█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ OHKY █*PARTNER(S) ▬ Oswald Star, Ren Kiyoko III, Yui Estelle de Lioncourt █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Saku, Mom 2.0 █OCCUPATION ▬ Student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'4" (165 cm) █WEIGHT ▬ 125lbs (57 kg)
█HAIR ▬ Brown; short █CLOTHING ▬ Her clothing style is very bland but her kind of bland. Though, you will often see her wearing a school uniform. █ACCESSORIES ▬ She doesn't wear any. Maybe some bracelets on a special occasion. █EYES ▬ Brown █BUILD ▬ Petite █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None of importance. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS TRAITS ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Sakura is a fast runner due to most of the jobs she took when she was younger. █Bonus Talent ▬ Sakura's punches can be quite heavy, mostly due to the amount of work she's done that involved her lifting things. █Other Talents ▬ She is able to read at very fast pastes and remember something for a long time. █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ She is able to keep a level head even during the craziest of situations and very good at giving directions. █Weakest Skill ▬ Long ranged combat. █Other Skills ▬ Not combat related but Sakura is a very good cook!
█LIKES █ ▬ Reading █ ▬ Cooperative people █ ▬ Fruits █ ▬ Thick books █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Egotistical People █ ▬ Large amounts of sweets █ ▬ Flashy accessories █ ▬ Insects █ ▬ Especially moths █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Sakura is very mentally sound. She is very capable of telling people what to do and does not ever think of something that would lead to the harm of anyone. She is also very empathetic. She is sort of insecure of her looks though as she is looks very plain compared to her other classmates. █Vernacular ▬ This is her voice. Sakura speaks proper but when she is feeling high and mighty or embarrassed she wont speak with any conjunctions. █Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, dependable, thoughtful, and intelligent █Negative Traits ▬ Short temper, bossy, overbearing, and insecure
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Sakura was always stuck in the role of the responsible one in her youth. At a young age, her mother, a huntress, died at the hands of a Grimm and her father was unable to cope with it. He could barely function due to the loss. Sakura had to not only take care of her father but also her younger siblings. She basically took on the role of mom, her style of clothing even reflecting as such. They weren't particularly rich so she often wore her mom's old clothing, wanting to make sure money was saved for more important things like food and other things that everyone else needed around the house. To make sure everyone was well taken care for, she had to balance a lot of apprenticeships though she didn't mind. Though, this did get in the way of following her dream of becoming a huntress just like her mother. Her father was especially against it as he didn't want her to end up like her mother. Despite this, Sakura did whatever studies that she could. It took a lot of back and forth fighting her father on it before she was allowed to actually attend the school. She tries to visit the family whenever she can and be the best huntress that she can be by continuing to get good grades in the academy.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Grunhilde █ ▬ A 10 ft chain based mace. She is able to give it multiple forms due to her semblance. █Melee Form ▬ She is able to freeze the chain into a straight line and use it as a spiky baseball bat. █Ranged Form ▬ It's regular form which she swings around like a madwoman. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ There is mainly the weight of the weapon as it will easily knock her down if she hits something big and it just reflects her attack.
█*NAME ▬ Winter's Touch █*AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ She can create, control, and manipulate ice though she'll need moisture to do so. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ She is only able to freeze things that she touches directly and the ice is easily breakable. █*LEVEL 1▬ She is able to freeze things in a 15 foot radius with the stomp of her foot. It would only really be able to freeze someone's feet to the ground if they were caught in it. █*LEVEL 2▬ She is able to freeze her own certain body parts to leave a hard punch or to keep her own self steady. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ She is able to shoot ice out instead of just having to directly touch things instead. She can create whatever she wishes like large ice projectiles. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Sakura is at a risk of frost bite as ice still does affect her like a normal human. She has to directly touch something to freeze something and can't just shoot ice out at people (yet). Her semblance is also borderline useless in heated environments as she needs moisture to do so.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2018 7:16 pm
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█HAIR ▬ Brown; short █CLOTHING ▬ Her clothing style is very bland but her kind of bland. Though, you will often see her wearing a school uniform. █ACCESSORIES ▬ She doesn't wear any. Maybe some bracelets on a special occasion. █EYES ▬ Brown █BUILD ▬ Petite █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None of importance. █MARKINGS ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Sakura is very good at running so her legs are as strong as steel so it's best to watch out for those. Her punches aren't something to mess around with either. █Other Talents ▬ She is able to read at very fast pastes and remember something for a long time. █Faunus Skill ▬ None █Strongest Skill ▬ She is able to keep a level head even during the craziest of situations and very good at giving directions. █Weakest Skill ▬ Long ranged combat.
