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Yang Kaido

PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 10:27 am


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▅▅ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ɴᴀᴍᴇKenji ▅▅


ɢ ᴇ ɴ ᴇ ʀ ᴀ ʟ x ɪ ɴ ғ ᴏ :

Usᴇʀɴᴀᴍᴇ: Yang Kaido

Fᴜʟʟ Nᴀᴍᴇ: Kenji [No Last Name]

Nɪᴄᴋɴᴀᴍᴇ(s)/Aʟɪᴀs(ᴇs): Kin

Aɢᴇ: 16

Gᴇɴᴅᴇʀ: Male

Bɪʀᴛʜᴅᴀʏ: May 13

Oʀɪɢɪɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ: Does not know



ᴅ ᴇ ᴛ ᴀ ɪ ʟ x ɪ ɴ ғ ᴏ :

Tᴀᴛᴛᴏᴏ / Mᴀʀᴋɪɴɢs: His body is strewn with scars, and burns.

Pᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟ Wᴇᴀᴋɴᴇss: Emotional Spectrum: Though Kenji remains stoic as much as possible due to the nature of his Aura, situations in which his emotions flare can cause his abilities to flare in much the same way. The most severe of which is Anger in which he may go on a psychotic break and expend his aura wrecklessly.

He was raised in a prison environment from a tribe in which only truly interacted with his father. Due to this, his has social anxiety which is worse around women to the point of being considered Gynophobia.


Pᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟ Sᴛʀᴇɴɢᴛʜs: He has a clear train of thought and high situational awareness. While standing still he can cast out a forward facing net 180 degrees from his current position of kinetic energy to get a feel for his environment. This is a sonar type skill that can identify objects in his path, including people.

Hᴇɪɢʜᴛ:5’10

Wᴇɪɢʜᴛ: 198lbs

Pʜʏsɪǫᴜᴇ: Thin Muscle

Eᴛʜɴɪᴄɪᴛʏ: Unsure

Hᴀɪʀ Cᴏʟᴏʀ: White

Eʏᴇ Cᴏʟᴏʀ: Red

Sᴇxᴜᴀʟ Oʀɪᴇɴᴛᴀᴛɪᴏɴ: Straight

Rᴇʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴsʜɪᴘ Sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Single

Lɪᴋᴇs:

High Places
Manga
Sweet things

Dɪsʟɪᴋᴇs:
Cramped spaces
Sour things
Losing his temper


ᴘᴏᴡᴇʀs / sᴋɪʟʟs / ᴡᴇᴀᴘᴏɴs / ᴇᴛᴄ. x ɪ ɴ ғ ᴏ :

Aᴜʀᴀ Tʏᴘᴇ:: Physical

Aᴜʀᴀ Aʙɪʟɪᴛɪᴇs::
-Kin/Po: Kenji’s aura allows him the ability to absorb Kinetic energy and store it as potential energy he can also dispel potential energy as kinetic energy. In battle, he normally disguises his ability for as long as possible as simple physical enhancements. Kenji can use his Aura Ability to absorb the kinetic energy of attacks, cycle it to potential ability, then redirect the energy as his own kinetic energy to deliver a physical attack of his own. When his initial madness hit, Kenji absorbed enough Kinetic energy from a falling meteor to allow him a permanent reservoir of kinetic energy. Enough to augment his speed and strength. Kenji can expel kinetic energy from his body to boost his movement speed or strength by 5x what should be humanly possible. He cannot operate his weapons systems, however, without absorbing kinetic energy. This ability is not instantaneous and he must be directly touching what he is absorbing. Meaning he is extremely susceptible to continuous attacks (ex: Flamethrowers, Lasers, Etc)

-Stealth Mode: In Stealth mode Kenji absorbs the kinetic energy of the vibrations coming off his own body constantly cycling them through. By absorbing the energy of these vibrations he can move about with no noise.

