LIKES █ ▬ Playing guitar █ ▬ talking to girls █ ▬ Alcoholic drinks █ ▬ Going on dates █ ▬ Exploring the countries █DISLIKES █ ▬ His bandit group █ ▬ The Tribe █ ▬ Grimm █ ▬ Being accused as a coward █ ▬ Getting slapped by girls across the cheek... which happens a lot. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Inari's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a hunter in hopes of picking up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. However, after his experience with his trainer, Inari seems to have forgone that dream in order to become more like a hero. Although, he does get embarrassed when others find out about his desire to be a hero, as most kids grew out of that dream by his age. He's also seen as somewhat of a strange child for holding no fear when approaching women older than him, virtually being the same age as his mother. █Vernacular ▬ American accent █Positive Traits ▬ Is loyal to any and every friend he meets. █Negative Traits ▬ Y'all better hide your women. He doesn't care if there's a wedding ring or they don't prefer men, he's gonna flirt with them one way or another...
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ If you were expecting a story of Inari being in this big family of prestigious hunters, you'd be wrong. The only thing that is true was that Inari did unknowingly belong to a lineage of hunters that were well known for their innovative combative abilities. In reality, Inari Kazama was just your average ordinary guy in his village. He grew up with his adopted mother, father, and annoying older sister, without ever knowing he had any ties to being a hunter or even having a Semblance to speak of. When it did manifest, Inari would only use it for something petty like small magic tricks to impress girls, pull off stunts when playing pranks with his burning aura, and just for menial tasks here and there. If anything, Inari wanted nothing to do with his own abilities sometimes. He really just wanted to be an average kid who went to school, played sports, and hit on girls. It changed when Inari honestly had nowhere to go after most of the kingdoms fell, since he was separated from his family during the evacuation. Fast forward to a couple days later, Inari would be coming back to his family where he found their homes were destroyed by the Grimm invasion. Inari decided that it was time he took it upon himself to become a hunter and train to fight. He would learn how to fight from a retired hunter in the village who helped with the evacuation, and the training was HELL ON EARTH! Each and every lesson felt like something no human could do if it were to get them killed. Inari would slowly and slowy do each and every one. After two years, his last lesson was to defeat his master. It took a whole year, but Inari managed to finally defeat his teacher, and was ready for Beacon Academy, where his lessons can get better from there on.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Oathkeeper and Oblivion █ ▬ Two dual Dust pistol / daggers which transforms and uses dust bullets as well as normal bullets █Melee Form ▬ Blade form - Switches to a single edged short sword. █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol form - Switches to a semi-auto, double action P226 SIG pistol that fires both dust bullets, and normal bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Can use normal 9mm bullets, .45 ACP bullets, and even Dust bullets. █ ▬ Because the weapons Inari has were scavenged from Atlas soldiers, they have a tendency to jam mid-transformation, and has heavy recoil when shooting the dust bullets.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a wallet knife █ ▬ ... █ ▬ ... █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Lighter █ ▬ Bag of chips
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █*AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes hot like fire, with intense heat enough to burn through solid steel. The aura can be transferred from the user's physical body to an object, even going as far as to submerge one's self within their aura, allowing them to double their damage output. █*LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, with it's initial heat reaching at 200 degrees farenheit, adding to the sharpness of the claws. The user begins to experience first degree burns after three uses, but any more will worsen the burns up to third degree, damaging them badly. (0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ The user's aura generates an internal heat that reaches up to 400 degrees farenheit. The aura thickens and coats the user's arms, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from first to second degree burns on his forearms within three uses. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2 Beast Instinct ▬ The user can transfer the aura to other objects, but takes a lot of aura to generate the same heat and sharpness as that of a plasma cutter, reaching heat up to 1,000 degrees farenheit. The object must be capable of withstanding extreme heat, and the user must also be able to expend the amount of aura without leaving himself depleted. The user can do this for two tries before completely exhausting themselves. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 Grim Reaper ▬ The user has the ability to submerge himself with his own aura and thicken the density of his own aura to shapen himself to that of a beast (which most likely look like an Ursa) the user can use the enhanced aura to provide extra damage to his attacks, as well as sttengthen the effects the aura have on objects two times as stronger than level 2. The user will experience third degree burns heavily on certain parts or evennthe entiretiy of their entire body, as it is virtually head that melts skin right off the bones. The user can only use this once a day, and would take as much as two weeks to recover from burns, unless the user were to extend it, and risk dying of burning and heatstroke.(300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a seering burning sensation equal to that of having your enhanced body part in open fire. The higher the level, the hotter the "flames" are, causing the both target and user to feel the sensations of burning. A well trained user can control the sensation and overcome the burning sensation, but takes years of patience and focus to achieve. Those who do not possess it, will be limited down to five usage before suffering third degree burns. The higher the control, the lesser the limits.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Youroka Kage
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Apathetic Writer
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖ I need to know more about the tattoo. ❖ I need you to expand of your archetype section. I need to know how good/bad you are at these things ❖ So with your fear, you are afraid of being slapped, but it happens all the time? That's not a valid fear. ❖ I need to know more about the family that he comes from, as that sounds like a plot device. ❖ For your primary weapon you would only be allowed one of the swords for now. However when you hit 150 posts, you could obtain the other one. This was put into place on 10/15 ❖ Daggers and Short swords are not the same thing... ❖ For the description, I can't allow it to double the damage input, because that would mean that your post count would always be doubled, and you aren't allowed to do that. ❖ For all levels, you need post limits for how long you can use these abilities. That will let me gauge how powerful this all is.
