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 Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2018 2:55 pm
XXXXXXＷｅｌｃｏｍｅXXXXXX "Ｔo the wonderful world of Kumori Toorima (Your worst nightmare)" Kateiyn  Ⅰ. Ｔｈｅ ＢａｓｉｃｓXXXXX
╯Ｎame: Kumori Toorima
╯Ｎickname(s): Death; Phantom; Silent Killer
╯Ｂirth Ｄate: November 18th
╯Ａge: Twenty-four
╯Ｇender: Male
╯Ｒace: Ethorious [Phantom]
╯Ｒelationship Ｓtatus: Forever single
Ⅱ. ＡｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅXXXXX
╯Ｈeight: 6'4
╯Ｗeight: 210 pounds
╯Ｔattoos: They're mostly all over his body (but hidden by his clothes)
╯Ｓcars: N/A
╯Ｐredominant Ｆeatures: Everything about him is out of the ordinary! His mask mainly.
Ⅲ. ＰｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙXXXXX
╯Ｓexuality: Straight
╯Ａlignment ---Ａllegiance: Broken Crown
╯Ｒank: Saint Rank
╯Ｏccupation: Dark Mage
╯Ｓecrets: Not much is known about Kumori as he rarely speaks up, but he is incredibly hateful towards the kingdom of Eridani, more than some might come to know. He wishes to watch that whole country burn until nothing is left, not even the ashes or debris. Aside from hatred, no one knows what lies under his mask, not even his own partners. He has never once removed it. His true face is unknown.
╯Ｐersonality: Kumori is a cold and sadistic ethorious who believed in PoH's principles, and because of this he enjoys killing other mages, becoming much obsessed with Death. The reason behind Kumori enjoying killing other mages came from the fact he enjoyed the feeling of being feared by others. He studied his opponents day and night thoroughly, getting right down to learning all of there fears and finding out there childhood life. He would learn everything possible, before slowly moving closer to destroy these enemies he sought out. Kumori has hidden pleasure for coming up with ways of truly dominating those beneath him, formulating new ideas on how to destroy them.
As Kumori's father did not have any expectations at all for him due to being very frail and sick, he eventually dropped out of the academy to learn Magic and turned to the streets of Fiore, where he committed various crimes, became a silent Killer one year later, and joined Broken Crown. Kumori's sense of reality had been wearing thin since then, feeling that only things beneficial to him were real. Not only that, but the leader of Broken Crown, Evelynne, eventually became a role model of his own, following her own antics of destruction and chaos.
╯Ｓkills:
» Photographic memory
» Expert utilizing guns & swords
» Stays hidden within shadows
╯Ｌikes:
» Death
» Destruction
» The fear in his enemies eyes
» Broken Crown master + members
» His weapons
» The darkness
» Planning new ideas to kill
╯Ｄislikes:
» Bliss
» Filthy light mages
» The magic council
» Those who stand between his enjoyment
» The ones who destroy the shadows
» Disgusting Devil Slayers
» Loathes the kingdom of Eridani
╯Ｆears:
» Light bending the dark
Ⅳ. Ｂａｔｔｌｅ ＳｔａｔｉｓｔｉｃｓXXXXX
╯Ｓtrengths:
» The darkness
» Analyzing his targets and everything about them
» Quite smart in reserving magic
╯Ｗeaknesses:
» Light based attacks
» Devil Slaying Arts
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╯Ｍagic Ｔypes : Caster
╯Ｗeapon(s): Phantom Blade - Weapon/Armor Type: Sword
Weapon/Armor Ability: At its very name, the world trembles. The scars this blade inflicts yield to no potion or healing touch. To escape the ceaseless torment, there is but one hope: death. However, time heals all wounds and this is also the case with this sword. The scar will heal on its own in due time, but healing properties such as magic fail to work.
Rank of Weapon/Armor: Advanced [Ultimate]
╯Ｆighting Ｓtyle: Kumori uses the shadows to fight against enemies, however he uses his sword should the situation ever force him to resort to these tactics.