Exᴛʀᴀ Aʙɪʟɪᴛʏ:: Madness: Due to the nature of Kenji’s upbringing he has certain triggers that cue his insanity, even he is uncertain of them all. He has found that things relating to his mother tend to cue them. Though at most times and even in battle he is able to maintain his calm if his triggers are cued Kenji activates Madness. In this state Kenji’s true personality comes out, a frightening smile creeps across his face, he expels all of the accumulated Kinetic energy that he has been absorbing down to his reserves, and uses it to simultaneously increase his strength and speed to that 15x humanly possible. This ability puts high strain on his body and for a time equivalent to its use he cannot use any Aura abilities. With training this ability may be controlled but as it stands during this time he cannot distinguish friend or foe, he may be directed at a target by others but should he destroy that target he then attack whatever is around him (Max: 10 Post). To use this ability he must have not only absorbed a large amount of kinetic energy from his opponents, but also taken enough damage from his opponents to induce a psychotic break from pain.



Pᴇᴛ: N/A

Wᴇᴀᴘᴏɴ(s):
T.A.S:[Tonfa Assault System]: Kenji carries twin modified tonfas that he created himself. Made from the metal ore found in the meteorite that freed him these tonfas are extremely resilient. He uses his abilities to decrease the impact on the tonfa itself. They are also designed with sever motion activated slides that turn portions of the tonfa into what appears to be gun barrels. He focuses kinetic energy through these barrels and fires them as projectiles. When unused he carries his weapons on his back

Tonfa Parts


Shotgun: By squeezing on a portion of Nigiri, the Zento portion of the Tonfa opens to reveal a flared barrel. By pulling back on the Nigiri the grip slides back on the body of the tonfa like cocking a shotgun, by using this kinetic energy Kenji focuses it through that opening, firing a burst of energy with the equivalent force of a shotgun blast. Each shot requires the slide to be pulled back

Gatling: By pulling on a separate area of the Nigiri, the Koto opens revealing six rotating barrels Requiring a constant steam of kinetic energy this is operated by pulling a trigger that siphons off his kinetic energy and fires smaller burst of kinetic energy, these projectiles take on the effectiveness of .50 cal bullets.

Railgun The strongest shot, it also takes the most energy for a single shot. By joining the Monouchi portion of both Tonfas, the two connect and at the spot of connection a small groove is formed, by holding both Tonfas with the Zento portion facing his body he charges kinetic energy at the Zento portion before firing it down the body like a railgun. This charge fires exponentially faster than any of his other rounds but requires charging and has a massive recoil that blows him back.

Cʜᴇʀɪsʜᴇᴅ Iᴛᴇᴍ(s)::
Destiny Link: A chain link that was fashioned from a supposed “Chain of Destiny” It is said to be able to link one to their destiny and guide one to it when it is within range. Scripts of the chain make it out to be more powerful, however Kenji has noticed that it only seems to react when he is within the same town as whatever his event in Destiny is supposed to be. At the current moment it remains dormant as due to his obsession it only reacts to things that will lead him to his ultimate goal of killing that woman.


ʙ ᴀ ᴄ ᴋ ɢ ʀ ᴏ ᴜ ɴ ᴅ x ɪ ɴ ғ ᴏ :

Pᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ: Stoic, Silent. Kenji does his best to never speak and more often than not tries to communicate through motions and a series of grunts. He is extremely socially anxious, especially around women bordering gynophobia. Kenji does his best to never show facial emotions aside from exasperation or annoyance. A smile is something he has not done for a long while.

Bɪᴏɢʀᴀᴘʜʏ:
As with all creatures of this world, the story of Kenji begins with Destiny…or at least that’s what he was told. From his earliest memory the boy known as Kenji remained locked beneath the city of Arastria, a small city built in the tundra of Europe. The city itself was a place locked out of time, caught in ways of the past. They were a barbaric people, refusing to conform to the standards of the civilized world. Among this barbaric people was the most ruthless, bloodthirsty of them all, the Queen. A silver haired demon, this woman slew all who were in her path, her only goal was to expand her city by destroying all around her and increasing her strength with the resources of other independent villages that she destroyed. She was taken by the Dark Aura and did not hesitate to decimate entire populations if they stood in her path. This city was recognized as a threat to others, but so long as she remained attacking only nations across the countryside that were not part of the organized world then there was no interference from any force that could truly oppose her.

