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Little_Red_33

PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:59 pm


Im sort of the love woman People call me.So I decided To use my talent.Here is some.of course It might take long to read but once you read it you will want to read more.In these articles I love how your heart beets fast about your lover You relize the guy you love you cant turn away to:
If only for a moment
Can we pretend we never parted.
Pretend you never went away
And that our Love was never thwarted.

If only for a moment
Can we let this Love be dear.
Try remembering the good times
so i may forget all that I fear.

If only for a moment
Can i say you Loved me too.
Say that you cared for me
As much as I did you.

If only for a moment
Can we call us more than friends.
And when they ask if I still Love you
I'll say more than "It depends."

If only for a moment
Can we say we never parted.
Just lie and say I never cried
Pretend this sadness never started.

If only for a moment
Can we pretend you Love me too.
Cause it's only for a Lifetime
That I'm trapped in Love with you

Yup thats how I feel.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:13 pm


Well thank you.I see you maybe cunfused with some of the writing and yes.its pretty impressive.And I love to Ryme All the time.

Little_Red_33


toto45
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:11 am


Bloomed Into Love


Shirish are you coming on time tomorrow morning or as usual you will be late? said Rita, as she was packing for college before retiring to bed. Shirish said, I will be on time I promise. Rita hung up the phone wishing him Goodnight and went off to sleep. The next morning Rita started for college and as she approached Shirish's house a note lay outside his for her which said that he would meet her at the bus stop in 3 minutes. As she waited for him the bus pulled in at the stop and with a final glance at his house she boarded.

In college at the end of the first lecture Rita saw Shirish waving out to her, Rita ignored him and went to chat with her other friends in the canteen. Shirish came up to Rita and apologized to her and within minutes she was convinced that he wouldn t repeat the mistake again.

This would happen everyday and Shirsh would keep written notes for Rita and she would collect them. Days passed into years and they became the best of friends. They met everyday and spent the maximum time with each other. They would go together and come back from college together. Rita was an outgoing girl and she made a lot of friends. She was a tomboy due to which a lot of guys would hang around with her. After college Shirish would wait for Rita at the station. Once Rita told Shirish to leave, as she would be late. After and hour when Rita arrived at the station she saw Shirish sitting on the seat on the platform. This touched Rita and she was happy. Rita asked Shirish, Shirish why didn't you go home I told you I would be late because I had to copy some notes from Hemant. Shirish replied, Rita all these days you would wait at the bus stop in the morning and everyday I would be late, can't I wait for you for one day? Then there was silence throughout the journey. After coming to their station they would make it a point to have a cup of coffee at a café very near to their house where they would share the days events. The bond was so strong that if either one of them was feeling low the other would understand it. Shirish was so dependent on Rita that he would need her whenever he was confused. If Shirish's mother wanted to put forth something to Shirish she would have to call Rita to make Shirish understand.

It was Rose day of the college and Rita asked Shirish whether he could come on time because she was wearing a sari for the first time and was feeling awkward to go alone to the college. But as it turned out he didn't come on time and she had to go alone to the college. When Shirish finally arrived he went to look out for Rita and he was stunned to see Rita in a sari. He just stood there staring at her because it was today he realized how beautiful she was. When he came up to her he hardly spoke. She started shouting at him and left in an angry mood.

He went to the canteen hoping she would be there but she wasn't. After 3 hours of futile efforts, he realized that he wanted her in his life and missed her terribly when she wasn't around. With these thoughts when he reached the station and Rita was there with Hemant. She came smiled at Shirish and apologized about the incident after which Hemant left and Shirish and Rita left for home.

Shirish gave Rita a friendship card, which expressed his feelings for her as a friend. Rita was happy. Days passed into years and they were in their last year of friendship when Rita knew that unknowingly she had started liking Shirish but didn't have the guts to tell him in the fear that she may lose his friendship forever. After college both parted ways Shirish didn't take his graduation examination and lost a year, Rita took her examination and later took up a job, which kept hey busy throughout the day.

This went on for two years. Rita kept her distance, as she wanted to get Shirish out of her mind, as she was sure their relationship wouldn't work out. Rita's parents found a match for Rita for Rita agreed. She called Shirish that day and asked him whether he could meet her. Shirish met her. They both were quiet for sometime. Shirish broke the ice by telling Rita that there was something that he wanted to tell her and she kept avoiding it. Shirish poured his heart out and confessed his feelings for her. Rita was open-mouthed. She had no words to say all she said was, Shirish why did you express your feelings so late, and she got up from the table and left.

Rita and Shirish didn't meet for 4 years after that. Rita heard about him from her mother that he had become a poet and writer and was penning a book. Shirish met with an accident and wanted to meet Rita. Rita came to the hospital in a crisp white salwar kameez looking as gorgeous as ever. Shirish asked Rita whether they could be alone for sometime and she agreed. Rita I want to know before I die, did you ever even like me? Rita had tears in her eyes and she replied, Shirish I always loved you but didn't have the courage to tell you and was frightened that if I ever disclosed my feelings you may go away from me.

