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 Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 12:19 pm
-_-_-_-_-C u s t o m -_-_-_-_-P u p p e t s Custom puppets are a bit more difficult than custom jutsu and weapons; they require you to follow a strict outline to prevent ridiculous and overpowered tools from being constructed. Custom puppets must be accepted here- for full validation. ___☁ R u l e s: ☆ All submitted work is susceptible to change. ☆ Only those of the Puppet Class can create puppets. - But they must be representative of the rank the Puppeteer is. ☆ Custom puppets must be created in [ Konohagakure ] • You may have up to five [5] custom puppets. ( Referred to as custom puppet slots. ) • When creating puppets, keep them within reasonable sizes. ( No giants and no micro-puppets. ) • Custom puppets cannot be given bloodline abilities. ( Human puppets only. ) • Custom puppets may have a combination of four [4] different mechanisms. ( Two hidden blades and two weapon launchers; or no hidden blades and four launchers; etc. ) [size=9]
[b]Character:[/b] (Who will use this puppet?)
[b]Link to profile:[/b] (For a few clarification purposes.)
[b]Puppet Name:[/b] (What will it be called?)
[b]Puppet Appearance:[/b] (Description if you have no picture.)
[b]Puppet Description:[/b] (A brief explanation of the puppet- what it's made of, where it came from, what it does, etc.)
[b]Mechanism Summary:[/b]
• (Hidden weapons and abilities bulleted.)
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:19 pm
Character: Baku Neirfair
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21610165
//note that I made my first puppets before this new puppet system was made, and Angy said I didnt have to run them through here. Soyeah. //
Puppet Name: Celestial Puppet: Aquarius
Puppet Appearance: --->
More detail: Aquarius is a puppet about five foot in height. Weighs 100 lbs, due to metal wings. It wears a black dress strap-less dress. Its hair is made from the hide of black bears //those that had been slayed in combat or fell from the cold//. Its hands are chained to a water jug, about three feet in length, with a two foot diameter. It holds icey cold water inside. On its back are two metal wings, a two bands of metal jointed at one point to make the bend with five feather like blades trailing from that join on each wing.
Puppet Description: This puppet will be made from a Cheery Wood tree, making its body have a red tint to it. Its wings will be made from a soft and bendable concentration of iron and steel. Its fabric dress is made from leather, while its hair is made from black bear pelts.
Mechanism Summary:
• One three foot high, two foot in diameter, water jug to be chained to the puppets wrists.
• Two razor sharp wings to defend itself from enemy attack, and gain distance to keep the jug from being smashed.
• And lastly, in the palm of its hands lies water blasters, the chains hollowed out to leak water into the palms if needed.
And thats it, I dont want it to have many weapons. <3
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:23 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:23 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:27 am
Character:
Baku Neirfair
Link to profile:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21610165
Puppet Name:
Gemini. NOW, I already have a Gemin, this how ever is the second half. So if this gets accepted I will change the original Gemini to White Gemini, and the new one to Black Gemini.
Puppet Appearance:
This Gemini, has white hair, its button eyes silver. Its top hat is covered in ten seals [explain later], chains wrapping around the hat around the seals.. the hat itself is red. Its suit is covered in zippers, the coat black, and the under shirt red. Its hanker chiff red with white pokadots. Its pants red, and its shoes polished and black. Gemini is about Three feet tall.
Puppet Description:
This Gemini is made by the same person who made the White Gemini, know one knows who, but the scrolls been pass'd through families who cant use puppet jutsu's. It is made from elder tree such as White Gemini, making tis body the color of the moon. Its clothing is made from a soft leather.
Mechanism Summary:
• Its hat has ten seals what these seals do, is allows the user to summon forth Ten puppet arms, for grabbing and gripping, or just plain holding.
• In its left arm, has a four shuriken launcher.
• its right arm can shift around and form a buzz saw, which can only be 'used' when chakra is applied to it.
• Its head can be detached to reveal a spike, which if enough strings are attached to can be used as a spiked ball of sorts.
