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[Dovaa] Nehelini "Hatchet" [Finished: Approved by Uke+Robo]

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 11:37 am


Custom: Semi
Character Name: Nehlini, though he prefers Hatchet
Race: Dovaa
Gender: Male
Clan: Aiskala
Class: (hoping to get him to be a healer if possible)
Appearance: Tall, but not intimidating. His horns arch up and kinda wave to the back of his head around his temples, really submissive looking horns. His scales are rounded and a pale blue, also his horns are a midnight blue. Alabaster (like a pale ivory) Skin tone with Lavender eyes...always holds his hands in front of him. Wringing his hands. Jet black hair with his bangs covering most of his large eyes...

He wears a pale blue tunic under a dark gray patterned vest. No hat, dislikes how they feel around his horns. Dark gray harem pants match his vest (pattern is up to Colorist), black short heeled boots. He wears a mutli-pouch belt which he usually can be seen scrambling around the pouches for a random item. He also, when it gets cold dons a long cloak. Its reversible with the outside being black while the inside is a rich blue...

ADDITIONAL OUTFIT INFO: If the colorist so desires...I found ref pics for his main outfit. Color changes as described above are applied however. And you can customize his belt however you wish~!

Pants, Shirt, Vest, Boots, Cloak

Personality: I am going to be kind when I say he's a scardy cat....seriously. Hatchet is nearly scared of anything which makes a sudden movement or really really loud noise. He has a habit of reciting things to himself at least three times, after that its imprinted on his memory and he rarely forgets things. Being raised in a primarily fighter sort of family allows him to not be as afraid of battle as his nerves suggest. He's timid and nervous about meeting new people, usually bolting if they manage to sneak up behind him. This reaction is due largely in part to his childhood and some of his more...vivid memories.

He's an absolute klutz, but oddly enough it translates well in his fighting style. Just watch him try to walk down the road without a few stumbles. He's also really sensitive so, watch what you say...then again he's dense so chances are he won't get the insult right away. He's loyal however, like a puppy almost. If he finds someone he thinks he can trust he'll follow them no matter where they go. Be careful if he does fall in love, he puts his all into it and if his heart is broken...chances are he may not be able to recover fully.

He has a really long temper fuse, which is good when coupled with his density and sensitivity aspects. This fuse however gives one the stacking power they need to get him really going...and once he finally loses it. Duck. The final straw for his temper would be if you cornered him then once triggered, he would fly into a berserker's rage which only stops at the sight of blood. He does have a daydreamer mindset most of the time, something which gives others the illusion that he's more refined than he actually is.

But, for all that he's Passive, Dense, a Day-Dreamer, has Good Memory, Loyal, Faithful, a Romantic and Fair Tempered (even if its Explosive when triggered). He has a good heart and soul, he would be a good ally for those who need it.

Biography/Background:He was raised in the Celestial Plane and then brought to Serenia. Born to a Peisio Mother and a Aiskala Father makes for an interesting batch of siblings. Nehelini was raised as the youngest, in a large family of 9 children, his parents were fair minded and tried to give each child attention. Nehelini was mainly raised by the eldest of the children, Baruin as were the others as the parents both were battlers, who constantly were called out to fight. A running saying among their family and friends were that each battle won was a child earned. Something the eldest of the 9 offspring didn't doubt for a minute. Nehelini always was a curios child, something Baruin encouraged but made sure the youngest sibling was near him. Nehelini's parents always were around when it truly counted for the children, that was all that mattered. The 9 offspring watched their beloved parents leave for a small battle, Baruin mentally praying he wouldn't have yet another sibling to look after. But, then again Nehelini was tired of being the youngest.

