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Sinful Raine Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:06 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:58 pm
 Ok so my profile was accepted. Still waiting to hear back on my Bloodline Application (part two of the sample RP) and on the Custom Puppets. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Ayame Yuugao
Nickname: Black Iris, The Puppet-Witch
Age: 17yrs
Birthdate: July 7th
Gender: Female
Height: 5’2 (62in)/157.5cm
Weight: 87lbs/39.4625kg
Nindo: "I couldn’t help those in the past in my former state. I will grow stronger and become perfect like my puppets..."
Personality: Ayame is often emotionless, or seemingly uncaring and “mean” since she is very blunt but has a casual smile on her lips most of the time. Sure, frowning isn’t much of an issue, but she is still considered “cold-hearted” (well let’s see... SHE’S A PUPPET!). Secretly, however, she does want to make at least one good friend who can accept her.
Village: Konohagakure (unless I'm needed somewhere else. Having a Puppet Shop nearby would help though..)
Rank: Genin (unless I'm allowed to autorank. if not, then it's ok)
Class: Puppet ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Kugutsu Shigai (Puppet Corpse) (still applying for it)
Chakra Pool: 325
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Element: Fuuton and Suiton (Wind and Water)
Strengths:
• Long Range Combat
• Her Puppets/Herself (check bloodline)
Weaknesses:
• Fire and Ice Ninjutsu (check bloodline)
• Close Range Combat
Fears:
• Having her Puppets Broken (beyond repair of course)
• Dying Alone (without making at least one good friend)
Attributes:
• Puppet Trainer - Learns Kugutsu [2] Posts Faster
• Puppet Expert - Kugutsu Techniques Increased
Class Attribute:
• Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques
• Learns Kugutsu [1] Post Faster ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Ninjato Sword
Weapon Range: About 2 ½ feet = 30in = 76.2cm
Weapon Weight: Approximately 1.2lbs = 0.544310kg
Weapon Location: At her Waist
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• Kunai x10
• Shuriken x10
• Senbon x10
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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Fuuton (Wind)
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Suiton (Water)
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Kugutsu (Puppet)
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Bloodline (Kugutsu Shigai = Puppet Corpse)
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Ayame was born as the youngest of three: two girls and one boy. Ayame, meaning Iris, was thought to have been “the flower of the family”, always so kind and happy, but it would all soon change. While her father and brother were out in the village, the girls were home together, and someone broke into the house. Their mother was killed immediately, but the eldest daughter at least put up a fight before ultimately meeting her fate. At least she brought down the intruder before he could harm Ayame. The six-year old, being taught some puppeteer techniques due to the fact that her father (and only her father; brother, sister, or mother weren’t) was a puppeteer as well, started to preserve her older sister’s body to be changed into a puppet later. When her father and brother came home, the brother took Ayame away from Suzuran’s body while their father continued the preservation process. However, it didn’t go as planned, and instead, their father just made a replica of Suzuran to the last finest detail. The process took nearly three years to complete, and over that period of time, Ayame was becoming paranoid about the perfection of the puppet. By the time their father completed the replica, it truly was perfect, except the eyes. They weren’t exact, and to help keep the rouse that this was supposedly the real Suzuran, he blindfolded the puppet to hide the eyes and just said that it was better than looking at the real Suzuran’s eyes. Ayame agreed, and began some private training with their father to become a puppeteer.
A year or so before Ayame would graduate from the Academy, she suffered from another loss in the family: her brother. This time, it was her brother Daichi, but at least it was natural. Unable to get better from a certain illness, his body shut down and he passed away in his sleep. Again, Ayame’s father created a second puppet, preferring not to make a human puppet out of his son. So, just like he did with Suzuran, a perfect replica was created and blindfolded to hide the lifeless eyes.
However, that wasn’t the only thing that changed over the years. Ayame herself was in for a face-off with death, as she too grew very ill. Her father, however, wasn’t going to lose his precious flower and thus performed a series of operations on his only surviving daughter, and turned her into a puppet as well. Only with this type of process, however, Ayame was forever preserved at the cost of her humanity. After the successful operation, her father tried to teach her some ways of humanity to help her get along with her future allies of the shinobi world. It’s still a work in progress though.
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Lady of Asclepias-Rosalia
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 6:51 pm
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Full Name: Damien James
Nickname: 'D'
Age: 18
Birthdate: June 16th
Gender: Male
Height: 6 ' 1
Weight: 195
Nindo: " Kill them before they can kill you "
Personality: Damien is cold and uninviting, he is just one of those guys that doesn't work well with a team.