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:37 am
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Lady of Asclepias-Rosalia
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:59 pm
Character: Ayame Yuugao
Link to profile: Profile has been accepted. Just wondering if I still need someone to check my puppets over.
Puppet Name: Suzuran (Suzu for short)
Puppet Appearance: Please ignore the wings in the picture ---> 
Puppet Description: The body is constructed of the strong and flexible wood of a birch tree, reinforced with a thin steel frame for a basic increase of structure yet light for better. The coloring of the “skin” is the same as in the picture. The fabric is designed of light leather, including the blindfold. The puppet itself is in dedication to the now-deceased Suzuran (Short version - dead older sister of Ayame. Long version - read Ayame’s bio).
Mechanism Summary:
• Left Arm - Often used for close combat, a series of one-foot-long blades have been loaded into the left arm. They can only come out of the palm of the puppet, meaning that only one can be used at a time. The blade is generally used for stabbing and slashing purposes, compared to a short sword. However, if the blades should need to be fired like a long range weapon, the blades can be fired from the palm. Also, if the first blade breaks, it is possible to reload the second blade for close combat again.
• Right Arm - The right arm, however, is not equipped with blades like the left arm. Instead, a long serrated cord with a sharpened tip can be extended from the palm as well, and treated like a whip. The tip can be used to pierce targets, or the serrated cord itself can be used to wrap around the target and dig into the skin to cause damage that way. Has little use for defense.
• Chest/Core - For catching opponents, the chest cavity has been equipped with a serrated net with weighted ends. The net itself can be shot approximately fifty feet before losing momentum and dropping to the ground. The weighted ends help pin the opponent to the ground if the serrated wiring of the net doesn’t stop them from moving too much, as it will cause minor injuries by digging into the skin.
• Head - Similar to the left arm, the head has also been equipped with a sort of firing method. Only this time it’s a series of senbon needles, fired from the mouth of the puppet at high speeds. The senbon needles can also be poisoned.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Character: Ayame Yuugao
Link to profile: Profile has been accepted. Just wondering if I still need someone to check my puppets over.
Puppet Name: Daichi (nicknamed Dai for short)
Puppet Appearance: ---> 
Puppet Description: Designed with a slightly heavier frame compared to Suzuran, the Daichi puppet is made of cedar with a thicker steel frame for durability. The chest is bare like in the picture, though the pants and such are made of a heavier fabric as well so it’s harder to pierce, and when taking the brunt of a hit, the puppet is difficult to move. However, this puppet is also blindfolded like Suzuran, and is dedication of the now-deceased Daichi (Short Version - Ayame’s dead older brother. Long Version - read Ayame’s bio)
Mechanism Summary:
• Legs - While the legs themselves are durable, they can also be quite useful in combat. Hidden in the knees and the soles of the feet, twelve-inch blades can be extended and retracted smoothly and quickly for quick stabs motions. However, they cannot be fired like the Left Arm capability that Suzuran has.
• Arms - Now the arms aren’t exactly equipped with weapons, but a sort of defense mechanism. Plates will fold up from the core frame of the arms and lock together, forming a sort of miniature shield along the length of the arms. These are made for strictly durability, either to take a hit or to push forcefully against something in attempt to crack/crush it.
• Chest/Core - For catching opponents, the chest cavity has been equipped with a serrated net with weighted ends. The net itself can be shot approximately fifty feet before losing momentum and dropping to the ground. The weighted ends help pin the opponent to the ground if the serrated wiring of the net doesn’t stop them from moving too much, as it will cause minor injuries by digging into the skin. (yes it’s the same thing as Suzuran has)
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 5:10 pm
Character: Wednesday Adams
Link to profile:http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=22634557#336260689
Puppet Name: System Alpha
Puppet Description:
Modeled after a jaguar this puppet is faster than normal puppets, agile, and deadly. The build of this puppet is very sturdy. Heavy duty steel frame is powered by a charka recycling system that allows it to propel itself faster by charging myomer bundles being used like muscles throughout the puppet.. (Speed sharply increased, Mechanism to make this explained in more detail below)
Using masses of wire like synthetic muscles this system uses a process similar to an alternator inside the normal everyday car to recycle the chakra that operates said muscles. This allows Wednesday to move the otherwise heavy frame of system alpha at great speeds. Requires a charge of 50 chakra which will last until the end of a combat engagement.
