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 Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 11:55 am
 This any better? (This picture was drawn @ a slant and scanned straight, so you need to tilt your head a little to the left to see it correctly. Newer Drawings: Since I can't get images to imbed, follow these links: http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/R-J-Nelson-137763768 http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Marriko-Relaxing-Redux-130096129
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 3:47 pm
I think it's very good =) But her left leg is bugging me. I think you should put it at a higher angle or put the hand in front of it. Right now it looks like her arm is behind her leg in an awkward position. For me that's pretty much it. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 3:51 pm
You followed body lines excellentlly just a bit more on the muscles(unless shes anerexic jk...)but overall very nice.
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:09 pm
Nagoshi Kun I think it's very good =) But her left right leg is bugging me. I think you should put it at a higher angle or put the hand in front of it. Right now it looks like her arm is behind her leg in an awkward position. For me that's pretty much it. Keep up the good work. Fixed. The angle of her right leg (knee cap and below) is.. need to go behind her right arm/hand. Since she is facing the south-east her foot needs to go north-west. (Move it up about an 90 degrees angle (still from her knee and below leg part.) But, I congratulate you on progressing! I love it, keep working on it. I know I am still learning as well!
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:03 pm
black507 You followed body lines excellentlly just a bit more on the muscles(unless shes anerexic jk...)but overall very nice. Actually, she's a 15 year old Asian school girl, so she's pretty tiny.
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:32 am
ah ok i see(really not many people i know pay attention to the different phycical statuses of the races)
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:50 pm
its good^^ and yes the left hand is a bit too long, it should end right at the thigh's upper half. and one other thing, i have to agree to one post that the leg is kindof off coz if i try to do that position in real life i'd tip over, but other than that the drawing's great biggrin
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:26 pm
-LeanneCirce- its good^^ and yes the left hand is a bit too long, it should end right at the thigh's upper half. and one other thing, i have to agree to one post that the leg is kindof off coz if i try to do that position in real life i'd tip over, but other than that the drawing's great biggrin I found the pose in a How-to-Draw-Manga book, and it was like a motion pose, like she had been running and stopped to wave @ someone.
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 5:11 am
I have never been able to draw with those small circles sad
Instead I just use (rarely) stick figures.
Anyway go to Posemaniacs.com and draw as many poses as possible to get a good idea of proportions surprised
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:28 pm
[.Potemkin.] I have never been able to draw with those small circles sad
Instead I just use (rarely) stick figures.
Anyway go to Posemaniacs.com and draw as many poses as possible to get a good idea of proportions surprised I have a good idea on props, It's when I actually draw I tend to miss a few, then I notice them after it's too late.
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:10 am
give more shoulders;
proportion between above-below the elbow must same, u made it too long;
and right-leg...err a bit lacking, give more wrinkles in pants, it will help.
if u still confuse try to do it with your own body in front of mirror rolleyes
well, good luck heart
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:57 pm
Phydeux77 -LeanneCirce- its good^^ and yes the left hand is a bit too long, it should end right at the thigh's upper half. and one other thing, i have to agree to one post that the leg is kindof off coz if i try to do that position in real life i'd tip over, but other than that the drawing's great biggrin I found the pose in a How-to-Draw-Manga book, and it was like a motion pose, like she had been running and stopped to wave @ someone. hmm, yeah now that you tell me she does look like it, however the leg's still a bit too high, the higher your leg gets when you run, the more your upper body leans forward, and the other foot is flat on the ground, if she were caught in the middle of running it'd be a bit like she's pushing force into the foot (her heel would be up) since she's putting weight into the ground. im sure with a bit of practice you'll get it ^^
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:40 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:56 pm
yeah yeah, nice! this ones good, broader shoulders maybe (if he's the muscular type) but this looks okay biggrin i look forward to seeing the fixed version of ur last one.
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