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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:45 pm

Made it for WWE:E. I'm not entirely sure what else I need (apart from the entrance description), or if I messed up somewhere, so let me know what you think of it so far:

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Characters Name: Dion Necurat

Nicknames: The Mercenary

Height: 6'5"

Weight: 270 lb

Alignment: Tweener

Gender= Male

Sexuality= Straight

Size= Heavyweight

Race= White

Nationality= American

Classification: Heavyweight, Entertainer, Striker, Brawler, Hardcore

Hometown: Minneapolis, MN

Pic Base:
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Entrance Music:
Welcome Home - Coheed & Cambria (Here)

Entrance Description:

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As the acoustic guitar plays the introduction of "Welcome Home," the titantron shows the image of a sunset. As the sun sets in the video, the lights in the arena dim to black. A white light shines on the stage (to symbolize the moonlight) on Necurat, crossing his arms in an X across his chest, his feathered hat covering his face.

The screech of the electric guitar changes the color of the light to red, as Dion lifts his head, peering out of his mask at the crowd gathered to watch him compete. He slowly brings his arms to his side, then quickly throws a right hook, causing the fireworks on the ramp to run down to the ring.

"MAKING HIS WAY TO THE RING, FROM MINNEAPOLIS, MINNESOTA; WEIGHING IN AT 270 POUNDS, HE IS THE MERCENARY; DIIIIOOOOOOOOON NEEEEEEEECURAAAAAAAT!!!"

Dion raises his fist as he walks down the ramp, smirking at the audience's response to his entrance. Climbing the side of the ring, he enters between the middle and top rope, raising his gloved arm in the air to the thunderous roar of the crowd. Dion mimicked pulling a pin out of a grenade with his teeth, and making a throwing gesture towards the stage. The "grenade" explodes, causing the stage to erupt. He removed his cap and prepped himself for the match to come.

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None

Championships Held=
None

Other Awards and Achievements=
None

Commonly Used Moves:
Clothesline
Boston Crab
Facecrusher
Cloverleaf Backbreaker
Fist Drop
Big Boot
Hip Toss
Hammerlock

Uncommon (Groggy) Moves
Air Raid Siren
Tiger Suplex
Electric Chair Drop
Spinebuster
Chokeslam

Signature Moves:
(4)STO Backbreaker
(2)Consequence
(3)Samoan Drop
(1)Right Hook

Note: Numbers indicate frequency of use, 1 being most likely, 4 being least likely.

Finishers:
CTB (Collect The Bounty) (Uppercut followed by Poison Mist and finished with a Knee Facebuster) (Note: Poison Mist only occurs in significant matches)

Crosshairs (Body Blow followed by the Gory Special)

Quote: "Watch yourself...I've got a mean right."
"HI, DION NECURAT HERE, READY TO KICK YOUR ********' a**!!!"

EDIT: Removed a lot of clutter and updated move set.
EDIT 2: Created Entrance template, modified moveset, rehashed some details.

Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:28 am

Shining Wizard
Spear
Buzzsaw Kick
Lionsault

Four of the most over used moves in gaia wrestling rp.

Also...you're a heavyweight. Why are you being a technical flier when you classify yourself as "Heavyweight, Entertainer, Puroreus Style, MMA Crossover, Striker, Brawler, Psychopath, Hardcore."

None of that lend themselves to the moves you've selected except for the punch. Lose the Missile Dropkick and the other four moves up top and seriously reconsider what your character would ACTUALLY do instead of just using your favorite moves.

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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:35 am

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Shining Wizard
Spear
Buzzsaw Kick
Lionsault

Four of the most over used moves in gaia wrestling rp.

Also...you're a heavyweight. Why are you being a technical flier when you classify yourself as "Heavyweight, Entertainer, Puroreus Style, MMA Crossover, Striker, Brawler, Psychopath, Hardcore."

None of that lend themselves to the moves you've selected except for the punch. Lose the Missile Dropkick and the other four moves up top and seriously reconsider what your character would ACTUALLY do instead of just using your favorite moves.

Eh, I was just going with what I knew. They aren't my favorites, just recognizable. Either way, they're out.

Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 3:54 am

Got a lot of classifications there.