Village: Kirigakure [[ Mist ]]
Rank: Genin
Class: Summoning Class
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Bloodline:
Chakra Pool: 375
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Element:
• Raiton [[ Lightning ]]
• Doton [[ Earth ]]
Strengths:
• Kuchiyose no Jutsu [[ Summoning Techniques ]]
• Weapon Jutsu [[ Bukijutsu ]]
Weaknesses:
• Fuuinjutsu (Sealing Techniques)
• Elemental Opposites
Fears:
• Centipedes
• Failing
Attributes:
• Learns Weapon Jutsu in one less post
• Learns Ninjutsu in one less post
Class Attribute:
• Dual-Pact: Able to sign with two types of summonings
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Ryo: 両{Money}
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: Head Cleaver - Guillotine Blade
Weapon Range: Long
Weapon Weight: Heavy
Weapon Location:
• Strapped to his back
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• 5x Demon Windmill Shuriken
• 25x Shuriken
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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Raiton no Jutsu! - Lightning Release
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Doton no Jutsu! - Earth Release!
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
Stone Body Style - Solid, Hard, Hits
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Tetsu no Ryu - The heart and steel of a true samurai
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[[ U // C ]]
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 7:40 am
and
Since it's been almost three days, I going to approve my own.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 9:54 am
Hey NYS, I don't have many problems with your profile just... somethings I noticed. =^.^=
- You might want to fill out your history. Even if it is nothing more than a paragraph for the moment.
- I don't know about your strength's and weaknesses. Wouldn't a Summoner Class be rather good at Seals?
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 11:06 am
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Full Name: Wednesday, Wait for it...., Addams
Nickname:Wednesday
Age: 12
Birthdate: October 31st
Gender:Female
Height:4ft 5
Weight:83 pounds
Nindo: "nos devorabit qui subicite nobis"
Personality: Odd, seemingly uncaring, and very rarely smiles. Violent minded but subtle with her words.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Class: puppet
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Bloodline: Kemuri kyou Hari: Glass Branch
Chakra Pool:325
Chakra Color: Black as her heart
Chakra Element: Katon, Doton
Strengths:
• Hard to read
• Intelligence surpassing so called geniuses.
Weaknesses:
• Arrogant
• Doesn't care much for personal safety.
Fears:
• The girl from the sound of music
• Bunnies
Attributes:
• Aura of fear: People tend to feel uneasy around her. She isnt from this plane of existence and as such fear is felt. Uncontrollable shivers are a result. Similar to the effects of a D ranking fear based genjutsu. Does not discriminate between allies or enemies.
• The Addams scion: Her background allows her to use her puppetry without really paying attention to it. The motions become almost as simple as breathing, Allowing her to move in combat, efficiently.
Class Attribute:
• C. Attribute - Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques
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Ryo: 両{Money}
0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type:Pair of kitchen shears
Weapon Range: personal
Weapon Weight: less than a pound
Weapon Location: Her pocket
Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}
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• 10 shurriken made from human pelvises
• 5 weighted throwing knives carved from a human femur
• 10 senbon made from ribs
• 5 Hatchets made of femurs
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Maruton {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Katon
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Doton {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton} {If only one element, remove section}
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Hari
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• {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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Born to the matriarch of the Addams, Wednesday got sucked into a vortex one evening while assisting her uncle, Fester, with an experiment. This vortex threw her out in a world of utter bliss and violence for her. She found a village that was just perfect for her. Kirigakure. She absolutely adores the swamp lands and the fog that sets almost daily. Here she plays with the obviously made up people in her imagination. She is under the impression she is in a coma and these are all dream people. So what she does or doesn't do here doesn't matter to her. Only that if shes stuck here...might as well have fun with it.
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 12:24 pm
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Full Name: Hiromi Kobayashi
Nickname: Hiromi
Age: Eighteen
Birthdate: June Twentieth
Gender: Male
Height: 5 Foot 2 Inches
Weight: 98 Pounds.
Nindo: "Be yourself and always choose the high-road."
Personality: Hiromi is a very quite and soft-spoken person which only adds more to his feminine qualities. He's often seen trying to comfort those who have gone off the deep-end and will stop at nothing to try and get through to people. He doesn't personally like fighting but he always trains to become stronger. He would never kill anyone if he was left to fight alone since he doesn't have the heart to do so.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Class: Multi-Elemental Class
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Chakra Pool: 375
Chakra Color: Hot Pink!
Chakra Element: Water, Wind, & Earth.