Sadly, one day the children spent a entire week waiting for their parents to return. Baruin grew worried and then the worse news ever came back to them...their mother was slain and their father had gone missing. The children grieved, but the worse was yet to come. Their Grandparents on either side of their Parents Clans wished for the younglings to be raised by Elders who could support them. The period of time it took for the two sets of Grandparents to decide what child went where was the fun part...Baruin escorted each child to a different family member, as per the Grandparents directions to ensure the children would vary in skills. Before starting the journey to escort Nehelini to their Father's Elder Brother: Jaxruis. Their Uncle lived somewhere in the Forests of Aurinead due to a combination of family issues and the male's own love of an Orderite male. It was Baruin who suggested Nehelini go to the male as Jaxruis was the only other Aiskala within the Clan. Baruin knew that Nehelini had already expressed his hopes to become an Aiskala, like their Father. Upon their first, tramtic, meeting Nehelini would forever slip up and call their Unlce "Papa" as the male is their Father's Elder Twin.

Sadly on the way the two siblings were attacked by Khehora, Nehelini was taken and Baruin was horribly hurt. But, all was not lost...their Uncle was nearby and saved the two. Baruin would never be able to see again, but Nehelini was mentally scarred. Baruin was never meant to stay with a Clansmen. The male was forced to stay with Nehelini and thier Uncle as per Jaxruis demands. Being blind and alone was something Jaxruis didn't want the youth to go through. The two siblings were then taken in by their Uncle, who was a traveler by nature. Exposing young Nehelini to all races of Madesc. The child became what he is today.

An interesting side note would be his reasoning behind choosing Aiskala. Nehelini had always thought of Ice as the prefect calm and smooth element. It had its rough moments where you didn't want to anger it (blizzard), but it held amazing serenity (calm winter forest scene). The child also remembered their Father as a man of limitless Patience, especially when dealing with nine children. The youth can remember sleeping in his Father's side as the male hummed and read in his favorite armchair. When he wasn't called out to battle. It is because of this calmness and serenity, which Nehelini lacked and craved as a child, which attracts him to the Aiskala.

Family
Mother: Vyanira- Peisio
Father: Ullion- Aiskala

1. Baruin - eldest of the siblings/eldest son; Gaili. Most see him as the wisest and most patient. Siblings saw him as tyrant and scary.
2. Solrains- second of the siblings/second son; Kiandri. Most see him as the most silent and wistful. Siblings saw him as easily ticked off.
3. Tylerain- third of the siblings/third son; Peisio. Most see him as cocky and a trickster. Siblings saw him as a pure terror.
4. Myridia- fourth of the siblings/eldest daughter; Ayrala. Most saw her as gentle and serene. Siblings saw her as the most patient of them.
5. Ullioani- fifth of the siblings/fourth son; Aiskala. Elder twin to the sixth child. Most saw him as quiet. Siblings saw him as cunning.
6. Vyaria- sixth of the siblings/second daughter; Firani. Younger twin to the fifth child. Most saw her as loud. Siblings saw her as vindictive.
7. Cassiara- seventh of the siblings/third daughter; Ysali. Most saw her as shy and timid. Siblings saw her as observant.
8. Ellios- eighth of the siblings/fifth son; Firani. Most saw him as headstrong and rash. Siblings saw him as protective.

Thoughts on the Great Engagement: It took his parents from him and parted him from his beloved siblings. Any who support war, thinking their in the right need to stop and look around. The war does a lot more harm than good in his mind. Those who fight because they have to, he sympathizes with.

His parents were actually fighting with the Obvis, so he was raised to be a bit more open minded about them.

Thoughts on the Magescian Races:
» Oblivionites: RUN LIKE HELL----I mean, sure Baruin told them a lot of scary stories. But, they all can't be bad...can they?
» Orderites: They got wings...they glitter...he was told a child that they weren't "air-heads" as one Tylerain called them. Also, that "yes" pulling their wings would hurt...
» Dovaa: He's proud of his heritage, but wish they weren't so loud!!!!
» Hybrids: "They're interesting...I had thought as a child they were impossible."

Thoughts on the Dragons and Khehora: Ysali: They're cute, but he doesn't want to anger them...small cute things can be deadly too.
Ayrala: They're up in the air, he's fine with the ground thank you very much...
Kiandri: Oh look, the reason why he doesn't like storms...
Firani: No...just no...
Peisio: MAMA'S CLAN!!! He's okay with them...
Aiskala: PAPA'S CLAN!!! He so wants to be like them!!!
Gaili: Earth...oh man...there's potential to exploit his klutz aspect....
Khehora: "...*hides*..."
General Thoughts If he ever ran into one: "OH DEAR GOD DON'T EAT ME!!!!!"

