This is the thread for creating bloodline limits. Just use the layout and edit it to your specifications. You may feel free to add in parts to the layout to fit your created bloodline as well.
Requirements & Rules ● Primary Element is Jishaku [Magnet] ● Must be Bloodline Profession ● 1000 word post to unlock bloodline abilities. ● Secondary Element is Raiton [Lightning]
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Posted: Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:32 am
Rinnegan - The Samsara Eye
Description
The Rinnegan is characterized by a ripple-like pattern over the eyeballs, with a light purple iris and sclera. It is said to be the most powerful of the Three Great Dōjutsu (三大瞳術, San Daidōjutsu; Literally meaning "Three Great Eye Techniques"). It is treasured for being able to bring forth all Ninjutsu; the owner of these eyes can completely master all five basic chakra elements. It was said that in times when the world is in disorder, a person is sent down from the heavens to become either a "God of Creation" who will calm the world, or a "Destroyer" who will reduce everything to nothing. It also allows the user to use all of the six paths techniques, as well as the seventh path, said to be "beyond life and death".
Requirements & Rules
● At the Genin Rank, one my access the first TWO Paths (( Deva and Asura )), the rest of the Paths come with Rank increase.
● The "Original" body (ex: Nagato) is allowed to use all the Rinnegan Jutsu, but when the Rikudō bodies are summoned; the power is split.
● Using the "Elemental Creation" technique, the Rinnegan user can access any of the 5 elements for usage. However, elements that are not a part of the user's original chakra nature will cost twice as much when performing jutsu and take twice the word count to learn. Also the user is limited to learning only 2 techniques for each element they don't possess.
● Must be of the bloodline profession.
S i x P a t h s J u t s u :
D e v a P a t h :
Banshō Ten'in [Heavenly Attraction of All Creation] Rank C A technique that manipulates attractive force at will in order to pull matter towards the user. It is possible to attract multiple targets at once, causing them to collide with each other. • Cooldown period of [1] post between uses
Shinra Tensei [Heavenly Subjugation of the Omnipresent God] Rank C The ability to manipulate repulsive force at the user's will in order to push matter away. Depending on the amount of force the user puts in this technique, it can easily shatter wood, bones, metal, or stone walls. By using this technique as a defensive measure, Ninjutsu of a rank lower or equal to the Rinnegan user may be deflected. It can also be used to repel flames caught on the user's body. • Cooldown period of [1] post between uses
A s u r a P a t h :
Chakura no Suishin [Chakra Propulsion] Rank C The user first focuses chakra to the soles of their feet. They then release it in the form of an ignited burst, sending them flying at an increased speed in the desired direction. The trajectory, however, is almost entirely linear; sharp turns, flips, and other similar maneuvers may not be performed.
Kaiwan no Hiya [Flaming Arrows of Amazing Ability] Rank B A third arm sprouts from the user's body seemingly out of nowhere, comprised of both flesh and machinery. This technique launches a detached part of an arm, using it as a projectile weapon. With a small-scale explosion, caused by chakra collected in the cut end of the wrist, the hand portion gains propulsive power and flies off in a straight line with tremendous force. Its destructive power is great enough to easily break through even thick bedrock. The hand portion is protected with chakra, which allows it to remain unscathed. The chakra in the wrist draws the hand back like a magnet, reattaching it again.
Chakra Explosion Rank A A third arm sprouts from the user's body seemingly out of nowhere, comprised of both flesh and machinery. The hand begins to open up and morph, revealing a cannon. The cannon then releases a massive blast of chakra that causes a powerful explosion which can devastate an entire area. • Can only be used twice per battle. • Has the force of [8] explosive tags.
H u m a n P a t h :
Kon no Jokyo [Soul Removal] Rank A By placing their hand on a person's body, this technique allows the user to gain otherwise hidden information. Once this is done, the target is left severely weakened. • Takes [2] posts to gain information.
A n i m a l P a t h :
Kuchiyose: Moujuu [Summoning: Beast of Prey] Rank C Summons one of the following: a three-headed dog, centipede, or bird with a metallic beak. Each enormous animal has a pair of Rinnegan, allowing the user to distribute his/her vision.
Zōfuku Kuchiyose no Jutsu [Amplification Summoning Technique] Rank B A technique to the dog summon. Upon being struck by a direct attack, the canine can divide into another identical beast and increase its power. The beast can then recombine if needed, with one body carrying the heads of however many additional beasts were created. • Chakra must be used for each post to keep this jutsu up.