Strengths:
• Long-Range Combat
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Close-Range Combat
• Slower Reactions
Fears:
• Being hurt physically.
• Causing people to get angry at him.
Attributes:
• Avid Scholar: Can learn Three additional Ninjutsu [Per Element (This does not include Maruton)] Each Rank up. (Starts at Genin.)
• Individuality: Can learn one Bukijutsu Style.
Class Attribute:
• Tri-Elemental: Able to train in three elements.
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Ryo: 両 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: Combat Knife
Weapon Range: Ten Inches
Weapon Weight: Two Pounds
Weapon Location: In his bag since he hardly ever uses it.
Summoning Type: None
Summon Sage: No
Pacts: None
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• x30 Senbon
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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Suiton
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Doton
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Fuuton
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Hiromi was born in Kirigakure and has lived there all his life. He was often made fun of in school because of his longer hair and much more feminine qualities. In fact, for a while he dropped out of the Academy because he really didn't like being bullied so much.
Eventually he came back though, which is why he's so much older. He's always wanted to be a ninja, not so he could prove a point, but so he could hope to one day save someone's life with his unique gift for elemental techniques.
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 3:13 pm
I may not have the rights to do this, but these people have been waiting for a long time, so I'll do it any ways. You may kill me if you want Qastor ^^;
@Holy Rinaku
Approved, make sure your personal attributes do not get outta hand-powerful.
@Sleigh Bells Fan
Approved.
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Sinful Raine Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 6:37 pm
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Full Name: Horu Buduo
Nickname: Wrath,
Age: 21
Birthdate: 29/6
Gender: Male
Height: 6'2
Weight: 180lbs
Nindo: "Kill them and let God sort them out."
Personality: Horu is short tempered and has a habit of snapping at people if they push him too far. He has a better handle on it these days, but he was once a troubled young youth in his teens. Getting into lots of street fights. The advantage of which means he has plenty of experience with actual fighting, despite his young age. Although he doesn't often show it, he does have a soft side to him. Usually when involving his pet bunny, Murderface. But there are a few other people he has grown both fond and protective of.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Kage
Class: Taijutsu
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Bloodline: Hyuga/Byakugan
Chakra Pool: 1320
Chakra Color: Deep red/crimson.
Chakra Element: Lightning, fire
Strengths:
• Taijutsu
• Close combat
Weaknesses:
• Long range combat
• Losing his temper
Fears:
• Losing himself completely to anger
• Never finding love
Attributes:
• Speed increased.
• Rubber body: Through years of intense training, Horu is able to bend and contort his body in ways most people cannot with ease. Dodging is easier from him, and it's almost impossible to dislocate his joints.
Class Attribute:
• C. Attribute - Wind Body: Speed incredibly increased
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Ryo: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: Hand claws
Weapon Range: Just a little bit more then his arms reach
Weapon Weight: 2lbs
Weapon Location: Hands
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon
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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Raiton
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Katon
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Bloodline
• Hakkeshō Kaiten [Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Spin]
• Hakke Sanjūni Shō [Eight Trigrams: Thirty-Two Palms]
• Hakke Rokujūyon Shō [Eight Trigrams: Sixty-Four Palms]
• Hakke Hyaku Nijūhachi Shō [Eight Trigrams: One Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms]
• Hakke Kūshō [Eight Trigrams: Empty Palm]
• Hakke Hasangeki [Eight Trigrams: Mountain Crusher]
• Jūho Sōshiken [Gentle Step: Twin Lion Fist]
• Shugohakke Rokujūyon Shō [Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms]
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
Suiken: Drunken Fist
Sazanami
Kaiser Fist
The Hachimon (The Eight Celestial Gates)
• Drunken Dancing
• Drunk Dropper
• Fallen Drunk
• Headbutt
• Crazy Legs
• Slapfest
• Drunken Counterblow
• Jazz Hands
• Rancid Breath
• Drunken Deception
• Influenced Battle Dancer
• Drunken Tango
• Belly Slam
• Dead Drunk Sweep Combo
• Dead Drunk Fisticuffs Counter
• Alcoholic Mist
• Scotch Slammer
• Enlightened Drunkenness
• Footing one
• Parry
• Footing Two: Horse Stance
• Bell Ring
• Sweeping Strike
• Half-Step
• Spin Step
• Attack Redirection: Upper Body