Statistics: Intellect- 4
Attack- 3
Defense- 3
PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 12:17 pm


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Appearance: Tall, but not intimidating. His horns arch up and kinda wave to the back of his head around his temples, really submissive looking horns. His scales are rounded and a pale blue, also his horns are a midnight blue. Alabaster (like a pale ivory) Skin tone with Lavender eyes...always holds his hands in front of him. Wringing his hands.

Works, though what's his hair color? He should have human hair color to start with and add in color after he chooses his clan.
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Personality:
He has a really long temper fuse, which is good when coupled with his density and sensitivity aspects. This fuse however gives one the stacking power they need to get him really going...and once he finally loses it. Duck. He does have a daydreamer mindset most of the time, something which gives others the iullsion that he's more refined than he actually is.

What can cause him to snap? Too much fear, getting corned with no escape and it's like a berserker's rage? Or seeing his family hurt?

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Background: The Eldest escorted each child to a different Elder, before starting the journey to escort Nehelini to their Father's Elder Brother. Sadly on the way the two siblings were attacked, Nehelini was taken and his Eldest Sibling was horribly hurt

First sentence is kinda confusing. So each child went to a different family? And then after all the other children where taken away, Neh and his brother were all that was left and they went where? Cause to be attacked, they'd have to be taken out of the Plane. If this is true, where where they being taken to? What attacked them? Dragons? Or Khehora (sorry, we're int eh middle of changing the Drakein to Khehora after some issues with the line artist so yeah XD )?



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Thoughts on the Great Engagement: It took his parents from him and parted him from his beloved siblings. Any who support it, thinking their in the right need to stop and look around. Those who fight because they have to, he sympathizes with.
Sentence in red reads kinda funny. I can understand it after a bit, but may want to rephrase it a bit clearer?

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Thoughts on the Magescian Races:
» Oblivionites: RUN LIKE HELL----I mean, sure they're scary and the ones he grew up near bullied him for being meek. But, they all can't be bad...can they?
» Orderites: They got wings...they glitter...he was told a child that they weren't "air-heads" as the Oblivionites children called them. Also, that "yes" pulling their wings would hurt...
» Dovaa: He's proud of his heritage, but wish they weren't so loud!!!!
» Hybrids: "What....THAT'S POSSIBLE?!?" <---dense


On background: Just to let you know, Dovaa live in the Celestial plane (they call it that, but it's not holy or anything.) Plane is like an extra dimensional space large enough to hold the city and that's it.Only Dovaa (and a very very few special dovaa hybrids) live here. So a Dovaa doesn't see any other races unless they leave the Plane.
So he couldn't have lived next to Oblivionites unless after his parents died he was taken out of the Plane. If he was taken out f the plane, you should include that into his background.

That's it for now! XD

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 1:00 pm


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Edited~!
PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 1:04 pm


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Edited~!
Looks good so far :3 Just a quick question (doesn't matter too much) what side were his parents on?

You may want to see what other staff think since we all look at a quest and have different questions XD

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 1:05 pm


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Edited~!
Looks good so far :3 Just a quick question (doesn't matter too much) what side were his parents on?

You may want to see what other staff think since we all look at a quest and have different questions XD


*freezes* Uhm....I gotta interrogate his elder brother for that one.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 1:09 pm


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Edited~!
Looks good so far :3 Just a quick question (doesn't matter too much) what side were his parents on?

You may want to see what other staff think since we all look at a quest and have different questions XD


*freezes* Uhm....I gotta interrogate his elder brother for that one.
It's not that improtant, just adds more flavor to your character :3 Also may influence your boy o his thoughts. After all, if his parents fought the Ords, he'd probably... not like them as much maybe? Or something? XD

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:50 am


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He talked~! Yay!!! Now, to wait....and wait...XD
PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 2:19 pm


Well, you already adressed my words so nothing new really. You have pro's and cons, a decent background... Only question I have is why does he want to be called Hatchet?

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 2:28 pm


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Well, you already adressed my words so nothing new really. You have pro's and cons, a decent background... Only question I have is why does he want to be called Hatchet?