Kuchiyose: Rikudō [Summoning: Six Paths] Rank A Splits the user into up to six separate bodies [dictated by rank/unlocked Paths], each able to perform the abilities of a single Path. Each body has a pair of Rinnegan, allowing the user to distribute his/her vision. Used primarily to gain the advantage of quantity.
When using Kuchiyose: Rikudō [Summoning: Six Paths], none of the paths can use techniques outside of their own path, except for three of the paths. The Animal Path can still using summoning techniques and can use summoner's traits (like using wind bullets if toad summoner), but cannot use Sage Mode. The Deva Path can use any ninjutsu techniques that the user knows. The Human Path has the ability to use any taijutsu that is known by the user. Each body also will have their own chakra and stamina pool that starts 100 in each pool. This is the maximum amount for each body and they all start with the pool full.
P r e t a P a t h :
Fūjutsu Kyūin [Blocking Technique Absorption Seal] Rank C - A A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing chakra. Able to absorb nearly any Ninjutsu technique directed at the user, to a certain extent. • Able to absorb Ninjutsu up to rank A • Abusing this technique [over 3 uses] will overload the chakra storage, causing extensive damage to the user • Chakra cost is dictated by the rank of the absorbed jutsu
N a r a k a P a t h :
Yama [King of Hell] Rank S Used by the Naraka Path for interrogation and is capable of discerning whether an individual is lying or not. When implemented on a target, an apparition of their life force energy appears in the form of an enlarged tongue, emerging from their mouth. The King of Hell then proceeds to pass its judgment on the victim; if they are lying (or refuse to answer the question), their life force energy is ripped out by its two hand-shaped tongues and consumed, leading to the loss of the victim's consciousness. If the target is telling the truth, it lets go of them, leaving the target conscious but extremely exhausted. The King of Hell can only be seen by those targeted. Yama may also be used to heal the Rinnegan user at a faster pace. • Damage recovery may only be used outside of battle.
T h e O u t e r P a t h :
Gedō: Rinne Tensei no Jutsu [Outer Path: Samsara of Heavenly Life Technique] Rank S+ By channelling power through the Naraka Path's Yama [King of Hell], the user can fuse new life force energy with the bodies of those who have recently died. With their rejuvenated bodies acting as an anchor, the individual souls are then able to leave the crossroad between earth and the afterlife, returning to their physical vessels. Because the user is essentially bringing back the dead, • Cannot be used to revive those who have been dead for more than a day
Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 7:44 pm
Something like this? ; u ; No?
SCENT RELEASE: KOUSUITON - ODA
Description
The Oda have been able to secrete scent from their body to control a person's mental or physical state. They also are known to use the scent of specific flowers, combined with their chakra to create illusions and effects on a person's body/health. Eating plants help strengthen this kekkei genkai even the poisonous ones. This doesn't mean that one would escape the ailments that follows. Kousuiton users feel the side effects at full from toxic plants (examples: disorientation, nausia, vomiting- etc. Though one would be able to build some form of slight immunity with a long period in which a specific toxic plant is consumed. In this case, the duration of side effects is shorter than a non-kousuiton user) , though- unlike natural cases where one consumes a toxic plant, the Oda are able to escape a perminent ailment, death. Because of the high consumption of toxins, a users blood will darken. The darker, the more toxic plants had been consumed. If the color reaches black, it would be best not to get it on you- the blood becomes acidic and boiling when in contact with air. Only Oda can touch another clans-member's blood without getting burned or injured. Though, the power lies within the control of chakra and the lungs, exceeding chakra control is needed. As the barer breathes in, the air consumed is converted into a specific scent with the aid of the user's chakra. Users are male, though in rare cases pure blooded females can carry the trait- (proven by the last clan head's youngest heir, supposedly the last of the clan). The scents can either be emitted from the skin, or be exhaled. Most kousuiton users are classified as sensory nin due to their ability to distinctly taste and smell a person's scent or chakra from a long distance. Kousuiton today, is a secret art that will most likely die out with the last wielder.
Background
Due to a complicated history- the clan is nearly extinct and will die out eventually.