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Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2019 11:03 pm
The-DJ-Ghost
The-DJ-Ghost & Inari Kazama █ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Inari Kazama █*AGE ▬ 16 █*FACTION ▬ Independant █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ The little rookie / Pervert / Manwhore █OCCUPATION ▬ Student hunter
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft, 5 in █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lbs
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Regular clothes / Hunter clothes █ACCESSORIES ▬ -- █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean █TATTOOS ▬ Mysterious Tattoo █SCARS ▬ burn scars from his first time using his Semblance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ --
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Pickpocketing █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ slightly abnormal speed █Other Talents ▬ A smooth talker who can hit on women easily. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Martial arts █Weakest Skill ▬ Low endurance █Other Skills ▬ musician / pickup artist / ambidextrous
█LIKES █ ▬ Playing guitar █ ▬ talking to girls █ ▬ Alcoholic drinks █ ▬ Going on dates █ ▬ Exploring the countries █DISLIKES █ ▬ His bandit group █ ▬ The Tribe █ ▬ Grimm █ ▬ Being accused as a coward █ ▬ Getting slapped by girls across the cheek... which happens a lot. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Inari's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a hunter in hopes of picking up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. However, after his experience with his trainer, Inari seems to have forgone that dream in order to become more like a hero. Although, he does get embarrassed when others find out about his desire to be a hero, as most kids grew out of that dream by his age. He's also seen as somewhat of a strange child for holding no fear when approaching women older than him, virtually being the same age as his mother. █Vernacular ▬ American accent █Positive Traits ▬ Is loyal to any and every friend he meets. █Negative Traits ▬ Y'all better hide your women. He doesn't care if there's a wedding ring or they don't prefer men, he's gonna flirt with them one way or another...
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ If you were expecting a story of Inari being in this big family of prestigious hunters, you'd be wrong. The only thing that is true was that Inari did unknowingly belong to a lineage of hunters that were well known for their innovative combative abilities. In reality, Inari Kazama was just your average ordinary guy in his village. He grew up with his adopted mother, father, and annoying older sister, without ever knowing he had any ties to being a hunter or even having a Semblance to speak of. When it did manifest, Inari would only use it for something petty like small magic tricks to impress girls, pull off stunts when playing pranks with his burning aura, and just for menial tasks here and there. If anything, Inari wanted nothing to do with his own abilities sometimes. He really just wanted to be an average kid who went to school, played sports, and hit on girls. It changed when Inari honestly had nowhere to go after most of the kingdoms fell, since he was separated from his family during the evacuation. Fast forward to a couple days later, Inari would be coming back to his family where he found their homes were destroyed by the Grimm invasion. Inari decided that it was time he took it upon himself to become a hunter and train to fight. He would learn how to fight from a retired hunter in the village who helped with the evacuation, and the training was HELL ON EARTH! Each and every lesson felt like something no human could do if it were to get them killed. Inari would slowly and slowy do each and every one. After two years, his last lesson was to defeat his master. It took a whole year, but Inari managed to finally defeat his teacher, and was ready for Beacon Academy, where his lessons can get better from there on.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Oathkeeper and Oblivion █ ▬ Two dual Dust pistol / daggers which transforms and uses dust bullets as well as normal bullets █Melee Form ▬ Blade form - Switches to a single edged short sword. █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol form - Switches to a semi-auto, double action P226 SIG pistol that fires both dust bullets, and normal bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Can use normal 9mm bullets, .45 ACP bullets, and even Dust bullets. █ ▬ Because the weapons Inari has were scavenged from Atlas soldiers, they have a tendency to jam mid-transformation, and has heavy recoil when shooting the dust bullets.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a wallet knife █ ▬ ... █ ▬ ... █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Lighter █ ▬ Bag of chips
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █*AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes hot like fire, with intense heat enough to burn through solid steel. The aura can be transferred from the user's physical body to an object, even going as far as to submerge one's self within their aura, allowing them to double their damage output. █*LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, with it's initial heat reaching at 200 degrees farenheit, adding to the sharpness of the claws. The user begins to experience first degree burns after three uses, but any more will worsen the burns up to third degree, damaging them badly. (0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ The user's aura generates an internal heat that reaches up to 400 degrees farenheit. The aura thickens and coats the user's arms, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from first to second degree burns on his forearms within three uses. