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 Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:08 pm
Please rate my poems and tell me what you think. I'm only going to do one at a time but I'm going to archive them. Tell me what poem your commenting on so I don't get confused in the future. Thanks for your help.
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:09 pm
Life
It's cruel
It's happy
It's short
It's long
It's rewarding
It's unmistakable
It's disapointing
It's wasted
It's hated
It's loved
It's wonderful
It's giving
It's God's gift to you
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:51 pm
that my friend is a job well done
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:19 pm
linkster3769 that my friend is a job well done Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:12 pm
Thanks. I didn't think it was very good but it was probably just that feeling writers have towards their work.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:44 pm
You shouldn't think that.
And even if it was bad, (Which it's NOT)
There's always room for improvement.
It's a common fact that writers, artists, musicians, ETC. never feel that their work is complete or good enough, even when it is.
So don't worry cause I've been down that road.
Seriously though, it's fine. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:56 pm
Thanks. I think you just gave me inspiration for a new poem.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:11 pm
No problem!
I look forward to reading it!
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:32 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:42 pm
Great job!
You have true talent, hehe.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:48 pm
I have a poem on my Sig yay
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:39 pm
@Simp: Thanks. I think that just making up poetry in this guild has seriously helped me improve.
@Bear: That's good. Did you write it?
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Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:10 pm
@clm: Yeah, me too. It's great practice.
@Bear: I didn't even notice that. redface You're talented!
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