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Pokemon Heart and Soul: The Johto Journey

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Mukuhawk Staraptor

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:25 pm


This my first attempt at my very own fanfic, the name of which is likely to change to something catchier once more of the story is written. Heart and Soul will tell the story of two best friends with different dreams and their journey throughout the region of Johto.

My plan is to update with a new chapter on a weekly basis, although depending on how busy I am, the time span in between chapters may both increase or decrease.

I'm also completely open to feedback, criticism, and discussion of my work. So if you have any thoughts, feel free to post them right in this thread, I'd be more than happy to listen and discuss as well. Just don't expect me to reveal any future events.

Thanks in advance for taking the time to read my fic and I hope you enjoy!


~Table of Contents~
Prologue: Giovanni, Return to Power
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:26 pm


Main Characters


Giovanni
Having failed at his operations in Kanto, Giovanni now has moved to the Johto region to take on a much larger goal. Giovanni is as cold-hearted as ever, caring little for the health and safety of his underlings. After failing miserably in Kanto, Giovanni feels a huge need to prove his power.

Pokemon:
none confirmed

Mukuhawk Staraptor


Mukuhawk Staraptor

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:30 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:36 pm


Prologue: Giovanni, Return to Power


Giovanni sat impatiently at his desk, his head propped into his right hand, while his left hand beat its fingers anxiously on the desk. The more time passed, the more rapidly his fingers drummed against the hard wooden surface, when finally, his phone rang. Giovanni put the phone on speaker, his head still propped on his right arm. "Have you received the information yet?" Giovanni spoke in a loud, stern voice.

"Yes," a woman was on the other end of the line, "The police are investigating Viridian Gym as we speak, have you removed any evidence?"

"Of course I have! Now give me the information I care about, the gym means nothing to me!"

"Of course," the woman's voice was now shaky and nervous, "well, umm..." Giovanni cut in, ordering her to spit it out. "Well, it seems Mewtwo took flight, he's looking for a new home."

Giovanni sighed, then slammed his hands on the table and leaned back regretfully in his chair. "I guess I should have expected that. After everything that happened, Mewtwo doesn't trust humans one bit. Do you have any ideas on his whereabouts?"

"Unfortunately no. We were unable to track him. But common sense tells me that he's gone to a place where no human can find him."

There was a minutes silence, as Giovanni thought to himself. He then responded to his assistant, "It seems we'll have to give up on our plans in Kanto. The Kanto police are on to us, and our only weapon has abandoned us. Call the commanders and tell them to retreat back to the base."

The assistant gasped in astonishment, "then what does this mean? Is this the end of Team Rocket? It can't be master, after all our hard work!"

"Silence!" Giovanni shouted into the receiver, "of course this isn't the end of Team Rocket! It is, however, the end of Team Rocket's operations in Kanto."

"But master," the woman stuttered through the phone, "we're nearly bankrupt, surely we don't have enough money to begin operations in a new region. How will we afford to transport everything overseas?"

Giovanni laughed, "Whoever said our next target was overseas? As you know, my son, Silver, starts his journey tomorrow in a country called Johto" The assistant made a noise, showing that she had come to realization of what Giovanni was saying. "The region of Johto is on the same landmass as Kanto, therefore it would take little effort and money to transport everything there." Giovanni, now filling with confidence again, straightened his posture in his chair, giving him a more powerful appearance. "Now, I want you to give me a brief background check on Johto. Mainly, I want to know what kinds of unique and powerful pokemon exist there, as well as Johto technology which can help in controlling such pokemon."

"Will do, master," his assitant responded, and the hung up the phone. Giovanni sat in his chair, smirking as he thought of Team Rocket's return to power.

Mukuhawk Staraptor


Mukuhawk Staraptor

PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:41 pm


Author's Comments: The Prologue


The prologue was a lot of fun to write for me. I chose for Giovanni to not abandon Team Rocket like he did in GSC mainly because I didn't want him to have learned from his mistakes yet; his mistake being his treatment of Mewtwo as a tool rather than a companion. As I write the rest of the story, pay close attention to each character's relationship with their pokemon as well as their general attitude towards pokemon. These things will end up playing a big part in future events of the story.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:49 pm


Wow, this is very well written! You were able to set the tone of the prologue all within the first two sentences, that's pretty impressive.

And I really like how you characterized Giovanni: he's evil, just like he should be.

**excited for a future Silver appearance**

Chief Bushyhead


Mukuhawk Staraptor

PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 9:24 pm


Chief Bushyhead
Wow, this is very well written! You were able to set the tone of the prologue all within the first two sentences, that's pretty impressive.

And I really like how you characterized Giovanni: he's evil, just like he should be.

**excited for a future Silver appearance**


Thanks Chief, I'm glad my version of Giovanni worked well with my readers...reader, hahaha. I must admit, I'm a bit nervous for Silver's appearance in my fic. He's got such a big fan base that I wouldn't want my version of him to make anyone mad, haha.
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