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 Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:46 pm
Table of contents
1st post : Introduction
2nd Post: Civilian profile
3rd Post: Appearance and family
4th post: Sailor Chloris
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Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:32 pm
Civilian Profile
Name: SunHee Park
Nicknames: Although she doesn't mind being called Sunhee (her birth name), she would prefer to be called Sunny by everyone around her. It's easier to pronounce.
Age: 17 years old
Birthday: May 5th
Sign: Taurus
Blood Type: O
Fav. Food: Does it hurt? Does it burn? Then that's the food that Sunny likes best. Spicy chicken, Kim chi, and Mexican food are her favorites. If it causes you to sweat, then she'll enjoy it best.
Hated Food: Sweets. She really can't stand anything with too many sweet flavors or extra added sugars. Maybe it's the health nut in her, but she just can't stand them.
School: Crystal Academy
Hobbies:
Working out with home videos - For some reason, it has always been a lot more fun for Sunny to exercise at her house. Ever since her mother lent her an old work-out video to try out, she's been hooked! She's tried out so many different types of work-out videos, that its hard for her to come across one that she doesn't own. For the last two years, she has a habit of going online and buy new video's every month under her father's name, so that she can find new muscles to exercise. Although, Sunny does tend to choose the yoga video's most often, since they have a tendency to use many muscles that aren't normally active, she enjoys doing the aerobic dance videos as well. While others might prefer to work out with their friends, Sunny doesn't see the point to that. She wouldn't mind showing off her attractive figure in the gym, but she doesn't want people to see her sweaty and gross looking. Do you know how much that would embarrass her? Instead, she spends at least two hours every day in front of her television, exercising until she can't breathe anymore. All that hard work is just so that she can keep herself looking beautiful and attractive at all times.
Shopping - Like most girls, Sunny loves to buy clothes and go shopping! Buying new clothes gives her so much excitement, that most people wouldn't be able to understand her joy! Just getting a chance to peak online during lunch break and look at the new releases on her favorite websites causes her to have goosebumps for the rest of the day! It's so exciting and wonderful that she can't deny the fact that she could easily spends a few hours a week just browsing sites online. Ever since her family moving to Destiny city from Korea, she's found herself taking more shopping adventures with her friends although they generally just window shop, consider they are still students. Window Shopping doesn't seem to get enough the shopping habit out of her system. So, she goes home and continues online. The only good thing about her online shopping is that it only consists of shopping for clothes and fashion accessories. The other things online, such as those boring things called books, never peaked her interest. So why would she spend her fathers well earned money on that? After all, a Diva like herself needs to be trendy and not buy boring stuff like books and toys? The only thing that she really needs to watch out for is getting in trouble with her father, since she knows that he'll eventually pay notice of his bills at the end of the month and notice a few unknown charges.
Cosplay - While most people would be shocked to learn that Sunny loves to cosplay (who would have thought?) it happens to be something that seems like almost normal for the spotlight grabbing diva! Back when she was taking classes at her old middle school, one of her friends told her that she looked just like a character from an Anime. While other people might take that as a complement and leave it at that, Sunny wouldn't dare do that! She took that comment to heart, and decided to allow other people to feast their eyes on the perfect cosplay! Ever since that moment, she's believed that she's meant to cosplay no matter what. She doesn't care about what character or series her cosplay is from, as long as it's popular enough to get attention. Unlike other cosplayers, she doesn't do it for the reason of showing her love for the series. She does it for her own self, so that she can feel like a better person as people admire her. Although she doesn't get to attend convention except once a year, she doesn't let that stop her. She spends a lot of time and energy on her hobby. While creating the costumes can be rather difficult and annoying (part of the reason why she tends to buy the costumes and wigs online), it's worth it to be thrown into the spot light. She loves it when people will suddenly gather around her, take pictures of her, and comment on the pictures of her online. That's the only reason why she would join those idiotic cosplay fan sites, just so that people can inflate her ego even more. It's just wonderful to be idolized and adored by people, even if it's for her own selfish reason.