The Queen sought an object known as the Chain of Destiny, rumored to be a creation of the True Father to be used to hold the Twin of Light in this world, it was taken into the world of dark with the Dark Queen when she took the Twin of light, but one link broke away and fell to Earth. She intended to use it to search out her destiny, power. She would search out the most powerful The Queen expended countless resources on this conquest until she came to a village where she found the object used as an object of worship to the True Father that he may be reunited with his daughter. As was her default, she slayed the village leaders, sent her army to massacre the religious people. Their weapons were fierce, as she had never seen before, each weapon serving as more than its intended shape. Hammers that fired projectile grenades, Staffs that broke apart into rifles. These intrigued her. The village managed to push her forces back…until she became personally involved. With the Queen’s aura she slaughtered their army. As she took hold of the link it pulled her to a collapsed house where she found a skilled blacksmith, the author of the weapons of destruction that gave her such difficulty in this conquest. Seeing this as the first act in gaining her power she took this man as prisoner.

Once back in her village she locked the man away, ordered him to cast the link into a usable form for her. The blacksmith pleaded with her telling her due to the unknown nature of the mystic material it would take 10 years to melt down, and fashion into anything else. The Queen informed him in that case he would be there for quite some time, and so time passed. The Queen would regularly check on the man, making sure that he had nothing else in mind. In time she developed a bit of affection for the Blacksmith. In a night of drunken festivities she stumbled down to his dungeon and took the blacksmith as her own. She became pregnant. This, she considered a weakness, she considered ridding herself of the child, but the blacksmith stated if she did, then she could just kill him, but he would work no more for her, no more weapons, and for certain he would not finish his work on the link. So as incentive to keep him working, though she disconnected all apparent feeling for him, she kept the child ceasing her conquest for the length of the pregnancy. With the birth of the child she had something to hold over him now. She put the child in the underground prison along with the Blacksmith and continued to use him as incentive to keep the man working in exchange for barely enough supplies to keep he and the child alive. The Blacksmith obliged.

He named this boy Kenji, a silver haired Youth with the red eyes of a demon, infected by the Dark Aura of his mother, however the boy was not like her. He was good, truly. He had a good heart, even from beneath the city he remained a peaceful soul. He loved his father, He smiled often, he kept his father hopeful of a better future. The queen, not willing to admit that such a weakness came from her ceased her visits to this prison. This gave his father time. From the moment the boy was able to wield a Forge Hammer, he was taught his father’s trade, how to build, craft, create. When the boy was 7 the Link in the Chain of Destiny was completed, however the Father had not crafted it into something for the queen as promised, but into a bracelet that he placed on the boy. Though Kenji did not know it’s true nature at the time, eventually the Queen made her way down to them knowing that this 10 year project had to have drawn to a close at this point. She came just too late. The bracelet had been fastened to Kenji and would not come off. The link had been sized down to a simple rectangular link on the outside of the bracelet made of the excess of the original full sized link.

Kenji’s father laughed, he had bested the queen. He told her that his son was now chosen by the link, bonded to it. If she killed him the link would simply disappear and she would never have what she desired. In a rage she slashed his father delivering a mortal wound, but leaving him to die in his prison. She locked the door with Kenji still inside. He rushed to his side. His father told him to use that link, that it would guide him to his freedom and with that his father passed, and with his passing, so died the hope and smile of Kenji. What made matters worse is that the link did not work for the boy. It did not do much except lie dormant. Hanging like a useless piece of jewelry. His father had died for nothing.

The Queen, ever cunning, soon found a way to still get what she wanted. She would take the boy from his prison, and torture him, carving his skin, burning him, she would bring him to near the point of death all the while telling him. “I will kill you if you do not take me to what I want, if it is truly your Destiny not to die then lead me to what it takes to ensure I allow you to survive.” Eventually the link would activate. It would lead her to what she wanted. However while torturing she noticed something she enjoyed. The demonic look of those red eyes that the boy inherited from her. His hope replaced with hatred. His anguish replaced with Anger. Her torture began to take on a twisted nature, She would leave the boy unbound, if he could defeat her then he would be free, if that was his Destiny. If he failed, he would be tortured until the link activated. She gave him no weapons aside from what he could craft himself below the city in the blacksmithing station that his father used.