Mechanism Summary:
•Explosive kunai launcher turret mounted (can only be fired once every two posts. Fires two kunai with HE tags. 4 reloads on board)
•Rapid fire senbon launcher turret mounted (Can be fired each post in bursts of 20. Each drum contains 100 senbon and carries 4 drums onboard./ 20 shots)
•Turret on back mounted on a gear system accessible by chakra threads(To be added later)
•Claws on all four legs similar to cats paws (Skeletal structure. Not actually a weapon but can be used as one.)
•Teeth are sharp as kunai arranged like a jaguars jaws (Skeletal structure. Not actually a weapon but can be used as one.)
•extending spike on the tip of the tail with 4 claw like spikes that and compacted around it, spring loaded to pop open for a more vicious attack (Hidden blade)
• Highly durable frame capable of withstanding strong physical attacks without damage to the internals. (Can not simply be destroyed in a punch. More reinforcement to be added later)
• Anti theft mechanism involving a high volume discharge of electricity into a person attempting to grapple with it (To be added later)
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 4:12 am
I definitely don't mind the puppet. But the thing that I'm slightly wary against is that the puppet user is only a Genin. Even though she is highly intelligent, I don't think that a Genin would have such a sophisticated puppet. If you could tone it down to a Genin level and as she progresses add more things, that would be wonderful. blaugh
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 5:11 am
Panthers7 I definitely don't mind the puppet. But the thing that I'm slightly wary against is that the puppet user is only a Genin. Even though she is highly intelligent, I don't think that a Genin would have such a sophisticated puppet. If you could tone it down to a Genin level and as she progresses add more things, that would be wonderful. blaugh Would it be acceptable to have it as is with the exception of the turret, to be added later? I can take off more but i want to see how much i need to take off first :3
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 1:51 pm
Holy Rinaku Panthers7 I definitely don't mind the puppet. But the thing that I'm slightly wary against is that the puppet user is only a Genin. Even though she is highly intelligent, I don't think that a Genin would have such a sophisticated puppet. If you could tone it down to a Genin level and as she progresses add more things, that would be wonderful. blaugh Would it be acceptable to have it as is with the exception of the turret, to be added later? I can take off more but i want to see how much i need to take off first :3
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 1:54 pm
Ill settle for a lighter exoskeleton for it but the internals would just be upgraded later for a heavier outer body. Otherwise it wouldnt be able to move. And id downgrade the chakra needed to power it. Would this suffice?
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 10:48 pm
Holy Rinaku Ill settle for a lighter exoskeleton for it but the internals would just be upgraded later for a heavier outer body. Otherwise it wouldnt be able to move. And id downgrade the chakra needed to power it. Would this suffice?
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 11:02 pm
Character: Wednesday Addams
Link to profile: as previous
Puppet Name: Guardian Enma
Puppet Appearance:
Puppet Description: A puppet designed purely for defense, Enma wields a large sword in its right hand and has a circular chakra shield that can be snapped into place at any time provided the strings are pulled. This shield becomes a solid and can repel up to 3 A rank attacks before it needs to be serviced. It can be used as a weapon as well but thats what the sword is for. Enma is a unique puppet in that its back is a storage cabinet for Wednesday's equipments and various poisons. Each poison vial contained in this chest has its own separate sleeve with padded edges to ensure no breakage is possible without breaking through the back of Enma. Wednesday does not carry antidotes for these poisons.
Mechanism Summary:
• Large sword as primary weapon
• Tangible chakra shield
• Back up steel round shield for when the chakra shield goes down.
• Storage
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 12:16 pm
Looks good! Approved. Though if you want, I don't know if I was reading it wrong, but if you fork up X amount of chakra ( Of course it would have to be lower than S) you can block the blows without having an actual shield on hand; it will be made out of the pure chakra that she has.
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