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[Q]Ralph the Wind Up Doll[READY~! Crits Welcome.]

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Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:09 pm


Welcome to Ralph's Quest Thread~!

Check out Jaqueline's quest too 8D
PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:10 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Ralph Trindel
Nicknames: Tin Can
Gender: Male
Age: 15 (Actual Age, may look Older or Younger)

Faction/Race Monster - Wind-Up Doll - Soul Possessed Object
Natural Ability:
Wind-Up: The ability to wind a key and become animate. The more the key is wound, the longer and more animate the object becomes.


Since Ralph needs to stay wound to stay animated, he's going to have times when he runs out by accident and needs help to wind him up. Because this may not happen, after a few hours of not being animated, a temporary spark with allow him enough life to wind himself up again.

Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic


Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:11 pm


Personality:

I can do anything better than you~

Ralph is quite competitive, considering he grew up around boys. There were virtually no girls in his village, other than the wives and mothers, and the only one there was was too young to play with. So he got into running races and playing shrunken head toss with the village boys. They even got into daring each other. Ralph would always do it, he was teased enough about being a doll, he didn't want them to think he was a wimp too~! He'll do any dare you tell him to, no matter how dangerous, and he loves sports, especially track.

What's love got to do with it~

Ralph is, for lack of a better word, failtastic with the ladies. Since he never reacted with them growing up, he doesn't know how to treat them now, especially the pretty ones.

Don't be such an emo kid~

Ralph is a little more sensative than most boys because of the teasing he took through the years. He gets very defensive if anyone brings up the fact that he's a wind-up doll. He's also a little people pleasing around guys his own age. He doesn't want to be made fun of again, and will do whatever it takes to make people like him.

Spread the love~

Despite being bullied all his life, Ralph is very kind. It stems from the want and need to not be anything like his tormentors. He likes giving, and complimenting, and supporting friends (or at least he would if he had any friends).
PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:13 pm


Why are they enrolle Academyd in Amityville?
He camd to Amityville because he was tired of back home. All the other boys his age always made fun of him for being a doll. So here he is, waiting for admittance. He's going to prove them wrong, he's not a doll, he's an action figure ordinary boy trying to hone in his Fear.

FEAR:
Gear Frenzy: Once per battle, Ralph is able to make his gears grind faster, making his movement thus faster. In doing so, he can strike multiple times in quick succession.

Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic


Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 10:16 pm


Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Bright Glowing Green
Hair Colour/Style: Black 'Normal Hair' fading into a Silver Mechanical Dredlock style hair. Shoulder Length.
Skin Colour: Slightly Tanned Flesh Tone (Except on Mechanical Parts)
Clothing Style/Colours:
~He has an Olde English Gentleman's vest in Black (Cotton Material).
~Underneath is a White Shirt, with a Black Ascot, and only the Left Arm is Sleeved.
~A Pair of Olde English Gentleman's trousers in Black and White Pinstripe.
~A Black Pair of English Gentleman's shoes.
~Monocle in his Normal-Looking Eye.
Extra:
~His Right Arm is Mechanical.
~His Left Eye is Mechanical.
~He has a Wind Up Key on his back. (Or in his hand if you wish)
~HE HAS METAL ABS~!!!
References:
~ Anatomy (Sort of)
~ Hairstyle Inspiration
~ Gentleman's Vest.
~ Mechanical Arm Inspiration.
~ Pinstripe Trousers
~ White Undershirt
~ White Ascot
~ Gentleman's Shoes
~ Wind-Up Key

(All images are only to inspire inspiration and are not a set idea as to his looks)
PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2011 11:21 am


Ralph's ready for crits~! <3

Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic


Saliru

Cluttered Hunter

PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:08 am


I haven't much to crit about except that I believe this should all be in one post to make it easier for mods to read, right? In addition to that, his natural ability doesn't seem like it'd account for much for him? Sorta like flying is just expected for monsters with wings. Maybe it could be something relating to if he gets wound up too much?

There's also 3 small typos in the "Why are they enrolle Academyd in Amityville?" section enrolle needs a D, Academyd to academy and camd needs changed to came.

All that aside I'd personally like a lil more on why he's enrolled, maybe more here and there about examples of him being teased so I can understand how he feels better and why he thinks the way he does.

All in all, I love the idea. Definitely a proper human fear at least. If humans weren't terrified of his appearance - at the very least the fear would be of being /replaced/ by such a feeling piece of machinery.

((Psst - Crit me back on Alette? Link is in my sig))
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 7:39 pm


Just bumpin this up there~!

Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

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