With no formal training the boy learned to fight as a savage would. Learning only from the beatings he took. Crafting weapon after weapon, that would only fail against the woman. She would torture him, and then take him out on the missions. In exchange for food, water, basic necessities, she would unleash him on villages. This child wildly fighting as if an animal, destroying in the name of a corrupt Queen. As he fought, his Aura developed. He kept it hidden as he could, but he noticed that the more damage he took in, the less he began to hurt, he could absorb the damage, the pain and deliver it back. His missions became easier to deal with, the screams haunted his nightmares, his weapons were developed with more skill. He would kill the Queen, he would kill his mother. He began to notice that when he did get to go outside, usually on the way back from tracking whatever it was that the queen had him go after, the link would point towards the sky. He did not know why, but it would give him hope, as if somehow it was his father, tugging the link to let him know he still watched over him.

7 long years passed under her servitude. Murdering, pillaging, destroying. The boy’s joy had morphed, twisted into the pleasure of destroying things. He was truly a monster. In any other instance he was calm, he ceased speaking. He only knew that there was a time when he was to kill for the Queen and then his downtime where he crafted ways to destroy her. As she brought him out for one of his trials, he had crafted weapons from steel that he had stolen from a village they invaded. Tonfa, a weapon that a warrior from that village had used against him with great results. He attempted to copy the man’s techniques and in doing so he managed to down the queen. Just as he was going to deliver the killing blow the weapon broke and he was thrown back defeated. This was too close for comfort however, the Queen had decided he had outlived his usefulness. She had amassed enough power to take out the source of some of the major kingdom’s strength a training facility for their youths, an academy called Tokubetsu.

As she prepared for her conquest she decided to hold an execution of Kenji, something she touted as the destruction of such a feral beast. As they put the boy on his knees, her ready to cleave his head from his body herself, the link of the chain on his bound wrist began to point skyward once more. With one last hope he looked up and saw it. A flaming ball falling from the sky. It would destroy everything, including him. His head fell, he chuckled, something broke within him. This was it, right? A falling meteor in this very spot, on this very day. It wasn’t coincidence, this had to be it. Destiny, he was destined to die? A voice from within him spoke… “No, everyone else, but not us”.



He felt himself slipping to the back of his mind, he could see what was happening, but he wasn’t in control. The chains holding him were broken as he pulled them apart as if breaking away from frayed rope. A manic smile crept across his face. The Queen backed away in terror as his demonic eyes trained on her. However then with a sudden burst, he jumped high into the air, far above the city, as the meteor neared the ground he placed his hands on it absorbing the kinetic energy inside of the falling mass and stopping it midair. His body was overly full. Filled to the brim with power and bursting at the seams. He had stopped this destruction, everyone in the kingdom would have to consider him a hero now, they had seen him, they could not deny him. However the voice inside of his head quelled that belief. “They don’t deserve the chance to worship us.” Using the excess strength that he had obtained from absorption of all of that energy he turned in the air holding onto the meteor until he had rotated to a point that he was on top of it. He then threw it down. With all the energy that exceeded his body’s potential he threw the meteor into the city. The massive explosion decimated the area. As he fell to the ground, the maddening smirk on his face, he laughed, a mad cackle that echoed throughout the night, he was free. He used the energy to land safely as he looked around to the destruction about him and through the flames he spotted…her. She had somehow survived. He couldn’t be certain how, but she was alive, and she was afraid, she was retreating like a coward after her precious amassed power had been destroyed so easily in a simple night everything she had worked for years on was gone. The feeling only widened his smirk. He began to go after her as she had not yet seen him, but as he went to take his first step he collapsed. Absorbing that much energy at one time had damaged his body and he could not go on. When he awoke he had full control over himself again. He did not understand who was the voice that spoke to him, but whatever that power was, it saved him. He searched the wreckage for anything that he could salvage, Even his underground home had been decimated, but his link began to pull at something. He searched and searched until he came upon a metal box. Somehow it had survived all of that, it was destined for him to find it. He opened it and immediately realized, it was something his father had hidden. In it was a picture of he and his father. The boy wept over the photo silently sobbing, but in the box was something else. Plans, writings, teachings, it was his father’s last gift to him. The art of crafting the gun weapons. It took two years, two years of surviving off of the land, two years of solitude, two years of learning to suppress the madness. He scrounged together what was needed to make a rough Blacksmithing station and began to craft a weapon. Only one came to mind. The Tonfa, the weapon that had finally bested that woman. He combined this with the style of crafting his father had perfected and for material he used the odd metallic ore of the meteor that had freed him. He would hunt her down, he would destroy her. These were his thoughts, this was his goal as the weapon was crafted.