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2 Beast Instinct ▬ The user can transfer the aura to other objects, but takes a lot of aura to generate the same heat and sharpness as that of a plasma cutter, reaching heat up to 1,000 degrees farenheit. The object must be capable of withstanding extreme heat, and the user must also be able to expend the amount of aura without leaving himself depleted. The user can do this for two tries before completely exhausting themselves. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 Grim Reaper ▬ The user has the ability to submerge himself with his own aura and thicken the density of his own aura to shapen himself to that of a beast (which most likely look like an Ursa) the user can use the enhanced aura to provide extra damage to his attacks, as well as sttengthen the effects the aura have on objects two times as stronger than level 2. The user will experience third degree burns heavily on certain parts or evennthe entiretiy of their entire body, as it is virtually head that melts skin right off the bones. The user can only use this once a day, and would take as much as two weeks to recover from burns, unless the user were to extend it, and risk dying of burning and heatstroke.(300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a seering burning sensation equal to that of having your enhanced body part in open fire. The higher the level, the hotter the "flames" are, causing the both target and user to feel the sensations of burning. A well trained user can control the sensation and overcome the burning sensation, but takes years of patience and focus to achieve. Those who do not possess it, will be limited down to five usage before suffering third degree burns. The higher the control, the lesser the limits.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Youroka Kage
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Apathetic Writer
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is KnightsRoyal, and I'll be judging your profile's semblance this one time.
❖Please perform the tasks as set by the previous judge, and feel free to message me so we can discuss it. ❖So, I see that in the previous judgement you have forgotten to set up a time limit to your abilities. Please state how LONG each USE of the Crimson Beast Aspects are. ❖Something I personally will find mostly confusing is the use of Degrees Farenheit to judge how hot your flame is. While it is good to use it as a unit of measurement, it's not good when determining the power behind the attack itself. Please change it from Degrees farenheit to something more easy to understand: Like rather severity of burn when exposed to unprotected bodies. ❖ Your final ability: The Grim Reaper, your aura cannot have the two times stronger on objects ability as that would make it rather unfair to have an object that has quintessentially the power of a 'Level 4' aura which is non-existant. Please remove that bit. ❖The Drawback seems rather small, despite the degrees of burning, which I do get, that comes from over exertion of the power. Aside from that, it seems that there are no drawbacks to using the power rarely so I would suggest adding some other weaknesses to the semblance to re-balance your ability. Something like, it can't be used underwater or the power is dampened by water or dirt. I know you have the drawback of burning yourself, but again, this is one weakness that comes from overuse, nothing about the base line.
█*NAME ▬ Inari Kazama █*AGE ▬ 16 █*FACTION ▬ Independant █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ The little rookie / Pervert / Manwhore █OCCUPATION ▬ Student hunter
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft, 5 in █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lbs
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Regular clothes / Hunter clothes █ACCESSORIES ▬ -- █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean █TATTOOS ▬ His master's tattoo █SCARS ▬ burn scars from his first time using his Semblance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ --
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ He is notorious for his famous pick pocketing skills. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ He can run at a speed faster than most kids his age █Other Talents ▬ A smooth talker who can hit on women easily. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Is trained in martial arts such as Judo, Karate, and Kung Fu. █Weakest Skill ▬ He can't take much hits, as it makes him more or less a glass cannon. █Other Skills ▬ musician / pickup artist / ambidextrous
█LIKES █ ▬ Playing guitar █ ▬ talking to girls █ ▬ Alcoholic drinks █ ▬ Going on dates █ ▬ Exploring the countries █DISLIKES █ ▬ Getting slapped by girls across the cheek... which happens a lot. █ ▬ The Tribe █ ▬ Grimm █ ▬ Being accused as a coward █ ▬ The fear of losing his family for good. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Inari's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a hunter in hopes of picking up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. However, after his experience with his trainer, Inari seems to have forgone that dream in order to become more like a hero. Although, he does get embarrassed when others find out about his desire to be a hero, as most kids grew out of that dream by his age. He's also seen as somewhat of a strange child for holding no fear when approaching women older than him, virtually being the same age as his mother. █Vernacular ▬ American accent █Positive Traits ▬ Is loyal to any and every friend he meets. █Negative Traits ▬ Y'all better hide your women. He doesn't care if there's a wedding ring or they don't prefer men, he's gonna flirt with them one way or another...