Gemstone: Diamond (astrological) and Emerald (Zodiac)
Virtues:
Confidence
While there are many different personalities at Horizon Institute, such as ones who might be considered to be trouble makers, Sunny definitely doesn't fall in that group! She happens to live up to her nickname of Sunny because she shines as bright as the sun. Ever since she was young, she always strives to be the most outgoing and charismatic person alive. She tries her best to befriend even the most quiet of individuals. One case of that happening was when one of her very shy friends was unable to ask a boy she liked on a date. Without thinking on the subject, Sunny offered to help out and she headed straight over and ask the guy out for her friend! Even now, those two are still dating, which makes Sunny feel accomplished. Being helpful is the right thing to do, since she knows that she's one of the best around at being outgoing, and she won't let anyone convince her otherwise. In fact, she has even noticed that confidence can rub off on other. Whenever her shy friends hang around with her, she notices that they slowly become more outgoing and relaxed. Of course, sometimes it takes a while for people to gain that sense of ease, but Sunny doesn't mind. After all, if she is able to help a situations to become less awkward and tense, then what harm could it be?
Rentless
For someone with a strong personality like Sunny, it would be assumed that she would think of herself alone and never the people around her. But, that's not the case. Once someone has gone out of their way and attempted to become her friend, Sunny has a tendency to become blind to the faults of her new best friends. She will become their ally, and believe what they say no matter what. She'll do her best to stay on that persons side and back them up whenever they need her help. Even if her friends are doing something illegal or something they shouldn't, she will go out of her way to help cover up that fact. After all, there has to be a good reason for her friend asking her to help cover her, and Sunny's willing to be there for her friends.
Compassionate
Underneath her arrogant expressions, there happens to be more than meets the eyes. Sunny happens to have a type of compassion that is special in her own way. While many people tend to ignore their friends problems or faults, Sunny wouldn't dare do that. She believes that she's someone who is able to help out, even if it's in her own unique way. She often points out people's faults, believing that she's doing it so that they could improve themselves. After pointing out the fault, she'll try her best to help them overcome those problems. Although there has been a few times when people have become insulted by her claiming part of their personality was wrong and needed to be fixed, it never bothered her. This tactic can sometimes sound really rude or harsh, but her heart is in the right place. She believes in 'Tough Love', since that is the best way for someone to improve themselves and become better. There has been a few times when she has lend a helping hand to those who are in need. One such time was when someone getting bullied, and she stood up for that person. When asked why she did that, she explained that they were getting in her way, and resolving this situation would make things easier for herself. But even though she was declaring that she was doing it for herself, the truth of that matter is that she's doing it for those people. But at the end of the day, she just doesn't want to admit that she's got a nice streak to her.
Flaws:
Conceited
This is one of her biggest problems! Ever since Sunny was a child, she has been considered to be adorable. Many people found her to be a natural beauty, since even at ten years old people would come up to her and tell her mother how adorable Sunny was. Hearing that constant praise, Sunny found herself believing that she was the most beautiful and attractive woman around, in her own mind. If so many people would consider her to be adorable and cute, then how could she not be? As she began to get older, her ego continued to inflate more and more. While she doesn't always go around demanding that you should admire her beauty, she wouldn't stop you if you did. After all, the more people admire her, then the happier she'll be in the end.
Doubt
Although Sunny would deny this, she has a slight problem of being really hard on herself. Ever since she was a child, she was always pushed aside by her busy father. No matter how adorable she looked, no matter how much praise people gave her, it never seemed to impress her father. He only returned home for short breaks, and then he would be as cold and distant as a stranger. Although she is his daughter, he's never even hugged her or told her that she was cute. So for her, she only wants to gain his admiration and love. As people always say, you are always your own worse critic.
Competitive
Since Sunny is always trying to impress her father, she has become very competitive. Although she may not be the smartest person around, she still wants to be the first in everything! Of course, being the best in everything is impossible, so she does her best at her school grades and (of course) being the most beautiful person around. Although she wants to be the most beautiful and intelligent person in Destiny city, she is far from it. Instead of spending extra time on studying, she spends her time getting ready and exercising (to keep her figure in shape), and then then she'll realize what else she needs to finish. So, she does the only reasonable thing, staying up all night to finish all of her homework. That is one of the reasons why she always has a hard time waking up in the morning, and why she is less than happy when her little brother wakes her up. But, that was the way she has always been. It's always her beauty first, then her grades second. If it wasn't for the fact that she doesn't like it when people suddenly steal the lime light from her, then she wouldn't even waste time doing homework!