KEY: NUMBERG = Generation MIA = Missing D = Deceased F = Female M = Male
89G Oda, Kotone F D; The second oldest; Katsumi and Katashi's sister. Pure/main family. 89G Seiji, Nobunaga M D; Kotone's husband. 90G Seiji, Isamu M D; Kotone and Nobunaga's child.
89G Oda, Katsumi M D; Brother to Kotone and Katashi. Pure/main family.
89G Oda, Katashi M D; Previous clan head, father to Daijiro, Daiki and Denji. Grandfather to Hiroshi and Hanamori. Pure/main family. 89G Oda, Shiori F D; Wife of Katashi. Pure/main family. 90G Oda, Daijiro M D; Eldest of Katashi and Shiori's sons. Pure/main family. 90G Oda, Denji M D; Youngest of Katashi and Shiori's sons. Pure/main family.
89G Oda, Eiji M D; Airi and Akira's father. Friend of Katashi and cousin. Hiroshi and Hanamori's grandfather. 89G Oda, Momoe F D; Eiji's wife. 90G Oda, Akira M D; Brother to Airi and uncle to Hiroshi and Hanamori.
90G Oda, Airi F D; Daiki's wife and mother of Hiroshi and Hanamori. 90G Oda, Daiki M D; Son of Katashi, father of Hiroshi and Hanamori. Pure/main family. 91G Oda, Hiroshi M D; Son of Daiki and Airi, brother to Hanamori. Pure/main family. 91G Oda, Hanamori F; Daughter of Daiki and Airi, Sister to Hiroshi. Pure/main family.
90G Oda, Naoki M D; Distant cousin of Airi. 90G Yamasato, Kiyoko F D; Naoki's wife. 91G Oda, Masaaki M D; The second oldest son of Naoki and Kiyoko. 91G Oda, Masayuki M D; The youngest son of Naoki and Kiyoko. Friend of Hanamori. 91G Oda, Masashi M D; Masaaki and Masayuki's elder brother. Friend of Hiroshi.
90G Oda, Noboro M D; Naoki's and Naoko's elder brother. 90G Inuzuka, Kuroba F D; Noboro's wife
90G Oda, Naoko F D; Sister to Naoki, mother of Rie. 90G Takenara, Miroku M D; Naoko's husband. 91G Takenara, Rie F D; Daughter of Naoko and Miroku.
91G Oda Arata MIA; Distant cousin to Daiki, Hiroshi and Hanamori. Orphaned. Had been betrothed to Hanamori.
Requirements & Rules
● Must be a suiton and a fuuton user with a knack for chakra control. Bloodline profession is a must. ● The person playing the character must be able to type in a lengthy and 'literate' (not really grammatical- but descriptive) sense. ● Must be from the bloodline of the Oda and not known as an Oda until future reference. ● Plants consumed (the toxic ones) must effect the user- Yes, you need to refer to a list of toxic plants found in Japan and you must include the effects if the character had consumed, in your roleplay responses. ● The Oda were traditional and reserved yet dignified folk- so the kimono, yukata- tatami mats. All that jazz. ● Qualities of character no matter how old: -Able to taste/smell a persons scent or chakra (the distance depends on either the purity of their blood (immediate relative to the main family etc.) or age.) Because of this, sometimes a character can get sick or nausious due to scent overload- depending on how well they know how to deal with this birth trait. -Males had the dominant trait for Kousuiton. Though rare, sometimes the purest blood of Oda females would gain the trait. Back in the day, people would see it as an ill omen if you were female and had the kousuiton ability. -Hair color is all but blonde and green. -Honey colored eyes. ● Very limited spots PM Sun if you have ideas.
Clan Jutsu
Meep. Figuring out the ranking for jutsu. Depending on the purity of the Oda blood in a user determines how well executed a jutsu will be. Keep in mind- the Oda are pretty infamous like the Uchiha. Kousuiton genjutsu is harder to break that the norm. Unless you can't smell or absorb the air and moisture through your skin, eyes, ears and mouth- don't expect to leave a fight 'undrugged'- Suiton, Fuuton and certain Doton users have a better chance against Kousuiton attacks.
The time span on how long a plant has been consumed over the years, can decide the potency of the poison (if a toxic plant)- think of building a little immunity.
香水遁百合 Kousuiton: Suzuran [Secret: Scent Release: Sweet Paralyzation] E - SS After releasing their fumes, the user can decide how long or how lethal the effects may be by chakra output (note: the stronger the fumes, the more exaughsted your character will be. DUH.) The enemy can think properly- and see around them, if not put into a comatose state, but have lost control of their nerves and movement. Depending on chakra output, paralyzation time may vary.