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ If you were expecting a story of Inari being in this big family of prestigious hunters, you'd be wrong. The only thing that is true was that Inari did unknowingly belong to a lineage of hunters that were well known for their innovative combative abilities. The Kazama family were notoriously known as a dangerous mercenary group who were famous in the criminal underworld network of Remnant before the rise of The Tribe. If a job from high value target assassination, or outright revolt was what you wanted, the Kazama group was the go to, and that's the family Inari was born from. In reality, Inari Kazama was just your average ordinary guy in his village. He grew up with his adopted mother, father, and annoying older sister, without ever knowing he had any ties to being a hunter or even having a Semblance to speak of. When it did manifest, Inari would only use it for something petty like small magic tricks to impress girls, pull off stunts when playing pranks with his burning aura, and just for menial tasks here and there. If anything, Inari wanted nothing to do with his own abilities sometimes. He really just wanted to be an average kid who went to school, played sports, and hit on girls. It changed when Inari honestly had nowhere to go after most of the kingdoms fell, since he was separated from his family during the evacuation. Fast forward to a couple days later, Inari would be coming back to his family where he found their homes were destroyed by the Grimm invasion, while his family were nowhere to be found within the entire town. All he had to go on, was that their names weren't on the deceased victims reports. Inari decided that it was time he took it upon himself to become a hunter and train to fight. He would learn how to fight from a retired hunter in the village who helped with the evacuation, and the training was HELL ON EARTH! Each and every lesson felt like something no human could do if it were to get them killed. Inari would slowly and slowly do each and every one. After three years, his last lesson was to defeat his master. It took a whole year, but Inari managed to finally defeat his teacher. His graduation from this form of training, was to be given the master's tattoo that was on his back. A symbol from the very same group of hunters that his master was the leader of before the disbanding several years ago. Inari was now ready for Beacon Academy, where his lessons can get better from there on.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Oathkeeper Eclipse █ ▬ A short sword pistol which transforms and uses dust bullets as well as normal bullets █Melee Form ▬ Blade form - Switches to a single edged short sword. █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol form - Switches to a semi-auto, double action P226 SIG pistol that fires both dust bullets, and normal bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Can use .45 ACP bullets, and even Dust bullets. █ ▬ Because the weapons Inari has were scavenged from Atlas soldiers, they have a tendency to jam mid-transformation, and has heavy recoil when shooting the dust bullets.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a swiss army knife █ ▬ a taser █ ▬ ... █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Lightning dust bullets █ ▬ Rope
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █*AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes sharp claws that extends on the user's arms, giving them a beast like feature. The claws have the density of solid steel, able to withstand hard hits, being taken out by dust or even stronger aura. █*LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, that are sharp enough to cut through solid steel and resembles that of a Beowolf claw, having a duration of 4 posts before suffering a broken hand, as well as a cool down of 8 posts. (0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ the user's aura thickens and coats the user's left or right arm in the razor sharp aura, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from heavy strains on his forearms, leaving him with bad bruising, and even fractured bones. The duration is up to 3 posts, before suffering damages, and must wait for 15 posts before using again. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2 Beast Limit ▬ The user can transfer the razor sharp aura to both arms, generating his arms to become that of a Beowolf Alpha. During that time, the user can slice through almost anything except metals stronger than steel, and aura's stronger than the users. The user has two beast arms with razor sharp claws. The user's claws has a duration of 2 posts, before the user will suffer both fractured and badly bruised arms. the user must wait 20 posts before using it again. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3Grim Reaper ▬ The user deeply submerges himself into the aura, covering him into the full shape of the Beowolf Alpha. the user's heart pumps at maximum speed, granting them power a hundred times greater than they are usually capable of as the sheer force of his claw strikes are hard enough to slash through solid objects, not stronger than reinforced steel and powerful aura users. The grim reaper causes the body to continually heat up until it's been cooked from the inside-out, reducing the user to ash after a single post of duration. The user will take weeks healing as well as a cool down period to even use his aura for 30 posts (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a finger to arm numbing sensation equal to that of having your hands or even arm tear muscle fibers. The higher the level, the more numbing the pains are, causing the user to feel the sensations of torn muscles and broken bones. A well trained user can control the sensation and overcome the numbing sensation, but takes years of patience and focus to achieve. The higher the level of the semblance surrounds the body, the more painful and taxing it is on the user.