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:34 pm
Physical Description
Hair: She has teal hair #3A8788 and she generally wears it like this, a ponytail with a bun and the rest going out messy from it. She has bangs.
Eyes: #2D0800 Dark brown eyes that are almost black. She has single eye folds and her eyes are narrow.
Face: Sunny's face is thin with a high cheek bones. She doesn't have very much fat on her face, except for under her eyes. She has slight bags under her eyes (normal considering her sleeping schedule), and her eyes are narrow and thin. She has clear skin with only a few freckles that show up.
Body: Thin and model-esque, except for her height. After all, how could she not look like that since she has put a lot of hard work on her body. She's about five feet two with a small chest, and her entire body can be considered the stereotypical small girl.
Fashion: Sunny always wears really fashionable and girlishly clothes. Tight shirts, cute dresses, she loves it all. Since she tries to be fashionable and trendy, she loves to wear high heels, even around her house. If you ever want to get to a good place, then make sure you have enough shoes to take you there! So, If you look in a fashion catalog, then that would give you a good idea of her fashion sense. this site has lots of ideas of her clothing style
Family
Father : DaeHo Park
Occupation: An executive of E-Pyunhan Gagu Co. (An office furniture manufacturer)
Age: 45 years old
Her father is a business man who moved from Korean to Destiny city with his family. He's doesn't stay at home very often, considering most of his work is still in Korea. He often leaves Sunny alone with her mother most of the time, only returning home a few times a year. For that reason, she always tries to stand out so that he would notice her more. But, so far that hasn't worked well.
Mother : HyoJin Park
Occupation: She stays at home
Age: 42 years old
Her mother is a very reserved and quiet woman, who's appearance could be considered very plain. She doesn't cause people to turn their heads, and Sunny dislikes that about her. For that reason, Sunny always wants to stand out and not become like her mother, and stay at home all the time.
Brother : Lee
Occupation: Annoyance
Age: Six years old
Although Sunny wishes that she had a little sister instead, she has an annoying little brother instead. He loves to dress up in her clothes, wear her make-up, and make a huge mess!
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:36 pm
Senshi: Sailor Chloris, Senshi of Adornment
Senshi Sphere : Adornment
- An adornment is generally an accessory or ornament worn to enhance the beauty or status of the wearer.
Fuku Colour:
Main Color: #4E387E
Secondary Color: 000000 or #E9CFEC
Fuku: CC! For a few ideas, something that's contour fashion, a type of Lady Gaga feeling for the outfit! Just something that screams faboulous!
ideas ideas ideas
Collar -- CC
Bow -- CC
Bodice --CC perhaps make it into a dress
Sleeves -- CC
Brooch -- CC
Bottoms -- CC
Tiara --CC - perhaps a string of jewels instead of a normal tiara?
Choker -- CC
Shoes -- CC - high heels of some type please
Gloves --CC
Accessories -- CC, but she needs to have some type of bracelet at least. The more fashion and jewelry the better.
Challenge: "You are a Fashion Disaster!!"
Attack:
Sailor Scout Attack: Fashion Attack!
Whenever Chloris calls out this attack, she will reach take of her bracelet that will glow a faintly. With that piece of jewelry, she will throw it straight towards her enemy. If it hits them, it will wrap around their wrist and feel like a ten pound piece of heavy jewelry. It will slow their movement for the time that it remains on them. It will last for three turns, unless they manage to get it off before then.
Super Sailor Scout Attack: Bling Bling Attack!
Whenever Chloris calls out this attack, she will take off her bracelet and throw it straight at the enemy with a rather flamboyant motion. If it hits them, it will cause two bracelets to form around whatever wrist it lands on. It will cause them to feel like there's a twenty pound thing on their wrist, causing them movement with that hand to be slowed down. It will last three turns, unless they manage to get it off before then.
Eternal Sailor Attack: Bangle Blast!