Plant consumtion: Lily of the Valley Side Effects: Vomitting or Diaherria, Disorientation, Headache, Fever
香水遁カクタス Kousuiton: Kakutasu [Secret: Scent Release: Tempted Lust] C - SS The scent makes you see things you want to see- that special person in your life, your ideal partner? A crush- Maybe... you're beloved object- even if you are a male or a female- you see what your subconscious mind wants you to see, what you lust, want and greedily crave. Resist those 'pheromones'.
Plant consumtion: Cactus Side Effects: to be filled out later
香水遁白菊 Kousuiton: Shiragiku [Secret: Scent Release: Innocent Truth] C - SS Wide range of genjutsu dispelling/repelling- or the 'cure' for Scarlet memory depending on the abilities and skill of the user.
Plant consumtion: Crysanthnm Side Effects: to be filled out later
香水曼珠沙華 Kousuiton: Manjushage [Secret: Scent Release: Scarlet Memory] B - SS Useful for interrogating a target and letting the subject roam free. Scarlet memory is a type of memory erasing. Unless the target focuses on that, 'something is missing...' part of their brain with strong determination- they will be lucky to remember a few clips of the memory. The subconscious mind will remember- though, in a form of dreams that most don't remember or understand when they awaken.
Plant consumtion: Red Spider Lily Side Effects:
香水遁紫苑 Kousuiton: Shion [Secret: Scent Release: Aster Remembrance] B - SS Unleashing scents that spark up a past memory- the user can get into the mind and play or mess with memories to their liking, unless of course, the opponent is strong enough to expel it.
Plant consumtion: Err- can't remember at this time Side Effects: to be filled out later
香水蓮華 Kousuiton: Renge [Secret: Scent Release: Lotus Divinity] B -SS A lavender glow will surround the selected party. All wounds will mend themselves depending on the amount of chakra given and the amount of plants consumed. The user is not able to use this technique on themselves, it does more damage than good to the wielder, seeing as they take on the wounds of those that healed.
Plant consumtion: Lotus Side Effects: to be filled out later
香水遁紅薔薇 Kousuiton: Benibara [Secret: Scent Release: Crimson Rose] A - SS The water particles in the air will stick together and crystallize- the user can see the glittering specs, llike of how the sakura petals continuously fall from the cherry blossom trees. The scent of the blossoms fill you up, inhaling the minute crystals, they cut up your insides and melt into a toxic substance which get's into your blood stream. A painful death that makes thy eyes, nose, ears and mouth bleed. To avoid dying, the opponent is best to have wind based techniques or water to nullify the crystals or blow them away. Or one can simply surround them selves in the element.
If used against a dojutsu user, it will be best used within a time span of ten minutes, else the chances of success will lessen with each passing second.
Plant consumtion: Rose Side Effects: N/A
霊魂の種苗 Reikon no Shubiyou [Soul Seed] (Fuinjutsu to Kinjutsu desu.) SS Using a seed, the user is able to transfer a living soul into it. The subject must be border-line dead, and high levels of chakra is essential for the soul to completely transfer. When the Oda were still living, only a selected few could barely manage this technique. Though children from the direct bloodline of Yoshimitsu could master this with ease. Though the teaching was highly encouraged, the use was prohibited.
Plant consumtion: N/A Side Effects: Physical, mental and chakra exaughst.
花復活 Hana Fukkatsu [Flower Rebirth] (Kinjutsu) SS Using a soul seed in the right conditions, with stored up chakra and the right demeanor, the user can grow a colossal flower- The time it takes a flower to grow depends on the user- but concentration is essential. The longer the user waits- a soul can leave it's domain- leaving it unfruitful. If successfully nurtured, the soul will be reborn in a new shell once the flower fully blooms. Chakra control effects the age of the bud. The body will be too young if too much chakra is applied- if too little, too old.
Plant consumtion: N/A Side Effects: Shot to the nervous system- possible blindness, coma, paralyzation for quite a lengthy amount of time.
