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 Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:04 pm
Okay, that was marginally lame. 8D CLICK HERE FOR A FABULOUS PRIZE!It's my first song, and it's intended for a dance floor or a rave club or something. Let me know how horribly I did so I can sit in a dark corner and cry while cutting myself.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:43 pm
I really liked it, good job on your first song. There are a few things i wanted to point out though: around 1:30 i thought i heard a tune of some sorts but i wasn't sure. Around 2:58 there was a really high piercing sound that made me jump (it was at a blazing volume) which made my dog freak out and he bit me in the leg...so then at 4:11 i really liked the change but then at 4:19 the beats kinda drowned it out but it still sounded pretty good. Then at 4:58 i thought was the best part cause it sounded like electric violins (which are awesome). The ending was a great way to end it, but I'm not exactly sure it would fit in a rave very. Overall you did a good job on your first song, just balance some of the sounds a little more so they can be heard. idea
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:06 pm
8D a comprehensive and understandable review! Me likey!
xD sorry about your leg. I'd totally get you a new one and all but I'm out of cash. *points and whimpers at empty wallet* Try listening again... but use headphones. Not just for the noise issues, but for the fact that it actually increases sound quality. I listened to it on my laptop's speakers and the sound quality SUCKED. Just puttin that out there =D
This song is entirely me. Nothing from any bands here, all synthesized myself. So the tune... WAS A HALLUCINATION O3O
Lol yeah the ending. That was just me being me.... I have to throw a little Indie rock in there or it's not mine 83
^^ listen again, but not on computer speakers, cause they kinda suck... plis?
Cos a lot of the guitar and violin is horribly off-tune, and that super high noise isn't really that high in true quality.
THNX FUR TEH REVUE
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