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 Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 6:29 pm
it's my first comic so don't go on and on about how it focuses on me i couldn't get a good storyline in my head at the time.It was quick so it doesn't have a background. 
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:05 pm
Nice ^^ except for the fact that she's still smiling while crying in the last panel... heh... just minor crit.
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 5:03 am
 Oh lookie over here!
Lol it's good but I noticed the last panel too...
You might want to fix the speech words. Put them in an order,
it would've been confusing if it wasn't for their font color.
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 2:13 am
wow, for the first few minutes I was confused which way to read...(don't mind men, I've read a few mangas just before...)
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 3:01 pm
That was confusing to read, but I finally got it.
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Posted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:58 pm
I'm think of making a thread in the art discusion but i don't have a plot if anyone can help me that'd be great
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:01 am
here we go another comic with nothing to do with the last  Noob courtesy of tektek guy killing noob cortesy of my avi and gaia Bad graphics courtesy of paint
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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 1:29 pm
I've got a new comic that has a plot*claps* link is in sig
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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 7:15 pm
Capt. Mal Reynolds here we go another comic with nothing to do with the last Noob courtesy of tektek guy killing noob cortesy of my avi and gaia Bad graphics courtesy of paint Good job, but there isn't nearly enough blood for my liking. I love seeing huge puddles of blood for some reason. O_o
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 5:11 pm
hey guys i have some comics srry to like interupt on this plot thing but i u wanna visit i have a link here... Click Here to go to my crapy comics!!! but u have to pick a title u like just click and read alright? click and read THNX!
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 12:52 am
[~ Intricate Detail ~] Capt. Mal Reynolds here we go another comic with nothing to do with the last Noob courtesy of tektek guy killing noob cortesy of my avi and gaia Bad graphics courtesy of paint Good job, but there isn't nearly enough blood for my liking. I love seeing huge puddles of blood for some reason. O_o I agree, it seems to little blood for such a nooblet...
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 1:03 pm
i like that second comic... lol rofl
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:31 pm
They are nice comics, though the first one was hard to read at first, and the second one, I would agree needs a little more blood, but no offense I think the second one needs a little more humor.
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