Description The dragon eyes allows users to turn their eyes into that of dragons. Meaning the can see changes in chakra flow and natural energy. Different elements of chakra are expressed in different colors (Normal chakra is blue, water chakra is a deeper blue, ice chakra is white, ect). A more advanced use of this allows the user to emulate changes in chakra that they see. This isn't a complete copy like the sharingan, so most users can only emulate jutsu of elements they can use.
Background In ancient times, dragons passed their natural ability to see chakra onto snakes, and, long after that, to humans. This art has long since been lost to humans, but the older snakes and dragons that reside in the Ryuchidou still have it, and some of them are willing pass on the technique to those they deem worthy. Though there have been cases of disciples picking up the technique themselves by many years of training in the Ryuchidou. Due to the massive amounts of chakra the high dragons and elder snakes possessed, those training around them would be gathering chakra, and accidentally absorb some of the chakra they radiated, changing the disciples bodies and allowing them to activate the jutsu at will.
Requirements & Rules ● Must have been to the Ryuchidou at least once. ● To get it from someone, you must have talked to the White Sage snake/ any of the high dragons. ● To unlock it naturally, you must have spent at least 5 years in the Ryuchidou training. ● The color of a dragon eye is always different from your natural eye color ● The initial jutsu is C rank so it costs as much as a C rank jutsu to learn. You also have to level it up by typing the required amount of words for the next rank. ● Jutsu learned using this usually have to be the same as your element but their are some exceptions. (Shinobi with conditions that allow them to know all elements or something if that exists.) The cost 50% more words to learn. So if a jutsu costs 100 words to learn normally it would cost 150.) Dragon eyes must be active while learning the jutsu, and learning a jutsu while dragon eyes is active it an extra 5 points of chakra is taken for every jutsu you use. ● It takes 2 points of chakra(per post) to keep Dragon Eyes activated.
Clan Jutsu
Dragon Eyes - Rank C The user can gain another chakra element to learn jutsu from, as well as see the chakra natures of other people.(Seen in different colors, Ex: Fire=orange. Once the chakra leaves the body (i/e use of a jutsu) it can no longer be seen. Of course if someone uses a fire jutsu you'll probably see it coming at you anyway.)
Dragon Eyes - Rank B The user can see Chakra, as well as learn jutsu that they observe that are of the same element the user uses.
Posted: Mon Jul 15, 2013 12:15 pm
Mokushiroku - Four Horseman
Description The Four Horseman, allow the user to control and perfect a certain kind of jutsu. Either it being medical, genjutsu, taijutsu or ninjutsu. While they do have ancestors that can be linked to Uchiha, and Rinnigan user, no body in this bloodline has the ability to gain those dojutsus.
Background The Four Horseman clan, being a bloodline from four well known clans, has no alliance with any village, but it has been seen in all of them. The four clans that are rumored to be the ingredients to this bloodline soup are the Rinnigan, Uchiha, Aburame and Akimichi. Every one of the bloodlines and clans, that are said to be their ancestors, relate to a specific Horseman. Pestilence, War, Famine and Death can be linked to each of them. It can be as simple as Aburame clan, and their bug jutsu, or as difficult as Uchiha always causing war and hatred where ever they go. The clans rumored to be associated with this one, have aided the advancement of each and every member who have came before and that are alive now. Along with bloodlines that connect the Horseman together, there is also a type of jutsu. Genjutsu, ninjutsu, taijutsu and medical all can be linked to one of the horseman. Though most of the time this bloodline is linked with death and destruction, it can also be used to advance a village to new heights.
Requirements & Rules ● .Each Horseman has a class associated with it ● You can be a bloodline class ● You cannot use any of the bloodlines mentioned above. ● Death [ Pale Horse ] can die, you are no invincible.