█LIKES █ ▬ Reading █ ▬ Cooperative people █ ▬ Fruits █ ▬ Thick books █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Egotistical People █ ▬ Large amounts of sweets █ ▬ Flashy accessories █ ▬ Insects █ ▬ Especially moths █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Sakura is very mentally sound. She is very capable of telling people what to do and does not ever think of something that would lead to the harm of anyone. She is also very empathetic. She is sort of insecure of her looks though as she is looks very plain compared to her other classmates. █Vernacular ▬ This is her voice. Sakura speaks proper but when she is feeling high and mighty or embarrassed she wont speak with any conjunctions. █Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, dependable, thoughtful, and intelligent █Negative Traits ▬ Short temper, bossy, overbearing, and insecure
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Sakura was always stuck in the role of the responsible one in her youth. At a young age, her mother, a huntress, died at the hands of a Grimm and her father was unable to cope with it. He could barely function due to the loss. Sakura had to not only take care of her father but also her younger siblings. She basically took on the role of mom, her style of clothing even reflecting as such. They weren't particularly rich so she often wore her mom's old clothing, wanting to make sure money was saved for more important things like food and other things that everyone else needed around the house. To make sure everyone was well taken care for, she had to balance a lot of apprenticeships though she didn't mind. Though, this did get in the way of following her dream of becoming a huntress just like her mother. Her father was especially against it as he didn't want her to end up like her mother. Despite this, Sakura did whatever studies that she could. It took a lot of back and forth fighting her father on it before she was allowed to actually attend the school. She tries to visit the family whenever she can and be the best huntress that she can be by continuing to get good grades in the academy.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Grunhilde █ ▬ A chain based mace. She is able to give it multiple forms due to her semblance. █Melee Form ▬ She is able to freeze the chain into a straight line and use it as a spiky baseball bat. █Ranged Form ▬ It's regular form which she swings around like a madwoman. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ There is mainly the weight of the weapon as it will easily knock her down if she hits something big and it just reflects her attack.
█*NAME ▬ Winter's Touch █*AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ She can create, control, and manipulate ice. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ She is only able to freeze things that she touches directly and the ice is easily breakable. █*LEVEL 1▬ She is able to freeze things in a 15 foot radius with the stomp of her foot. It would only really be able to freeze someone's feet to the ground if they were caught in it. █*LEVEL 2▬ She is able to freeze her own certain body parts to leave a hard punch or to keep her own self steady. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ She is able to shoot ice out instead of just having to directly touch things instead. She can create whatever she wishes like large ice projectiles. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Sakura is at a risk of frost bite as ice still does affect her like a normal human. She has to directly touch something to freeze something and can't just shoot ice out at people (yet). Her semblance is also borderline useless in heated environments.
<}-{> Review
So while there isn't any particular wrong in accordance to power, we need to clarify a couple of things.
1. First thing about the weapon. How long is the chain for the mace? 2. When it comes to the weapon, is the semblance required to be used in order to make it a bat like weapon? If this is the case, it isn't required as you're welcome to have a fancier transforming weapon. 3. For your semblance, most ice semblances require moisture to function. Do you think you can add this in?