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(Just as a disclaimer, the first half of my judging posts are RP and anything under the Judgement section is what matters in terms of what you need to work on for profile)
Greetings, it seems unfortunately for you I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill all depends on your cooperation. I shall review the file I have on you to ensure you have filled it out adequately; that you are neither underselling yourself nor over estimating your ability. Once I am satisfied, you may proceed on with your life. Until then, you are left under my rules and whims. And subject to any number of questionings for an undetermined amount of time. For your sake, I do hope you were accurate and of right state of mind when you filled out this form. If not, we may be here for quite a while. So without further ado, let us begin this assessment and see what you, Inari, are truly capable of...and who you truly are.
Ah, a descendant from a family of mercenaries and assassins. It shall be interesting to see how you turn out compared to your legacy. I see you've at least gained the art of pick-pocketing, which is a useful talent to have. But I see you are lacking an other talent. While you perhaps may not know your true potential yet, it is always free to be filled; now or in future, depending when you realize it. Though...You have a bit much listed as your strongest skill. Perhaps one of those fighting styles came intrinsically to you, but you did not quite realize it. Regardless, knowing three fighting styles would require three skills/ talents to be able to master. As such, two needs to be removed from strongest skill so there is only one. If you desire to keep one still, I believe it may be a suitable other talent.
Hmm...A simple yet efficient weapon. Though I see you have not yet mastered/ perfected it. I do wonder, how often does it jam? How problematic are such things in the midst of combat? I suggest you study the weapon a bit more, and find out how long it takes to fix it along with how often it jams on you. Then I may have a suggestion on how to either improve it...or perhaps ground it into reality.
As for your semblance, it is quite interesting. Such power, but at the cost of your arms when used. And even more costly when you reach your full potential. There are only a few things I see issue with it. The first being that increasing how fast your heart pumps could be lethal on its own to you, and not necessarily needed to explain how it is power. Perhaps it is simply your aura powering you so, and why it burns you are much as it does. Bringing me to my next point. If it burned you to ash from the inside out...you would not be able to recover. Perhaps it does burn you, severely, internally and externally...but not at the level to make you ash. We do need you to survive for future fights after all. The final point on ultimate extent of your power is duration. Almost killing you for just one post seems...lacking. Perhaps, having trained so long, you are able to extend how long it powers you. That way you can do much more before you succumb to the power.
Judgement
∰- Archetype
∰- Primary talent: Just so you are aware, there is a rule in regards to stealing. As long as you follow it you are good with this skill, just want to make sure you are aware of it. (17.) Stealing-Remember theft is typically considering godmodding so make sure it makes sense (e.g., they left their gear bag by a tree and walked away), or that you have permission from the player who is being stolen from. Also, the moderator of an event or crew may give you permission for this as well.
∰- You currently have one other talent. You may add another if you desire to.
∰- For your strongest skill, you would need to pick one out of the three. Since you have an empty other talent, you can move one of them to there as well.
∰- Not necessarily required, but maybe add a few more positive/ negative traits to him.
∰- Inventory
∰- For his primary weapon, what is the % chance to jam and how long does it take for him to un-jam it? If it takes a bit to unjam, the percent can be small to trigger. If its fast to unjam, the percent to jam may be more frequent (aka when he transforms his weapon do the roll 1d100 dice on gaia to see if it jams or not. Or you can use dash delta on discord for the roll.)
Also how many rounds can it hold before needing to be reloaded?
∰- Semblance
∰- Level 3: I would take out the heart pumping bit (as he may get a heart attack like that), instead of saying reduced to ash maybe word it as he will get severe burns (internal and external), and I would say this form can last for 5 posts because of how significant the drawbacks are.
Also if you like, the spoiler below has any and all spelling/grammar errors fixed (thanks to an ambassador helping me) so feel free to use it if you desire. It does not have the code though, so you would put need to copy paste the words section by section.