Horseman Category Pestilence [ White Horse ]
Among the four horseman, Pestilence has the ability to have amazing control over ninjutsu. To the point of having a bloodline associated with a certain element, it can even surpass certain bloodlines if class and type are right. While this horseman can have full control over ninjutsu, his taijutsu and genjutsu are lacking. They can fight, but learning a taijutsu style can take increasing longer [ 100 more words a post ], and same goes for genjutsu. ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary
War [ Red Horse ]
Among the four Horseman, War has the ability to cast almost inescapable genjutsu. These kinds of illusion can even surpass the Uchiha clan themselves, and ultimately defeat them at their own game if combined right. If combined with the right class and type, a person can be immune to genjutsu while having the ability to control the whole world around them. Not in a reality sense, but in a genjutsu sense. The illusions these clansman, are on par with the illusions that Itachi can create. Some many even be able to surpass him. Same thing as the last horseman, but the genjutsu is replaced with ninjutsu. They can fight, but learning a taijutsu style can take increasing longer [ 100 more words a post ], and same goes for ninjutsu. ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary
Famine [ Black Horse ]
Among the four horseman, Famine have the ability to destroy anyone with their taijutsu. That includes bloodlies, and clans, derived from taijutsu. There ability to wield their bodies is unthinkable, by normal ninjas but with these shinobi it is like second nature. You fight like you are a master at multiple styles, and was able to fuse all of the styles together. Something about them makes their taijutsu better, and more intense then most other shonobi who are trained in tajutsu. They can fight, but learning a ninjutsu can take increasing longer [ 100 more words a post ], and same goes for genjutsu. ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary
Death [ Pale Horse ] Among the Four Horsemen, Death is the most powerful and deadly if used correctly. They are adept with medical jutsu, and can wield them anyway they want. Either for good, or for evil. These clansman have the ability to seem invincible, and almost god like. They heal at such an incredible rate, it looks like they heal instantaneously. The way they heal is incredible, because their chakra automatically goes to the wound and starts healing. The user does not even have to send it there, which is a double edge sword. They use a lot of chakra, but they do have a lot of chakra too. Though it seems like they are perfect, and can never die. They can die like anyone else in this world, but not by blood loss. Most other injuries can kill these clansman. There restrictions are minimal, but genjutsu and ninjutsu take a lot longer to learn [ 100 more words for learning ] ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary ○ Username || RPC Name || Primary/Secondary
An ability to manipulate repulsive force at the user's will to push matter or ninja techniques away. Depending on the amount of force the user puts in this technique, it can easily shatter wood, bones, metal, or stone walls. By using this technique as a defensive measure, all attacks directed to the user will be deflected, no matter the size, power or mass. (Debending on the Rank of the user)
Reading it over a couple of times, to me, it doesn't feel like a D rank, but more of a C rank - S rank jutsu. Can you be a little clearer about the type of force that is projected on a selected rank. For example: C rank – Can shatter would. A jounin- would be able to create dents and dimples in stone walls and metal. A kage level shinobi and up, are able to create a hole in the stone wall after honing his/hers ability-
You also need a stricter foundation and requirement list; do understand, if this bloodline were to be accepted, it can easily be taken advantage of and all our shinobi children will die from god-mods starving them with power. //cough// But anyways, onwards.
I suggest putting a word count ‘learning’ system for each jutsu.
Gravity Release: Black Hole force: Rank S
The user creates a dark black sphere of gravity that when thrown into the sky, attracts objects from all directions and pulls them into the sphere compressing them simultaneously. This technique is extremely powerful and uses two times the amount of chakra.
This appears to be similar to S Rank | Deva Path: Chibaku Tensei (Catastrophic Planetary Devastation) from the Rinnegan doujutsu bloodline. Along with a few other jutsu- Please change it or take it out completely- and with any other similarities, alter it so you can call it your own.
Needs some work, but I think we can get to where it should be with a little tweaking. C;
Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2013 4:44 pm
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PURATON - PLASMA RELEASE
☆ Kekkei Genkai Description/History ☆ [ ] Puraton is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that combines lightning and fire-based chakra to create Plasma and Plasma-related substances that can serve multi-faceted purposes. While using Plasma Jutsu, the user's eye color turns Neon Blue, while Lightning circulates from both their Arms. The user is also able to easily Guide the blasts of Plasma to attack their opponent. The proficiency of the Guiding depends on your Experience. Flames created through the Plasma Release tend to be White, or of a higher rank, Light Blue, while electricity appears to have a purple shade to it. The flames from Puraton can also glow in the dark. The base of Plasma is a potent mix of Fire and Lightning chakra that allows one to create a substance that is extremely bright, and has burning power equivalent to that of Lava... Serious burns from this substance are extremely painful and can only be cured by an experienced medical ninja for people who are lucky, or unlucky enough to survive an assault by users of this formidable element...
Requirements & Rules ● Must have Raiton and Katon as your first chakra elements
Advantages and Disadvantages ● The user's Plasma doesn't seem to bother him ● Puraton is able to melt through metallic substances with ease ● Although Suiton of the same Rank is able to put out the Fire nature of this element, the lightning part of Plasma would still travel through the Suiton.