Whenever Chloris does this attack, she will raise her hands and aim straight towards her opponent. Whenever she has her hands raised, she will call out the name. Phantom jewelry will appear over her arms (varying between 8 pieces the first time, and 4 pieces any other time she uses it) and as she flips her wrists it will dart straight towards her enemy. Each piece will wrap around any part of the body it can grab onto, digging into the skin and causing bruising. After two turns the jewelry will vanish leaving the bruises. This attack can be dodged if they move out of the way, but they will continue flying in that direction until they hit something. She can do this twice a battle.
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 1:08 pm
And, I'm all done now.
Time for some critique, please.
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 2:43 pm
If it's not ok to post yet, I'll delete this (assuming it lets me xD)
Just wanted to say thank you for critting my thread |D <3
I only had one commment- your Unsure of herself trait could potentially conflict with her Confidence virtue-I see where you're going with it, but maybe be a little more clear on how she's confident, but never satisfied with herself personally? Like, maybe she thinks she has to act like she's great BECAUSE she always feels the need to prove herself to everyone?
Otherwise, I think glamour is a cool sphere. Captain Nealite/Queen Beryl I think also uses a mirror as a weapon, if you're looking for attack inspiration type stuff.
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:26 pm
Nope, it's okay to post already! x3
Go right ahead, sorry if that wasn't clear.
Thank you for critting my thread back! It means a lot! <333
Hmm, thank you for pointing that out! I understand what you are saying, since it does kind of conflict with her confidence virtue. I guess that I need to make it more clear on how she needs to prove herself all the time. I'll most likely re-write that entire part to make it more clear. =3
And thanks again! I think it's a cool sphere idea as well! I might go and look at Captain Nealite for suggestion, since I want her to have more offensive than defensive attacts. Or I'll go and brainstorm ideas. xD
But thank you so much for the crit!
<3333
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:41 pm
Allo Kimi <3
Omg, I love Sunny XD <3333333
So can't wait for you to get her >W< <3
Rather like your general concept, just gonna nit-pick a bit to help you flesh things out more o 3o -tis my intent, anyways-
Also, I noticed a good few typos and grammar errors, maybe read over everything and make sure everything's alright? <3
Workin' out - "while other" should be "while others," and what kind of exercises does she do? Does she have a favorite? I think it's pretty good though as-is o 3o;;
Shopping - What got her so into shopping? Is it the actual BUYING of new things, or is it having new pretty clothes/accessories to wear..? Does this thrill only come from buying clothes, or does buying ANYTHING (games, trinkets, random electronics, food, etc.) do it for her? Also, how doe she afford spending so much money? o__o;;
Cosplay - "who would have though?" should be "who would have thought?," "it something" should be "it is something," and "that seem" should be "that seems." Beyond that, what does she like to cosplay as? Does she go to conventions? When did she first start getting into cosplaying/why? Does she have a certain favorite character or show/game/etc. that she likes to stick to? How detailed does she make the costumes? Will she dye her hair, or get a wig, etc? o 3o And... I'm not sure what you mean by "even if it's for all the wrong reasons"? o.o
Gaming - What got her into gaming? Why does no one really see her play games? Does she own any systems, or is it just PC gaming she does? For the Belf comment (WoW ftw, btw <333), maybe make it clear that their being as beautiful as her is only her opinion? X'D;; The wording on that seemed kind of awkward to me. Also, what other types of games does she like to play, versus what kinds does she hate? How does she feel about FPS, for example, or is she more of a fantasy RPG gamer? Sports games?
Confidence - Hm. The wording you've got in here... seems awkward to me D: I'm tryin' to figure out why, but maybe focus more on why she is so confident/the pros of this than including so much about her vanity? I feel like it almost makes her confidence into a flaw, but maybe that's just me =x;; Also, how/when has she noticed that confidence can rub off on others? What if she encounters really, really shy people that cower away from her bold ways?
Loyalty - Maybe call it "Steadfast" instead, or something else to use a different word? Personal taste only X'D Betray her friends how though? The bit about valuing friends over enemies seems kind of pointless to me, since... I feel that's obvious? @.@;; Maybe elaborate why she would believe anything her friends tell her, also does this have any limit to how far she would believe them? What if her friends were dealing with illegal activities? Would she be blinded to this?
Compassionate - What if someone responds negatively to her tough love? And how would she give a helping hand? Does that mean to helping them fix their supposed flaws, or do you mean help in general? And by saying she was just doing it to help herself, is this in fact a lie or is she the type to only help out others (friends included?) for personal gain?