Shirish and Rita realized just a matter of words drifted them into different worlds and now it was too late to change it. Few days later Shirish died and left her his entire earnings from the sale of the book, which was dedicated to her.  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:14 am


Hell, Heaven, Love


If you were to die one day
I would kill myself to be with you
And i would go to heaven
And if you weren't there on judgement day
I'd know you went the other way
So i'd give the angels back their wings and risk the loss of everything
Just to prove
My love is true.

toto45
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:45 pm


They sat down on the bench together. He whispered her name ever so softly, pronouncing each letter as if the words were made of gold. She turned toward him and saw that he was smiling, he had such a magical smile. He gently touched her face with his hand and began bringing her face towards his. She closed her eyes. Her heart skipped a beat when she felt his lips touch hers. He whispered " I love you Jay." She turned away quickly.
" Those are powerful words Trevin." she said, feeling the sting of tears in her eyes.
" Yes I know, and I meant every one of them." he replied softly.
When she did not say anything he put his hand over hers and said, with his voice full of love, and at the same hatred, " Jay I know that James hurt you. What he did was just wrong and cruel. But I could never do that to you."
She turned and stared in to his eyes.
"James said the same thing. When he left me he didnt even care. He just ran off and didn't say anything."
"Well, James is just a self-centered jerk who only vares about himself."
She smiled at the way he said this. He always knew just what to say.
" I really do love you. And I would do anything to prove that to you."
This time it was Jay who kissed him.
She whispered, " I love you too."

This is how I wish things had gone for me when my boyfriend and I broke up. Unfotunately it didn't. Everything said about James was true, that's even his real name. Love can be such a horrible thing sometimes. cry
PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:03 pm


idk this is an old song i wrote once. its only one verse. kinda a violent suicidal sort of love..

Our lives are ravaged
as our worlds are torn apart
you shot me with your gaze
now give me your heart
who cares what they say we can be together
no one ever said we have to die alone

Blinded blinded by your beauty
smothered by your kiss
its our lives anyway
we can do this
i swear you will be forgiven
the sole truth in the lie i'm living


btw this just popped in my head one day and im so paraniod that someone already wrote sumthin like this and i just didnt know it. but i didnt steal it i know that...

HiCaR1


Naeshira

PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:34 pm


A poem I wrote last year. I think it's pretty good. It doesn't rhyme, but still...
_______________________________

Come fly with me, in the sky.
We will flit among the stars.
And laugh at Father Time,
For our love, the sky is no limit.

Come dance with me, through the centuries.
We will twirl among the hours.
And laugh at Father Time,
For our love, time is no limit.

Come run with me, across the Earth.
We will sprint from one pole to the other.
And we will laugh at Father Time,
For our love, the distance between us is no limit.

Come with me,
And we will laugh at Father Time.
For not even he can limit our love.

Come with me,
And we will laugh at Father Time.
And he will laugh with us,
For he knows when he is beat.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:36 am


This a bit of a romance scene from a story that I am writing. Tell me what you think. I am too critical of my own writing all the time so give me some feedback. I changed names and what not so peopel can't plegurise, I'm not accusing anyone it's just what I do.

I heard his footsteps and I wanted to leave. I wanted to be alone but at the same time, I didn't. I didn't understand myself anymore. He came up and leaned against the railing with me. Somehow I knew that he would be the one to come.
"Whatcha doin'?" He breathed.
I moved away from the railing and faced him. He mimiced my actions. I stared at his burning violet eyes and chocked back the tears that were trying to fight there way out of my eyes.
"I'm leaving." I whispered.
"I thought so." He nodded slowly.
"Your not going to try and stop me?" I asked.
"Oh, wouldn't that be hypocritical of me." He sneered.
We stood there for a few very long moments just staring at each other.
"Where you heading?"
"I don't know..." The truth alsmost gave me a panic attack.
He moved forward and took my hand. Immediatly I calmed again. He understood. It made me wounder how many times he had done this himself.
"There is better food to the west of here." He told me. "Good opportunity for jobs too. People don't ask many questions."
I smiled and nodded. It was settled then.
"Would you do me a favor? Say goodbye to Dave and Mike for me. I thought about it but I..." My voice was cracking.
"Yeah, don't worry about it. I'm pretty good at explaining that stuff by now." He said.
I laughed, but it was wrong. Forced and strangled. A tears streamed down my cheeck. We wiped it away and stared at me. I couldn't look at him. I knew what he would look like and it would keep me from leaving. The train whistled for passengers to board and I turned to leave.
"Wait..." His voice was strange.
I turned and looked at him. He looked half paniced.
"I need to do this. I might not get to again."
He spoke as he strode forward and pulled me into his arms. My arms were around his neck and we were kissing. Tears fell freely now. God, I loved kissing him. I didn't want to live without it. I couldn't. We broke for a second and he once againa wiped tears away.
"Will you visit me?" I asked weakly.
"You can't keep me away."
And with that we were kissing again.

gambit girl 90


Little_Red_33

PostPosted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:44 am


This is my thread.Please make your own topic.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:50 pm


VET_PRINCESS
This is my thread.Please make your own topic.

Wow, that's not very nice. Guess no one taught you how to share.

fallenangel_Asha
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Little_Red_33

PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:01 pm


fallenangel_Asha
VET_PRINCESS
This is my thread.Please make your own topic.

Wow, that's not very nice. Guess no one taught you how to share.

Ha Ha.So very funny.There is no fighting in this thread.
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