Try thinking of some more common moves. Armbar, Headlock, Suplex, etc.

Your finishers/signatures could use some tuning. There's nothing really... Different? You could also give them some gimmicky names. No one's gunna figure out that a Leaping Powerbomb is your finisher if ya don't have a cool/lame name to it. xd

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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:44 am

Punkology

Got a lot of classifications there.

They all looked so good, I didn't know what to pick! eek

I'll probably narrow it down some more, though. Thanks for pointing it out.

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Try thinking of some more common moves. Armbar, Headlock, Suplex, etc.

With the common moves, I figured I'd only mention moves that I felt weren't exactly basic, y'know? I know I can add more, but then again, I'm not starting for a while, so no worries, right?

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Your finishers/signatures could use some tuning. There's nothing really... Different? You could also give them some gimmicky names. No one's gunna figure out that a Leaping Powerbomb is your finisher if ya don't have a cool/lame name to it. xd

I thought Leaping Powerbomb was pretty lame myself... xd But yeah, I can come up with some more gimmicky stuff.

Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:25 pm

Leaping powerbomb...You could call it something like the Demon Drop...Or the Cliffhanger...

But that's just a few suggestions...

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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:41 pm

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Leaping powerbomb...You could call it something like the Demon Drop...Or the Cliffhanger...

But that's just a few suggestions...

Not bad, but I think I'll probably just put my SDvR 2011 character's finishers in.

Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:45 pm

I suggest a re-format of this. Just my opinion. It's kinda hard to get a grasp on what your gimmick is based on your move set

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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:36 pm

Oh a reformatting would serve you great as far as organization goes. Check out my profile to get some ideas as, and I will take this to the grave, most profiles nowadays are based off the skeleton I made up like 5 years ago. (I SAID BASED OFF)

By the way, I know a lot of guilds are using those % things to describe your character, but I think they're really dumb personally, and they look ugly in profiles.

I'd say the profile just needs some serious organization. Make it a little more fun to read too. People already hit on some of your move list failures. But don't be afraid to have more moves listed as signatures or common moves! You're doing fine so far.

Also: The Mercenary is a gay name, cause it sounds really generic and tool-y... but the Minneapolis Mercenary... wink

Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:37 am

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Oh a reformatting would serve you great as far as organization goes. Check out my profile to get some ideas as, and I will take this to the grave, most profiles nowadays are based off the skeleton I made up like 5 years ago. (I SAID BASED OFF)

By the way, I know a lot of guilds are using those % things to describe your character, but I think they're really dumb personally, and they look ugly in profiles.

I'd say the profile just needs some serious organization. Make it a little more fun to read too. People already hit on some of your move list failures. But don't be afraid to have more moves listed as signatures or common moves! You're doing fine so far.

Yeah, I've been going over the moves I use with my created wrestler on SDvR 2011, so I'll transfer those moves here.

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Also: The Mercenary is a gay name, cause it sounds really generic and tool-y... but the Minneapolis Mercenary... wink

Sounds even gayer. rofl

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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:50 am

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Also: The Mercenary is a gay name, cause it sounds really generic and tool-y... but the Minneapolis Mercenary... wink

Sounds even gayer. rofl

How about it just be Merc?

Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:14 pm

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Also: The Mercenary is a gay name, cause it sounds really generic and tool-y... but the Minneapolis Mercenary... wink

Sounds even gayer. rofl

How about it just be Merc?

Its a work in progress. I might not even have a Nick.

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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:38 pm

...Ah, I see what you mean now, Proto. Yeah, I'll rehash the profile to make it look nicer. I didn't understand the percentages, so I basically guessed.

Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:53 pm

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...Ah, I see what you mean now, Proto. Yeah, I'll rehash the profile to make it look nicer. I didn't understand the percentages, so I basically guessed.

Yeah, don't even worry about them. I only have them for Yuke because I wanted to. In hindsight they're really quite useless.

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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 3:22 pm

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...Ah, I see what you mean now, Proto. Yeah, I'll rehash the profile to make it look nicer. I didn't understand the percentages, so I basically guessed.

Yeah, don't even worry about them. I only have them for Yuke because I wanted to. In hindsight they're really quite useless.

Good to know. xd

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