█ *NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █ *AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █ *DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes sharp claws that extends on the user's arms, giving them a beast like feature. The claws have the density of solid steel, able to withstand hard hits, being taken out by dust or even stronger aura. █ *LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, that are sharp enough to cut through solid steel and resembles that of a Beowolf claw, having a duration of 4 posts before suffering a broken hand, as well as a cool down of 8 posts. (0-99 posts) █ *LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ the user's aura thickens and coats the user's left or right arm in the razor-sharp aura, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from heavy strains on his forearms, leaving him with bad bruising, and even fractured bones. The duration is up to 3 posts, before suffering damages, and must wait for 15 posts before using again. (100-199 posts) █ *LEVEL 2 Beast Limit ▬ The user can transfer the razor-sharp aura to both arms, generating his arms to become that of a Beowolf Alpha. During that time, the user can slice through almost anything except metals stronger than steel, and auras stronger than the user’s. The user has two beast arms with razor sharp claws. The user's claws have a duration of 2 posts, before the user will suffer both fractured and badly bruised arms. The user must wait 20 posts before using it again. (200-299 posts) █ *LEVEL 3 Grim Reaper ▬ The user deeply submerges himself into the aura, covering him into the full shape of the Beowolf Alpha. The user's heart pumps at maximum speed, granting them power a hundred times greater than they are usually capable of as the sheer force of his claw strikes are hard enough to slash through solid objects, not stronger than reinforced steel and powerful aura users. The grim reaper causes the body to continually heat up until it's been cooked from the inside-out, reducing the user to ash after a single post of duration. The user will take weeks healing as well as a cool down period to even use his aura for 30 posts (300-399 posts) █ *DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a finger to arm numbing sensation equal to that of having your hands or even arm tear muscle fibers. The higher the level, the more numbing the pains are, causing the user to feel the sensations of torn muscles and broken bones. A well-trained user can control the sensation and overcome the numbing sensation but, it takes years of patience and focus to achieve. The higher the level of the semblance surrounds the body, the more painful and taxing it is on the user.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2020 4:51 pm
The-DJ-Ghost
The-DJ-Ghost & Inari Kazama
█ █ ╫ C O R E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Inari Kazama █*AGE ▬ 16 █*FACTION ▬ Independant █*ROLE ▬ Student █*SEX ▬ Male █*SPECIES ▬ Human
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ The little rookie / Pervert / Manwhore █OCCUPATION ▬ Student hunter
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft, 5 in █WEIGHT ▬ 125 lbs
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Regular clothes / Hunter clothes █ACCESSORIES ▬ -- █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean █TATTOOS ▬ His master's tattoo █SCARS ▬ burn scars from his first time using his Semblance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ --
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ He is notorious for his famous pick pocketing skills. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ He can run at a speed faster than most kids his age █Other Talents ▬ A smooth talker who can hit on women easily / Is a natural guitar player as taught by his foster mother. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Is trained in Kung Fu. █Weakest Skill ▬ He can't take much hits, as it makes him more or less a glass cannon. █Other Skills ▬ good memory / pickup artist / ambidextrous
█LIKES █ ▬ Playing guitar █ ▬ talking to girls █ ▬ Alcohol █ ▬ Going on dates █ ▬ Exploring the countries █DISLIKES █ ▬ Getting slapped by girls across the cheek... which happens a lot. █ ▬ The Tribe █ ▬ Grimm █ ▬ Being accused as a coward █ ▬ The fear of losing his family for good. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Inari's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a hunter in hopes of picking up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. However, after his experience with his trainer, Inari seems to have forgone that dream in order to become more like a hero. Although, he does get embarrassed when others find out about his desire to be a hero, as most kids grew out of that dream by his age. He's also seen as somewhat of a strange child for holding no fear when approaching women older than him, virtually being the same age as his mother. █Vernacular ▬ American accent █Positive Traits ▬ Is loyal to any and every friend he meets. █Negative Traits ▬ Y'all better hide your women. He doesn't care if there's a wedding ring or they don't prefer men, he's gonna flirt with them one way or another...
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ If you were expecting a story of Inari being in this big family of prestigious hunters, you'd be wrong. The only thing that is true was that Inari did unknowingly belong to a lineage of hunters that were well known for their innovative combative abilities. The Kazama family were notoriously known as a dangerous mercenary group who were famous in the criminal underworld network of Remnant before the rise of The Tribe. If a job from high value target assassination, or outright revolt was what you wanted, the Kazama group was the go to, and that's the family Inari was born from. In reality, Inari Kazama was just your average ordinary guy in his village. He grew up with his adopted mother, father, and annoying older sister, without ever knowing he had any ties to being a hunter or even having a Semblance to speak of. When it did manifest, Inari would only use it for something petty like small magic tricks to impress girls, pull off stunts when playing pranks with his burning aura, and just for menial tasks here and there. If anything, Inari wanted nothing to do with his own abilities sometimes. He really just wanted to be an average kid who went to school, played sports, and hit on girls. It changed when Inari honestly had nowhere to go after most of the kingdoms fell, since he was separated from his family during the evacuation. Fast forward to a couple days