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Das Tor

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 10:33 am


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Senshi: Sailor Minkar, Senshi of Jackdaws

Challenge: The clattering is getting louder.

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Blue-black
Secondary Color: Blue-grey

Fuku: Old reference idea, wrong colors

Collar -- Blue-black. Should look like some combo of shawl and sailor collar, with gold 'feathers' dangling from it.
Bow -- CC, whatever you think works with the design/theme.
Bodice -- White, with gold and blue-grey trim/accents. Something similar in design to the 'Wartorn Dancer' item on Gaia.
Sleeves -- Again, blue-black with gold trim/accents, and similar in design to the 'Wartorn Dancer' item.
Brooch -- Something round, gold, with a pair of small blue-black jackdaw feathers hanging from it.
Bottoms -- A blue-black skirt similar to the 'Wartorn Dancer' item, but slitted on both sides, and shorter in the front.
Tiara -- Something like what's in the ref.
Choker -- Just a simple gold ring around their neck. Like this.
Shoes -- See ref.
Gloves -- Again, blue-black with gold trim/accents, and similar in design to the 'Wartorn Dancer' item.
Accessories -- See ref, see aesthetic, HAVE FUN! Any jewelry should be gold, maybe with blue-grey gems.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Clattering's Misfortune
Duration: 30 seconds
Usability: Minkar can use this attack up to 2 times a battle.
Visual: Minkar stands several feet away from their opponent/s, a smirk on their face, and brings one hand up as if motioning for someone to come forward. As they do this, a small clattering [between 10 to 15] of astral jackdaws come forward, glowing eerily white, perching on whatever is available and non-humanoid in the area and chattering very loudly.
Effect: The astral jackdaws remain for 30 seconds, and bring with them the unsettling feeling that death is near. If approached, they will go silent and fly to another perch to settle and take up cawing again. When they disappear after 30 seconds, they take the ominous feeling with them.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Clattering's Omen
Duration: 45 seconds
Usability: Minkar can use this attack up to 2 times a battle.
Visual: Minkar stands several feet away from their opponent/s, a smirk on their face, and brings one hand up as if motioning for someone to come forward. As they do this, a small clattering [between 10 to 15] of astral jackdaws come forward, glowing eerily white, perching on whatever is available in the area and chattering very loudly.
Effect: The astral jackdaws remain for 45 seconds, and bring with them the unsettling feeling that death is near. If approached, they will go silent and fly to another perch to settle and take up cawing again. When they disappear after 45 seconds, they take the ominous feeling with them. If there are no perches nearby, the astral jackdaws will use a person as a perch! While this doesn't have any magical effect, it can still be unsettling as the birds will feel like very cold air has settled on the person where the crow landed.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Vanish in the Clatter
Duration: 30 seconds
Usability: Minkar can use this attack once per battle.
Visual: Whispering the name of the attack, Minkar takes a few steps back quickly, motioning their hands as if calling for someone. From the ground in front of them, a huge clattering of spectral jackdaws appears, blocking them from the sight of anyone around them. The jackdaws disappear after a few seconds, and Minkar seems to have vanished with them...if you're aligned with Chaos.
Effect: Minkar is visually invisible to Chaos-aligned Powereds for 30 seconds, making them difficult to strike at. While they can be found through non-visual means, including their aura/noise made by their fuku or themself/abilities such as Sailor Metis has, they cannot be seen if your aura is Chaos. They cannot use this magic on others, only themselves. While the magic will last if they are injured, any result of injury that leaves their body [blood, torn cloth, etc] can be seen. [In softer ground/grass/etc, footprints or trails WOULD be seen!]
PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 10:49 am


Das Tor


Hi Das!

I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but unfortunately Crows was won in the auction SyNy hosted :< I wanted to make sure you were aware, because although your claim and the auction win were close, the auction win happened first ;; Sorry!


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Das Tor

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 11:12 am


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Das Tor


Hi Das!

I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but unfortunately Crows was won in the auction SyNy hosted :< I wanted to make sure you were aware, because although your claim and the auction win were close, the auction win happened first ;; Sorry!
I didn't see a claim for it, though? An auction win is just an auction win? Without a claim, it's just a high bid. o.o
PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2015 11:21 am


Das Tor
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Das Tor


Hi Das!

I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but unfortunately Crows was won in the auction SyNy hosted :< I wanted to make sure you were aware, because although your claim and the auction win were close, the auction win happened first ;; Sorry!
I didn't see a claim for it, though? An auction win is just an auction win? Without a claim, it's just a high bid. o.o


Details have been sent to the artist and confirmed in the artist's payment thread in the staff section, so unfortunately yes, it is a claim.


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 12:38 pm


/Flies in and makes a nest of pretty objects and things....

Powered side looks good to me! Tor's first two attacks is very good!

My concern with Tor's eternal is; Full Invisibility is a unfortunately a little OP. No one can completely hide their aura without the help of multiple cats, on either side regardless of faction. To be fair, Aura's don't pinpoint a character either, so you could still play with that.

Also, I would like to request that Tor has some sort of visual disturbance, such as a rippling in the air where they are, or perhaps his shadow doesn't disappear while he is invisible. Full invisibility is the sort of attack that doesn't allow to be defended against. You could, however take out that Tor is only invisible to Chaos and add order in as well.

Let me know what you think!


Das Tor
PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 2:22 pm


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Made a few changes and clarified something. |D The whole point was for them to be /visually/ invisible, not totally. Aura/scent/sound/etc would still give them away. Aura-hiding was never something I stated would happen. o.o [And considering I intend for their fuku to gain MORE shiny, jingly things as they go up in stage, sound would not be a hard thing to track them by.]

I did cut down the duration because I can understand it being OP, but I'd rather not include an air ripple or shadow if possible, as I was pulling from this for inspiration for the attack.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 2:41 pm


Das Tor
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Made a few changes and clarified something. |D The whole point was for them to be /visually/ invisible, not totally. Aura/scent/sound/etc would still give them away. Aura-hiding was never something I stated would happen. o.o [And considering I intend for their fuku to gain MORE shiny, jingly things as they go up in stage, sound would not be a hard thing to track them by.]

I did cut down the duration because I can understand it being OP, but I'd rather not include an air ripple or shadow if possible, as I was pulling from this for inspiration for the attack.



I'm sorry, I must've misread somewhere in Eternal that you had Aura's masked from Chaos aligned.

Mmm, I think the clarification helps. Also since you include scent/aura/sound as indicators to where he could be if characters are perceptive enough, I'm fine with his attack lasting 30 seconds still.

The way I see it now, is it's sort of a misdirection, and those are good! Quote me with your change of time and I'll drop a stamp!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 2:51 pm


Pixie Nyxie
Change made!

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 3:05 pm


Das Tor
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Change made!



Perfect, Thanks! Congratulations on your claim again! <333

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2015 9:08 am


Das Tor


Looks good! Have fun!

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