Just as he completed it the link began to pull in a different direction. As he looked to it strangers came to the wreckage in which he was staying. They were agents of that place, the one she wanted to destroy. Tokubetsu, they had gotten wind that Arastria was now a plausible threat to them and travelled there to scout the area, however by the time they arrived there was nothing left of this threat, just the boy, feral seeming, dirty, odd. When they questioned him about what happened he simply lifted his index finger and pointed to himself, an innocently clueless look on his face. They decided that they could not simply leave him there and as such decided to take him back to the academy. The place where the link pointed was them. This was the next step. This…was his destiny.



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PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 11:29 am


Destiny...Fate...
It's all Meaningless...



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I exist only to kill...

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Yang Kaido


Echo Galen
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 3:41 pm


Yang Kaido


Okie dokie. Considering kinetic and potential energy is just about everywhere I feel that's a little on the strong side. I feel as though he should have it where he can absorb an attack and send it back out or something, much as it's stated in your bio where he can place his hands in fire and be fine from it by absorbing it. (He should be able to absorb it from powerful things, not an insane amount from nature, is what we're sayin.) His madness ability seems like an ultimate more than anything, and should be locked or given a reason of how/why he can use it and what circumstances he has to be in to unleash it. He would also need a gauge to get potential energy because he could basically say he absorbed the energy from the leaves waving on the tree and be stronger than anyone around.

And I don't think tribal is an ethnicity. Also if you have a 360 field of vision you can just about dodge anything, which we see like a Hyuuga from Naruto but even they have a zone where you can hit them and it's behind the neck. There has to be some kind of downside to this 360 vision because he would be way too powerful to have it without some downfall; regardless how small.

Also the destiny link. It can track anyone down? So what happens if people have stealth abilities? It basically makes them obsolete. (Mystical objects like this are very rarely used and this guild doesn't usually allow something like that to be used as a weapon.)

Also the way in which you have this out and his age, I would have to say he would have to learn how to use these "gun" modifications to these so called tonfas which aren't really tonfas if they're guns. Because of the more archaic way you've made the bio and the castle filled with forces, it makes it seem as if this is way in the past and not particularly in the present as it is. As a blacksmith, I think it's accurate for tonfa like guns to be used, however there has to be some type of new-aged reason/circumstance.

How did he bring down a meteor and still survive? That takes an immense amount of ability to firstly use an ability to bring it down to Earth after all it's layers, then to completely absorb the direct energy; and regardless if he was in this rage state, that's seriously more powerful than even our teachers.

And how is his character not driven mad? He should have split personalities, like majorly split, and also would most likely be a sociopath because he was trained to kill and tried to be treated like a human, then the mother killed the father. (This isn't me trying to change your character, just a little insight would be awesome, please.)
PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2015 11:20 am


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Apologies as upon re-reading the profile it was quite scatterbrained and not very well done. I may or may not have written it on a 5 hour energy induced anime binge of RWBY, GANGSTA, and other anime. Anyways to the issues:

The bio has been completely redone. His Kin/Po ability now requires direct contact with the entity from which he is absorbing the energy. In Essence he absorbs that energy and redirects it as physical kinetic energy since his Aura is physica and he cannot create or manipulate elementa or magica energies. I’ve overhauled the Madness form and added in prerequisites to unleash it. Also it will require training to master as in its current state it will do more harm than good.

Ethnicity has been updated to unknown as he isn’t aware of his origination or villages people and refuses to identify with his Mother’s people. The sonar type ability has been updated to only work in front of him also it is an active ability not a passive meaning it requires intent, he also cannot move while using it.