later, Inari would be coming back to his family where he found their homes were destroyed by the Grimm invasion, while his family were nowhere to be found within the entire town. All he had to go on, was that their names weren't on the deceased victims reports. Inari decided that it was time he took it upon himself to become a hunter and train to fight. He would learn how to fight from a retired hunter in the village who helped with the evacuation, and the training was HELL ON EARTH! Each and every lesson felt like something no human could do if it were to get them killed. Inari would slowly and slowly do each and every one. After three years, his last lesson was to defeat his master. It took a whole year, but Inari managed to finally defeat his teacher. His graduation from this form of training, was to be given the master's tattoo that was on his back. A symbol from the very same group of hunters that his master was the leader of before the disbanding several years ago. Inari was now ready for Beacon Academy, where his lessons can get better from there on.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Oathkeeper Eclipse █ ▬ A short sword pistol which transforms and uses dust bullets as well as normal bullets █Melee Form ▬ Blade form - Switches to a single edged short sword. █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol form - Switches to a 12-round semi-auto, double action P226 SIG pistol that fires both dust bullets, and normal bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Can use .45 ACP bullets, and even Dust bullets. █ ▬ Because the weapons Inari has were scavenged from Atlas soldiers, they have a tendency to jam (1 on 6-sided dice roll) mid-transformation, and has heavy recoil when shooting the dust bullets.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a swiss army knife █ ▬ a taser █ ▬ ... █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Lightning dust bullets █ ▬ Rope
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █*AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes sharp claws that extends on the user's arms, giving them a beast like feature. The claws have the density of solid steel, able to withstand hard hits, being taken out by dust or even stronger aura. █*LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, that are sharp enough to cut through solid steel and resembles that of a Beowolf claw, having a duration of 2 posts before suffering a broken hand, as well as a cool down of 4 posts. (0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ the user's aura thickens and coats the user's left or right arm in the razor-sharp aura, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from heavy strains on his forearms, leaving him with bad bruising, and even fractured bones. The duration is up to 3 posts, before suffering damages, and must wait for 6 posts before using again. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2 Beast Limit ▬ The user can transfer the razor-sharp aura to both arms, generating the aura on his arms to resemble that of a Beowolf Alpha. During that time, the user can slice through metals stronger than steel, and auras and weaker aura. The user has two beast arms with razor sharp claws. The user's claws have a duration of 4 posts, before the user will suffer both fractured and badly bruised arms. The user must wait 8 posts before using it again. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3Grim Reaper ▬ The user deeply submerges himself into the aura, covering him into the full shape of the Beowolf Alpha. The user's aura begins to surge at maximum output, granting them power a hundred times greater than they are usually capable of as the sheer force of his claw strikes are hard enough to slash clean through solid objects, especially heavily reinforced steel and powerful aura users. The grim reaper causes the body to continually heat up until it's been severely burned from the inside-out, after a 5 post of duration. The user will take 2 weeks healing as well as a cool down period to even use his aura for 10 posts after the two week recovery period. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a finger to arm numbing sensation equal to that of having your hands or even arm tear muscle fibers. The higher the level, the more numbing the pains are, causing the user to feel the sensations of torn muscles and broken bones. A well-trained user can control the sensation and overcome the numbing sensation but, it takes years of patience and focus to achieve. The higher the level of the semblance surrounds the body, the more painful and taxing it is on the user.
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Regular clothes / Hunter clothes █ACCESSORIES ▬ -- █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean █TATTOOS ▬ His master's tattoo █SCARS ▬ burn scars from his first time using his Semblance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ --
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ He is notorious for his famous pick pocketing skills. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ He can run at a speed faster than most kids his age █Other Talents ▬ A smooth talker who can hit on women easily / Is a natural guitar player as taught by his foster mother. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Is trained in Kung Fu. █Weakest Skill ▬ He can't take much hits, as it makes him more or less a glass cannon. █Other Skills ▬ good memory / pickup artist / ambidextrous
█LIKES █ ▬ Playing guitar █ ▬ talking to girls █ ▬ Alcohol █ ▬ Going on dates █ ▬ Exploring the countries █DISLIKES █ ▬ Getting slapped by girls across the cheek... which happens a lot. █ ▬ The Tribe █ ▬ Grimm █ ▬ Being accused as a coward █ ▬ The fear of losing his family for good. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Inari's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a hunter in hopes of picking up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. However, after his experience with his trainer, Inari seems to have forgone that dream in order to become more like a hero. Although, he does get embarrassed when others find out about his desire to be a hero, as most kids grew out of that dream by his age. He's also seen as somewhat of a strange child for holding no fear when approaching women older than him, virtually being the same age as his mother. █Vernacular ▬ American accent █Positive Traits ▬ Is loyal to any and every friend he meets. █Negative Traits ▬ Y'all better hide your women. He doesn't care if there's a wedding ring or they don't prefer men, he's gonna flirt with them one way or another...