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╯Ｂio: At birth, Kumori was born with a rare illness, the symptoms were so awful he'd be much to weak to even move much of a muscle. Because of this, his father lost faith in him and instead turned to his younger brother to take over. This frustrated him to no end, and the older he got, the more revenge seeking he sought on his dad. After learning everything possible about it, and training himself, he eventually stabbed his father across the heart, instantly killing the man. His mother was so heartbroken and mortified, she became terrified and ran off into the woods, never to be seen again. Kumori soon visited a shady shop, searching for a certain mask to conceal his face. The seller told him about a mask with healing properties, as he becomes interested in that and buys it. Trying it on, it worked like a charm! His frail and weak state disappeared, never removing the mask now. In fact, it is very tight so even if one pulled it, it wouldn't come off as easy, this came from some weird magic surrounding it.
Wandering the streets for a while with no real purpose, he came across a shady looking elderly man who was looking for someone to teach his powers to before his untimely but due passing. Kumori didn't have to take too long to think about it; agreeing without much thought going into the process; thus he learned everything about the shadows. Once strong enough, he turned to the streets and killed many woman, man , and child, feeling such joy from killing them, watching them terrified and plead for there life. This pleased him so much, realizing he loved killing. He had a short conversation with a blonde girl named Alessandra, but he ignored her as he felt she wasn't worth his time. He ignored her mostly because he received news from someone who worked with, news came out that his little brother had apparently been out on a super secret mission in Eridani, however he failed and ended up imprisoned and executed as a result. Anger struck his core, he was going to make that entire Kingdom pay dearly for killing his dear brother. Returning back to the one who taught him, he soon stabbed him and killed him; he needed no one to know too much about him as much as this elderly man had. He'd soon come across a guild known as Broken Crown with Alesandra shortly in tow, though he knew nothing about it. He did not show any care at all for her, merely acknowledged she believed in the same beliefs as him. He joined in order to feed his desire to kill, but his main goals were to target anyone of the kingdom of Eridani, they would all pay dearly with there lives when he had a chance. For now, he continued his desire to kill and feed his pleasure. While his murder streak continued, he met a blood thirsty black tiger desiring the same death sequence, not exactly befriending him but just allowing him to follow should he wish to, and the tiger did! They were just two blood thirsty individuals, looking to murder all in sight.
╯Ｇoals --- Ｍotives: Kumori's known goal is to murder every light mage who stands between his guild, and before killing them to see the fear in there eyes, thus bringing him extreme joy.
╯Ｇuild Ｍark: Deep black - On left side of neck (though it's impossible to see under his mask and hoodie)
╯Ｒelationships:
» Broken Crown members
» Alesandra Poe - Nothing more than a colleague.
» Evelyn - His role model, he looks up to her and her ways of killing and destruction.
╯Ｔheme: Sweet Sacrifice
╯Ｅxtra: When Kumori is dead set on killing a person, he will see it done. The dark mage will research until the end of days, learning everything he can about said mage before the final day he sets out to destroy them and use every weakness against them. Also, he only takes orders from his guild master. Even if another member asks for a favor, he will flat out refuse.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2018 11:05 am
Ⅰ. Ｍａｇｉｃ ＬｉｓｔXXXXX
** PLEASE EMPHASIZE IF THEY ARE C-S RANK SPELLS
╯Main Magic Here: Shadow Magic
╯Sub Magic Here: Stealth Magic
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» Shadow Crawl: The user transforms their body into a shadow, granting them the ability to move around surfaces. The user can transition in and out of this form as they please, as they fade into the ground beneath as a shadow, and move at even faster speeds. They can come up wherever they desire and strike almost instantly. They can appear from the ceiling, side of walls, wherever a shadow is lurking. He can stay in the shadow for as long as the shadow is there. (If the sun comes out and brightens it, he is forced out) - C rank
» Raining Shadow Spikes: Casting an arm toward the sky, the user can create an onslaught of shadow rain drops that feel like spikes hitting the skin. It can be blocked by light based attacks or metal. - C-rank