Vain - What got her to be so vain in the first place? And she'd rather spend her time making herself look flawless... versus what? Going to school? Spending time with friends and family? o.O Throwing a tantrum also... seems rather childish? Especially if she's so worried about making everyone fully aware of how beautiful she is and such =o Unless your full intent was for her to show a rather childish side when she gets angry like that..? @w@
Unsure of herself - Again... what made her this way? D: Was this something she learned as a child, did her mom or dad raise her like this... what? How exactly does she come off as fake or unrealistic? Some more explanation and examples would really be good here, since I almost feel like it's too vague right now?
Competitive - I'd word the first line as either "she always becomes very competitive" or "she's always very competitive." From all this, does she study a lot then to keep top grades? If so, how does she have time to be primping herself so much and shopping so much? If she wants to be perfect in everything, I would think that would take a lot of time and effort to try and ensure no one got the best of her, though obviously this would clearly happen at least sometimes x 3x;; What does she do when this happens? Maybe just pick a few specific things she's super competitive "I MUST BE THE #1 FOR EVER IN THIS" on, while everything else, even if she's still trying to be the best, she's not so concerned with being the best at?
Okay~ civilian down! My only comments about her family life is that... BRING THIS STUFF INTO HER FLAWS/VIRTUES 8DDDD <3
Seriously, having more of a view into her family life suddenly has her personality making a lot more sense, so put that good info in there, woman~! D< <3
MOVING ON TO SENSHI STUFF~ <3
My first comment is simple: what's your theme for her? o 3o What made you pick Chloris, by chance? Personally, when I hear the word "glamor," I think of the faeries and how they use that to not only disguise themselves and their homes from humans, but to also trick - if not all out harass - humans. Donno if that appeals to you at all, but personally I find picking a general theme for my characters helps me to figure out attacks and whatnot x'3;; <3
That being said, maybe pick what kind of senshi you want her to be? =o Going from an offensive attack in her first stage to defensive in her second seems kind of odd to me, though I'll also point out - the attack she gets in her Super Sailor form is just an upgraded version of her first attack, while here you have it be a totally different one o.o;;
Right now, I'm not sure if her first one has anything to do with glamor? The second one... well, in my way of looking at glamor, it doesn't either, but that's personal opinion. I'm gonna leave it all at that for now, since it seems there's a few things you're tryin' to think about as it is so~ o 3o;;
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:37 pm
Thank you so much for the crit, Kailey! <333
There is a lot of stuff that I've edited and changed, so thank you for the suggestions!
The idea about the sphere has helped me a lot!
It helped me think about what I wanted her abilities to be based off, not what I wanted them to do. If.. that made sense.
xD;;
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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 7:40 pm
Updated some of her vitues and her appearance.
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Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 2:48 pm
updated her fuku information.
=3
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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 9:39 pm
Looking for some more crit, now that I'll be getting her as a RL character.
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:07 pm
Looking for some more crit, again. :3
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 10:24 am
Looking for more crit! I still want to get her someday!
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:27 pm
Not much help just at the moment with powers because I have to go cook - but to help out you will want to consider the costume requirements <3 As a first-rank senshi you have the simplest of uniforms with these requirements. You must have a white bodice. Off-whites are okay but generally should be something that can easily be identified as pure, white, etc. You must have a front bow/back bow. Bows can also be ties, scarves, or thin ribbons, as long as there is a feature on the front of the chest that denotes the fact that they are sailors. There must be some form of collar on the uniform. Collars may look a little differently and be shaped differently by all means but the sailor collar is a defining part of their uniform. Every senshi must have some form of across-the-forehead tiara. Please see any of our senshi on the front page of the shop thread to see this; those without are usually old flukes that will have this replaced in their next stage. Female senshi should have some form of skirt and boys should have shorts, tights, or some kind of tight-fitting pants. Girls are welcome to also wear these things but boys should not be in skirts unless there is some kind of shorts or tights beneath said skirt/sarong/etc. Link to Here will help you a lot <3 You might be able to have the collar on the shrug but I'm not sure, I'd have to ask...but she does need a bow in back I'm afraid!
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