Because when he sneezed as a child his first word came out as "Hatchet"....XD Its a funny solo rp i had planned.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 5:52 am


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Hatchet is nearly scared of anything which makes a sudden movement or really really loud noise. He won't shy away from a battle, but he won't actively seek it out either.

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He's super nervous when he first meets someone and may actually run if they're loud enough.


This seems counter-intuitive to me. If even someone speaking loudly is enough to frighten him, why does he not shy away from battle? Why become a battler at all? There are plenty of potential reasons that could fill in the gap, but I didn't see one and would like a little more information there.

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He's an absolute klutz, but oddly enough he won't lose his balance if he's fighting.


If he's an absolute klutz all of the rest of the time how does that not translate into battle? xd He can be clumsy and still grow into a proficient warrior, but I feel like if he's clumsy just walking, it wouldn't just magically disappear on the battlefield.

Does his eldest sibling have a name? If it were me I would name all of his siblings in age order and decide their gender and clans just for future reference, but at the very least it seems that the eldest sibling should have a name since they're referred to so often simply as "Eldest" which seems a bit weird.

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His parents were actually fighting with the Ords and Obvis, so he was raised to be a bit more open minded about them.


Wait, why were his parents fighting BOTH? The dovaa are generally peace keepers, and if they're going to be taking part in battles at all, they would need to be on a side - fighting both would be like being a lone couple from a neutral country walking into a war between two separate countries and deciding to take both on for no reason. I feel like you should pick a side here.

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» Oblivionites: RUN LIKE HELL----I mean, sure they're scary and the ones he grew up near bullied him for being meek. But, they all can't be bad...can they?


Where was Nehelini raised before his parents died? Most pureblood dovaa live on the Celestial Plane, a place where he would not see any oblivionite children at all. Hybrids aren't even allowed up there. And you said that after that, he moved to the Forests of Aurinead, which is on Serenia, a place where he would also see no oblivionite children. (I know Robo already commented on this but you haven't changed it yet, so I'm commenting again.)

Also, speaking of going to Serenia, if his parents fought against both ords and oblivs, I doubt they would be welcome there if any orderites knew. And why is his uncle even living on Serenia if he's also a pureblood dovaa? Just curious.

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» Orderites: They got wings...they glitter...he was told a child that they weren't "air-heads" as the Oblivionites children called them. Also, that "yes" pulling their wings would hurt...


If he moves to Serenia, he'll likely have more experience dealing with orderite children than oblivionite children.

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» Hybrids: "What....THAT'S POSSIBLE?!?" <---dense

If he was raised on the Celestial Plane, this makes perfect sense and is fine. If he was raised somewhere like on Eowyn before his parents died, then he would have seen hybrids and this doesn't make as much sense.

I think that's all I've got for now. XD

Oh! And I'm curious why he chose aiskala. I realize that it was one of his parent's clans (and that could be reason enough), but I'm kind of curious since clan choice is a big thing and it would be interesting to know what really made him feel like that was the element for him. (But all power to you - we could use more aiskala dovaa!)

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:02 am


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Dear god man I love you right now.

*turns on Hatchet* GET OVER HERE!!!! YOU'RE GOING TO EXPLAIN YOURSELF BETTER LITTLE BOY!!!!

Hatchet: WHAT?!? cat_gonk
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:05 am


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Dear god man I love you right now.

*turns on Hatchet* GET OVER HERE!!!! YOU'RE GOING TO EXPLAIN YOURSELF BETTER LITTLE BOY!!!!

Hatchet: WHAT?!? cat_gonk
Oh, good, phew. x] I was hoping that didn't come off as intimidating or overly critical or anything. @ - @ If you need help brainstorming feel free to ping me. xD

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 4:00 pm


Looks good to me. :] Any further details I'm sure you can work out as you play him, and I think all the logical inconsistencies with the world are fixed now. Unless I missed something, you should be good to go - approval stamp from me! =D

(And if Robo approved you also, this should mean you're ready for customs month. 3nodding )
PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 5:00 pm


Looks good to me~ Guess that makes him approved since that's 2 votes! :3

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