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Immoral Oblivion

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:46 pm


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Background info: I like faces. I like abstract. I like realism. I like combining all three. I like making something that you have to look at to see everything. My art is probably weird.

To different ones(I usually do canvases, so they're big lol, no scanner.)
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In the first two, the girl holding the painting is holding the old one. The one on the right is the one I redid in a changed up style. I redo my things sometimes, and those are a few that I did.
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Here are a few more
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:05 am


Stunning. you're really talented.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:44 pm


Awesome! Can you draw more?
PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 4:02 pm


My favorite is the one with the tree playing guitar. I love the eye/nose/mouth next to the tree that you don't really notice at first. o_O Oh! There's a person on the sidewalk that I hadn't seen! There's lots of things to look at, the colors are good and it doesn't get boring.

The wonky abstract one was a bit too colorful for me to look at very long, but some people like that sort of thing. Anyway, I can't really critique it since I don't know the genre.

The realism one is very well done. The glasses are a bit weirdly shaped, I'm not sure if that was done intentionally or not, and the perspective is a bit off, but I find that adds something to the picture. Perfection is boring. The only thing I would change about it is the black bar at the top. Because it's so much darker than the rest of it and the lines are going in weird directions, it sticks out a bit much. You could try to fix this buy blotting it a bit with a kneaded eraser, or blending it in with the hair and background with crosshatching. The lettering is a nice touch and looks good on the drawing.

Overall, you're very talented. You should definitely keep drawing things. It's different, which is good. Keep at it.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 4:05 pm


Oh my gosh, it's so good. I love it!
PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:09 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:57 am


Lady Kira X
Stunning. you're really talented.


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:42 pm


I like it alot. It's all really well done.

I was trained with the Idea that art is supposed to portray an idea. Because of that, I dont really like the first art piece only because I've never liked any totally abstract pieces. The surreal one next to it is pretty amazing.

The realism one is also great. It'd help if you have a photo of the person to better compare. The thing that I noticed is that the eyes don't seem to line up like he's c**k-eyed. Maybe that's how he really is though so I don't know if it's wrong or not. Something about the bridge of his nose also seems a little off but nothing terrible. These are all small details

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:46 pm


The third one is pretty shitty, I'd messed up on it a few times, but kept going & that's why the big scratched out block is on top lol.

Thanks for all the comments & such, though. biggrin
PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:06 am


Lookit all the detail! surprised

I like the third one, only the nose is a bit weird, like the glasses moved to the right and made a dent in it.
Which I do not mind xD

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:18 am


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Darn...you're so good...

 
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:46 pm


Impressive work, indeed. I must say, though, the face looks just slightly disjointed. Did you fully plot it out before you put the finishing touches on it? On the other hand, it does almost look as though it was an intentional choice, though if that was the case you may want to push it a little farther. The exaggerated quality tends to add a lot to such work, though you may find that just being slightly more meticulous in the alignment of the features is more the effect you want.
Allow me to reiterate, well done. You have good, high-quality work and I hope that you keep it up.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:29 am


The first one is very well done the second one he is drawn out very well but his eyes are a little off and close together or maybe its the shape of the glasses but glasses are hard to draw. I really like the hard strokes done on it nice Job whee User Image
PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 1:12 pm


Wonderful. I love the big one with the faces. Make more like that and you could probably sell them. I know Id buy one or two.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:28 pm


Thanks for the comments. I added some more pictures.

As for the pencil drawing, I know. As I said that was a total ******** up, I kept messing up. I also do add tiny imperfections to everything I do so there's always room to improve.
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