I will announce when I'm done and leave it up to you to critique it. I really don't have any other crew to and it wouldn't be fair to just plug mine in without opinions sweatdrop
Character Name: Zeriah Shizuma ()
Alias: ??????????
Gender: female
D.O.B.: 2-11-05 (19)
Prisoner Number: 7172
Cell mate:_________________
On Death Row?: ????
Deadman or a Common Prisoner?:????
How they ended up in Deadman Wonderland: hacking, theft, assault
Personality: Usually cold and quiet, Zeriah gives of a mysterious aura and has the air of a tortured past. However, every once in a while her personality tends to change, to the point where it seems like there are two separate indivituals. It usually manifests in a warm, though twisted disposition. She loves to witness people squirming under her, but due to her disability she tends to avoid fighting when possible. She isn’t comfortable whatsoever around men and will react with either wariness or violence depending on the situation.
Alias: ??????????
Gender: female
D.O.B.: 2-11-05 (19)
Prisoner Number: 7172
Cell mate:_________________
On Death Row?: ????
Deadman or a Common Prisoner?:????
How they ended up in Deadman Wonderland: hacking, theft, assault
Personality: Usually cold and quiet, Zeriah gives of a mysterious aura and has the air of a tortured past. However, every once in a while her personality tends to change, to the point where it seems like there are two separate indivituals. It usually manifests in a warm, though twisted disposition. She loves to witness people squirming under her, but due to her disability she tends to avoid fighting when possible. She isn’t comfortable whatsoever around men and will react with either wariness or violence depending on the situation.
Branch of Sin:Red haze: Zeriah's branch takes on a vaporous nature, and can be used to pinpoint opponent's location. As a side benefit it makes it hard for them to see, and from that point she can fire darts at them or simply attack.
Red string's harmony: Instead of forming a haze the branch forms wires, which can be used to both pinpoint an opponent or effectively cut them. The wires can also be vibrated to further disorient or harm her opposition.
History:At a very young age Zeriah and her twin sister Inoki were snatched up and trafficked. They were used and abused as they circulated, until their long awaited escape. However, the sisters had nowhere to go, and being so young and new to facing the world on their own they lived off the streets. That was, until one of them had a mighty fine idea: steal money from the lewd monsters that they had to suffer by for so long. It was easy enough, one twin would scout for valuables while the other put on an act to buy time, and if the “dodger” was in danger, the “seeker” would assist in getting them away, be it a violent route or not. They lived like that for years, reaping the pockets of their pursuers and going about their days with prosperity.
However, all good things must come to an end eventually, and that just happened to conclude in the worst way possible. A job didn’t go as well as planned, and without a clean escape the siblings were tracked. Once found they were brutally attacked and separated. The ordeal left Zeriah pretty much blind, chemicals being used to take her sight. To this day she still has no clue what became of her dear sister, the last words heard from here being a very choked up “don’t cry, I’ll be okay, we’ll be okay… we’ve always survived”
From that day she secluded herself from the world, silently staring into darkness. Eventually she accepted her disability, and learned to work around it using her other senses. After fine tuning them to an extreme quality she took to criminalistics ways again. After all, who would take in a blind, bitter young lady? After a while she was taken into custody.
But the prison was full of men, something she was a tad nervous about. She couldn’t see them to protect herself, and their voices seemed to be everywhere. So she took it upon herself to disguise herself. Hair cut short and feminine frame concealed, she began to use the name “Dodger” in place of her own. It was much safer to become someone else than enter hell as a defenseless flower.
Facts :
-Zeriah has a hard time trusting men, and though she can't see well she reacts to even their voice in an awful way.
-To make up for her blindness her other sences have sharpened and are a force to recon with. She can single out voices and it’s hard to tell she’s handicapped unless she falters and runs into a wall or uses her sence of touch to determin things.
-She’s known to touch people’s faces just for the sake of knowing what they “look like”
** If there's anything you feel I should fix PLEASE let me know. And don’t be shy about asking questions.

*** REFERENCE DETAILS (because details can be a bit hard to see)***
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~Other apperence details~
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Red string's harmony: Instead of forming a haze the branch forms wires, which can be used to both pinpoint an opponent or effectively cut them. The wires can also be vibrated to further disorient or harm her opposition.
History:At a very young age Zeriah and her twin sister Inoki were snatched up and trafficked. They were used and abused as they circulated, until their long awaited escape. However, the sisters had nowhere to go, and being so young and new to facing the world on their own they lived off the streets. That was, until one of them had a mighty fine idea: steal money from the lewd monsters that they had to suffer by for so long. It was easy enough, one twin would scout for valuables while the other put on an act to buy time, and if the “dodger” was in danger, the “seeker” would assist in getting them away, be it a violent route or not. They lived like that for years, reaping the pockets of their pursuers and going about their days with prosperity.
However, all good things must come to an end eventually, and that just happened to conclude in the worst way possible. A job didn’t go as well as planned, and without a clean escape the siblings were tracked. Once found they were brutally attacked and separated. The ordeal left Zeriah pretty much blind, chemicals being used to take her sight. To this day she still has no clue what became of her dear sister, the last words heard from here being a very choked up “don’t cry, I’ll be okay, we’ll be okay… we’ve always survived”
From that day she secluded herself from the world, silently staring into darkness. Eventually she accepted her disability, and learned to work around it using her other senses. After fine tuning them to an extreme quality she took to criminalistics ways again. After all, who would take in a blind, bitter young lady? After a while she was taken into custody.
But the prison was full of men, something she was a tad nervous about. She couldn’t see them to protect herself, and their voices seemed to be everywhere. So she took it upon herself to disguise herself. Hair cut short and feminine frame concealed, she began to use the name “Dodger” in place of her own. It was much safer to become someone else than enter hell as a defenseless flower.
Facts :
-Zeriah has a hard time trusting men, and though she can't see well she reacts to even their voice in an awful way.
-To make up for her blindness her other sences have sharpened and are a force to recon with. She can single out voices and it’s hard to tell she’s handicapped unless she falters and runs into a wall or uses her sence of touch to determin things.
-She’s known to touch people’s faces just for the sake of knowing what they “look like”
** If there's anything you feel I should fix PLEASE let me know. And don’t be shy about asking questions.

*** REFERENCE DETAILS (because details can be a bit hard to see)***
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~Other apperence details~
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