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2018 5:07 pm
Xcon299
Fixed! Thank you! And yes her semblance is required. It's more along the lines of a cool thing she can do with her semblance.
█HAIR ▬ Brown; short █CLOTHING ▬ Her clothing style is very bland but her kind of bland. Though, you will often see her wearing a school uniform. █ACCESSORIES ▬ She doesn't wear any. Maybe some bracelets on a special occasion. █EYES ▬ Brown █BUILD ▬ Petite █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None of importance. █MARKINGS ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Sakura is very good at running so her legs are as strong as steel so it's best to watch out for those. Her punches aren't something to mess around with either. █Other Talents ▬ She is able to read at very fast pastes and remember something for a long time. █Faunus Skill ▬ None █Strongest Skill ▬ She is able to keep a level head even during the craziest of situations and very good at giving directions. █Weakest Skill ▬ Long ranged combat.
█LIKES █ ▬ Reading █ ▬ Cooperative people █ ▬ Fruits █ ▬ Thick books █ ▬ Dogs █DISLIKES █ ▬ Egotistical People █ ▬ Large amounts of sweets █ ▬ Flashy accessories █ ▬ Insects █ ▬ Especially moths █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Sakura is very mentally sound. She is very capable of telling people what to do and does not ever think of something that would lead to the harm of anyone. She is also very empathetic. She is sort of insecure of her looks though as she is looks very plain compared to her other classmates. █Vernacular ▬ This is her voice. Sakura speaks proper but when she is feeling high and mighty or embarrassed she wont speak with any conjunctions. █Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, dependable, thoughtful, and intelligent █Negative Traits ▬ Short temper, bossy, overbearing, and insecure
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ Sakura was always stuck in the role of the responsible one in her youth. At a young age, her mother, a huntress, died at the hands of a Grimm and her father was unable to cope with it. He could barely function due to the loss. Sakura had to not only take care of her father but also her younger siblings. She basically took on the role of mom, her style of clothing even reflecting as such. They weren't particularly rich so she often wore her mom's old clothing, wanting to make sure money was saved for more important things like food and other things that everyone else needed around the house. To make sure everyone was well taken care for, she had to balance a lot of apprenticeships though she didn't mind. Though, this did get in the way of following her dream of becoming a huntress just like her mother. Her father was especially against it as he didn't want her to end up like her mother. Despite this, Sakura did whatever studies that she could. It took a lot of back and forth fighting her father on it before she was allowed to actually attend the school. She tries to visit the family whenever she can and be the best huntress that she can be by continuing to get good grades in the academy.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Grunhilde █ ▬ A 10 ft chain based mace. She is able to give it multiple forms due to her semblance. █Melee Form ▬ She is able to freeze the chain into a straight line and use it as a spiky baseball bat. █Ranged Form ▬ It's regular form which she swings around like a madwoman. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ There is mainly the weight of the weapon as it will easily knock her down if she hits something big and it just reflects her attack.
█*NAME ▬ Winter's Touch █*AURA COLOR ▬ Blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ She can create, control, and manipulate ice though she'll need moisture to do so. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ She is only able to freeze things that she touches directly and the ice is easily breakable. █*LEVEL 1▬ She is able to freeze things in a 15 foot radius with the stomp of her foot. It would only really be able to freeze someone's feet to the ground if they were caught in it. █*LEVEL 2▬ She is able to freeze her own certain body parts to leave a hard punch or to keep her own self steady. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ She is able to shoot ice out instead of just having to directly touch things instead. She can create whatever she wishes like large ice projectiles. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Sakura is at a risk of frost bite as ice still does affect her like a normal human. She has to directly touch something to freeze something and can't just shoot ice out at people (yet). Her semblance is also borderline useless in heated environments as she needs moisture to do so.
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❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today! Thank you for updating your profile for us, I just have a few remarks
❖ For markings, it should be Markings/faunus traits ❖ Can you please explain your Primary and bonus talent for me? ❖