» Underworld: A spell used to create the souls of the dead to pull any victim into the underworld. If the user has very pure intentions, they can easily come back out. The opponent will be cut repeatedly once in the underworld, and will not end unless either die or are pulled out. It is a premade world, a world created by the user's own thought process. - A-rank
» Souls of the Deceased: Revives any dead soldiers from years ago or any body to reanimate them to life and use them as a sort of doll. This magic revives the dead, no matter how many years or of recently. Once constructed back to life, the body is no longer in control; instead the user may control it to that of a puppet. It can only be used for about 10-15 posts. - S-rank
» Shadow Devour: Shadows underneath slip under the enemies feet and glow a dark black light, surrounding there entire body and slowly draining them of magic power, just about half will be stolen from them and thus returned to the user to restore there self with. Light would extinguish the shadow, as would the light off of fire; or just escaping it's sluggishly moving shadow form Once it reaches the half point of devouring, it returns to the user to refurnish there own energy with before dispersing. - A-rank
» Shadow Overdrive: The shadows take over the user, casting a higher defense as a way to form a protective shield like bubble over the user, and do minimal damage when the attack hits the bubble. - A-rank
» Shadow Blindness: Shadows surround the victims vision, blinding them until they can only see darkness. The spell lasts for 2 posts, and can be dispelled with a light attack. - B-rank
» Shadow Paralyzation: The shadow reaches out from the user, stopping at the enemy and if it touches there feet, it clings onto them with a hand and for 2 posts paralyzes them in place. The shadows disperse against fire and light. - B-rank
» Shadow Barrier: Casts a light dark shadowy barrier, protecting the user for a few seconds before being cast away from any kind of attacks, though it will not hold up against S and ultimate ranked spells. - A-rank
» Shadow Pull: Casting this spell will cause the target to fall to the ground as shadows pin them down, unable to move from where they are at. They will be trapped into the ground, until the spell is lifted or by using a magic they can conjure without being able to move much. - A-rank
» Miasma: Casting a Miasma of poisonous Shadows, any who breathes it in will feint or perish if too much is breathed in. It will take an excessive amount to fully kick in poisoning properties, of at least up to ten minutes inhaling the smoke. Depending on how strong the target's immune system is, the fainting spell can come sooner of later. Typically, to faint it takes about up to 30 minutes. For one to die, it'd be an hour and a half of breathing in the poison with no cures. The poison can spread for about 100 meters. - A-rank
» Shadow of Swords: The user creates an onslaught of ten shadow swords in any direction they cast onto. They are the size of regular swords but can form into larger ones, and will push into any contact it makes, creating large holes and decapitating if too much damage is dealt. They are able to cut through strong tree's, but will not break metals. - A-rank
» Shadow Form: The user transforms their body into a shadow, granting them the ability to move around surfaces. The user can transition in and out of this form as they please. - C-rank
» Cloned Shadow: The user creates up to five shadows of them self at a time, this is an easy means of entering more than one area to spy at a time. It can also be used to attack and gang up on the opponent, all of them moving like shadows and punching and kicking at the target, able to multiply in carrying the same weapons as the user as well. With light, the shadows swerve into the walls and disappear, however it must be a bright light, similar to a sun or any burning lights. Typically, they take about three hits before disappearing if they're minor strikes. Powerful hits would cast them away quickly. - A-rank
» Eyes to the Shadow: A shadow will form in the users eyes, casting a blurry vision for those who look into his eyes, before falling unconscious and feeling a sense of impending doom, forcing fear to hit them. The blurry vision will happen straight away once they look into the eyes, and they fall unconscious a couple minutes after that mostly from shock, if they aren't shock it will be five minutes from the attack. - C-rank
» Shadow of Regeneration: A shadow formulates all around him, slowly regenerating health or injuries, using quite a bit of magic depending on the severity of the injury. He can also heal others, should he feel the desire to. - B-rank
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╯Ultimate Magics
