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Daekie

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2016 7:06 pm


This is a powered revision for Cepheus -- although the civilian material is the same, her powered side is a completely different person!

Senshi: Sailor Mab, Senshi of Soot

Challenge: Cut to black!
Alt: Lights out!
Alt 2: Click-boom.

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Black
Secondary Color: Uh -- like, velvet red? Curtain red?

Fuku: Something inspired by the Emcee in Cabaret? I'd like her to look like some sort of presenter -- stage magician crossed with actress! (This does not include her facial makeup. Please make her look nice and less menacingly clowny than the Emcee.)

Collar -- Plain sailor collar? Does it have a white stripe at the end? All senshi must have a collar!
Bow -- You need some form of frontal decoration and all senshi must have some kind of back bow (female) or sash (male).
Bodice -- A swimsuit-type bodice? White will be the dominant color for your bodice, unless corrupt, when it will be black. Maybe like a crop top -- maybe a dress? A bikini top? You can have any top you like, pretty much.
Sleeves -- Got sleeves?
Brooch -- Round? Shaped like anything? Keep this plain for the first incarnation.
Bottoms -- Shorts? Capris? Miniskirt? Tea-length cocktail skirt? Your typical school girl skirt?
Tiara -- Every Order senshi is required to have some form of tiara. Beaded? Traditional? Woven fabric across your forehead? Corrupted Senshi do not need a tiara; instead they have a black star in their forehead.
Choker -- Choker is a classic, or a necklace? Or a scarf?
Shoes -- Go crazy?
Gloves -- Any gloves?
Accessories -- Any accessories? Earrings? Jewellry?

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: Lights Out!
Calling her attack, Sailor Mab claps her hands and points at a spot -- a five-by-five cube, centering on that spot, is suddenly filled with a thick black soot. Anyone entering/caught inside the 'cloud' will experience difficulty seeing until they're removed from its' radius -- like they put on a pair of glasses that weren't theirs. Sailor Mab can use this attack twice per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Cut to Black!
Calling her attack, Sailor Mab claps her hands and points at a spot -- a eight-by-eight cube, centering on that spot, is suddenly filled with a thick black soot. Anyone entering/caught inside the 'cloud' will experience severe difficulty seeing, rendering them unable to do little but pick out silhouettes, until they're removed from its' radius. Sailor Mab can use this attack twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Mab Backstage Blackout!
Sailor Mab calls the name of her attack and snaps her fingers, and for 30 seconds, all sources of light in a ten-foot radius around her cease to function as a thick black soot appears to emanate from her -- the sun goes dark, lights turn off, magic doesn't glow -- effectively blanketing her in a moving blackout that centers on her. Sailor Mab is the only person who can see perfectly through this magical darkness; however, if she attacks an enemy, the darkness will release regardless of whether the duration has expired. Sailor Mab can use this attack once per battle.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2016 4:10 pm


Daekie

Hey Daekie! Hope you are well!

Before I go over a full crit, I do want to let you know that the sphere of Blackouts in the sense of removing light would not be allowed. This is seen as a take on Darkness which is a blocked power sphere. If you wished to use Blackouts, it should be done more as someone passing out/fainting than as the concept of losing light.

The other option, if you wish the keep the concept of the attacks, we can work to help find you something else more like a fog based idea such as smog or a haze. Those can cause an area to become harder to see in as dim things such as the sun.

Let me know if you have any questions!

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2016 4:27 pm


Sirene Naiads
Daekie

Hey Daekie! Hope you are well!

Before I go over a full crit, I do want to let you know that the sphere of Blackouts in the sense of removing light would not be allowed. This is seen as a take on Darkness which is a blocked power sphere. If you wished to use Blackouts, it should be done more as someone passing out/fainting than as the concept of losing light.

The other option, if you wish the keep the concept of the attacks, we can work to help find you something else more like a fog based idea such as smog or a haze. Those can cause an area to become harder to see in as dim things such as the sun.

Let me know if you have any questions!


