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 Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:44 am
after all this fanfiction, I've been worried I may have a mary-sue
the test said otherwise, but I still want to know
How to prevent a character from going Mary-sue
Preventions:
1) don't let every single guy fall in love with the same girl- that's so unrealistic; one girl wouldn't have a million guys want to be with her
1.5) Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian
2) Give her an ugly scar somewhere REALLY noticeable... like on her face. That, or acne.
3) make her moderately attractive and not a swimsuit model
4) Stick to one personality, unless it's "her time of the month"o:
5) She should be an ugly duckling and the guy who likes her even as an ugly little dork with ten billion pimples and buck teeth and braces gets the now-mature hot chick in the end.
And then he grows up and turns out to be a real d**k. The end.
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:39 pm
make a few guys fall in love with some else for change!
I mean it can get boring when all the guys fall in love with one person.
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 4:49 pm
Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian. surprised
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:58 pm
Kris_Dragoness Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian. surprised OMG THAT'S EVEN BETTER
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 4:37 am
Kris_Dragoness Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian. surprised lol
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Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 9:09 pm
Kris_Dragoness Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian. surprised the most original yet!
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:15 pm
Give her an ugly scar somewhere REALLY noticeable... like on her face. That, or acne.
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:44 am
make her moderately attractive and not a swimsuit model
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 5:22 pm
Stick to one personality, unless it's "her time of the month"o:
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:06 pm
Kris_Dragoness Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian. surprised
Original! This is the same plot twist that my teacher incorporated into her story. It is very happy-making and anti-Twilight, which makes me happy.
#5: She should be an ugly duckling and the guy who likes her even as an ugly little dork with ten billion pimples and buck teeth and braces gets the now-mature hot chick in the end.
And then he grows up and turns out to be a real d**k. The end. smile
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Gracious Conversationalist
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:43 am
: / how about making her an actual human being? simple enough.
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:02 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:00 am
Avoid having outrageous physical features without any meaning. For example, this gal would look just...wow in an everyday setting. However, she has a strange background to explain it and the story she's in is pretty much just crack anyway.
97??
Oh baby....
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:50 pm
Mateta-kun Or make all the guys fall in love with her, but the surprise twist is she is a lesbian. I'd so read that fic like you have no idea. mrgreen
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