» Hallucinate: The user transforms into a phantom ghost, using his ghost features to even remain invisible or hide from sight. Using his power, he can drive hallucinations into his target, causing them to recall any hidden past they had lived, and will relive it. He can induce it to be recalled as even worst, should he put some more magic juice into that. With this, he can toy with his opponents emotions, causing them to break down should they fall into the trick. It will last depending on if the person is under a lot of stress, if they aren't being affected it will end. The spell will continue to effect until either the user ends it, or the spell is broken. The distance must be somewhat close, at least close enough to look into his red eyes. [Ethorious / Ultimate]
» Destructive Wave of Shadows: A large shadow wave forms in front of the user, washing over a large vast area as it floods everything in its path. The damage can hold the same as a large tsumani soaking black wave. It is able to break through walls or other terrain as well; but things like steel walls will just wash over it; not break. [Ultimate]
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» Shadow Twister: A black tornado forms, engulfing all in its path in a dizzying and destructive attack as it cuts the opponent like a bow, until they are able to escape on there own, the tornado disappears, or the user is forced to cancel it. It can be stopped by light based attacks or attacking full out the user while he is conjuring this which does take 5-10 seconds. The tornado stays conjured and moves past areas for about 3-4 posts. It is about the size of a rather larger tornado; the scale being a large funnel cloud on the EF 5 scale; the damage dealt being the same. - S or Ultimate
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2018 11:09 am
 
"Li Europan lingues es membres del sam familie." separat existentie es un myth. Por scientie, musica, sport etc, litot Europa usa li sam vocabular. Li lingues differe solmen in li grammatica, li pronunciation e li plu commun vocabules. Omnicos directe al desirabilite de un nov lingua franca: On refusa continuar payar custosi traductores. At solmen va esser necessi far uniform grammatica, pronunciation e plu sommun paroles. Ma quande lingues coalesce, li grammatica del resultant lingue es plu simplic e regulari quam ti del coalescent lingues. Li nov lingua franca va esser plu simplic e regulari quam li existent Europan lingues. It va esser tam simplic quam Occidental in fact, it va esser Occidental. A un Angleso it va semblar un simplificat Angles, quam un skeptic Cambridge amico dit me que Occidental es.Li Europan lingues es membres del sam familie. Lor separat existentie es un myth. Por scientie, musica, sport etc, litot Europa usa li sam vocabular. Li lingues differe solmen in li grammatica, li pronunciation e li plu commun vocabules. Omnicos directe al desirabilite de un nov lingua franca: On refusa continuar payar custosi traductores. At solmen va esser necessi far uniform grammatica, pronunciation e plu sommun paroles.
Li Europan lingues es membres del sam familie. Lor separat existentie es un myth. Por scientie, musica, sport etc, litot Europa usa li sam vocabular. Li lingues differe solmen in li grammatica, li pronunciation e li plu commun vocabules. Omnicos directe al desirabilite de un nov lingua franca: On refusa continuar payar custosi traductores. At solmen va esser necessi far uniform grammatica, pronunciation e plu sommun paroles. Ma quande lingues coalesce, li grammatica del resultant lingue es plu simplic e regulari quam ti del coalescent lingues. Li nov lingua franca va esser plu simplic e regulari quam li existent Europan lingues. It va esser tam simplic quam Occidental in fact, it va esser Occidental. A un Angleso it va semblar un simplificat Angles, quam un skeptic Cambridge amico dit me que Occidental es.Li Europan lingues es membres del sam familie. Lor separat existentie es un myth. Por scientie, musica, sport etc, litot Europa usa li sam vocabular. Li lingues differe solmen in li grammatica, li pronunciation e li plu commun vocabules. Omnicos directe al desirabilite de un nov lingua franca: On refusa continuar payar custosi traductores. At solmen va esser necessi far uniform grammatica, pronunciation e plu sommun paroles.
◢Location ▎ herexxxxx◢Company ▎ herexxxxx◢Thoughts ▎ herexxxxx◢OOC ▎ herexxxxx
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2018 4:35 pm
Haraaaa Ready for review when you want to. ^0^ Sorry for requote. Just checking this hasn't been forgotten. sweatdrop
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Kio no Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2018 1:31 pm
◢ A P P R O V A LXXP R O C E S S WANNA CAUSE SOME HELL?!▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰
 Hello!
There are some things on his profile and magic are confusing with the words you use.
» Bio There are some concerns over how he learned shadow magic. You are saying that he not only learned how to manipulate magic but to manipulate shadow in a matter of years. How is this possible with out a basic understanding of magic? Add a teacher to the story. It makes more sense for there to be a teacher, then to learn it out of the blue. You can even add that he killed his master in his sleep. And continued to learn from there.