I was interested as setting up Mab as a counterpart to Juliet, hence whiteouts/blackouts -- if you can think of an alternative sphere that would keep the attack, that would be lovely!
PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2016 4:57 pm


Daekie


I was interested as setting up Mab as a counterpart to Juliet, hence whiteouts/blackouts -- if you can think of an alternative sphere that would keep the attack, that would be lovely!

Ah! I see where you were going with that! If that is the case, I would look into something caused even by fire if you wanted a true opposite. Smoke and Fog are both claimed and Mist is on the blocked list.

I would look at some of the rarer weather conditions as a starting point. Possibly going with Murk? That makes it harder to see. However, like you have with Whiteouts, it can reduce visibility but not make it into a pure/true darkness.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2016 5:24 pm


Sirene Naiads
Daekie


I was interested as setting up Mab as a counterpart to Juliet, hence whiteouts/blackouts -- if you can think of an alternative sphere that would keep the attack, that would be lovely!

Ah! I see where you were going with that! If that is the case, I would look into something caused even by fire if you wanted a true opposite. Smoke and Fog are both claimed and Mist is on the blocked list.

I would look at some of the rarer weather conditions as a starting point. Possibly going with Murk? That makes it harder to see. However, like you have with Whiteouts, it can reduce visibility but not make it into a pure/true darkness.


Would Volcanic Ash be alright? I'm assuming yes, due to the fact Volcanic Lightning and Volcanoes are both valid spheres, but wanted to make sure <3
PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2016 5:48 pm


Daekie


Would Volcanic Ash be alright? I'm assuming yes, due to the fact Volcanic Lightning and Volcanoes are both valid spheres, but wanted to make sure <3


Unfortunately it is not. >.< (Double checked this with the rest of the mod staff just to be safe because it would have been very neat!)
Because we have both Volcanoes and Ashes and the sphere of Ashes heavily plays off the heat created in forming ash where as Volcanoes even makes use of Volcanic Ash in their attacks. Overall, it comes off as too close. Where, Volcanic Lightning is a weather phenomena.

My apologizes >.<

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2016 9:52 am


Sirene Naiads


Would the Gloaming or Dusk be acceptable spheres? Gloaming means 'to grow dark', so it seems like it'd be fitting! Sorry to bother you over this so repeatedly >>
PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2016 9:36 am


Daekie

Please do not apologize! smile

With both of those, I have to give you a heads up that we do have a senshi of sunsets. I would recommend sending Kyuseisha no Hikari a PM to see if she would be alright with either of those or feel that it was too close to hers.

Edit:
My apologizes for an edit but I just realized there is one more senshi to double check with. The DMC of twilight.
easy reference

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2016 10:26 am


Sirene Naiads
Daekie

Please do not apologize! smile

With both of those, I have to give you a heads up that we do have a senshi of sunsets. I would recommend sending Kyuseisha no Hikari a PM to see if she would be alright with either of those or feel that it was too close to hers.

Edit:
My apologizes for an edit but I just realized there is one more senshi to double check with. The DMC of twilight.
easy reference


Kyu says both are perfectly fine, although she was worried the Gloaming overlaps too much with spheres since it's both twilight AND sunsets AND night -- would minor wording changes to make her the senshi of Soot to make her a more applicable mirror of Sailor Juliet be acceptable? If not, I will stick with Dusk biggrin Zero Dream hasn't been in Moonshop in a very long while, so I'm not worried about Deneb Kaitos.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 1:28 pm


Daekie

Soot would work very well! I would say go for it!

Edit:
Hey Daekie,
I did not know if you had decided to go with soot or not but I saw you changed the title of your quest so wanted to pop back in and see if that was so? So sorry!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 7:37 pm


Sirene Naiads
Daekie

Soot would work very well! I would say go for it!

Edit:
Hey Daekie,
I did not know if you had decided to go with soot or not but I saw you changed the title of your quest so wanted to pop back in and see if that was so? So sorry!


I did change it! Sorry -- I didn't think I'd need to check back with you ;;
PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 7:29 am


Daekie

My apologizes for not catching it sooner and making you wait!

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I will send a GM your way asap!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 10:16 pm


Daekie


This looks great to me!

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