• Sword Drawing Skill
• Flat Step
• Third Footing (Back Stance)
• Cross Split
• Attack Redirection: Lower Body
• Hummingbird’s Flight
• Fourth Footing (Cat Stance)
• River Flow
• Hawk Dive
Palm of Heaven
• Rising Star
• Falling Star
• Ripples on the Water
• Lightning Release: Stimulating Armor
• Kaiser Crown
• Elbow Bolt
• Guillotine Drop
• Grand Backhand
• Surprise Straight
• Lightning Release: Invigorating Armor
• Lariat
• Double Lariat
• Liger Bomb
• Kaiser Fist
• Lightning Release: Bolstering Armor
• Kaiser Cannon
• Raiton no Yoroi [Lightning Armor]
• Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon)
• Omote Renge (Front Lotus)
• Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon)
• Gourai Rensa (Strong Thunder Lotus Chain)
• Gate of Life (生門, Seimon)
• Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon)
• Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon)
• Ura Renge (Reverse Lotus)
• Gate of View (景門, Keimon)
• Asakujaku (Morning Peacock)
• The Gate of Wonder (驚門, Kyōmon)
• Hirutora (Afternoon Tiger)
• Gate of Death (死門, Shimon)
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
Shunkan no Hagane
• Basic Chop
• Forward Step
• Backward Step
• Basic Stab
• Basic Block
• Pivot Block
• Forward Grind
• Deflection One
• Disarming One
C- Rank
• Calligraphy
• Extension
• Thread Walking One
• Solid Footing
• Sensory Information
• Twin Blade
• Brush Stroke
• Hydra Strike
• Disarming Two
• Deflection Two
• Advance of Steel
• Shearing
• Thread Walking Two
• Crescent Block
• Sword Drawing Technique
• Final Words
• Vorpal Blade
• Movement of Steel
• Offense of Steel
• Instant of Steel
•Countering Technique: Upward Repel
•Offensive Technique: Assisted Jab
•Offensive Style: Knife Stances
•Offensive Style: Simple Play
•Countering Technique: Back Repels
•Trick Technique: Change of Hands
•Trick Technique: Kneecap Surprise
•Offensive Technique: Swift Dart
•Trick Style: Knife Toss
•Offensive Style: Artless Draw
•Trick Technique: Knife Punt
•Trick Technique: Dirty Reflection
•Offensive Technique: Vital Poke
•Offensive Style: Two-fer-One
•Piercing Technique: What Defense?
•Disrupting Technique: Tingling Elbow
•Trick Style: Retreating Feet
•Trick Style: Blade's Edge
•Countering Technique: Oopsie and Over
•Disrupting Technique: Severe Acupuncture
•Offensive Style: Stepless
•Offensive Technique: Should Height
•Offensive Technique: Cutting and Crumbling
•Disrupting Technique: False Signals
•Defensive Style: Plucking Roses
•Offensive Style: Mistborn Stepping
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Horu grew up in a rough neighborhood, living on the streets until semi recently he got into a lot of trouble and many street fights. Eventually deciding to turn his talents in fighting and leading people towards a more constructive route, he joined the academy and became a ninja. Having lots of previous experience already, he rose up through the ranks quickly. Eventually becoming the mist villages latest Mizukage,((Just posting this up because Panthers told me you guys need a Mizukage and I should go for it. I realize it's not all capped out, but I can't quite think of what else I want right now so I thought I might just fill it in as I go. Of course, I'll get any change OK'd by a mod if needs be before I make them. If you need me to fill in applications, then I can. I don't know how auto ranks work in this guild.))
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 3:54 am
Good profile! The only thing I have to say is just a few things that I'm against.
* First, is the Attributes. That attribute is more so tied towards the Bloodline Class. If you want that kind of Attribute, it would make more sense to be of that class.
* Also(As humorous as the background is), would her not caring for personal safety also be a weakness? Seeing as she believes this world to be all a dream?
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* Just to clarify, the 'Avid Scholar' attribute, it adds three more techniques to the 'Base Amount', or does it stack?
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*)With the speed increase. Would it be safe to assume that it is increased by say... .5 of a rank?
*) Also, unfortunately, the auto-rank does not include auto-bloodline. That will have to be applied for. Y.Y
*) Lastly, I'd like you to at the very least, put fill out most of his cap. in techniques. If anything, cap out his Taijutsu. ^-^
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 8:20 am
Yeah it does (stack once I rank up) :3 So I guess that's everything. X3 I'm going to start RPing and if that needs to be changed I'll fix it. If that's not okay I'll just have it add 3 more ninjutsu to each of my five elments but they wouldn't stack.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 8:50 am
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Full Name: Kurumu Koneko
Nickname: Kuru
Age: Fifteen [15]
Birthdate: Janurary Nineteenth [19/1]
Gender: Female
Height: Five foot two inches [5"2]
Weight: Ninety nine pounds. [99lbs]
Nindo: "We aren't defined by who we are, but what we do."