Elemental Weaknesses and Strengths ● Suiton Jutsu of the same Rank would greatly weaken Puraton and results in Puraton to completely lose it's fire nature and decrease it's Rank by 1 ● Puraton would always outclass regular Katon and Raiton of the same Rank ● Puraton is strong against Fuuton, meaning Puraton techniques could beat Fuuton techniques 1 Rank a head of it
Clan Jutsu
● Passive - [Plasma Release: Plasma Manipulation] :: [300 Words] With this technique, the user is able to manipulate Plasma as they wish. The user is only able to manipulate inactive Plasma, or Plasma just laying on the ground.
● Passive - [Shape Transformation] :: [700 Words] With this, the user is able to use a mass of one of their elements and change it's shape into something as basic as a knife. This technique is used in conjunction with the Plasma Release's defensive techniques to power them up so that they can also serve as an offense.
● [D-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Energy Wave] [☆] With the clap of the user's hands, they emit a shock wave from their arms that is very warm and extremely bright. It's not made to attack your opponent, but has the capabilities to push them back. It can also push back D-Ranked Jutsu and incoming projectiles.
● [D-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Shocking Boomerang] The user starts out with both their arms in the air and then crosses them in a X shape, as a bright Boomerang-Shaped object appears. They then grab it and throw it at their opponent. If it happens to miss, it can come back up to 3 more times before it disappears. If it hits your opponent, it binds their forearms to their waist and gives them a burning shock. Leaving them a little bit dazed, and open for an attack for one post. After that post, the boomerang disappears. This technique requires no handsigns to perform.
● [C-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Spitter] A basic technique where the user creates Plasma from their stomach, and spits it out in different places. It's used to give the target(s) a shocking burn when they touch the Plasma spat from the user's mouth. The Plasma from this Jutsu can burn through Metalic substances. The user spits out 10 balls of Plasma at a time. The pools of Plasma left are 2 ft in length and width and can go as far as 20ft.
● [C-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Vines] With the user's Plasma Chakra, they can create [10] Vines made out of pure Plasma that would come out from their chest. The vines are used to bind the target as well as give them a shocking burn. They can defend the user, and can burn through any regular metallic weapons with ease.
● [C-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Shield of Light] The user builds up Plasma Chakra in one of their palms, and then the user puts their palm outwards. A stream of Plasma appears, spiraling from your palms that takes the form of a Shield. The shield is 7ft High and wide, burns any regular metal weapon. If it gets physically hit, Lightning travels from the shield into the object that hit it and burns it while sending electricity through the target's body. This technique requires no handsigns to perform.
● [C-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Armor] A technique where the user creates a unique Plasma Armor over their body. The armor itself morphs to match the users current needs. They can manipulate the Plasma to boost their defense. The Armour itself it hot enough to completely melt regular metal weapons. If made Physical contact with a Ninja, that Ninja gets seriously burned, and shocked.
● [B-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Clone Jutsu] [☆] A Basic technique where the user creates [5] clones made out of Pure Plasma. The clone only has 1/4 of your Chakra. It can be taken out with a solid blow, but If it's taken out physically or from a distance, then it bursts into a bright light of Plasma. It could give your opponent a burning shock if taken out physically and the Plasma gets in contact with them.
● [B-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Ball Jutsu] [☆] A technique similar to Katon: Great Fire Ball Jutsu in size, but It just adds a Lightning nature to it. The Plasma Bal has greater speed than the average Great Fire Ball, even more heat, and it's very bright. This technique burns through B-Rank or lower Suiton Jutsu in its way and ignores the effects of the Suiton completely. It can travel up to 25ft before disappearing into a large puddle of Plasma.
● [A-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Laser Beam] [☆] The user focuses their Chakra into their index Finger, and then release it as a bright Laser Beam of pure Plasma shoots out. The Laser Beam shoots out extremely fast, coming at the target at blinding speeds. The laser beam could keep its form for the user to easily move it around if he happens to miss. This technique has a cool down rate of [1] post. This technique requires no handsigns to perform. The user just places both their index finger outwards.