» Underworld: A spell used to create the souls of the dead to pull any victim into the underworld. If the user has very pure intentions, they can easily come back out. The opponent will be cut repeatedly once in the underworld, and will not end unless either die or are pulled out. It is a premade world, created by the user. - A-rank
Edit: did you mean to add create to the text? If he is creating a soul, it would not be allowed.
» Souls of the Deceased Revives any dead soldiers from years ago or any body to reanimate them to life and use them as a sort of doll. - S-rank
Edit: try to make it more specific. I’m not sure if you are bringing a soldier back form the dead, reviving a dead person, or bringing a soldier’s soul out and putting it in a dead person. Also, is this a soul attacking, or are you making a new body for the soul, with the spell. Also needs a posting limit, ten to fifteen posts would work for a limit.
» Shadow Devour Shadows underneath slip under the enemies feet and glow a dark black light, surrounding there entire body and slowly draining them of magic power, a little will be stolen from them and thus returned to the user to restore there self with. Light would extinguish the shadow, as would the light off of fire. - A-rank
Edit: there needs to be limitations on this one. How much can it absorb? And does it go away after it is done absorbing magic?
» Shadow Overdrive The shadows take over the user, casting a higher defense as a way to form a protective shield, and do minimal damage when attacked. - A-rank
Edit: what does the shadow cast? Is this an armor or a shield?
» Shadow Barrier Casts a light dark shadowy barrier, protecting the user for a few minutes before being cast away from any kind of attacks, though it may not hold well against ultimate attacks. - C-rank
Edit: don’t you mean it won’t hold up to ultimate attacks? It shouldn’t be able to handle any other attacks, besides other C rank spells.
» Shadow Pull Casting this spell will cause the target to fall to the ground as shadows pin them down, unable to move from where they are at. They will be trapped into the ground, until the spell is lifted or if they have a will enough to break out. - A-rank
Edit: what are the limitations of this spell? There needs to be better explanation of what can break the spell, besides willpower.
» Destructive Wave of Shadows A large shadow wave forms in front of the user, washing over a large vast area as it floods everything in its path. It is able to move through walls or other terrain as well. [Ultimate]
Edit: explain what damage this attack does? And how it is able to go through walls?
» Shadow Twister A black tornado forms, engulfing all in its path in a dizzying and destructive attack as it cuts the opponent like a bow, until they are able to escape on there own, the tornado disappears, or the user is forced to cancel it. It can be stopped by light based attacks or attacking full out the user while he is using this. It is about the size of a normal tornado, however about a bit smaller in size. - S or Ultimate
Edit: what size is the tornado based on the EF scale? How long can it be maintained, post wise? Give some reasonable number for it, like five to ten posts. And what is the damage of this attack?
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2018 4:36 pm
I added in a random master in his bio; I hadn't thought about it in a way someone couldn't learn on there own. xD
I fixed up all of the spells you suggested too; but I left shadow barrier crossed off because if he's saint rank; I just don't get how it wouldn't be able to defend c-s skills? D: I changed minutes to seconds though, I actually meant it in a one time use like of 2-3 seconds but I didn't describe that well. sweatdrop Anyways, if it only blocks C rank, it would make it kinda useless so I can just trash it if needed ? ^^'
For the tornado; I didn't even notice the 5-10 post thing, I;ll go relog and add that in now. :O Damage is supposed to be like a real tornado; but on the EF scale if that is okay? Do you need me to like tone it down to like E3, anything I'd be fine with. c:
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Kio no Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2018 3:13 pm
◢ A P P R O V A LXXP R O C E S S WANNA CAUSE SOME HELL?!▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰
Hello!
One more
» Shadow Barrier Even if he is saint rank it's still a C Rank spell and it would be way to over powered for a C rank to be able to block any attack above it. You can move it up to an A rank if you want which would make it so S and ultimate can break it but that's it.
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2018 9:55 pm
Ohh okay. A rank works! I edited it! ^3^
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Kio no Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2018 10:10 pm
◢ A P P R O V A LXXP R O C E S S WANNA CAUSE SOME HELL?!▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰
 Congrats! You've been approved!
Just make sure for Shadow Barrier you edit that end and state it won't hold up against S rank or Ultimate attacks instead of may not. Saying may not give the impression that even some ultimate spells wont break it.
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