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[Quest] Jack, Pollux's really small Bara kitten! (crits idk)

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Pixie Nyxie

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 6:35 pm


Name: Jack

Nicknames: N/A

Breed: Scottish Kilt: [HERE]

Attached to: Pollux, Senshi of Frost

Alignment: Senshi

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Milk, and anything protein

Hated Food: Broccoli, GROSS UGLY TREES.

Hobbies:

Tear Jerker Movies: Whenever Marlo isn't home, sometimes when he is, Jack puts on the best kind of movies. The one's that move your heart (HOMEWARD BOUND), the ones that make you feel for the characters (OLIVER AND COMPANY), Ones that have a signifigant character dying that is just like...(I AM LEGEND), or just those romantic movies with happy endings. By the end of the night, Jack is a sobbing mess and he loves it.

Coloring books: To calm himself sometimes, Jack will be found using crayons and pencils to color in the nice neat lines of coloring books. It seems like a childlike hobby, but its sometimes nice just to have something he can follow in the lines for. As for the method of coloring, he relies on putting the crayon in his mouth and slowly drawing. Sometimes he ask Marlo for small paint sets that he can use his paws to paint with. Marlo thinks its messy though.



Virtues:

White Knight: Jack is very protective of strangers and loved ones equally. He throws himself into the fray and into the heat of danger. Most commonly, he feels that with his small body, that he can at least take some brunt of damage and save another from suffering harm!

Soft Hearted: Jack has a soft spot for the world, and believes in the most good of all people. He tends to speak softly, and tread softly and does his best to comfort others as well! This could get him in trouble, since he see's only the good and never the bad, leaving him open for some serious emotional damage.

Flaws:

Cry Baby: Jack has a tendency to overact to the situation, believing it to be more stressful or saddening then it really is. This turns around, stressing him out to the point that tears start to form and he becomes a blubbering mess! It's not very attractive and can hinder him from acting out!

Self Neglectful: Jack has a hard time paying attention to his own needs, which leads him to forgetting about himself a lot. He's so focused on the comfort and needs of others, he doesn't quite remember to take care of himself! Thank goodness for Pollux/Marlo who takes very good care of him!

Challenge: P-Please stop this madness!

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION : CAT FORM

Face/Ears: Folded back ears, Tabby gray in color.

Body: He's an adult cat with a kitten body? If that makes sense. He's a very small breed.

Fur: Tabby gray. Star is Ice blue.

Eyes: Ice blue

Accessories: Collar like so, Blue in color: [HERE]

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION : HUMAN FORM

Eyes: Ice blue, should be big and wide.

Hair: Midlength gray hair down to his shoulders: [HERE]

Face: Manlier.....face? [HERE]

Clothes: Er IDK Up to CC, Something to match Pollux: [HERE]
PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 6:36 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 7:09 pm


Pollux approved
PostPosted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 1:27 pm


Pixie Nyxie


Hey Nyx! I'm here to get Jack ready for stamping.

First, a minor nitpick: how does Jack color his coloring books? Does he hold the crayon in his mouth? Just thought I'd ask. Next, could you please elaborate on the virtues a bit more? Perhaps you could add some examples and situations to flesh them out a bit. It wouldn't hurt for you to do this to the flaws, too.

Quote me if you have questions or once you have made changes!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2015 11:06 pm


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I added how he colors but I am, so sorry, stuck on how 'add on' for his virtues and flaws. Mainly because I feel examples are included in how he acts based off those traits in the descriptions?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 23, 2015 7:25 pm


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Hmm, actually, now that I look at it, it looks fine. Here's a stamp, and one of the GMs should be by to give further crit or a full stamp!

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:48 pm


Random kitty factiod. A Scottish fold munchkin is called a Scottish kilt. 8D

/zooms away.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:55 pm


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Random kitty factiod. A Scottish fold munchkin is called a Scottish kilt. 8D

/zooms away.


BLESS YOU CHILD
I was like IDK what the breed name is why doesn't it give me one /EDITS

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2015 2:11 pm


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Fabulous!

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