● [A-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Rotating Blades] [☆] The user would start this Jutsu by building up Plasma Release chakra on one of the their palms, they then create create creates a mass of Plasma with two ends. The can then use their Shape Transformation to harden both ends of the Plasma, forming it into a double bladed mass. The user then adds a spinning motion to the mass, causing it's killing power to be greatly increased as well. If a human happens to get stabbed, this jutsu would easily pierce through the skin, and give severe internal burns, and brutal shockes all at the same time. The user can keep this blade up for [5] Posts until it disappears, or strikes a target. » [S-Ranked] [Plasma Release: Dual Rotating Blades] The user would start out with only one Rotating Blade, but then form another one with their other hand. This newly formed Roating Blade has the same properties of the regular Rotating Blade and has the same abilities and effects as it.
● [S-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Laser Beam Stream] [☆] This Jutsu is the clan's most powerful long-ranged technique. To start this Technique out, the user focuses their Chakra into all of their fingertips, and then would release them all as 10 laser beams that shoot out from all of their fingertips to attack the enemy that have the same effects as the regular Plasma Release Laser Beam.. The laser beams can only strike one time each before dispelling, and the user could shift their fingers around to guide the Laser Beams to attack multiple targets. This Jutsu requires very good Chakra control and lots of concentration to do. This technique requires no handsigns to perform. The user just places both their hands outwards.
Notes:
• The user's regular Katon Techniques are White instead of Reddish. • The user's regular Ration Techniques are Purple instead of Blueish. • While using Puraton, the user's Chakra would turn White with Purple Lightning traveling around them. • Puraton Techniques that are very very bright have a [☆] by their names.
● Passive - [Plasma Release: Plasma Manipulation] :: [Learned from the start] With this technique, the user is able to manipulate Plasma as they wish. The user is only able to manipulate inactive Plasma, or Plasma just laying on the ground.
Change this from "learned from the start" and make it a trained ability. (ex Character must train "300 word count" to learn plasma manipulation") You can make the word count anything you want but the minimum is 100.
● Passive - [Shape Transformation] :: [Learned from the start] With this, the user is able to use a mass of one of their elements and change it's shape into something as basic as a knife. This technique is used in conjunction with the Plasma Release's defensive techniques to power them up so that they can also serve as an offense.
Same thing with Shape transformation. As shown in the anime giving shape to elements requires vigorous training. Training for this one has to be at least 700 words.
● [D-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Spitter] A basic technique where the user creates Plasma from their stomach, and spits it out in different places. It's used to give the target(s) a shocking burn when they touch the Plasma spat from the user's mouth. The Plasma from this Jutsu can burn through Metalic substances. The user spits out 10 balls of Plasma at a time. The pools of Plasma left are 2 ft in length and width and can go as far as 20ft.
Should be C ranked technique.
C-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Plasma Clone Jutsu]
Can the clones attack? If they have 1/8 of the users chakra it seems so. In that case it needs to be B ranked. The original shadow clone technique is B ranked because they can be used offensively while to other clone technique is C ranked because they cannot attack.
[B-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Laser Beam] [☆] The user focuses their Chakra into their index Finger, and then release it as a bright Laser Beam of pure Plasma shoots out. The Laser Beam shoots out extremely fast, coming at the target at blinding speeds. The laser beam could keep its form for the user to easily move it around if he happens to miss. This technique has a cool down rate of [1] post. This technique requires no handsigns to perform. The user just places both their index finger outwards.
Too powerful for B rank. A ranked technique
● [A-Ranked] - [Plasma Release: Laser Beam Stream] [☆] This Jutsu is the clan's most powerful long-ranged technique. To start this Technique out, the user focuses their Chakra into all of their fingertips, and then would release them all as 10 laser beams that shoot out from all of their fingertips to attack the enemy that have the same effects as the regular Plasma Release Laser Beam.. The laser beams can only strike one time each before dispelling, and the user could shift their fingers around to guide the Laser Beams to attack multiple targets. This Jutsu requires very good Chakra control and lots of concentration to do. This technique requires no handsigns to perform. The user just places both their hands outwards.
Too powerful for A rank. S ranked technique.
[Plasma Release: Dual Rotating Blades] [Auto-Learned after learning Rotating Blades] The user would start out with only one Rotating Blade, but then form another one with their other hand. This newly formed Roating Blade has the same properties of the regular Rotating Blade and has the same abilities and effects as it.
Make this it's own technique. And it should be S ranked. Your character is using an A ranked technique back to back, hence it's too powerful to simply be A ranked as well.