The “Destiny Link” is supposed to be able to be used to track down what is connected to the destiny of the user, he cannot use it to track people unless that person is within his destiny. At the moment his obsession with finding his mother will mean it will only activate when something related to that is near. Meaning it’s mostly dormant and doesn’t do anything. I intend to only use it to push his personal story only. It will also give only a general direction not an exact location. I have also added a lore to the Destiny Link, nothing to be regarded as Canon, just lore of his people that follows the lore of the guild

The Tonfa follow the lines of a RWBY-esque weapon. They are fully functional tonfa, but they may operated as firearms as a secondary feature. I have added a prerequisite to use them as anything other than tonfa, but I believed the intent to be a physical weapon that can be used secondary as a gun which is mirrored to what most weapons are in that universe. I hope I didn’t misunderstand the age of the guild, but I figured it to be a kind of futuristic type age with call backs to the age of old via magic. As it was initially explained to me it was like the world of Grimm from RWBY, if that was mistaken I can adjust. For now, I changed the village to a city, but still kept some of the archaic trends as it was an outlier city which is why they had a Queen. Also the bio now explains why he selected the shape of Tonfa to make these weapons.

The meteor thing was crap as it was originally told. I have entirely changed that to not be his doing but rather the instrument of his freedom. I also made it a onetime event that damaged his body. Not something he can do again, but it is the thing that allowed him to have his passive enhancement to strength and speed.

Lastly, he is absolutely crazy. Like we’re talking batshit insane. His stoic personality is the result of a broken psyche. He is constantly at internal battle to keep the madness inside of him at bay. Somewhere in the character development he will have to face this as the fact that such a ferocity is truly just himself. The feral nature that he developed as he killed.



I hope that covers it all, anything else needed please let me know.

Yang Kaido


Echo Galen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2015 3:29 pm


Yang Kaido


Everything looks good now, thank you for changing it. However, I don't think you understood where we were coming from with the meteor thing. If anything, it's gotten even worse now. To be able to literally jump into the air, absorb the energy from a massive meteor, then swing it down to earth to destroy the compound... honey, that's just really OP for no reason. If there had been a natural meteor shower and he simply changed the trajectory of it to hit the compound, that'd be one thing. Him being able to absorb it indirectly though after doing so he almost died would also be one thing. But for this next level stuff, it's grotesquely OP and makes your character stronger than the teachers and even some of our monstrosities. You should remember that these are young students, they have to have some sort of limitation to them- that is the point of the guild, for them to grow and find their abilities. By stating it's a one time deal doesn't really help or put our minds at ease. I hope this helps.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2015 7:53 pm


Echo Galen


Everything looks good now, thank you for changing it. However, I don't think you understood where we were coming from with the meteor thing. If anything, it's gotten even worse now. To be able to literally jump into the air, absorb the energy from a massive meteor, then swing it down to earth to destroy the compound... honey, that's just really OP for no reason. If there had been a natural meteor shower and he simply changed the trajectory of it to hit the compound, that'd be one thing. Him being able to absorb it indirectly though after doing so he almost died would also be one thing. But for this next level stuff, it's grotesquely OP and makes your character stronger than the teachers and even some of our monstrosities. You should remember that these are young students, they have to have some sort of limitation to them- that is the point of the guild, for them to grow and find their abilities. By stating it's a one time deal doesn't really help or put our minds at ease. I hope this helps.


Ah yes, It definitely helps. I think I've been misunderstood, probably my fault. It'll be easier to explain here.

Basically in this version of the story it did exactly as you said. The Destiny Link was pointing towards the sky because that's where his destiny lie.

He did not pull down the meteor here, basically no matter what happened or who was there, that meteor was coming down naturally in that area. He was just destined to be there. When the Madness personality saw the opportunity he jumped for it and absorbed energy to rotate himself around the meteor so that he was on top of it not below it. He then returned an amount of energy to the meteor so that it still crashed down and destroyed the city only not with him in the damage zone.

By doing this he absorbed enough energy to give him the reserves to use his augmented strength and speed. This came at the price of him nearly dying from absorbing that much energy which is why he couldn't chase the Queen, because he immediately collapsed for days after his body couldn't go on due to the strain that had been put on it.

He did exactly the situation you said would be okay with the exception that the Meteor was already going to hit the compound he just maneuvered himself out of the way and almost killed himself doing it.

I hope that explains it better. I don't think it was clear enough in the rewrite when taking the original into consideration.

Yang Kaido


Echo Galen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2015 8:04 pm


Yang Kaido



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Enter Kenji!



Just know that we will be watching your character, and to be very careful in how you use him. You will be tagged in your team shortly and your teacher- though we are out of classes- will be Callisara.
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