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ If you were expecting a story of Inari being in this big family of prestigious hunters, you'd be wrong. The only thing that is true was that Inari did unknowingly belong to a lineage of hunters that were well known for their innovative combative abilities. The Kazama family were notoriously known as a dangerous mercenary group who were famous in the criminal underworld network of Remnant before the rise of The Tribe. If a job from high value target assassination, or outright revolt was what you wanted, the Kazama group was the go to, and that's the family Inari was born from. In reality, Inari Kazama was just your average ordinary guy in his village. He grew up with his adopted mother, father, and annoying older sister, without ever knowing he had any ties to being a hunter or even having a Semblance to speak of. When it did manifest, Inari would only use it for something petty like small magic tricks to impress girls, pull off stunts when playing pranks with his burning aura, and just for menial tasks here and there. If anything, Inari wanted nothing to do with his own abilities sometimes. He really just wanted to be an average kid who went to school, played sports, and hit on girls. It changed when Inari honestly had nowhere to go after most of the kingdoms fell, since he was separated from his family during the evacuation. Fast forward to a couple days later, Inari would be coming back to his family where he found their homes were destroyed by the Grimm invasion, while his family were nowhere to be found within the entire town. All he had to go on, was that their names weren't on the deceased victims reports. Inari decided that it was time he took it upon himself to become a hunter and train to fight. He would learn how to fight from a retired hunter in the village who helped with the evacuation, and the training was HELL ON EARTH! Each and every lesson felt like something no human could do if it were to get them killed. Inari would slowly and slowly do each and every one. After three years, his last lesson was to defeat his master. It took a whole year, but Inari managed to finally defeat his teacher. His graduation from this form of training, was to be given the master's tattoo that was on his back. A symbol from the very same group of hunters that his master was the leader of before the disbanding several years ago. Inari was now ready for Beacon Academy, where his lessons can get better from there on.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Oathkeeper Eclipse █ ▬ A short sword pistol which transforms and uses dust bullets as well as normal bullets █Melee Form ▬ Blade form - Switches to a single edged short sword. █Ranged Form ▬ Pistol form - Switches to a 12-round semi-auto, double action P226 SIG pistol that fires both dust bullets, and normal bullets. █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ Can use .45 ACP bullets, and even Dust bullets. █ ▬ Because the weapons Inari has were scavenged from Atlas soldiers, they have a tendency to jam (1 on 6-sided dice roll) mid-transformation, and has heavy recoil when shooting the dust bullets.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ a swiss army knife █ ▬ a taser █ ▬ ... █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Lightning dust bullets █ ▬ Rope
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Crimson Beast █*AURA COLOR ▬ Maroon █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ The user's very aura becomes sharp claws that extends on the user's arms, giving them a beast like feature. The claws have the density of solid steel, able to withstand hard hits, being taken out by dust or even stronger aura. █*LEVEL 0 Beast Claws ▬ One of the user's hand begins to glow with his thick maroon colored aura, which shapes into claws, that are sharp enough to cut through solid steel and resembles that of a Beowolf claw, having a duration of 2 posts before suffering a broken hand, as well as a cool down of 4 posts. (0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1 Beast Hide ▬ the user's aura thickens and coats the user's left or right arm in the razor-sharp aura, making it tougher and more abrasive. The user also begins to suffer from heavy strains on his forearms, leaving him with bad bruising, and even fractured bones. The duration is up to 3 posts, before suffering damages, and must wait for 6 posts before using again. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2 Beast Limit ▬ The user can transfer the razor-sharp aura to both arms, generating the aura on his arms to resemble that of a Beowolf Alpha. During that time, the user can slice through metals stronger than steel, and auras and weaker aura. The user has two beast arms with razor sharp claws. The user's claws have a duration of 4 posts, before the user will suffer both fractured and badly bruised arms. The user must wait 8 posts before using it again. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3Grim Reaper ▬ The user deeply submerges himself into the aura, covering him into the full shape of the Beowolf Alpha. The user's aura begins to surge at maximum output, granting them power a hundred times greater than they are usually capable of as the sheer force of his claw strikes are hard enough to slash clean through solid objects, especially heavily reinforced steel and powerful aura users. The grim reaper causes the body to continually heat up until it's been severely burned from the inside-out, after a 5 post of duration. The user will take 2 weeks healing as well as a cool down period to even use his aura for 10 posts after the two week recovery period. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Activating his aura and shaping himself to have beast-like features can be taxing on his body, as the user will experience a finger to arm numbing sensation equal to that of having your hands or even arm tear muscle fibers. The higher the level, the more numbing the pains are, causing the user to feel the sensations of torn muscles and broken bones. A well-trained user can control the sensation and overcome the numbing sensation but, it takes years of patience and focus to achieve. The higher the level of the semblance surrounds the body, the more painful and taxing it is on the user.