Personality: Kurumu is unusually mature for her age, and quite responsible from having to look after herself and her little brother from a young age, but she can still be a bit childish at times. She can take care of herself, and doesn't let people walk all over her. She can be quite eloquent and appear arrogant, but she's usually just honest and brash. She has nothing but confidence and faith in herself and other people she cares about. She can be audacious at times, and isn't afraid to stand up for what she believes in, or let her temper explode when it calls for it. However despite this she's also quite bubbly, friendly and flirtacious. She has a strong heart and a very strong mind, she'd easily give up her life if it meant saving a few others, and is always eager to help those who need it.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Class: Medical
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Bloodline: Tenkougan (Applying soon)
Chakra Pool: 375
Chakra Color: Violet.
Chakra Element: Lightning, Wind.
Strengths:
• Close ranged combat.
• Excellent Chakra control.
Weaknesses:
• Long ranged combat.
• Kenjutsu users.
Fears:
• Claustrophic- Tight, closed in spaces.
• She's the squirmish, girly-girl type, she hates bugs.
Attributes:
• Able to learn Taijutsu one [1] post quicker.
• Her Chakra Control is at such a high level, as she ranks up the chakra cost decreases in her favour. Ex. Genin: -5, (with the exception of E-ranked) Chuunin: -10, etc.
Class Attribute:
• Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
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Ryo: 両 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A
Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A
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• 15x Kunai
• 15x Senbon
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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Raiton
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Fuuton
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Eiseijutsu
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Kurumu lived with her younger brother and mother inside of Kirigakure for most of her young life. Unfortunately her mother was very frail and very ill, and her father was constantly out of the village, gone off on missions and the sorts, leaving her to look after her mother and her brother Keisuke most of her life. She never really got to pursue her dream of being a Shinobi, to her, family came first and her village second. However, when Kurumu was thirteen and Keisuke ten, their mother passed away from an incurable illness. Kurumu felt helpless, like she wasn't able to do anything at all. So, she joined the Academy and studied specifically as a medical shinobi, to help those who needed it most as a tribute to her mother. She graduated recently and is ready to take on the Shinobi world.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 9:07 am
Panthers7 *)With the speed increase. Would it be safe to assume that it is increased by say... .5 of a rank? *) Also, unfortunately, the auto-rank does not include auto-bloodline. That will have to be applied for. Y.Y *) Lastly, I'd like you to at the very least, put fill out most of his cap. in techniques. If anything, cap out his Taijutsu. ^-^ 1. Yes, that's fine. 2. Fine, I'll go do that now. 3. I just did that. I'm capped out on both Taijutsu and Kenjutsu now. I don't plan to be using much ninjutsu so I'm good on that front. n.n Ready when you are, broski.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 11:37 am
Mogaar Panthers7 *)With the speed increase. Would it be safe to assume that it is increased by say... .5 of a rank? *) Also, unfortunately, the auto-rank does not include auto-bloodline. That will have to be applied for. Y.Y *) Lastly, I'd like you to at the very least, put fill out most of his cap. in techniques. If anything, cap out his Taijutsu. ^-^ 1. Yes, that's fine. 2. Fine, I'll go do that now. 3. I just did that. I'm capped out on both Taijutsu and Kenjutsu now. I don't plan to be using much ninjutsu so I'm good on that front. n.n Ready when you are, broski. You can't use the bloodline until that application is approved. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this if you have followed what Panther's told you to.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 11:38 am
Antonio Kage Inferni Mogaar Panthers7 *)With the speed increase. Would it be safe to assume that it is increased by say... .5 of a rank? *) Also, unfortunately, the auto-rank does not include auto-bloodline. That will have to be applied for. Y.Y *) Lastly, I'd like you to at the very least, put fill out most of his cap. in techniques. If anything, cap out his Taijutsu. ^-^ 1. Yes, that's fine. 2. Fine, I'll go do that now. 3. I just did that. I'm capped out on both Taijutsu and Kenjutsu now. I don't plan to be using much ninjutsu so I'm good on that front. n.n Ready when you are, broski. You can't use the bloodline until that application is approved. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this if you have followed what Panther's told you to. Alright. I won't touch the bloodline until it gets seen to. Thanks. n.n
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